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Cindi's Reviews > Pet Me
Pet Me (The Toye Shoppe #1)
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This book made me mad. It didn't make me mad because of the story. The story was actually quite good. What made me mad was the horrible editing and formatting. It wasn't one page. It was every single page in the book. I only kept going with it because I loved Bailey and wanted to see him get his HEA.
Also, as soon as it looked like things were coming together for Sam and Bailey - they were discovering their kinks, Bailey was coming out of his shell - the book ended. They get their HEA but it was so rush, rush. The author mentions maybe revisiting them later. I didn't want later, after who knows how many books. I wanted to see things wrapped up a little. It was like as soon as I truly started getting into it, it just ended.
Even so, I enjoyed the story and will likely read the others. I just hope they're more cleaned up than this one.
I knocked off a full star because of the editing/formatting. As I type this, I'm tempted to knock off another one.
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Also, as soon as it looked like things were coming together for Sam and Bailey - they were discovering their kinks, Bailey was coming out of his shell - the book ended. They get their HEA but it was so rush, rush. The author mentions maybe revisiting them later. I didn't want later, after who knows how many books. I wanted to see things wrapped up a little. It was like as soon as I truly started getting into it, it just ended.
Even so, I enjoyed the story and will likely read the others. I just hope they're more cleaned up than this one.
I knocked off a full star because of the editing/formatting. As I type this, I'm tempted to knock off another one.
Full review can be found at -
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Reading Progress
November 30, 2021
– Shelved
November 30, 2021
– Shelved as:
to-read
November 30, 2021
– Shelved as:
series
December 1, 2021
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Started Reading
December 1, 2021
– Shelved as:
2021
December 1, 2021
– Shelved as:
bdsm
December 1, 2021
– Shelved as:
m-m
December 1, 2021
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11.0%
"I'm enjoying the book so far, but the editing is horrible. And it's not so much typos, though there are quite a few of those too.
Spaces between quotation marks and the first letters of sentences. One would be no big deal because I know some things are missed. But almost every one? Maybe it's in the font, or even the actual book formatting, but it looks really sloppy."
Spaces between quotation marks and the first letters of sentences. One would be no big deal because I know some things are missed. But almost every one? Maybe it's in the font, or even the actual book formatting, but it looks really sloppy."
December 1, 2021
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17.0%
"That's what he-Sam-had said them too. It's all very well for people to say that, they don't have to deal with them.
" I told him that." Linda holds a paper bag in my direction; I take it with a smile. " Get Barney to just ban their asses."
This seriously needed at least one more run-thru before it was published. Very sloppy editing."
" I told him that." Linda holds a paper bag in my direction; I take it with a smile. " Get Barney to just ban their asses."
This seriously needed at least one more run-thru before it was published. Very sloppy editing."
December 1, 2021
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100.0%
"Liked the story but it was unfinished, poorly edited, and horribly formatted.
Review to come soon."
Review to come soon."
December 1, 2021
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Finished Reading
December 2, 2021
– Shelved as:
on-blog
