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Cindi
Cindi is 17% done
That's what he-Sam-had said them too. It's all very well for people to say that, they don't have to deal with them.

" I told him that." Linda holds a paper bag in my direction; I take it with a smile. " Get Barney to just ban their asses."


This seriously needed at least one more run-thru before it was published. Very sloppy editing.
Dec 01, 2021 08:17AM
Pet Me (The Toye Shoppe #1)

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Cindi
Cindi is finished
Liked the story but it was unfinished, poorly edited, and horribly formatted.

Review to come soon.
Dec 01, 2021 12:02PM
Pet Me (The Toye Shoppe #1)


Cindi
Cindi is 11% done
I'm enjoying the book so far, but the editing is horrible. And it's not so much typos, though there are quite a few of those too.

Spaces between quotation marks and the first letters of sentences. One would be no big deal because I know some things are missed. But almost every one? Maybe it's in the font, or even the actual book formatting, but it looks really sloppy.
Dec 01, 2021 08:10AM
Pet Me (The Toye Shoppe #1)


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