User contributions for Warren

15 February 2024

• 14:0514:05, 15 February 2024 diff hist +22 Aegyo Tagging the "In Everyday Life" section with {{original research}}. This entire section presents viewpoints and statistics without sources.

7 August 2023

• 17:3117:31, 7 August 2023 diff hist −126 Windows 8 →Development: removing {{overly}}. Not enough content here to put in a separate article.

29 June 2023

• 03:2603:26, 29 June 2023 diff hist −753 Motomachi, Yokohama →History: Removed this whole paragraph because it's not conforming to [WP:NPOV. Tag: Visual edit

23 May 2023

• 23:3623:36, 23 May 2023 diff hist −67 Dependency injection Removing this newly-added part about DI being used as a "creational pattern". This is going to need a WP:RS -- looking for books here, not opinions shared on Twitter. Current literature on creational patterns doesn't mention this use case. Tag: Visual edit

6 May 2023

• 03:1803:18, 6 May 2023 diff hist +294 Talk:Windows shell Undid revision 1006633273 by 24.237.95.225 (talk) Why did this person delete my comment? Tag: Undo

5 May 2023

• 06:2906:29, 5 May 2023 diff hist −126 Microsoft Distributed Transaction Coordinator Doesn't fail NSOFT, this component is still included with Windows and was both widely covered and used in its time Tag: Manual revert

1 January 2023

• 01:5001:50, 1 January 2023 diff hist −173 Gyeongbokgung Removed sentence from lead that states an opinion without a source. (See MOS:OP-ED) Tag: Visual edit: Switched

15 December 2022

• 07:0807:08, 15 December 2022 diff hist −38 Tesla (microarchitecture) Remove these "Tesla 1.0" and "Tesla 2.0" headings; there's no WP:RS for this naming, and they were added without comment or context

7 June 2022

• 04:3504:35, 7 June 2022 diff hist −96 Cummins →See also: What's with the list of these unrelated companies? Removed everything not directly relatable to Cummins Tag: Visual edit

19 November 2021

• 23:4823:48, 19 November 2021 diff hist +43 Power Macintosh No idea what "developmental essence" is. Don't make up terminology. Restoring the original text. Tag: Visual edit

18 May 2021

• 16:1416:14, 18 May 2021 diff hist +3 m Liberation (Christina Aguilera album) Wikilink and fix spelling of drummer Vinnie Colaiuta Tag: Visual edit

25 November 2020

• 04:1604:16, 25 November 2020 diff hist −13 Power Macintosh Remove the word "discontinued"; this is said more clearly immediately afterwards by identifying the dates it was on sale for. Tag: Visual edit

27 August 2020

• 04:3704:37, 27 August 2020 diff hist +406 Xbox 360 launch →Release dates and pricing: Add date that initial prices were announced. Tag: Visual edit

22 July 2020

• 15:1815:18, 22 July 2020 diff hist −211 Microsoft Teams →See also: Removed list of competing products; that's not what See Also sections are for. Make a list article instead. Tag: Visual edit

30 October 2019

• 15:2115:21, 30 October 2019 diff hist −19 Winaero Remove {{windows-stub}}, this is an article about a web site, not Microsoft Windows Tag: Visual edit: Switched

8 September 2019

• 04:1704:17, 8 September 2019 diff hist −80 m Northern Star Award Reverted edits by 98.124.30.169 (talk) to last version by 198.91.235.182 Tag: Rollback

14 July 2019

• 23:3023:30, 14 July 2019 diff hist −1 Macintosh II same here. Tag: Visual edit
• 23:2923:29, 14 July 2019 diff hist −1 Macintosh II was -> is in the lead sentence. The Macintosh II didn't stop being a Macintosh II. Tag: Visual edit

22 June 2019

• 00:2100:21, 22 June 2019 diff hist −285 AirPort →AirPort Express: Removed an unsourced and inaccurate statement. Tag: Visual edit
• 00:1600:16, 22 June 2019 diff hist −7 AirPort Express Undid revision 872732655 by Somej (talk) Don't do that. Past tense is for when something no longer -exists-, not when it stops being sold. Tag: Undo

20 February 2019

• 04:3004:30, 20 February 2019 diff hist +28 Microsoft Works was -> is in the lead. Just because Works is no longer sold, doesn't mean it stopped existing. Tag: Visual edit

19 January 2019

• 19:3319:33, 19 January 2019 diff hist −413 List of Microsoft Windows versions Removed the list of operating system versions from "See also". They're all already listed both in the article and the navbox. Tag: Visual edit: Switched

1 December 2018

• 22:0322:03, 1 December 2018 diff hist −1,018 Fuchsia (operating system) Removing the entire See Also section; See Also is not intended to be a dumping ground for lists of similar or competing products. That's what categories and list articles are for Tag: Visual edit: Switched

7 October 2018

• 16:1416:14, 7 October 2018 diff hist −1 IBM 5151 was -> is. It still is a monitor Tag: Visual edit

3 October 2018

• 00:5600:56, 3 October 2018 diff hist −12 Mac Mini →See also: remove the list of competing products. That's not the purpose of this section

27 September 2018

• 00:5400:54, 27 September 2018 diff hist −5 Power Macintosh 6100 Undid revision 857335362 by 69.80.241.97 (talk) No, the original is correct Tag: Undo

28 August 2018

• 03:4303:43, 28 August 2018 diff hist +300 Task Manager (Windows) →Windows Vista: info on why Shut Down was removed
• 03:3903:39, 28 August 2018 diff hist +509 Task Manager (Windows) →Windows XP: removal of seven-segment display

23 August 2018

• 22:3622:36, 23 August 2018 diff hist +14 Talk:C Sharp (programming language) →Discussion about the move of SharpOS (operating system) to SharpOS:: +
• 22:3622:36, 23 August 2018 diff hist +1,117 Talk:C Sharp (programming language) →Requested move 23 August 2018: cm
• 21:4221:42, 23 August 2018 diff hist +2 Macintosh LC family →Expansion to all-in-one market: copy edits
• 21:4021:40, 23 August 2018 diff hist +10 Power Macintosh 5500 →Models: 5500 was also a replacement for the last LC model
• 21:1721:17, 23 August 2018 diff hist −26 System 7 copy edits
• 20:4120:41, 23 August 2018 diff hist −15 Acid2 Undid revision 856196271 by 2A01:119F:21D:7900:9FB:2D2A:62AC:DC46 (talk) No, "macOS" is correct Tag: Undo
• 20:3920:39, 23 August 2018 diff hist +424 Talk:C Sharp (programming language) →The correct title: cm
• 20:2620:26, 23 August 2018 diff hist 0 Template:Windows 10 versions Undid revision 856140043 by TheTwoEyedMan (talk) Your provided reason for this revert makes no sense. RS5 is in preview -- this is widely-known and provable. Use the talk page to discuss if you've got an issue. Tag: Undo
• 01:0501:05, 23 August 2018 diff hist +354 File Explorer add a "Windows 10, version 1809 and Windows Server 2019" section, with Dark Mode
• 00:2000:20, 23 August 2018 diff hist 0 Powercfg It isn't "PowerCFG", it's "Powercfg" or "powercfg"

22 August 2018

• 23:3523:35, 22 August 2018 diff hist −38 Criticism of Windows Vista →Driver signing requirement: removed {{misleading}}. seems fine to me.
• 23:3323:33, 22 August 2018 diff hist −574 Criticism of Windows Vista →Removal of features from previous versions: removing this section because it doesn't actually say anything, it just links to List of features removed in Windows Vista
• 23:3223:32, 22 August 2018 diff hist −6 Criticism of Windows Vista →Game performance: wording updates now that this is well over a decade behind us
• 23:2623:26, 22 August 2018 diff hist −917 Windows Vista Removed the last paragraph of the lead. One security patch isn't important enough for the lead, and the extended support end date is in the infobox.
• 23:2323:23, 22 August 2018 diff hist −921 Criticism of Windows Vista →Idea borrowing: removing this whole section since it's based solely on an Apple marketing presentation
• 23:2123:21, 22 August 2018 diff hist −32 Management features new to Windows Vista removed {{pov check}} after 9 years
• 23:0523:05, 22 August 2018 diff hist −6 Windows Registry removed (SAM) from the lead paragraph. keep the lead simple.
• 23:0323:03, 22 August 2018 diff hist +8 Windows Registry get the article name into the lead sentence
• 22:5622:56, 22 August 2018 diff hist −36 Category:Utilities for Windows removed Category:Windows administration; not everything listed in this set of categories is used to administer Windows itself
• 22:2522:25, 22 August 2018 diff hist −127 Windows Server 2008 →Service Pack: Same here
• 22:2322:23, 22 August 2018 diff hist −73 Windows Server 2008 →Editions: Tighten language
• 22:2122:21, 22 August 2018 diff hist −631 Windows Server 2008 →Active Directory: Use point-form style throughout