Eragon: Book I
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A new adventure hatches in Book One of the Inheritance Cycle, perfect for fans of Lord of the Rings! This New York Times bestselling series has sold over 40 million copies and is an international fantasy sensation.
"Christopher Paolini is a true rarity." —The Washington Post
When fifteen-year-old Eragon finds a polished blue stone in the forest, he thinks it is the lucky discovery of a poor farm boy. But when the stone brings a dragon hatchling, Eragon soon realizes he has stumbled upon a legacy nearly as old as the Empire itself.
Overnight his simple life is shattered, and, gifted with only an ancient sword, a loyal dragon, and sage advice from an old storyteller, Eragon is soon swept into a dangerous tapestry of magic, glory, and power. Now his choices could save—or destroy—the Empire.
Christopher Paolini
Christopher is the firstborn of Kenneth and Talita. Creator of the World of Eragon and the Fractalverse. Holder of the Guinness World Record for youngest author of a bestselling series. Qualified for marksman in the Australian army. Scottish laird. Dodged gunfire . . . more than once. As a child, was chased by a moose in Alaska. Has his name inscribed on Mars. Husband. Father. Asker of questions and teller of stories.
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- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5A beautifully written book about a boy Eragon and his dragon Saphira. There are many similarities with the LOTR trilogy and in some instances Harry Potter books, but it is still a very well written book.
- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5Having finally noticed that the Paolini has completed the series, after almost a decade, I decided to pick up Eragon again so I could refresh my memory of the names and events of the first two books. As a brief synopsis, Eragon is a fifteen year old boy living in a remote village. Upon discovering a dragon egg in the woods, he hatches it and becomes a new Dragon Rider, with the goal of fighting against the emperor Galbatorix's rule. He journeys away from the Empire to the hideout of the rebel Varden group, in search of sanctuary while he trains in arms and magic.
It seems to me that the prevailing opinion among the more "refined" reviewers here is that Eragon is a rehash of old fantasy tropes. Although I agree that the idea of a young hero discovering a magic power/object and fighting an evil ruler is hardly original, I don't think this detracts from the enjoyment of the story itself. My favourite part of Eragon is probably the magic system. In Eragon, magic is tied to an "ancient language", which describes things as they are - by saying something, it can be made so. The catch is that all magic requires the same effort as the actual task. Paolini has thus created a flexible yet structured magical system, which (I think) is a also a fairly original concept. The drawback is that unlike in, say, Mistborn, magical battles are less than exciting, amounting to rapid talking and thinking.
The blurb mentioned that Paolini began the book at fifteen, and it shows: the writing is not often subtle and seems tailored at the young adult reader. He makes an effort at creating vivid landscapes, but too often we lose out on significant details - for example, the fact that Ajihad is black is mentioned only once and is quite easy to miss, giving a very different mental image of him and his daughter. Other problems include the fact that I still have yet to get a good idea of what Farthen Dur looks like: Paolini has a habit of skipping over gaps of space and time as people tend to "travel for three days" and appear elsewhere. Maps help alleviate this, but it still feels a little discontinuous.Nevertheless, I would still recommend reading Eragon, especially as a primer to some fantasy as it isn't a particularly taxing text. I will however be interested to see how the rest of the series goes. 3/5 for promising storyline but slightly confusing presentation. - Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5A good reread. its funny how much of the book i forgot! Turns out most of what i actually remembered was from that hokey movie that they made. Andi remember almost nothing of what happens in the rest of the series. I can see why it had a choke hold on me as a kid, but as an adult it was just a fun read. The writing is good, and the story is intricate, I think its getting this rating more for the pure fact that its a reread maybe?
- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5I wanted to love it. It has dragons, heroes, villains, elves, battles between good and evil -- how could you not devour an epic tale like this? The excessive use of commas and frequent over description knocked a few stars off. It could have used another round of editing, or polishing. I'm hoping that the author has matured in his writing skills by the next installment, otherwise it will be too painful to continue.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5Enthralling bit of fantasy. Descriptive and vibrant with literary imagery.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5My 10 year old son and I listened to this book together and had a great time. I very much enjoyed the story and the narration. We're moving on to book two!
- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5OK fantasy YA novel. My daughter Jordy said it was a bit too derivative of Tolkien and others and I guess that's right. I enjoyed it though. I have not read the others.
- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5Excellent fantasy.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5I loved this book! The movie wasn't really that good, but the book is wonderful! The world Alageaisa [sp] is fully developed and while I can see the influence of other fantasy/scifi projects and books, it's not a copy.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5I very much enjoyed reading Eragon—book one in the Inheritance series. Now, nineteen years after its publication, it was a nice change from most of the modern thrillers I read today (although I like them too). Of course, being a YA supernatural fantasy, you would expect it to be without a lot of cursing, sex, and graphic violence. Yet it was a fascinating journey filled with magic, elves, dwarves, sorcerers, and a dragon. I loved the characters and found the language and names very inventive. Some critics claim Paolini might have gotten some of his ideas from other renowned writers, such as J. R. R. Tolkien, J. K. Rowling, and George R. R. Martin (a lot of initials). Still, there is more than enough originality to engage and entertain the reader. I was drawn in from the first page and look forward to reading about Eragon's future.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5The book was an easy and quick read keeping you interested in the story. The character development was well done. I look forward to getting into book 2 of the series shortly.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5Great book.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5This book has been sitting on my bookshelf since 2003~2004. While I am sad it took me so long to read this amazing book, I am also excited that I won't have to wait to read the other books in this series.
The first few chapters of the book was a bit rough, not because of a lack of interesting beginning, but because it took me a while to get acquainted with Alagaesia. But, as I learned more about the world of the book as I continued reading, I got pulled in more and more. Paolini does some wonderful foreshadowing throughout this first book. The reader is able to guess at somethings, but is left without confirmation until Paolini wants you to know. The book ends with the immediate situation at a kind of resolution, but still with a lot of large plot points left unsolved, but a general path set down to lead into the next book.
Content Warning: Descriptions of battles and wounds, mentions of torture - though no descriptions of it happening, there is some details of the resulting wounds. - Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5An all-around enjoyable read.
- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5I read these a long time ago and it was just an ok book. Nothing new or original was written and there is similar fantasy out there.
- Rating: 1 out of 5 stars1/5I found Paolini's world to be derivative and completely lacking in individualism. As I was reading, I was noting, Oh look, he's read Tolkein, Beowulf, etc etc. Also, the main character irritated me so much that I actually quit reading about 20 pages from the end. I simply didn't care about him one iota. He was arrogant and uncaring, and the whole story simply didn't hang together for me.
- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5I remember this book quite fondly from my youth, but after reading it as an adult I realize how many issues it really has. The book was written by a teenager and it shows. I enjoyed it as a teenager, but since then I've read much better fiction that showed how to properly show off the genre.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5One of my favorite series to revisit, his world building is terrific for a first book and I really enjoy all of the characters.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5(No Major Spoilers, And Yes It's Far Better Than The Movie)
Eragon is a tried and true fantasy novel to its core: A heros journey, a coming of age, master-apprentice tensions, power struggles, and yes most importantly dragons and magic. Same old, same old right? What makes Eragon unique is the twists Paolini adds, all of which are welcome if you're a fan of the genre. Everything has personality, especially the staring lady Saphira (Suh-fear-uh) who adorns the cover. There are few completely mindless creatures. The typical baddies are replaced with familar yet unique counterparts, no orcs here folks. Magic is treated more so as a tool than a way to immediately solve every problem the protagonist faces. Here the use of magic comes with a price which gives it more impact when it is used. This element is especially refreshing for those tired of the typical deus ex machina sort of magic used to make up for bad writing. I would only classify one or two moments in Eragon qualifying as Deus Ex, where as some series are littered with it.
Eragon also stands out for its readability, though for some it may seem daunting at ~157,000 words according to the author. I find that it is appropriate for children and adults alike where as other staples such as The Lord of The Rings may be a bit too advanced for younger individuals. Chapters are laid out in a way that will please those who read in short bursts as well as those that prefer longer sessions. At no point do you feel that things are over written and boorish nor do you feel they are so short and rushed that it becomes too shallow for immersion.
Paolini wrote Eragon in his late teens and it was his first novel, and in fairness to an extent it does show. However to disregard it for that fact alone would be a big mistake. It may not be the apex of Fantasy but it is a great read and very approachable, especially given the writers age and experience at the time. Far too many fantasy novels end up being too daunting or too simple, few are "just right" in the way Eragon is. Though, as with all books that appeal to both children and adults it doesn't quite go the extra mile in either direction and it lacks the true originality that would of earned it five stars . I am critical about the books I keep and Eragon has earned its place on my bookshelf most definitely. I would recommend this over other well known fantasy series like Harry Potter any day and if you are looking for a more digestible fantasy series of the Tolkein variety, this is it. - Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5Eragon is happy living on a farm with his uncle and cousin, though he would’ve loved to have known his mom and dad. When he finds a unique blue stone in “the spine” one day he takes it, hoping it will be of value and his family can sell it for money. Eragon has trouble finding a buyer, but one night unexpected sounds start coming from the stone. When a dragon hatches, Eragon’s life will never be the same. Right from the start he and his dragon, who he names Saphira, have a special connection. That’s always the way it’s been with Dragon Riders. There are few Dragon Riders left, and the ones that are around are forced to work for the Empire. Terrible things happen and Eragon must quickly decide what to do. As he tries to escape, a man he's known all is life, Brom, offers to come with him and teach him ancient ways. But their path is dangerous, filled with people and creatures who may or may not be able to be trusted. Eragon’s small farm world expands as he sets out to learn more about the place that he's lived all his life. Will Eragon and Saphira be able to survive? Can Brom teach Eragon all he needs to know? Is it possible for them to get away from so many beings that want to capture and kill them? How will Eragon ever know what he should do with his new Dragon Rider power? Jump aboard this fantasy and soar into a world where anything is possible.
Eragon by Christopher Paolini has been around for over ten years. Ever since I first heard of it I've been curious about the story because it was written by a teenager and the book's journey to publication fascinated me. I listened to the audio and the narrator, Gerard Doyle, did a fabulous job using a variety of voices and inflections. I feel like I know the characters in the book and I connected with them- especially the main characters. I cheered on Eragon when things went well, and I was frustrated when I felt he was doing the wrong thing. I tried to judge the characters he was encountering to see if I would trust them or not too. Being a Dragon Rider sounds fascinating, but it definitely would be scary to have people trying to capture you because of your power. This is a book that involves a new world, ancient languages, magic, and creatures of all kinds. For those reasons I would recommend this book to kids in middle school and up or anyone who enjoys fantasy. I just found out there are four books in the series. I do look forward to finding out what happens, but it may take me a while to make it through all those books! - Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5The world that Paolini has built is fantastic. It has all of the elements of an amazing fantasy story, and yet it doesn't feel redundant. This story has not been told before and Paolini brings it to life with this first book. The problem with it is not the story itself, but rather the writing. The author spends a good chunk of the book reiterating things that have already been clearly stated through dialog or narration. Despite this, he continues to spell everything out for the reader and does not expect the reader to be able to pick up on foreshadowing or to read between the lines. Paolini does not trust his readers to infer what he hopes to express in this book, and instead leaves them to feel as though there is little mystery left to read.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5A reread of many times, this is the first time I realized that I have two copies of this book with two different covers. Still the same book though and I love it as much as I always have. :)
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5This book has a lot of magic to it, from the very first chapter on throughout the adventure readers sign up for. Paolini's descriptions of dragons, and of the friendships that unfold throughout this book, are masterful, and well worth the read all by themselves. Although the story feels a bit more familiar toward the end of the book, and not quite as fresh as the earlier passages in the book, there's so much to love here that the book is difficult to describe. It goes beyond YA Fantasy to bring to life the sort of story that makes readers fall in love with fantasy.
Absolutely recommended. - Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5It's a bit formulaic, and definitely borrows heavily from many great fantasy works, but I can see why it became so popular. Hyped up books are often not worth it, but this one was legit entertaining and fun to read, at least as far as YA fantasies go.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5Very enjoyable for me but really not breaking any new ground in the genre.
- Rating: 2 out of 5 stars2/5It was ok. I'm told the 2nd one is a little better.... I'll give that a try one of these days. :)
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5I quite enjoyed the book. It was really hard to get through it though because of how much detail there was. There was so much detail, that I almost gave up. It was almost unnecessary. Isn't the whole point of a book for the reader to imagine the setting? In this book it's planned out for you to the point where I can't imagine anything. But all-in-all I quite enjoyed the book.
- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5I liked this book. It got slow in some parts, but will read the next two in the series.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5Eragon lives with his uncle and cousin in a modest farm house. They lead a simple, poor life until one day while hunting Eragon finds a jewel in the woods. When he attempts to sell it to get money to feed his family no one will buy it as they do not know what kind of jewel it is or what it could be worth. Eragon keeps the jewel and is awoken one night to find it cracking open. What was thought of as a jewel turns out to be a dragon egg. Quickly Eragon finds himself thrust into a world of dragons, magic and violence.
Once a farm hand without much future, Eragon now realizes that life has other plans for him.
This novel reminded me quite a bit of The Lord of the Rings but aimed more towards young readers.
3.5* - Rating: 1 out of 5 stars1/5I don't understand why all the fuss about this series. The writing is substandard and the plot is ripped off from Tolkien and others. I found it painful to read.
Book preview
Eragon - Christopher Paolini
Prologue: Shade of Fear
Wind howled through the night, carrying a scent that would change the world. A tall Shade lifted his head and sniffed the air. He looked human except for his crimson hair and maroon eyes.
He blinked in surprise. The message had been correct: they were here. Or was it a trap? He weighed the odds, then said icily, Spread out; hide behind trees and bushes. Stop whoever is coming…or die.
Around him shuffled twelve Urgals with short swords and round iron shields painted with black symbols. They resembled men with bowed legs and thick, brutish arms made for crushing. A pair of twisted horns grew above their small ears. The monsters hurried into the brush, grunting as they hid. Soon the rustling quieted and the forest was silent again.
The Shade peered around a thick tree and looked up the trail. It was too dark for any human to see, but for him the faint moonlight was like sunshine streaming between the trees; every detail was clear and sharp to his searching gaze. He remained unnaturally quiet, a long pale sword in his hand. A wire-thin scratch curved down the blade. The weapon was thin enough to slip between a pair of ribs, yet stout enough to hack through the hardest armor.
The Urgals could not see as well as the Shade; they groped like blind beggars, fumbling with their weapons. An owl screeched, cutting through the silence. No one relaxed until the bird flew past. Then the monsters shivered in the cold night; one snapped a twig with his heavy boot. The Shade hissed in anger, and the Urgals shrank back, motionless. He suppressed his distaste—they smelled like fetid meat—and turned away. They were tools, nothing more.
The Shade forced back his impatience as the minutes became hours. The scent must have wafted far ahead of its owners. He did not let the Urgals get up or warm themselves. He denied himself those luxuries, too, and stayed behind the tree, watching the trail. Another gust of wind rushed through the forest. The smell was stronger this time. Excited, he lifted a thin lip in a snarl.
Get ready,
he whispered, his whole body vibrating. The tip of his sword moved in small circles. It had taken many plots and much pain to bring himself to this moment. It would not do to lose control now.
Eyes brightened under the Urgals’ thick brows, and the creatures gripped their weapons tighter. Ahead of them, the Shade heard a clink as something hard struck a loose stone. Faint smudges emerged from the darkness and advanced down the trail.
Three white horses with riders cantered toward the ambush, their heads held high and proud, their coats rippling in the moonlight like liquid silver.
On the first horse was an elf with pointed ears and elegantly slanted eyebrows. His build was slim but strong, like a rapier. A powerful bow was slung on his back. A sword pressed against his side opposite a quiver of arrows fletched with swan feathers.
The last rider had the same fair face and angled features as the other. He carried a long spear in his right hand and a white dagger at his belt. A helm of extraordinary craftsmanship, wrought with amber and gold, rested on his head.
Between these two rode a raven-haired elven lady, who surveyed her surroundings with poise. Framed by long black locks, her deep eyes shone with a driving force. Her clothes were unadorned, yet her beauty was undiminished. At her side was a sword, and on her back a long bow with a quiver. She carried in her lap a pouch that she frequently looked at, as if to reassure herself that it was still there.
One of the elves spoke quietly, but the Shade could not hear what was said. The lady answered with obvious authority, and her guards switched places. The one wearing the helm took the lead, shifting his spear to a readier grip. They passed the Shade’s hiding place and the first few Urgals without suspicion.
The Shade was already savoring his victory when the wind changed direction and swept toward the elves, heavy with the Urgals’ stench. The horses snorted with alarm and tossed their heads. The riders stiffened, eyes flashing from side to side, then wheeled their mounts around and galloped away.
The lady’s horse surged forward, leaving her guards far behind. Forsaking their hiding, the Urgals stood and released a stream of black arrows. The Shade jumped out from behind the tree, raised his right hand, and shouted, Garjzla!
A red bolt flashed from his palm toward the elven lady, illuminating the trees with a bloody light. It struck her steed, and the horse toppled with a high-pitched squeal, plowing into the ground chest-first. She leapt off the animal with inhuman speed, landed lightly, then glanced back for her guards.
The Urgals’ deadly arrows quickly brought down the two elves. They fell from the noble horses, blood pooling in the dirt. As the Urgals rushed to the slain elves, the Shade screamed, After her! She is the one I want!
The monsters grunted and rushed down the trail.
A cry tore from the elf’s lips as she saw her dead companions. She took a step toward them, then cursed her enemies and bounded into the forest.
While the Urgals crashed through the trees, the Shade climbed a piece of granite that jutted above them. From his perch he could see all of the surrounding forest. He raised his hand and uttered, Istalrí boetk!
and a quarter-mile section of the forest exploded into flames. Grimly he burned one section after another until there was a ring of fire, a half-league across, around the ambush site. The flames looked like a molten crown resting on the forest. Satisfied, he watched the ring carefully, in case it should falter.
The band of fire thickened, contracting the area the Urgals had to search. Suddenly, the Shade heard shouts and a coarse scream. Through the trees he saw three of his charges fall in a pile, mortally wounded. He caught a glimpse of the elf running from the remaining Urgals.
She fled toward the craggy piece of granite at a tremendous speed. The Shade examined the ground twenty feet below, then jumped and landed nimbly in front of her. She skidded around and sped back to the trail. Black Urgal blood dripped from her sword, staining the pouch in her hand.
The horned monsters came out of the forest and hemmed her in, blocking the only escape routes. Her head whipped around as she tried to find a way out. Seeing none, she drew herself up with regal disdain. The Shade approached her with a raised hand, allowing himself to enjoy her helplessness.
Get her.
As the Urgals surged forward, the elf pulled open the pouch, reached into it, and then let it drop to the ground. In her hands was a large sapphire stone that reflected the angry light of the fires. She raised it over her head, lips forming frantic words. Desperate, the Shade barked, Garjzla!
A ball of red flame sprang from his hand and flew toward the elf, fast as an arrow. But he was too late. A flash of emerald light briefly illuminated the forest, and the stone vanished. Then the red fire smote her and she collapsed.
The Shade howled in rage and stalked forward, flinging his sword at a tree. It passed halfway through the trunk, where it stuck, quivering. He shot nine bolts of energy from his palm—which killed the Urgals instantly—then ripped his sword free and strode to the elf.
Prophecies of revenge, spoken in a wretched language only he knew, rolled from his tongue. He clenched his thin hands and glared at the sky. The cold stars stared back, unwinking, otherworldly watchers. Disgust curled his lip before he turned back to the unconscious elf.
Her beauty, which would have entranced any mortal man, held no charm for him. He confirmed that the stone was gone, then retrieved his horse from its hiding place among the trees. After tying the elf onto the saddle, he mounted the charger and made his way out of the woods.
He quenched the fires in his path but left the rest to burn.
Discovery
Eragon knelt in a bed of trampled reed grass and scanned the tracks with a practiced eye. The prints told him that the deer had been in the meadow only a half-hour before. Soon they would bed down. His target, a small doe with a pronounced limp in her left forefoot, was still with the herd. He was amazed she had made it so far without a wolf or bear catching her.
The sky was clear and dark, and a slight breeze stirred the air. A silvery cloud drifted over the mountains that surrounded him, its edges glowing with ruddy light cast from the harvest moon cradled between two peaks. Streams flowed down the mountains from stolid glaciers and glistening snowpacks. A brooding mist crept along the valley’s floor, almost thick enough to obscure his feet.
Eragon was fifteen, less than a year from manhood. Dark eyebrows rested above his intense brown eyes. His clothes were worn from work. A hunting knife with a bone handle was sheathed at his belt, and a buckskin tube protected his yew bow from the mist. He carried a wood-frame pack.
The deer had led him deep into the Spine, a range of untamed mountains that extended up and down the land of Alagaësia. Strange tales and men often came from those mountains, usually boding ill. Despite that, Eragon did not fear the Spine—he was the only hunter near Carvahall who dared track game deep into its craggy recesses.
It was the third night of the hunt, and his food was half gone. If he did not fell the doe, he would be forced to return home empty handed. His family needed the meat for the rapidly approaching winter and could not afford to buy it in Carvahall.
Eragon stood with quiet assurance in the dusky moonlight, then strode into the forest toward a glen where he was sure the deer would rest. The trees blocked the sky from view and cast feathery shadows on the ground. He looked at the tracks only occasionally; he knew the way.
At the glen, he strung his bow with a sure touch, then drew three arrows and nocked one, holding the others in his left hand. The moonlight revealed twenty or so motionless lumps where the deer lay in the grass. The doe he wanted was at the edge of the herd, her left foreleg stretched out awkwardly.
Eragon slowly crept closer, keeping the bow ready. All his work of the past three days had led to this moment. He took a last steadying breath and—an explosion shattered the night.
The herd bolted. Eragon lunged forward, racing through the grass as a fiery wind surged past his cheek. He slid to a stop and loosed an arrow at the bounding doe. It missed by a finger’s breadth and hissed into darkness. He cursed and spun around, instinctively nocking another arrow.
Behind him, where the deer had been, smoldered a large circle of grass and trees. Many of the pines stood bare of their needles. The grass outside the charring was flattened. A wisp of smoke curled in the air, carrying a burnt smell. In the center of the blast radius lay a polished blue stone. Mist snaked across the scorched area and swirled insubstantial tendrils over the stone.
Eragon watched for danger for several long minutes, but the only thing that moved was the mist. Cautiously, he released the tension from his bow and moved forward. Moonlight cast him in pale shadow as he stopped before the stone. He nudged it with an arrow, then jumped back. Nothing happened, so he warily picked it up.
Nature had never polished a stone as smooth as this one. Its flawless surface was dark blue, except for thin veins of white that spiderwebbed across it. The stone was cool and frictionless under his fingers, like hardened silk. Oval and about a foot long, it weighed several pounds, though it felt lighter than it should have.
Eragon found the stone both beautiful and frightening. Where did it come from? Does it have a purpose? Then a more disturbing thought came to him: Was it sent here by accident, or am I meant to have it? If he had learned anything from the old stories, it was to treat magic, and those who used it, with great caution.
But what should I do with the stone? It would be tiresome to carry, and there was a chance it was dangerous. It might be better to leave it behind. A flicker of indecision ran through him, and he almost dropped it, but something stayed his hand. At the very least, it might pay for some food, he decided with a shrug, tucking the stone into his pack.
The glen was too exposed to make a safe camp, so he slipped back into the forest and spread his bedroll beneath the upturned roots of a fallen tree. After a cold dinner of bread and cheese, he wrapped himself in blankets and fell asleep, pondering what had occurred.
Palancar Valley
The sun rose the next morning with a glorious conflagration of pink and yellow. The air was fresh, sweet, and very cold. Ice edged the streams, and small pools were completely frozen over. After a breakfast of porridge, Eragon returned to the glen and examined the charred area. The morning light revealed no new details, so he started for home.
The rough game trail was faintly worn and, in places, nonexistent. Because it had been forged by animals, it often backtracked and took long detours. Yet for all its flaws, it was still the fastest way out of the mountains.
The Spine was one of the only places that King Galbatorix could not call his own. Stories were still told about how half his army disappeared after marching into its ancient forest. A cloud of misfortune and bad luck seemed to hang over it. Though the trees grew tall and the sky shone brightly, few people could stay in the Spine for long without suffering an accident. Eragon was one of those few—not through any particular gift, it seemed to him, but because of persistent vigilance and sharp reflexes. He had hiked in the mountains for years, yet he was still wary of them. Every time he thought they had surrendered their secrets, something happened to upset his understanding of them—like the stone’s appearance.
He kept up a brisk pace, and the leagues steadily disappeared. In late evening he arrived at the edge of a precipitous ravine. The Anora River rushed by far below, heading to Palancar Valley. Gorged with hundreds of tiny streams, the river was a brute force, battling against the rocks and boulders that barred its way. A low rumble filled the air.
He camped in a thicket near the ravine and watched the moonrise before going to bed.
—
It grew colder over the next day and a half. Eragon traveled quickly and saw little of the wary wildlife. A bit past noon, he heard the Igualda Falls blanketing everything with the dull sound of a thousand splashes. The trail led him onto a moist slate outcropping, which the river sped past, flinging itself into empty air and down mossy cliffs.
Before him lay Palancar Valley, exposed like an unrolled map. The base of the Igualda Falls, more than a half-mile below, was the northernmost point of the valley. A little ways from the falls was Carvahall, a cluster of brown buildings. White smoke rose from the chimneys, defiant of the wilderness around it. At this height, farms were small square patches no bigger than the end of his finger. The land around them was tan or sandy, where dead grass swayed in the wind. The Anora River wound from the falls toward Palancar’s southern end, reflecting great strips of sunlight. Far in the distance it flowed past the village Therinsford and the lonely mountain Utgard. Beyond that, he knew only that it turned north and ran to the sea.
After a pause, Eragon left the outcropping and started down the trail, grimacing at the descent. When he arrived at the bottom, soft dusk was creeping over everything, blurring colors and shapes into gray masses. Carvahall’s lights shimmered nearby in the twilight; the houses cast long shadows. Aside from Therinsford, Carvahall was the only village in Palancar Valley. The settlement was secluded and surrounded by harsh, beautiful land. Few traveled here except merchants and trappers.
The village was composed of stout log buildings with low roofs—some thatched, others shingled. Smoke billowed from the chimneys, giving the air a woody smell. The buildings had wide porches where people gathered to talk and conduct business. Occasionally a window brightened as a candle or lamp was lit. Eragon heard men talking loudly in the evening air while wives scurried to fetch their husbands, scolding them for being late.
Eragon wove his way between the houses to the butcher’s shop, a broad, thick-beamed building. Overhead, the chimney belched black smoke.
He pushed the door open. The spacious room was warm and well lit by a fire snapping in a stone fireplace. A bare counter stretched across the far side of the room. The floor was strewn with loose straw. Everything was scrupulously clean, as if the owner spent his leisure time digging in obscure crannies for minuscule pieces of filth. Behind the counter stood the butcher Sloan. A small man, he wore a cotton shirt and a long, bloodstained smock. An impressive array of knives swung from his belt. He had a sallow, pockmarked face, and his black eyes were suspicious. He polished the counter with a ragged cloth.
Sloan’s mouth twisted as Eragon entered. Well, the mighty hunter joins the rest of us mortals. How many did you bag this time?
None,
was Eragon’s curt reply. He had never liked Sloan. The butcher always treated him with disdain, as if he were something unclean. A widower, Sloan seemed to care for only one person—his daughter, Katrina, on whom he doted.
I’m amazed,
said Sloan with affected astonishment. He turned his back on Eragon to scrape something off the wall. And that’s your reason for coming here?
Yes,
admitted Eragon uncomfortably.
If that’s the case, let’s see your money.
Sloan tapped his fingers when Eragon shifted his feet and remained silent. Come on—either you have it or you don’t. Which is it?
I don’t really have any money, but I do—
What, no money?
the butcher cut him off sharply. And you expect to buy meat! Are the other merchants giving away their wares? Should I just hand you the goods without charge? Besides,
he said abruptly, it’s late. Come back tomorrow with money. I’m closed for the day.
Eragon glared at him. I can’t wait until tomorrow, Sloan. It’ll be worth your while, though; I found something to pay you with.
He pulled out the stone with a flourish and set it gently on the scarred counter, where it gleamed with light from the dancing flames.
Stole it is more likely,
muttered Sloan, leaning forward with an interested expression.
Ignoring the comment, Eragon asked, Will this be enough?
Sloan picked up the stone and gauged its weight speculatively. He ran his hands over its smoothness and inspected the white veins. With a calculating look, he set it down. It’s pretty, but how much is it worth?
I don’t know,
admitted Eragon, but no one would have gone to the trouble of shaping it unless it had some value.
Obviously,
said Sloan with exaggerated patience. But how much value? Since you don’t know, I suggest that you find a trader who does, or take my offer of three crowns.
That’s a miser’s bargain! It must be worth at least ten times that,
protested Eragon. Three crowns would not even buy enough meat to last a week.
Sloan shrugged. If you don’t like my offer, wait until the traders arrive. Either way, I’m tired of this conversation.
The traders were a nomadic group of merchants and entertainers who visited Carvahall every spring and winter. They bought whatever excess the villagers and local farmers had managed to grow or make, and sold what they needed to live through another year: seeds, animals, fabric, and supplies like salt and sugar.
But Eragon did not want to wait until they arrived; it could be a while, and his family needed the meat now. Fine, I accept,
he snapped.
Good, I’ll get you the meat. Not that it matters, but where did you find this?
Two nights ago in the Spine—
Get out!
demanded Sloan, pushing the stone away. He stomped furiously to the end of the counter and started scrubbing old bloodstains off a knife.
Why?
asked Eragon. He drew the stone closer, as if to protect it from Sloan’s wrath.
I won’t deal with anything you bring back from those damned mountains! Take your sorcerer’s stone elsewhere.
Sloan’s hand suddenly slipped and he cut a finger on the knife, but he seemed not to notice. He continued to scrub, staining the blade with fresh blood.
You refuse to sell to me!
Yes! Unless you pay with coins,
Sloan growled, and hefted the knife, sidling away. Go, before I make you!
The door behind them slammed open. Eragon whirled around, ready for more trouble. In stomped Horst, a hulking man. Sloan’s daughter, Katrina—a tall girl of sixteen—trailed behind him with a determined expression. Eragon was surprised to see her; she usually absented herself from any arguments involving her father. Sloan glanced at them warily, then started to accuse Eragon. He won’t—
Quiet,
announced Horst in a rumbling voice, cracking his knuckles at the same time. He was Carvahall’s smith, as his thick neck and scarred leather apron attested. His powerful arms were bare to the elbow; a great expanse of hairy muscular chest was visible through the top of his shirt. A black beard, carelessly trimmed, roiled and knotted like his jaw muscles. Sloan, what have you done now?
Nothing.
He gave Eragon a murderous gaze, then spat, "This…boy came in here and started badgering me. I asked him to leave, but he won’t budge. I even threatened him and he still ignored me!" Sloan seemed to shrink as he looked at Horst.
Is this true?
demanded the smith.
No!
replied Eragon. I offered this stone as payment for some meat, and he accepted it. When I told him that I’d found it in the Spine, he refused to even touch it. What difference does it make where it came from?
Horst looked at the stone curiously, then returned his attention to the butcher. Why won’t you trade with him, Sloan? I’ve no love for the Spine myself, but if it’s a question of the stone’s worth, I’ll back it with my own money.
The question hung in the air for a moment. Then Sloan licked his lips and said, This is my own store. I can do whatever I want.
Katrina stepped out from behind Horst and tossed back her auburn hair like a spray of molten copper. "Father, Eragon is willing to pay. Give him the meat, and then we can have supper."
Sloan’s eyes narrowed dangerously. "Go back to the house; this is none of your business.… I said go!" Katrina’s face hardened, then she marched out of the room with a stiff back.
Eragon watched with disapproval but dared not interfere. Horst tugged at his beard before saying reproachfully, Fine, you can deal with me. What were you going to get, Eragon?
His voice reverberated through the room.
As much as I could.
Horst pulled out a purse and counted out a pile of coins. Give me your best roasts and steaks. Make sure that it’s enough to fill Eragon’s pack.
The butcher hesitated, his gaze darting between Horst and Eragon. Not selling to me would be a very bad idea,
stated Horst.
Glowering venomously, Sloan slipped into the back room. A frenzy of chopping, wrapping, and low cursing reached them. After several uncomfortable minutes, he returned with an armful of wrapped meat. His face was expressionless as he accepted Horst’s money, then proceeded to clean his knife, pretending that they were not there.
Horst scooped up the meat and walked outside. Eragon hurried behind him, carrying his pack and the stone. The crisp night air rolled over their faces, refreshing after the stuffy shop.
Thank you, Horst. Uncle Garrow will be pleased.
Horst laughed quietly. Don’t thank me. I’ve wanted to do that for a long time. Sloan’s a vicious troublemaker; it does him good to be humbled. Katrina heard what was happening and ran to fetch me. Good thing I came—the two of you were almost at blows. Unfortunately, I doubt he’ll serve you or any of your family the next time you go in there, even if you do have coins.
Why did he explode like that? We’ve never been friendly, but he’s always taken our money. And I’ve never seen him treat Katrina that way,
said Eragon, opening the top of the pack.
Horst shrugged. Ask your uncle. He knows more about it than I do.
Eragon stuffed the meat into his pack. Well, now I have one more reason to hurry home…to solve this mystery. Here, this is rightfully yours.
He proffered the stone.
Horst chuckled. No, you keep your strange rock. As for payment, Albriech plans to leave for Feinster next spring. He wants to become a master smith, and I’m going to need an assistant. You can come and work off the debt on your spare days.
Eragon bowed slightly, delighted. Horst had two sons, Albriech and Baldor, both of whom worked in his forge. Taking one’s place was a generous offer. Again, thank you! I look forward to working with you.
He was glad that there was a way for him to pay Horst. His uncle would never accept charity. Then Eragon remembered what his cousin had told him before he had left on the hunt. Roran wanted me to give Katrina a message, but since I can’t, can you get it to her?
Of course.
He wants her to know that he’ll come into town as soon as the merchants arrive and that he will see her then.
That all?
Eragon was slightly embarrassed. No, he also wants her to know that she is the most beautiful girl he has ever seen and that he thinks of nothing else.
Horst’s face broke into a broad grin, and he winked at Eragon. Getting serious, isn’t he?
Yes, sir,
Eragon answered with a quick smile. Could you also give her my thanks? It was nice of her to stand up to her father for me. I hope that she isn’t punished because of it. Roran would be furious if I got her into trouble.
I wouldn’t worry about it. Sloan doesn’t know that she called me, so I doubt he’ll be too hard on her. Before you go, will you sup with us?
I’m sorry, but I can’t. Garrow is expecting me,
said Eragon, tying off the top of the pack. He hoisted it onto his back and started down the road, raising his hand in farewell.
The meat slowed him down, but he was eager to be home, and renewed vigor filled his steps. The village ended abruptly, and he left its warm lights behind. The pearlescent moon peeked over the mountains, bathing the land in a ghostly reflection of daylight. Everything looked bleached and flat.
Near the end of his journey, he turned off the road, which continued south. A simple path led straight through waist-high grass and up a knoll, almost hidden by the shadows of protective elm trees. He crested the hill and saw a gentle light shining from his home.
The house had a shingled roof and a brick chimney. Eaves hung over the whitewashed walls, shadowing the ground below. One side of the enclosed porch was filled with split wood, ready for the fire. A jumble of farm tools cluttered the other side.
The house had been abandoned for half a century when they moved in after Garrow’s wife, Marian, died. It was ten miles from Carvahall, farther than anyone else’s. People considered the distance dangerous because the family could not rely on help from the village in times of trouble, but Eragon’s uncle would not listen.
A hundred feet from the house, in a dull-colored barn, lived two horses—Birka and Brugh—with chickens and a cow. Sometimes there was also a pig, but they had been unable to afford one this year. A wagon sat wedged between the stalls. On the edge of their fields, a thick line of trees traced along the Anora River.
He saw a light move behind a window as he wearily reached the porch. Uncle, it’s Eragon. Let me in.
A small shutter slid back for a second, then the door swung inward.
Garrow stood with his hand on the door. His worn clothes hung on him like rags on a stick frame. A lean, hungry face with intense eyes gazed out from under graying hair. He looked like a man who had been partly mummified before it was discovered that he was still alive. Roran’s sleeping,
was his answer to Eragon’s inquiring glance.
A lantern flickered on a wood table so old that the grain stood up in tiny ridges like a giant fingerprint. Near a woodstove were rows of cooking utensils tacked onto the wall with homemade nails. A second door opened to the rest of the house. The floor was made of boards polished smooth by years of tramping feet.
Eragon pulled off his pack and took out the meat. What’s this? Did you buy meat? Where did you get the money?
asked his uncle harshly as he saw the wrapped packages.
Eragon took a breath before answering. No, Horst bought it for us.
You let him pay for it? I told you before, I won’t beg for our food. If we can’t feed ourselves, we might as well move into town. Before you can turn around twice, they’ll be sending us used clothes and asking if we’ll be able to get through the winter.
Garrow’s face paled with anger.
I didn’t accept charity,
snapped Eragon. Horst agreed to let me work off the debt this spring. He needs someone to help him because Albriech is going away.
And where will you get the time to work for him? Are you going to ignore all the things that need to be done here?
asked Garrow, forcing his voice down.
Eragon hung his bow and quiver on hooks beside the front door. I don’t know how I’ll do it,
he said irritably. Besides, I found something that could be worth some money.
He set the stone on the table.
Garrow bowed over it: the hungry look on his face became ravenous, and his fingers moved with a strange twitch. You found this in the Spine?
Yes,
said Eragon. He explained what had happened. And to make matters worse, I lost my best arrow. I’ll have to make more before long.
They stared at the stone in the near darkness.
How was the weather?
asked his uncle, lifting the stone. His hands tightened around it like he was afraid it would suddenly disappear.
Cold,
was Eragon’s reply. It didn’t snow, but it froze each night.
Garrow looked worried by the news. Tomorrow you’ll have to help Roran finish harvesting the barley. If we can get the squash picked, too, the frost won’t bother us.
He passed the stone to Eragon. Here, keep it. When the traders come, we’ll find out what it’s worth. Selling it is probably the best thing to do. The less we’re involved with magic, the better.… Why did Horst pay for the meat?
It took only a moment for Eragon to explain his argument with Sloan. I just don’t understand what angered him so.
Garrow shrugged. Sloan’s wife, Ismira, went over the Igualda Falls a year before you were brought here. He hasn’t been near the Spine since, nor had anything to do with it. But that’s no reason to refuse payment. I think he wanted to give you trouble.
Eragon swayed blearily and said, It’s good to be back.
Garrow’s eyes softened, and he nodded. Eragon stumbled to his room, pushed the stone under his bed, then fell onto the mattress. Home. For the first time since before the hunt, he relaxed completely as sleep overtook him.
Dragon Tales
At dawn the sun’s rays streamed through the window, warming Eragon’s face. Rubbing his eyes, he sat up on the edge of the bed. The pine floor was cold under his feet. He stretched his sore legs and rubbed his back, yawning.
Beside the bed was a row of shelves covered with objects he had collected. There were twisted pieces of wood, odd bits of shells, rocks that had broken to reveal shiny interiors, and strips of dry grass tied into knots. His favorite item was a root so convoluted he never tired of looking at it. The rest of the room was bare, except for a small dresser and nightstand.
He pulled on his boots and stared at the floor, thinking. This was a special day. It was near this very hour, sixteen years ago, that his mother, Selena, had come home to Carvahall alone and pregnant. She had been gone for six years, living in the cities. When she returned, she wore expensive clothes, and her hair was bound by a net of pearls. She had sought out her brother, Garrow, and asked to stay with him until the baby arrived. Within five months her son was born. Everyone was shocked when Selena tearfully begged Garrow and Marian to raise him. When they asked why, she only wept and said, I must.
Her pleas had grown increasingly desperate until they finally agreed. She named him Eragon, then departed early the next morning and never returned.
Eragon still remembered how he had felt when Marian told him the story before she died. The realization that Garrow and Marian were not his real parents had disturbed him greatly. Things that had been permanent and unquestionable were suddenly thrown into doubt. Eventually he had learned to live with it, but he always had a nagging suspicion that he had not been good enough for his mother. I’m sure there was a good reason for what she did; I only wish I knew what it was.
One other thing bothered him: Who was his father? Selena had told no one, and whoever it might be had never come looking for Eragon. He wished that he knew who it was, if only to have a name. It would be nice to know his heritage.
He sighed and went to the nightstand, where he splashed his face, shivering as the water ran down his neck. Refreshed, he retrieved the stone from under the bed and set it on a shelf. The morning light caressed it, throwing a warm shadow on the wall. He touched it one more time, then hurried to the kitchen, eager to see his family. Garrow and Roran were already there, eating chicken. As Eragon greeted them, Roran stood with a grin.
Roran was two years older than Eragon, muscular, sturdy, and careful with his movements. They could not have been closer even if they had been real brothers.
Roran smiled. I’m glad you’re back. How was the trip?
Hard,
replied Eragon. Did Uncle tell you what happened?
He helped himself to a piece of chicken, which he devoured hungrily.
No,
said Roran, and the story was quickly told. At Roran’s insistence, Eragon left his food to show him the stone. This elicited a satisfactory amount of awe, but Roran soon asked nervously, Were you able to talk with Katrina?
No, there wasn’t an opportunity after the argument with Sloan. But she’ll expect you when the traders come. I gave the message to Horst; he will get it to her.
You told Horst?
said Roran incredulously. That was private. If I wanted everyone to know about it, I could have built a bonfire and used smoke signals to communicate. If Sloan finds out, he won’t let me see her again.
Horst will be discreet,
assured Eragon. He won’t let anyone fall prey to Sloan, least of all you.
Roran seemed unconvinced, but argued no more. They returned to their meals in the taciturn presence of Garrow. When the last bites were finished, all three went to work in the fields.
The sun was cold and pale, providing little comfort. Under its watchful eye, the last of the barley was stored in the barn. Next, they gathered prickly vined squash, then the rutabagas, beets, peas, turnips, and beans, which they packed into the root cellar. After hours of labor, they stretched their cramped muscles, pleased that the harvest was finished.
The following days were spent pickling, salting, shelling, and preparing the food for winter.
Nine days after Eragon’s return, a vicious blizzard blew out of the mountains and settled over the valley. The snow came down in great sheets, blanketing the countryside in white. They only dared leave the house for firewood and to feed the animals, for they feared getting lost in the howling wind and featureless landscape. They spent their time huddled over the stove as gusts rattled the heavy window shutters. Days later the storm finally passed, revealing an alien world of soft white drifts.
I’m afraid the traders may not come this year, with conditions this bad,
said Garrow. They’re late as it is. We’ll give them a chance and wait before going to Carvahall. But if they don’t show soon, we’ll have to buy any spare supplies from the townspeople.
His countenance was resigned.
They grew anxious as the days crept by without sign of the traders. Talk was sparse, and depression hung over the house.
On the eighth morning, Roran walked to the road and confirmed that the traders had not yet passed. The day was spent readying for the trip into Carvahall, scrounging with grim expressions for saleable items. That evening, out of desperation, Eragon checked the road again. He found deep ruts cut into the snow, with numerous hoofprints between them. Elated, he ran back to the house whooping, bringing new life to their preparations.
—
They packed their surplus produce into the wagon before sunrise. Garrow put the year’s money in a leather pouch that he carefully fastened to his belt. Eragon set the wrapped stone between bags of grain so it would not roll when the wagon hit bumps.
After a hasty breakfast, they harnessed the horses and cleared a path to the road. The traders’ wagons had already broken the drifts, which sped their progress. By noon they could see Carvahall.
In daylight, it was a small earthy village filled with shouts and laughter. The traders had made camp in an empty field on the outskirts of town. Groups of wagons, tents, and fires were randomly spread across it, spots of color against the snow. The troubadours’ four tents were garishly decorated. A steady stream of people linked the camp to the village.
Crowds churned around a line of bright tents and booths clogging the main street. Horses whinnied at the noise. The snow had been pounded flat, giving it a glassy surface; elsewhere, bonfires had melted it. Roasted hazelnuts added a rich aroma to the smells wafting around them.
Garrow parked the wagon and picketed the horses, then drew coins from his pouch. Get yourselves some treats. Roran, do what you want, only be at Horst’s in time for supper. Eragon, bring that stone and come with me.
Eragon grinned at Roran and pocketed the money, already planning how to spend it.
Roran departed immediately with a determined expression on his face. Garrow led Eragon into the throng, shouldering his way through the bustle. Women were buying cloth, while nearby their husbands examined a new latch, hook, or tool. Children ran up and down the road, shrieking with excitement. Knives were displayed here, spices there, and pots were laid out in shiny rows next to leather harnesses.
Eragon stared at the traders curiously. They seemed less prosperous than last year. Their children had a frightened, wary look, and their clothes were patched. The gaunt men carried swords and daggers with a new familiarity, and even the women had poniards belted at their waists.
What could have happened to make them like this? And why are they so late? wondered Eragon. He remembered the traders as being full of good cheer, but there was none of that now. Garrow pushed down the street, searching for Merlock, a trader who specialized in odd trinkets and pieces of jewelry.
They found him behind a booth, displaying brooches to a group of women. As each new piece was revealed, exclamations of admiration followed. Eragon guessed that more than a few purses would soon be depleted. Merlock seemed to flourish and grow every time his wares were complimented. He wore a goatee, held himself with ease, and seemed to regard the rest of the world with slight contempt.
The excited group prevented Garrow and Eragon from getting near the trader, so they settled on a step and waited. As soon as Merlock was unoccupied, they hurried over.
And what might you sirs want to look at?
asked Merlock. An amulet or trinket for a lady?
With a twirl he pulled out a delicately carved silver rose of excellent workmanship. The polished metal caught Eragon’s attention, and he eyed it appreciatively. The trader continued, Not even three crowns, though it has come all the way from the famed craftsmen of Belatona.
Garrow spoke in a quiet voice. We aren’t looking to buy, but to sell.
Merlock immediately covered the rose and looked at them with new interest.
I see. Maybe, if this item is of any value, you would like to trade it for one or two of these exquisite pieces.
He paused for a moment while Eragon and his uncle stood uncomfortably, then continued, "You did bring the object of consideration?"
We have it, but we would rather show it to you elsewhere,
said Garrow in a firm voice.
Merlock raised an eyebrow, but spoke smoothly. In that case, let me invite you to my tent.
He gathered up his wares and gently laid them in an iron-bound chest, which he locked. Then he ushered them up the street and into the temporary camp. They wound between the wagons to a tent removed from the rest of the traders’. It was crimson at the top and sable at the bottom, with thin triangles of colors stabbing into each other. Merlock untied the opening and swung the flap to one side.
Small trinkets and strange pieces of furniture, such as a round bed and three seats carved from tree stumps, filled the tent. A gnarled dagger with a ruby in the pommel rested on a white cushion.
Merlock closed the flap and turned to them. Please, seat yourselves.
When they had, he said, Now show me why we are meeting in private.
Eragon unwrapped the stone and set it between the two men. Merlock reached for it with a gleam in his eye, then stopped and asked, May I?
When Garrow indicated his approval, Merlock picked it up.
He put the stone in his lap and reached to one side for a thin box. Opened, it revealed a large set of copper scales, which he set on the ground. After weighing the stone, he scrutinized its surface under a jeweler’s glass, tapped it gently with a wooden mallet, and drew the point of a tiny clear stone over it. He measured its length and diameter, then recorded the figures on a slate. He considered the results for a while. Do you know what this is worth?
No,
admitted Garrow. His cheek twitched, and he shifted uncomfortably on the seat.
Merlock grimaced. Unfortunately, neither do I. But I can tell you this much: the white veins are the same material as the blue that surrounds them, only a different color. What that material might be, though, I haven’t a clue. It’s harder than any rock I have seen, harder even than diamond. Whoever shaped it used tools I have never seen—or magic. Also, it’s hollow.
What?
exclaimed Garrow.
An irritated edge crept into Merlock’s voice. Did you ever hear a rock sound like this?
He grabbed the dagger from the cushion and slapped the stone with the flat of the blade. A pure note filled the air, then faded away smoothly. Eragon was alarmed, afraid that the stone had been damaged. Merlock tilted the stone toward them. You will find no scratches or blemishes where the dagger struck. I doubt I could do anything to harm this stone, even if I took a hammer to it.
Garrow crossed his arms with a reserved expression. A wall of silence surrounded him. Eragon was puzzled. I knew that the stone appeared in the Spine through magic, but made by magic? What for and why? He blurted, But what is it worth?
I can’t tell you that,
said Merlock in a pained voice. I am sure there are people who would pay dearly to have it, but none of them are in Carvahall. You would have to go to the southern cities to find a buyer. This is a curiosity for most people—not an item to spend money on when practical things are needed.
Garrow stared at the tent ceiling like a gambler calculating the odds. Will you buy it?
The trader answered instantly, It’s not worth the risk. I might be able to find a wealthy buyer during my spring travels, but I can’t be certain. Even if I did, you wouldn’t be paid until I returned next year. No, you will have to find someone else to trade with. I am curious, however…Why did you insist on talking to me in private?
Eragon put the stone away before answering. Because,
he glanced at the man, wondering if he would explode like Sloan, I found this in the Spine, and folks around here don’t like that.
Merlock gave him a startled look. Do you know why my fellow merchants and I were late this year?
Eragon shook his head.
Our wanderings have been dogged with misfortune. Chaos seems to rule Alagaësia. We could not avoid illness, attacks, and the most cursed black luck. Because the Varden’s attacks have increased, Galbatorix has forced cities to send more soldiers to the borders, men who are needed to combat the Urgals. The brutes have been migrating southeast, toward the Hadarac Desert. No one knows why and it wouldn’t concern us, except that they’re passing through populated areas. They’ve been spotted on roads and near cities. Worst of all are reports of a Shade, though the stories are unconfirmed. Not many people survive such an encounter.
Why haven’t we heard of this?
cried Eragon.
Because,
said Merlock grimly, it only began a few months ago. Whole villages have been forced to move because Urgals destroyed their fields and starvation threatens.
Nonsense,
growled Garrow. We haven’t seen any Urgals; the only one around here has his horns mounted in Morn’s tavern.
Merlock arched an eyebrow. Maybe so, but this is a small village hidden by mountains. It’s not surprising that you’ve escaped notice. However, I wouldn’t expect that to last. I only mentioned this because strange things are happening here as well if you found such a stone in the Spine.
With that sobering statement, he bid them farewell with a bow and slight smile.
Garrow headed back to Carvahall with Eragon trailing behind. What do you think?
asked Eragon.
I’m going to get more information before I make up my mind. Take the stone back to the wagon, then do what you want. I’ll meet you for dinner at Horst’s.
Eragon dodged through the crowd and happily dashed back to the wagon. Trading would take his uncle hours, time that he planned to enjoy fully. He hid the stone under the bags, then set out into town with a cocky stride.
He walked from one booth to another, evaluating the goods with a buyer’s eye, despite his meager supply of coins. When he talked with the merchants, they confirmed what Merlock had said about the instability in Alagaësia. Over and over the message was repeated: last year’s security has deserted us; new dangers have appeared, and nothing is safe.
Later in the day he bought three sticks of malt candy and a small piping-hot cherry pie. The hot food felt good after hours of standing in