To the girl who wrote this book: if you wanna be a writer, some rudiments of grammar and spelling are simply something you cannot do without. The leveTo the girl who wrote this book: if you wanna be a writer, some rudiments of grammar and spelling are simply something you cannot do without. The level of language butchering that's acceptable on social networks simply doesn't work in literature. At certain level and number of distracting mistakes, the book simply becomes intolerable. It's like violinist tried to do a concert in Carnegie Hall without ever having an hour of practice or knowing what C major is. Otherwise, it would be interesting to read about your experiences....more
Absolute masterpiece of the genre. I know I'm using the word "best" a lot when it comes to Raven Merlot, but at this point, it truly is the best one IAbsolute masterpiece of the genre. I know I'm using the word "best" a lot when it comes to Raven Merlot, but at this point, it truly is the best one I've read out of that particular factory of kink. And yet, I know this is only temporary state of affairs, because the talent and rate of production...
The performance is worthy of Audible Oscar, if you ask me. It's so completely suited to the content I really cannot imagine it being any better. It's like gentle, sensual massage for my eardrums. Mind blowing stuff, through and through....more
No wonder all works of this author go to audible as well. It's well written, raw but refined erotica that makes me swim in alternate space. If drug inNo wonder all works of this author go to audible as well. It's well written, raw but refined erotica that makes me swim in alternate space. If drug induced gooning trance was possible, this would be it....more
Very erotic. This particular kind of kink is new to me, and I thought that's impossible.Very erotic. This particular kind of kink is new to me, and I thought that's impossible....more
I guess it has something for everybody if you like kink, and even if you like comedy because characters sometimes say really funny things. It's one ofI guess it has something for everybody if you like kink, and even if you like comedy because characters sometimes say really funny things. It's one of the trademarks of this author that I really like, and it's even more funny and something of a special experience when you get to laugh in the midst of being hot and bothered. You don't get that every day that's for sure. Also, the reason I think this might cater to various kinky tastes is because dynamics between characters is so rich, and even complex. Far more than I'm used to in most other books of this kind. In my case, I especially liked the opposition of one female never taking it backdoor, and the other one being capable of cumming only that way. The whole package is simply more than I expected, even though I read Alexandra Noir and Raven Merlot all the time....more
Completely ruined by typos. I'm not sure I'd be able to make as much of them if I actively tried. Anyway, reading your own book before publishing is pCompletely ruined by typos. I'm not sure I'd be able to make as much of them if I actively tried. Anyway, reading your own book before publishing is probably a good idea....more
Well written, beautiful and dirty erotica. Toned down a little so it can be politically correct and Amazon can be happy with how docile and statutory Well written, beautiful and dirty erotica. Toned down a little so it can be politically correct and Amazon can be happy with how docile and statutory acceptable it is, but where that happens it's so obvious that it's easy to ignore and laugh off. You can be sure you'll get a decent fix for your dirty needs....more
It's great to know your place, isn't it? I imagine it's a peaceful place to be. Every shed of self-doubt removed. You can stop trying to be something It's great to know your place, isn't it? I imagine it's a peaceful place to be. Every shed of self-doubt removed. You can stop trying to be something you are not. Just stop right now with that bullshit self marketing and just exist in the only way that's good for you. Accept your limits, your smallness, your inaptness. Your size. Don't try to fight it, ever again. Accept whatever is in store for you. Stay put. Worship your mistress. Live for her pleasure. See, there is heaven on Earth....more
Do you dare to explore? If you do, this is probably on the limits of what most straight men are even capable of imagining as possible arrangement of tDo you dare to explore? If you do, this is probably on the limits of what most straight men are even capable of imagining as possible arrangement of their participation in cuckolding experience. I mean, if they ever cross that line of no return, that cuckolding itself presents in the first place. Now, does that sound like the best bad thing you ever heard of or what?...more
What can I say. I've come to expect nothing but excellence from this author and this one delivered, just as always. Although I'm not big fan of shorteWhat can I say. I've come to expect nothing but excellence from this author and this one delivered, just as always. Although I'm not big fan of shorter stories, these are just as they like to say in brochures for those compact city cars. Small from the outside, big on the inside. Except it's true in this case. ...more
There's something dangerous in the very idea of sexual transformation. Losing or gaining any parts of one's identity is scary business. And surely, asThere's something dangerous in the very idea of sexual transformation. Losing or gaining any parts of one's identity is scary business. And surely, as if bisexuality wasn't enough, reading about it in the context of cuckolding has to be playing with fire? ...more
I swear, I could never get enough of cuckqueaning... Also, isn't this one of the best cover you've seen for the topic?I swear, I could never get enough of cuckqueaning... Also, isn't this one of the best cover you've seen for the topic?...more
Letting oneself physically available for bulls that are already controlling you emotionally by serving your wife, is ultimate letting go. Isn't it?Letting oneself physically available for bulls that are already controlling you emotionally by serving your wife, is ultimate letting go. Isn't it?...more
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