Very prettily written. The last verse felt abrupt, was it really the end?? However the preceding two stanzas were so pretty and it me quite a bit...
I Very prettily written. The last verse felt abrupt, was it really the end?? However the preceding two stanzas were so pretty and it me quite a bit...
I have wept too much! Dawns are heartbreaking. Every moon is atrocious and every sun bitter. Acrid love has swollen me with intoxicating torpor O let my keel burst! O let me go into the sea!
Ah, yes, are you really depressed if you don't write poems about the serenity of death like Rimbaud did in "Ophelia" and "Asleep in the Valley"......more
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