Zero chemistry between Killian and Brielle. And I'm sorry but a 4 year old that smart and intelligent? I'm not saying they're all dumb but that was liZero chemistry between Killian and Brielle. And I'm sorry but a 4 year old that smart and intelligent? I'm not saying they're all dumb but that was like 13 year old shit....more
This was... not it. Unfortunately. I saw a teaser on Instagram and this was just one of those that I sadly didn't like. The premise was interesting inThis was... not it. Unfortunately. I saw a teaser on Instagram and this was just one of those that I sadly didn't like. The premise was interesting in the beginning but it just seemed to drag on. Honestly happy I dnf'ed this. I know. I said it....more
hated the disgusting dynamics of the family and hated the "hero". Honestly hated the heroine too and the way she took all this shit from both the "herhated the disgusting dynamics of the family and hated the "hero". Honestly hated the heroine too and the way she took all this shit from both the "hero" and her family.
this is the second Alina Jacobs that I've read and disliked. Definitely won't be reading her work anymore. it just doesn't sit with me....more
I saw so many promotions from the author and also reviews but it's just so slow at the moment. Maybe I'll pick it up anothDNFing at 40% but no rating.
I saw so many promotions from the author and also reviews but it's just so slow at the moment. Maybe I'll pick it up another time. Or someone can convince me because right now I don't have any motivation to read it....more
How is this the 3rd book I've read by Kandi Steiner that has cheating? What's up with cheating being an acceptable trope? Both MCs cheat on DNF at 51%
How is this the 3rd book I've read by Kandi Steiner that has cheating? What's up with cheating being an acceptable trope? Both MCs cheat on their partners. I can't do that anymore. Just an instant DNF. I held on for a few chapters but all I could think about was the cheating. So no, I won't be continuing. Even from the start, I was wary if this had cheating in it because of her other books. Now, everytime I read a Kandi Steiner book, I'll really have to look out of the cheating trope. Ugh...more
DNF at 30%. I'm just not invested and don't want to force myself to continue with the bookDNF at 30%. I'm just not invested and don't want to force myself to continue with the book...more
the first 20 chapters of book 1 were so boring I just couldn't bring myself to finish it. It has nothing to do with the dom/sub thing but just the writhe first 20 chapters of book 1 were so boring I just couldn't bring myself to finish it. It has nothing to do with the dom/sub thing but just the writing was putting me to sleep...more
I couldn't do it. I couldn't force myself to continue reading this. This book was boring and was just telling me the story rather than showing me throI couldn't do it. I couldn't force myself to continue reading this. This book was boring and was just telling me the story rather than showing me through imagery. Instead, The plot was boring and it kept dragging on and on. There was too much explanation of things and for a "thriller", it was not a thriller at all. I got to about 50% and said, you know what, I think I'm going to stop here. I already got out of a 3 month slump, I'm not putting myself back in one....more
I’m officially DNF’ing this book. I’ve tried twice now to read this book but no matter what, I just can’t push myself to read it. I’m not rating it beI’m officially DNF’ing this book. I’ve tried twice now to read this book but no matter what, I just can’t push myself to read it. I’m not rating it because I only read up to 10% of the book so rating it wouldn’t be fair. But I just can’t do it. I truly have no interest reading or continuing with this book....more
The first chapter was boring and the beginning of the second chapter made me realize I was not interested in continuing. I've read slowburn books (fanThe first chapter was boring and the beginning of the second chapter made me realize I was not interested in continuing. I've read slowburn books (fantasy, romance, thriller, etc.) that may start slow, but the first few chapters actually made me interested in continuing reading that book. The start was just so boring. I have zero interest in picking it up. I don't want to spend time reading a book that starts off this boring....more
Is this writing really what people think is the standard for young adults? Because this is a prime example of why it shouldn't be.
I'm giving this zerIs this writing really what people think is the standard for young adults? Because this is a prime example of why it shouldn't be.
I'm giving this zero stars, but I have to put a rating so I'm rating it 1 star on Goodreads. Just know, for the first time in my life, I am going to throw a book away. And it's this book. First off, the way we start off this book is atrocious. We start off with our main character complaining like a little 10 year old. She's annoying, a bitch, and acts like a 10 year old. Actually all the characters act like little children. For assassins, they are the most fucking immature teenagers ever. Is this book about teenage assassins or 5 year olds?
I'm not going to lie, this book seemed to have gotten worse in plot and in writing. It seemed the further along the book was, the more the writing just wasn't edited. This book was littered with spelling errors.
I'm also not going to lie when I said I only skimmed the book. It was a waste of time and I have zero interest in reading word for word. Just the first two pages were enough for me to realize that this book is not worth $17.50 and I wish I could get my money back. I should have returned it to Amazon before the return date closed. Now it's too fucking late. This book lacked depth and character development. I lost brain cells. It had a lot of potential, two teen assassins sent to kill each other but end up falling in love. But this fell flat. Zero character plot. Zero character depth. Zero spelling and sentence checks.
Before I go on this paragraph, know that I have read good books on Wattpad back in the days. Wattpad was where it was at when I was i Middle School. There are some good books so in no way does this paragraph say that books on Wattpad are bad. This book should have stayed on Wattpad. It was terrible. I don't think the author even bothered to edit it. It should never have been made into a paperback and she should have just kept it for the public to read only on Wattpad.
This book was bad. I warn you. DO. NOT. FUCKING. READ. THIS. Not only did I waste $17.50 on it, I wasted 20 minutes on this book thinking I could read this for a Youtube video.
Like I said, if I could rate this zero stars I would, this doesn't deserve stars, but, it's Goodreads and I have to rate it. So let that one star be a deterrent. Don't read this shit.
DNF. Honestly this was just not great. I struggled to read it and not because of all the sex or bdsm related but just not that interested in finishingDNF. Honestly this was just not great. I struggled to read it and not because of all the sex or bdsm related but just not that interested in finishing this book. This just seemed a little unedited and poorly written....more
Honestly I did not like Darcy at all. She was kind of irritating and honestly this whole “I’m a bad girl” was really annoying. It’s like the “nDNF 1⭐️
Honestly I did not like Darcy at all. She was kind of irritating and honestly this whole “I’m a bad girl” was really annoying. It’s like the “not like other girls” trope. The writing felt like I was being told the story and not showed the story. I was reading words not a story. I definitely liked The Hating Game more but, although I didn’t like this much, I’ll still read her future books.
Also, I dnf’ed because I will go into a slump if I continued this book.
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Unfortunately will now have to add this short message for every book with reviews. Please do not comment and be rude about me giving this book 1 star or DNFing it or whatever I rated it. We all have our own opinions and I don't really want any hate or bs and racism, etc, for me not liking your favorite book. Keep your disapproval to yourself. This note is not specific to any book and will be added from now on (Jan 9, 2022) to every single one of my reviews, whether its a 5 star review or 1 star or DNF review...more
I’ve read other books by skye warren but this was bad. Plain bad. Sutton and Ashleigh seemed to have zero chemistry and it just seemed like a transactI’ve read other books by skye warren but this was bad. Plain bad. Sutton and Ashleigh seemed to have zero chemistry and it just seemed like a transactional relationship. I couldn’t force myself to read this. ...more