Meiwilli's Reviews > Alpha Turned

Four years ago, Hillary Abbott, aka Larry, had one of the most horrific things happen to her when her college boyfriend took her home to Arizona to meet the parents. Attacked, raped and left for dead, Hillary survives against the odds and starts a new life far away from the nightmare. When Hillary decides to open her new business in Slade, far away from any sign of werewolves, she is stunned when one walks into her shop.

Does it sound like this is going to be a good read? It wasn't for me. Ten percent of the above is the context in the story. The rest is sex, sex, sex once Hillary and Zach Jenner, the alpha of Mountain Pack, mate. After that, the touchy-feely stuff begins. Not just with Hillary and Zach, but with every hierarchy member of the pack. With all the touching, you'd think when it came to shifting these wolves would strip down in front of each other and run. Not these domesticated wolves. They each go to their private place and undress and then join each other for a run.

After I finally accept that these are the tamest wolves I've ever read, the author goes on a power trip, literally. Every other paragraph is about how powerful Hillary is or how powerful Zach is or how powerful they are together yet I find them both to be pretty weak in the sense of being alpha.

I enjoyed the first couple of chapters of the book until Chapter 5 when things started downhill and continued. I didn't like the rest of the uneventful story and am moving on. On my Were Scale of Hotness, 2 stars.