Mark's Reviews > poems I sleep next to

Insta-regret

How do you get gear for a poetry collection. Recently I have been picking up some, definitely the queers side, but this is just installed poetry. Lines, fragments, words looped together for what looks like poetry. And it shows. Some pages could have been combined like the pt. Pages of list of thing to do as the author's broken heart reaches out to no former lover. It could have been grouped together added content to make it more than just a list. Cause it was just list no substance. Other issues I had was just the fact that the poems really didn't have so much. Sure it would be a nice post on in stag ram but I gained no sence of deapth, humor, or anything surface level with getting over a same sex relationship.

While yes, I will admit, I can find it easy to read getting into it dragged out.