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    The Line Graph Below Gives Information On Cinema Attendance in The UK. Write A Report For A University Lecturer Describing The Information Given

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    The line graph shows cinema attendance in the UK from 1990 to 2010 across four age groups. Overall attendance increased over the 20-year period, with those aged 14-24 consistently having the highest rates near 36%. Attendance was lowest for those aged 44-54, near 11-12%. By 2000, attendance had declined for both the youngest and oldest groups but rebounded by 2010.

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    The Line Graph Below Gives Information On Cinema Attendance in The UK. Write A Report For A University Lecturer Describing The Information Given

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    The line graph shows cinema attendance in the UK from 1990 to 2010 across four age groups. Overall attendance increased over the 20-year period, with those aged 14-24 consistently having the highest rates near 36%. Attendance was lowest for those aged 44-54, near 11-12%. By 2000, attendance had declined for both the youngest and oldest groups but rebounded by 2010.

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    The line graph shows cinema attendance in the UK from 1990 to 2010 across four age groups. Overall attendance increased over the 20-year period, with those aged 14-24 consistently having the highest rates near 36%. Attendance was lowest for those aged 44-54, near 11-12%. By 2000, attendance had declined for both the youngest and oldest groups but rebounded by 2010.

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    The Line Graph Below Gives Information On Cinema Attendance in The UK. Write A Report For A University Lecturer Describing The Information Given

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    The line graph shows cinema attendance in the UK from 1990 to 2010 across four age groups. Overall attendance increased over the 20-year period, with those aged 14-24 consistently having the highest rates near 36%. Attendance was lowest for those aged 44-54, near 11-12%. By 2000, attendance had declined for both the youngest and oldest groups but rebounded by 2010.

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    The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK.

    Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.


    You should write at least 150 words.

    The line graph illustrates the data on four different age group of UK resident who
    was interested in movie theater from 1990 to 2010.
    Overall, the rate of 4 groups increased over the period of 20 years. Although all
    four categorize of ages were similarly fluctuated and increased, youngest people
    from 14 to 24 years old always paid highest attention on cinema than that of the
    remainder groups.
    Within 20 years, oldest people from aged 44 54 spent least money on cinema
    while youngest group consumed most; both remain above 12% and 36%
    respectively all the time. By 2000s, both of these groups declined to the lowest
    point of 36% for the youngest and 11% for the oldest before reaching again in 2010
    with 42% and 21% in order.
    During the same period, aged 24-34 and aged 34-44 were also declined to the
    lowest point of in 2000 by nearly 32% and 22% respectively. From the decade 2000
    to 2010, aged 24-34 peaked again to 42% in 2010 while the rate of aged 34-44
    were 32%.
    Task response
    Cohesion
    Vocabulary

    6
    6
    6

    Grammar
    Overall

    6-7
    6

    To be honest, you were a bit off-topic here.


    And thus your cohesion would not be any higher.
    Youve made some efforts to use various vocabulary, but how to use them
    correctly is another story.
    This is the best section that youve got.
    Keep trying. Dont give up

    Suggestions
    As I said above, I will give you some introductions:
    1. The given line chart compares the percentages of people who attended to
    movie theaters in 4 different age groups in the UK over a period of 20 years
    2. The multi-line graph graphically displays the proportions of movie theater
    attendants among 4 age groups in the UK between 1990 and 2010.
    3. The line chart provides information on rates of people visiting cinemas in
    various age groups in the UK during a 20-year period.
    Next, keep in mind that we are talking about percentages, not group or age.
    So you cannot say the 14-24 years old group declined during the period shown.
    There are also multiple ways to describe groups in this case

    The youngest group, the oldest group, the second youngest group,
    The 14-24 years-old, the 24-44 years-old
    The group of people who aged 14-24
    Those who aged 14-24

    GOOD LUCK!

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