Writing Samples Summit 1 I5-I8
Writing Samples Summit 1 I5-I8
Writing Samples Summit 1 I5-I8
INTERMEDIATE 5
1ST WRITING TASK
PAGE 12
Do make sure Tyrants, who use their power cruelly and unjustly, can make the
you write the workplace an unpleasant place to be and harm the productivity
topic sentence of the organization. Bosses who are tyrants like to push the
at the beginning employees to the limits. They always make them work extra DO organize
of the hours and demand perfection in their work. In addition to this, your ideas in
paragraph. they never give them any recognition, which is really unfair. a clear and
People working with tyrants usually feel uncomfortable and even logical way.
fearful. As a consequence, they do not perform well and end up
quitting their jobs.
Do include in
your supporting I know about this because my former boss was a tyrant. I
sentences facts, remember he used to yell at everybody if something did not go
examples, as he wished and made us work weekends and even holidays to Do use a
details and finish our work. Nothing was good enough for him; therefore he concluding
experiences. fired people without compassion. After some time I realized I phrase: in
could not keep working with him and that is why I decided to conclusion or in
leave. summary.
Do not forget to
end with a In conclusion, having a tyrant as a boss can not only break the
concluding employees spirit but also affect their work performance, which
sentence by re could in the end have a negative impact in the company.
stating the topic
sentence or
summarizing the DO check and
paragraph. correct your spelling
SUMMIT 1
INTERMEDIATE 5
2ND WRITING TASK
PAGE 24
Do start with When I think about my future two life plans come to mind. I
an have decided to set up a short term goal and a long term one
for myself. DO organize
introduction.
your ideas in
By this time next year I expect to have paid off all my debts. To
a clear and
do this Ive considered taking some important steps. First of all,
I plan to stick to just one credit card; I think I can do without the logical way.
others. Second, I will start living within my means, in that way I
will avoid getting into more debts. Lastly, I am going put aside
Do develop more money to pay the credit card; with larger monthly
the main payments I should have paid everything I owe within a year. DO check and
ideas in the correct your spelling
body As a long term goal, I expect to have bought my own apartment
by the year 2017.How do I plan to achieve this goal? To begin
with, I will cut down on my expenses and put away some
money for the down payment. After that, once I have saved up
the money for the down payment, I intend to ask the bank for a
loan. Finally, I expect to find a better paid job, which will help
me deal with the monthly payments of the bank loan and
maybe pay it off sooner. Do end with a
conclusion
Being organized and determined will help me fulfil these goals
and make my dreams come true.
SUMMIT 1
INTERMEDIATE 6
2ND WRITING TASK
PAGE 48
DO state your
opinion in the first
sentence in the
It is a common belief that parents are the role models in a family,
paragraph (the topic
but in my particular case, my brother is the person I look up to.
Charles is in his early thirties, and he has just finished his sentence).
DO avoid run-
graduated studies in mechanical engineering. He is very intelligent
on sentences
and analytical, yet he sometimes enjoys being in the limelight. DO provide general
and comma Charles is currently working in a prestigious company, so information on the
splices by managing time between work, family, friends and even his relative you are
connecting girlfriend must be tough. However, he is always there when I need
writing about.
sentences with some advice, or I just want to have fun. We have spent great
linking moments together, and bad ones as well. I still remember those
expressions, days as a teenager when I was such a troublemaker in high school.
My parents usually were in trouble because I used to be DO include relevant
coordinating information to
disrespectful and too rebellious. Moreover, I almost got expelled
conjunctions or once! I thought I was doomed since my parents didnt have any develop the ideas
punctuation idea to deal with the problem. Fortunately, Charles attended the mentioned in the
marks. meeting with the principal to show me that everything is possible topic sentence
if you show courtesy when talking to people, and if you give good
(situations,
explanation for issues. I have to admit that ever since I have been
inspired and influenced by him. Now my brother and I are examples, etc.)
somewhat alike in terms of personality; I am very responsible and
well-behaved at university, for example. On balance, my brother DO summarize your
is that relative I not only admire, but also find reliable, someone main point of view
who will always be there no matter what the circumstances may in the last sentence
be. In other words, I can say that my brother is a heaven-sent
in the paragraph
sibling.
(the concluding
sentence).
SUMMIT 1
INTERMEDIATE 8
2ND WRITING TASK
PAGE 108
DO choose a title
Cracking Down on Skipping Class that reflects the
DO use main idea of the
subordinating Skipping class undetected for a game of ultimate Frisbee might become a article.
conjunctions to thing of the past since universities have adopted mandatory-attendance
introduce policies and have acquired high-tech trackers that snitch when students
dependent clauses.
skip.
A news article
answers
Nowadays many colleges are using retention alert systems that monitor information
DO attach a behaviors that can lead to dropping out including playing hooky. Theres
questions about
dependent clause just so much more at stake now than there was 20 years ago and parents
an event.
to an independent want to make sure their kids are in class because they want to protect
clause to give a their investment, said Rosalind Alderman, who leads the retention effort
complete thought. at St. Marys University.
DO think of
The latest entrant into the market of tracking students whereabouts: information
Class120, a $199-a-year notification service that tracks a student through questions to notice
the GPS in their smartphone and alerts their parents (or another third
what is
party) in real time if their child isnt within a geofence mapped around
relevant/necessary
the classroom where they are scheduled to be. I think its good stuff,
to mention.
Mr. Hiltunen said. I had a roommate freshman year kicked out of college
- Who?
for not attending enough classes. This kid was smart but he was lazy and
- What?
had no motivation. I think something like this could have helped him.
- When?
Even though scores on admission tests are standardized and reliable, - Where?
attendance is considered to be the best predictor of college grades, said - Why?
Marcus Crede, a professor of psychology at Iowa State University who - How?
studies the subject. The correlation is particularly high in science,
engineering and math. And grades, in turn, seem linked to graduation
rates, he said. As a result of that, the University of Arkansas began
experimenting with mandatory attendance as a way to boost its 62% six-
year graduation rate, said Provost Sharon Gaber. We talk about helicopter
parents, she said. Well, some of these kids havent learned how to get
out of bed on their own yet.