Composition Enrichment: Grade 6
Composition Enrichment: Grade 6
Composition Enrichment: Grade 6
Composition
Enrichment
Grade 6
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Composition Enrichment
Name ...................................................................................... Class .................................................. Date ................................
2. From your list of freewriting topics, pick one and write whatever comes to mind. _______
On Your Own
Choose a topic from your list of ideas or one that grew out of your freewriting. Freewrite a
page about the topic. Then write a poem on the topic using details from your freewriting.
2. Pick one of the topics from your list and think of related subtopics.
3. Now write a journal entry using the topic you selected. Use some of the subtopics.
On Your Own
You can practice expressing yourself to other people through your journal entries. From the
brainstorming list above, choose a topic you would like to share with someone else. Write a
journal entry in the form of a letter to a friend, classmate, or family member. Later, if you
wish, you can copy it over and mail it.
2. Imagine that the person with whom you shared your list gave you some new reasons for
letter writing or complimented your ideas. Write a note to this person, thanking him or
her for reading and responding to your list. Remember to include all five parts of a
friendly letter.
On Your Own
Choose one reason you listed for writing a personal letter. Use it to write a letter to a friend
or relative in another town or city. Do not choose to write a thank-you note.
W R I T I N G AB O U T L I T E R AT U R E
2. Now use your freewriting notes and ideas to create a poem of your own on the same
topic. _________________________________________________________________________
On Your Own
Trade a poem you have written for one a classmate has written. Read each others poems
aloud, and then list the images or pictures the poems bring to mind.
2. Notice how Yoshiko creates pictures with her words. Then pick one experience from your
list. Write down several words or phrases you could use to describe it to a friend.
On Your Own
On a separate sheet of paper or in your journal, write a short story about an experience you
thought of when you read the excerpt from The Invisible Thread. Use descriptive words from the
list you created in the activity above. Share your story with a friend, classmate, or family member.
Ask your audience which scenes they imagined or how your story made them feel. Did they
understand the story? Did they feel about the story the way you had hoped they would?
2. Decide how to open your letter. Introduce yourself to your new pen pal.
3. Reread what you have written. Is your writing clear? Do you provide enough
details so that your pen pal can understand what you are describing? Do you have
a heading, greeting, and closing? Are your spelling and grammar correct? Go back
and make any changes that you think will improve your draft.
4. When all of the corrections have been made, rewrite the letter. Use additional paper if
necessary._________________________________________________________________
On Your Own
Imagine that your pen pal comes to visit you. Think of all the activities the two of you might
enjoy. Choose a day or an activity that you might share, and write a journal entry that tells
about that special time.
2. Read your notes, and draft a paragraph about your topic. Your purpose is to introduce
this activity to a new classmate.
3. Read your draft, and ask yourself some questions about it. Can your readers under-
stand what you intended? Have you included details? Have you used words your
readers will understand? Make additions. Cross out anything that is unimportant.
4. Rewrite your paragraph so it is ready to present to a teacher or a classmate.
On Your Own
Find a magazine picture of a place you would like to visit. Using the picture, jot down ideas
and feelings about this place. In your journal draft a paragraph about why you would like to
visit this place. Use the notes about the picture to help you draft the paragraph.
On Your Own
Imagine that you have been invited to go on a field trip to Washington, D.C. Freewrite or
brainstorm about the people, places, and things you could see on your trip. Then organize
your ideas into a cluster diagram.
2. For each purpose, describe an audience for whom you might write a paper. How much do
your readers already know about the topic? What additional information will you need to
supply?
Purpose a:_______________________________________________________________
Purpose b:_______________________________________________________________
3. Keeping in mind the two purposes and audiences you selected, jot down a couple of
details you would use in each report.
a. ______________________________________________________________________
b. _______________________________________________________________________
On Your Own
Prepare a survey to learn what kinds of music your classmates enjoy. On a sheet of paper,
list several music groups that are popular where you live. Survey your classmates to find out
which groups they like the most and why. Then write a paragraph about your classmates
musical preferences. Which groups do they like and why? Which kinds of music are the
most popular?
2. From your prewriting, select one aspect of safety as the focus for your paragraph. Draft
the paragraph in the space provided. Use details from your prewriting.
On Your Own
Every writer sometimes gets stuck during the writing process and doesnt know how to get
started again. What advice would you give a classmate who was stuck during a writing project?
Draft a paragraph telling how you solve this problem when you are writing.
Now rewrite the selection, revising it to reflect these improvements. Ask yourself: Have
I stated the main idea clearly? Will my readers understand what I mean? Do the details
explain the ideas? Copy your finished writing in the space provided.
On Your Own
Because writing is an important part of personal creativity, most people are sensitive to criticism
of their work. As a peer reviewer, you can help a classmate improve his or her writing by
making constructive comments. Write a paragraph that an English teacher could use to help
new peer reviewers do a good job. What pointers should you include to help peer reviewers
be helpful to their partners?
6. Step forward with your right foot, touching your toes to the ground first._____________
7. Sema is so serious that I worry about whether she ever has any fun. _________________
On Your Own
Find a story or a short book that was written especially for young children. Choose a short
chapter or section and rewrite it, combining sentences and changing or adding words as
necessary to make it appropriate for readers who are your age.
2. The dog bit the trainer. The dog scratched the trainer. ____________________________
4. Michael bought the Thanksgiving turkey. Charles cooked it. Eileen, Erica, and Marla ate it.
5. The detectives spent hours investigating. They did not uncover a single clue. __________
6. The play had great reviews. Sue still did not want to go. ___________________________
7. Teds cousins moved to Venezuela. Ted may visit them soon. _______________________
8. The first one hundred fans arrived at the ball park. They received free ball caps.________
On Your Own
Draft several sentences about something funny or silly that happened to you. Revise your
sentences to make them more interesting by using a variety of sentence lengths. Share your
experience with friends or family members, and see if you can make them laugh, too.
Proofreading
Symbols Checklist
insert 1. Are all my sentences complete sentences?
lower-case letter
On Your Own
Reread several pieces of your finished writing. Find any errors you missed. Divide these errors
into categories, such as spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and sentence structure. Then
prepare a thorough checklist that you can use to catch errors you often miss. Use this per-
sonal checklist to try to avoid these errors in the future.
2. Choose three topics from your list. Think of two ways to present writing on each topic.
Choose methods listed above, or think of other ways to present writing on each topic.
Topic 1: _____________________________________________________________________________
Topic 2: _____________________________________________________________________________
Topic 3: _____________________________________________________________________________
On Your Own
Choose a piece of writing from your journal or portfolio to present to a partner or small
group. Rewrite the piece, and present it to a classmate, a friend, or a family member.
Remember that each way of presenting has its own rules. You may need to make some
changes in the writing in order to present it.
2. You are trying to help someone else see what you see. Make a list of descriptive words you
can use to make your journey come alive for your reader. __________________________
3. Write a paragraph that describes one part of your journey. Use as many of your descriptive
words as possible. Use details to explain what you see. ____________________________
On Your Own
Look out the window. Find something to observe. Make a list of descriptive words to tell
about what you see so your readers can experience and see what you do. Write one or two
paragraphs about your observation as a special article for your local or school newspaper.
2. Now you are Birch. How will you respond to your grandfather? Try to persuade him to
take you up in the plane. What reasons will you present to your grandfather?__________
3. Write a short paragraph that summarizes the reasons of both sides. Tell who you think
would win this argument. Why do you think so? _________________________________
On Your Own
Think of a place you like to visit or an event you like to attend. Write a letter to a friend. Try
to persuade him or her to visit the place or to attend the event. Include your reasons.
3. On a separate sheet, draft a short paper about the person. Reread your draft, and add any
information that will make your writing clearer.
4. Rewrite the paper making any necessary changes.
5. Read your paper to the class.
On Your Own
Use the details from your prewriting above to revise the draft for a new audience and pur-
pose. Do the details need to be organized differently? Do you need to add any details?
2. Choose one of the places from your list. Write as many accurate, vivid details as you can
think of to describe your place._______________________________________________
3. Now, based on your list of details, write a description of the place you selected.
On Your Own
Find a magazine picture of an interesting landscape. List words and phrases describing the
landscape. Then use the list of details to write a brief description of the place pictured in the
magazine.
2. Imagine that you have been asked to describe the above event for someone who has never
attended it. Using ideas and details in your freewriting, write at least three descriptive sen-
tences about the event.
On Your Own
Look out your window at home or at school. Choose a certain window pane or square section,
and imagine that your picture is framed by that section. Write detailed notes on exactly what
you see. Then, using your notes, paint a word picture of what you see in your special
picture frame.
2. Expand upon each impression in your list. Add details that will help make your descrip-
tion clearer and easier for your reader to envision.
On Your Own
Imagine that you have a pet that has become lost. Write a description of your pet for the
Lost section of your local newspaper. Write a clear, accurate description with as many
details as you can so your pet can be recognized when it is found.
Clue 2 _________________________________________________________________
Clue 3 _________________________________________________________________
Clue 4 _________________________________________________________________
Clue 5 _________________________________________________________________
On Your Own
Imagine that you have grown up to become a famous person. A student is interviewing you
and has asked you to describe your childhood bedroom. You can describe a real room or an
imaginary one. Decide what order would be best for your description. Use transition words
to make your description clearer. Write one or two paragraphs that would answer your
young interviewers question.
On Your Own
You are writing a special feature for your school newspaper describing how advertising influ-
ences buyers. Think of a product whose advertising has had special appeal for you. How did
the advertisers use setting or background to increase the appeal of the product? What details
do you think they highlighted, and why? Write one or two paragraphs that summarize the
details used in advertising that product.
2. Choose one of the places you listed. Close your eyes and imagine you are there.
Concentrate on what you see, hear, feel, smell, and touch. Write a letter to a friend
describing everything you can about the place you chose. Use additional paper if
necessary.
On Your Own
You are a travel agent and want to convince people to go to a certain vacation spot. Imagine
what the vacation spot looks like. Make a list of features you want to describe. Beside each
feature, add vivid, specific details. Write a description of the place to be included in a travel
brochure.
2. Now, keeping your small world in mind, expand your notes. Add words that will help
your readers to picture what you saw.
On Your Own
Using your observations and expanded notes from the activity you just completed, write a
short article to publish in the science section of a school newspaper. Remember to leave out
the details that do not fit in with your main idea. Improve any description that could be
made even more useful for your readers. Be sure to give your article an interesting title.
Grassblade Jungle, for example, might be the title of an article about a patch of lawn.
2. You are keeping a file on the characters from the stories and books you read. Write a
description of two characters from Morning Girl. Use the details you listed above.
On Your Own
Morning Girl thinks her chin is like a starfish. Without looking in a mirror, write a description
of your own face. Try comparing each feature to some other object in order to describe your-
self more clearly.
On Your Own
Have you ever visited a place that you were prepared to enjoy but were disappointed with?
Was your mental picture of the place formed by other peoples descriptions and opinions?
Write a paragraph that describes a place where you expected to be pleased but, in reality,
felt let down.
2. Draft a one- or two-paragraph story based on the photograph. Tell what might have been
going on just before the picture was taken.
On Your Own
Imagine you are watching two people having a conversation that you cannot hear. Describe
their age, their appearance, and the setting. Then tell the story of their conversation.
On Your Own
Plan to tell a story at your school library. Decide on a topic. You may either tell a favorite
story or make one up. Then choose an audience of your classmates or another grade level.
Write the story, and practice reading it aloud.
2. Write a short narrative about an incident that happened recently. It may have been a
small event, such as someone dropping a stack of books accidentally. Include dialogue in
your story. Try to use words that show something about the personalities of the people in
the story.
On Your Own
Find a magazine advertisement that pictures two or more people. Create a dialogue for the
scene. Let the dialogue show the personalities of the people involved. You may want to make
up names for them also. Remember to use quotation marks and phrases such as she asked.
2. Write a one-page story about the event. You may use dialogue to make the story lively and
to show the personalities of the family members in the story.
On Your Own
After you have let your family story rest for a few days, read it again. Rewrite the conclusion
using one of these phrases: I learned that; from then on, I knew ...; Ever since this experi-
ence, I have felt Make sure the audience will feel the story is complete.
W R I T I N G A B O U T L I T E R AT U R E
On Your Own
Read an encyclopedia article about someone important in science, health, history, or art.
Then retell the story of this persons life in your own words. Choose the events, discoveries,
or accomplishments that you think are important.
2. Organize the details you have listed. Write a one-page biography of the person, based on
the information you have collected. Use additional paper if necessary.
On Your Own
Choose a famous fictional character from a short story or book you have read. Write a short
biography about the life of this character. Be creative.
On Your Own
Imagine Gary Soto is a friend of yours and he has written a letter to you asking for advice
about the green jacket. Write a letter to Gary telling him what you would do in his situation.
2. Write your story using the list of details. You may include dialogue to make the story
more interesting. Use transition words such as then or next to help the reader follow
your story.
On Your Own
Select a story you have written for your journal or portfolio or for a class assignment. Revise
the story with a new audience and purpose in mind. You may need to add or reorganize
details, write dialogue, and use transition words. Present the story to the audience you
have chosen.
2. Choose one process to explain. On a separate sheet of paper, list the steps in the process.
3. Draft one or two paragraphs explaining the process you have chosen. Use additional paper
if necessary.
On Your Own
Think of a process or skill you have recently mastered. Perhaps you have learned to use a
computer program, a mechanical tool, or some household appliance. Write step-by-step
instructions for a friend or family member who would like to learn the same process or skill.
Differences Differences
Similarities
2. Using the details listed above, write two paragraphs comparing and contrasting the pair of
subjects. Organize the paragraphs subject by subject. Use additional paper if necessary.
On Your Own
Your science teacher has asked you to create a bulletin board display on the similarities and
differences between fish and marine mammals. Make a large Venn diagram as the display.
You may use your science book or an encyclopedia to help you.
2. Write one or two paragraphs explaining how to perform the task. Use the steps listed
above. Remember to use words your audience will understand. Pay attention to transition
words between the steps.
On Your Own
Use the directions you have written to create a sign to help another audience perform the
task. You may post a sign above the recycling bins at school, for example. You may change
the directions by using numbers to identify steps, printing major points in larger letters, and
drawing pictures to make the steps clearer. Does the change of audience and purpose sug-
gest different words? If so, how does the wording differ for the two audiences?
Subject: _____________________________________________________
Source: ______________________________________________________
Notes: _______________________________________________________
Subject: _____________________________________________________
Source: ______________________________________________________
Notes: _______________________________________________________
On Your Own
Use the notes you wrote to draft one or two paragraphs about the food group. Remember
to refer to the sources you used. Present your information in a sensible order. Your draft
should include an introduction, a body, and a conclusion.
W R I T I N G A B O U T L I T E R AT U R E
2. Choose one of the books you listed above. Plan and write a one-page book report for your
English class. You may need to skim through the book again to refresh your memory.
Include the parts listed below. Use additional paper if necessary.
Title: ____________________________________________________________________________
Author: __________________________________________________________________________
Main Characters: _________________________________________________________________
Setting: __________________________________________________________________________
Summary: _______________________________________________________________________
On Your Own
You can use the skills you have learned for writing book reports to report on other forms of
entertainment and education. Choose a movie you have seen lately, either on television or at
a theater. Use the parts of a book report to report on the movie, but change the word
author to director.
On Your Own
From your journal or portfolio entries, choose a piece of writing to illustrate with an exposi-
tory graphic. Select illustrations from magazines, or draw your own. Design the page so the
reader can understand the graphic clearly.
2. Write a brief explanation of how to bathe an elephant. Remember to define any words
that your audience may not understand.
On Your Own
Add illustrations to the explanation you wrote above to create a graphic. You may find pic-
tures in magazines or draw your own. Revise your explanation so that it corresponds to the
graphic.
2. Choose one of the situations from your freewriting. Identify an audience, someone who
may face the same situation. Draft one or two paragraphs providing an explanation or
instructions for your audience.
3. Ask a friend to read your draft and make suggestions for revision. Revise and edit the
paragraphs. Write the final version on another sheet of paper.
On Your Own
Find an explanation of an ordinary activity, such as microwaving a pizza or opening a food con-
tainer. What makes the explanation effective? Could it be improved? How can you use similar
methods in your own writing? Write a paragraph about the explanation in your journal.
2. You have been asked to provide a brief article about the circus for the local newspaper.
Using the ideas you listed, write two paragraphs persuading the residents of your town to
come to the circus.
On Your Own
Create a small version of a billboard advertising the circus. Combine writing and pictures to
create an attention-getting poster. Your writing should be brief, highlighting the most inviting
parts of the circus. It should also be persuasive. You might use an illustration from a magazine,
or you may create your own artwork.
2. Choose one of the above topics, and list at least three different audiences for it.
3. Write a main-idea statement about your topic for each audience you listed.
Statement 1 ______________________________________________________________________
Statement 2 ______________________________________________________________________
Statement 3 ______________________________________________________________________
On Your Own
List four details you would use to support one of the main-idea statements you wrote. Use
the details to write one or two paragraphs persuading your audience to think or act in a
particular way.
Invention 1: ______________________________________________________________________
Fact: __________________________________________________________________________
Opinion: ______________________________________________________________________
Invention 2: ______________________________________________________________________
Fact: __________________________________________________________________________
Opinion: ______________________________________________________________________
Invention 3: ______________________________________________________________________
Fact: __________________________________________________________________________
Opinion: ______________________________________________________________________
Invention 4: ______________________________________________________________________
Fact: __________________________________________________________________________
Opinion: ______________________________________________________________________
2. Choose one of the inventions listed above or another invention as a topic for your paper.
Gather more facts and opinions. Draft a one- or two-page paper about this invention.
On Your Own
Read three letters to the editor from a newspaper. List the facts used in the letters. Then list
the opinions. Which type of evidence is used more often? Which do you find more persua-
sive? In your journal, write a paragraph about your findings.
W R I T I N G A B O U T L I T E R AT U R E
Comments
Strengths
Weaknesses
My Responses
2. On another sheet of paper, write a one-page review of the television show based on the
information gathered in the chart. Decide whether you will recommend the program to
other students.
On Your Own
Read three reviews of TV programs from magazines or newspapers. What techniques do the
writers use to persuade the readers to watch or not to watch these programs? Are their
opinions clearly stated? Write a paragraph in your journal about the three reviews.
2. Create a title for your program. List the major points that your show will cover. Organize
the points in a logical order. You may refer to Douglas Andersons three points for The
Popular Little Planet on page 219 of your textbook. Use additional paper if necessary.
On Your Own
Write the script for one scene of the television program from the outline you have written.
Where will you set the scene? Who will appear in it? What point will it convey? What will
the character(s) say? How will you make it dramatic?
2. Write one or two paragraphs about the best way to teach or learn a lesson. Choose an
experience listed in your freewriting. Persuade a parent or another adult to try this
method.
On Your Own
Some of the television networks show one-minute advertisements just for children on
Sunday mornings or after school. These mini-programs do not sell products; they help children
make decisions about problems they may really face someday. Revise your paragraph about
teaching a lesson to create a script for one of these 60-second presentations. Consider the
change in audience as you revise. Include a description of characters, setting, and a dramatic
situation.
2. Draft a persuasive paragraph using the evidence listed above. Organize the details you use.
Make sure your main-idea statement will appeal to the audience.
On Your Own
Imagine the artist you suggested is among the top three nominees. You have been asked to
make a presentation to the student council to help it make the final selection. Write a review
of one example of the artists work, persuading others to see the value you see. Use evidence
to support your opinion. Your review should be one paragraph in length.