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THE PROCESS

written by

Levin Menekse
INT. THE MULTIPURPOSE ROOM - DAY

Rows of black folding chairs face an elevated platform.

The walls are oppressively grey. All we hear is the


ubiquitous buzz of the ceiling lights.

There are no windows, no sunlight streaming in.

Its oppressive sparseness makes us think we are, perhaps, in


an empty governmental office after hours...

But there are a dozen or so people in the room.

They are all wearing identical, unisex uniforms. Half air


hostess, half nautical. These are the VOLUNTEERS.

Some standing by the walls, some sitting behind black desks.


They are all staring ahead, focused. No small talk. Gearing
up for something important.
We track through them, towards the DOUBLE DOORS. The only
exit to this cement box.
INT. CORRIDORS - DAY

The doors lead to a long, wide corridor gaping at us like an


open mouth.
We fall into the corridor, passing by closed doors that might
open to anything. Offices maybe? Or classrooms? But there are
no signs anywhere. Nothing to orient us.
The end of the corridor spills out to more corridors. We
float down. More offices. More closed doors...

It feels like we’ve stepped into a maze, getting swallowed


into the bowels of an endless building, and just as we’re
wondering if we’re lost here forever...

We see SUNLIGHT on the beige carpet.


A melodic VOICE chimes in. At first distant, growing nearer:

VOLUNTEER 1 (O.S.)
Hello, my name is Anna and I’m so
glad you’re here today! Please
follow me!

We brush by this VOLUNTEER, and see that she’s leading a


MIDDLE AGED MAN inside, rolling a suitcase behind him.

And an open glass door leads us outside:


2.

EXT. CONCRETE BUILDING - DAY


The building stands tall and strangely alone.
We’re somewhere outside of Los Angeles, in a nondescript
industrial area, under the searing California sun.
Herds of people stream into the building, escorted by the
wide-smiling volunteers. We overhear a nearby conversation:

PETER (O.S.)
“The Process may cause participants
to experience brief, temporary
episodes of mild psychosis--" Thank
God it’s only mild psychosis.
KIRSA
(O.S.)
Peter, it’s just fine print.
PETER
(O.S.)
“And some participants have
experienced unexplained suicidal or
destructive behavior--”
(beat)
This is the kind of shit they have
to play after a drug commercial in
case people off themselves.
We see them now, tucked into a corner, hunched over a few
pieces of paper. It's a health waiver.
They’re a study in contrast: She’s KIRSA REIN, graceful, a
queen in a past life, 38 years old. She's in her sleek power
suit, tastefully made up. She doesn't do casual.
He’s PETER REIN, 31, effortlessly hot but lacks any semblance
of grace, with his visible tattoos and wild facial hair. He's
wearing old jeans and a fitted t-shirt.
She’s picking lint and hair off of him as they talk.
KIRSA
I’m going to go out on a limb and
say I’m pretty sure we’re not going
to kill ourselves.
PETER
Doesn’t sound like a pleasant
experience, is all I’m saying.
3.

KIRSA
They’re not going to waterboard us.
They are a business, they have Yelp
reviews. They want repeat
customers, they want money.
PETER
They’re a cult, man. You can’t know
what they want.
He says that a bit too loud. Kirsa looks around.

She realizes they are the last ones left out here. A MATERNAL
VOLUNTEER, 60’s, waits for them by the door.
Kirsa smiles at her, then turns back to Peter, her voice low:
KIRSA
I know. I don’t get it either. But
Arthur’s obsessed with this thing.
It's all he talks about. And I’m
THIS close to making partner and if
I have to spend a weekend here to
assuage his worries that I'm not
living a “truthful" life, I'm
willing to do that. I know it's not
fair to you but I just need you to
be on my team. Please.

He thaws.
KIRSA (CONT’D)
Just think of it as a three day
couples get away. We'll have a room
to ourselves. Nary a screaming
child in sight.

He smiles, welcoming the possibility.


PETER
Beautiful, you know I’d love to but
I can’t get hard anymore without
the Spongebob theme song blasting
in the background. I just can’t.
KIRSA
I know it by heart. I’ll sing it.
PETER
Oh God.
She leans into him.
4.

KIRSA
I’ll serenade you with it.

He’s laughing now. She kisses him, laughing too.


Once their laughter subsides, he SIGHS. He has a deep, loud
SIGH where his entire body exhales out.
He puts the waiver over his knee and signs it.
He hoists up an old, tattered backpack onto his shoulders and
she straightens up her small roller bag.
They walk to the Maternal Volunteer and hand over their
waivers. She brightens up at once like a robot switching on.
MATERNAL VOLUNTEER
Hello, my name is Mallory and I’m
so glad you’re here today! Please
follow me!

She says the words with the exact sing-song cadence as the
first Volunteer we heard.
Once they step in, the Maternal Volunteer closes the doors
and LOCKS them. Both Kirsa and Peter take notice.
INT. CORRIDORS - DAY

Kirsa and Peter follow the Volunteer down the winding


corridors. We stay with them for an uncomfortably long time
as they are swallowed into the labyrinth. It becomes more
claustrophobic with each step.
PETER
So, like, what will we be doing?

MATERNAL VOLUNTEER
I can’t explain it to you see, it
would be like explaining a joke!
You have to experience it full on.
PETER
Can’t you give us a hint?
MATERNAL VOLUNTEER
How about this: Do you ever wish
you came with an instruction manual
for your body and your mind?
PETER
An instruction manual? Like for a
dishwasher?
5.

He’s fucking with her. Kirsa can’t help breaking a smile but
throws him a “cut it, please” glance.

MATERNAL VOLUNTEER
(serious, thankful)
Exactly. But for us. All of us.
She looks at them, intense. They manage a nod or two.
They turn a corner and face the MULTIPURPOSE ROOM.

The participants are lined up at the desks, signing in. Some


are already sitting in the black chairs, chatting.
INT. THE MULTIPURPOSE ROOM - DAY
Peter and Kirsa are the last ones to sign in.
TALL VOLUNTEER, 50-something with leathery skin, almost seven
feet tall, sits behind his desk, staring right up at them. He
doesn't smile like the other volunteers.
Peter and Kirsa are aware of his gaze. They exchange
uncomfortable glances.
Kirsa gives him her form. The Tall Volunteer scans it.
TALL VOLUNTEER
Arthur Cunningham referred you to
us?
His voice is dead flat. Monotone.
KIRSA
Yes. He gave us the tickets.
Tall Volunteer looks through a stack of name-tags.
A male, gay millennial CHIRPY VOLUNTEER appears next to them.
CHIRPY VOLUNTEER
Oh my God, Art sent you?! How do
you know him?
KIRSA
I work with him at his law firm.
CHIRPY VOLUNTEER
You’re so lucky. A bunch of us did
our intro course with him and he
really transformed.
KIRSA
Yes. He... really did...
6.

CHIRPY VOLUNTEER
We had Aiden leading us, I’m pretty
sure you guys have him today. He's
the founder of all this, a real
miracle worker. He's just so great
at...
(pointing at his head)
Getting in there and cleaning out
the cobwebs.
(sees someone behind her)
Excuse me, I need to go set stuff
up. But oh this is going to be so
amazing for you! I know it!
Kirsa tries to morph her face into a convincing smile.
He walks off. Peter leans into Kirsa, whispers:
PETER
I sort of like my cobwebs...?
He's half joking but she can see he's freaked out.
Before Kirsa can reply, the Tall Volunteer extends two
brochures and a pair of name tags to them.

KIRSA
Thank you.
He points to a straw basket filled with cellphones.
TALL VOLUNTEER
Your phones.
Peter and Kirsa share a glance.
PETER
Uhh... Look man, we have a four
year old at home. Phones are sort
of mandatory.
TALL VOLUNTEER
Complete transformation requires
complete commitment.
KIRSA
Can we keep them if we switch them
off? We'll have breaks, I assume--
TALL VOLUNTEER
You have agreed to the Process.
This is part of that agreement.
Peter pulls her back, leans in.
7.

PETER
(whispering)
Kirs, this place has more red flags
than a Chinese Armada. Seriously,
we can still bolt.
But Kirsa overhears:

CHIRPY VOLUNTEER (O.S.)


... yeah, she works with Art...
She turns to see the Chirpy Volunteer talking to the others.
They all smile and wave at Kirsa as if she's a celebrity.
She whispers back to Peter.
KIRSA
It's too late. We can’t.
She texts something quick then puts her cellphone into the
basket.
PETER
Really?

KIRSA
It’s okay. My parents will be happy
to get some quality time with Sam.
Peter full body sighs. Puts his phone into the basket.
TALL VOLUNTEER
Leave your bags here, we will take
them to your rooms.
Peter flashes a frustrated smile as he drops his backpack to
the ground, hard. Kirsa lets go of her rolling bag.
They look around for a chair to sit on. Thankfully, there are
two empty ones next to each other. They move to the chairs--
TALL VOLUNTEER (CONT’D)
You can’t sit together. You need to
focus on your own selves for--
Peter whips around, his frustration boiling over:
PETER
Yeah? That also part of our
"agreement"?
KIRSA
(reigning him in)
Peter.
8.

He turns back to Kirsa but he's coiled.


KIRSA (CONT’D)
Please just...
PETER
Dial down the hate and make you
look good?
KIRSA
Try to give it a chance. Maybe
you’ll take something out of it.
He scoffs at that. Still annoyed at this whole thing.
He spots an empty chair at the other end.
PETER
Alright, I'll catch you on the
flipside. Hold onto your cobwebs.
He's about to walk away when--
KIRSA
Peter.

PETER
What?
KIRSA
Thank you for being on my team.
You're the best.
He can't help but smile. Kisses her.
PETER
Actually, you're the best.
Scientifically. As you know, I
studied bestology in college.
KIRSA
I'm going to have to disagree. I
have a PHD in bestology. From CERN.
PETER
CERN? That lab with black holes?
KIRSA
Yep. That one.
A VOLUNTEER brushes by them and pops them out of their
bubble. Kirsa sees all Volunteer are taking their places at
the edges of the room, their backs to the wall.
9.

Other people have noticed the change too. Conversations hush


down. An excited, nervous energy grips the room.
Peter gets it's his time to leave. A quick kiss, and he walks
away to the other end of the room.
Kirsa sits down, watches him go.

Something BANGS behind her and makes Kirsa JUMP in her seat--
It’s the DOUBLE DOORS. They're closed now. The Tall Volunteer
stands before them. He puts a KEY into the lock and turns it.
The doors lock with a heavy CLICK.
He pockets the key and sits down behind his desk.
Kirsa looks at the closed, and now locked, doors.
AIDEN (O.S.)
Why the fuck are you here?
She sees the MAN on the stage, AIDEN CAUL. He’s big with
broad shoulders, dressed all in black. He might be in his
50’s or maybe older, but there is a ferocity to him that
makes you believe he can kill a bear with his bare hands.

He stomps around the platform, his eyes on the audience.


AIDEN (CONT’D)
Come on, boys and girls. You can do
it. I believe in you.
(shouting louder)
I said, WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU HERE!?
After a long beat, A YOUNG WOMAN with a SHAVED HEAD
enthusiastically raises her hand. Aiden points at her.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
Why are you here?
SHAVED HEAD
Enlightenment!

AIDEN
Enlightenment.
(walking to her)
What's your name?
SHAVED HEAD
Aspen.
AIDEN
Aspen. What does that mean?
Enlightenment.
10.

Shaved Head nervously smiles under his intense gaze.


ASPEN
Finding our center in the world
and, like, empower ourselves
through that knowledge. And live in
gratitude and fulfillment.

Aiden waits for a beat. Then turns to those around her.


AIDEN
Anyone understand any of that crap?
The leading question gets no response from the crowd.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
Me neither. Sit down.
ASPEN
I’m sorry, I can clarify--
AIDEN
What the fuck do you want, a medal?
Sit down.

ASPEN
No but I can, I know what--
Aiden
SIT THE FUCK DOWN!!!
Aspen sinks into her chair, scared.
Nothing moves for a long beat.
Then someone in the crowd SIGHS.
Kirsa knows that pronounced sigh. It’s Peter.
Aiden’s head snaps to Peter.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
You have something to say? What’s
your name?
Kirsa tenses, her eyes on Peter.
PETER
It’s on my name-tag
Aiden leans over Peter and RIPS away his name-tag. Crumples
it and drops it to the ground.
11.

AIDEN
I don’t see a name tag.
PETER
(annoyed, not intimidated)
Why are you so rude, man?
AIDEN
Because I have to be. Because if
I’m nice, you will go back to your
nice, dead life. I only have THREE
DAYS to resuscitate your aliveness.
THREE DAYS to TRANSFORM your ENTIRE
FUCKING LIFE and this is the ONLY
WAY I know how.
He disengages from Peter, starts stalking through the room.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
If it makes you feel more
comfortable, I don’t like shouting
at you. But I do it because
(even LOUDER)
YOUR! FUCKING! LIVES! ARE AT STAKE!
He stomps back to Peter.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
What is your name?
Peter sighs again, but sees Kirsa glancing at him.
PETER
(relenting)
Peter.
AIDEN
Why the fuck you are here, Peter?
PETER
(not sure, guessing)
Transformation...?
AIDEN
Transformation into what?
PETER
I don’t know, man.
(can’t help himself)
Into one of those wonderful
volunteers you got back there?
A few people snicker at that. Kirsa shakes her head, not
pleased. Aiden is stonefaced.
12.

AIDEN
I’ve been leading classes for seven
years, Peter. One thing never
changes: Class clowns turn out to
be the saddest people in the room.
Peter doesn’t know how to reply to that. It shuts him up.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
(to the room)
What’s the difference between a
caterpillar and a butterfly?
Nobody answers. Not after what happened to those who did.
Kirsa tightens in her seat. Aiden is coming her way.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
I’m sorry. My bad. It’s a big room,
I should speak up.
(SHOUTING)
WHAT IS THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN A
CATERPILLAR AND A BUTTERFLY?!
Aiden locks eyes with Kirsa. Kirsa looks away, but it's too
late. He looms over her.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
What’s your name?
KIRSA
Kirsa.
AIDEN
Kirsa. What is the difference
between a caterpillar and a
butterfly?
Kirsa takes a long beat.
KIRSA
They're the same thing but
transformed.
AIDEN
Go on.
KIRSA
(after another beat)
The caterpillar doesn't become a
different thing when it's a
butterfly. It's still what it is.
More beautiful, but still the same.
13.

AIDEN
Yes. Good. Very good.
(to the crowd)
Transformation doesn't mean you
will become a different person. It
means you will become more You.
(eyes pointing at Kirsa)
Did you see that? She didn't spew
out a buzzword. She dug deeper.
(singling her out)
Thank you, Kirsa.
She nods back politely, pleased she aced the question. People
around her lean in to check out who she is.
Aiden takes a moment. Starts shouting again:

AIDEN (CONT’D)
To turn into a butterfly, the
caterpillar disintegrates into a
soup of its own organs! Then it
EATS ITSELF to transform into a
butterfly. It's disgusting but it's
the only fucking way.
He paces towards the platform, maintaining intense eye
contact with those near him.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
You think I’ve been rude? Harsh?
That’s nothing. You will hate me in
the next three days. I will hurt
you. I will psychically bleed you.
I will make you piss your pants, I
will make you vomit. Your entire
being will resist, you will want to
run out of here, you will want to
slug me. Memories you’ve been
repressing for decades will come
out and the pain will be so fucking
bad you will understand why you've
repressed them in the first place.
Kirsa holds his gaze. Takes that in.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
But when we're done... You will all
be butterflies.
There is genuine wonder on his face when he says that. Almost
as if he's... sexually turned on.
He climbs to the platform. Looks over everyone. Intimate.
14.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
(lighter)
You're probably thinking... Jesus
Christ. This shit sounds intense.
What did I get myself into?
That draws a wave of smiles. Some laughs.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
Folks, ninety-nine percent of
people who attend this class report
they experienced a profound and
lasting difference in the quality
of their lives. It’s not magic,
it’s technology and this technology
works. I have experienced it,
whoever recommended this class to
you has experienced it. You will
experience it.
He starts pacing around, pumping everyone up. Kirsa can feel
the energy of the room change. People like this Aiden.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
Give me three days. It’s a fucking
weekend for a permanent shift in
your life. It’s the best investment
you will ever make. All I’m asking
from you is to do it how it’s
supposed to be done. To commit to
it with your entire body and mind
and being. Are you open to that?
Are you going to do it?
(pumping them up)
Do you believe in the possibility
of a better life? A more truthful
life? If you’re willing to full-on
commit to that life, raise your
hand right fucking now!
One by one, everyone’s hands go up. Kirsa raises her hand
too, more out of obligation than anything.
She looks at Peter. His hands are on his lap.
She sees Aiden scanning the crowd. He sees Peter -- the only
one who doesn’t have his hand up -- and walks towards him.
Her eyes catch Peter’s. They bore into him. Do it.
He gives out a long sigh, then raises his hand.

Aiden glares at Peter anyway... but then turns to the crowd.


15.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Well done. I'm proud of you.
(beat)
It’s time for a quick break. I
encourage you to talk with our
volunteers and learn about their
transformations.
It feels weird to have him stop talking. Nobody moves.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
(lighter)
I’d get up if I were you. You’re
not going to have many of these.
He’s charming again. Some people laugh.

Kirsa stands up, looking for Peter, but Peter is not where he
was sitting a moment ago.
MATERNAL VOLUNTEER (O.S.)
Kirsa! How are you?
Kirsa smiles at her but she's still looking for Peter.
KIRSA
Good. That was great. How are you?
MATERNAL VOLUNTEER
I’m truthful and grateful to share
this experience with you.
Kirsa nods a few times at that, not sure where to take the
conversation... but she sees Peter.
He’s at the far corner of the room, talking to a particularly
ATTRACTIVE VOLUNTEER in her late-twenties.
The Attractive Volunteer LAUGHS at something Peter said.
Something in Kirsa stirs.
KIRSA
Excuse me. I’ll be back.
She beelines towards Peter...
ACROSS THE ROOM
Kirsa hears them as she gets near:

PETER
Is The Process for-profit? Yes or
no? Simple question.
16.

ATTRACTIVE VOLUNTEER
It is, but none of the leaders are
in it for the money. Most of them
took huge pay cuts from their old
jobs to come work with us.
PETER
I’m gonna go ahead and silently nod
at that but I don’t know if it's
gonna be a truthful nod.
Attractive Volunteer chuckles at that.
Kirsa notices she’s even better looking up close: Her skin is
porcelain, her face is perfectly symmetrical. Her coiled
snake earrings and short hair give her an alternative look
that matches Peter’s. They could easily be a couple. Hell,
they look more like a couple than Kirsa and Peter.
She notices Kirsa. Sparks up. Aggressively happy.
ATTRACTIVE VOLUNTEER
Kirsa, I’m Maya! I’ve been wanting
to talk to you.
KIRSA
Any particular reason why?
MAYA
Arthur told me you were coming.
Kirsa's body language changes at the mention of Arthur.
KIRSA
How do you know Arthur?
MAYA
We’re doing AW together!
KIRSA
AW?
MAYA
Advanced Wisdom. It’s a third-tier
leadership course. We’re training
to be a course leader. Like Aiden.
KIRSA
That’s great. Congratulations.
(re: Peter)
I hope he’s not giving you too much
trouble. He likes being a rebel.
17.

MAYA
I don’t mind it at all, I was the
rebel in my intro course.
She smiles, broad. As if to say: "And look where I am now."
PETER
Well, fingers crossed.
Maya chuckles again. Either genuinely charmed by Peter or
acting charmed to sell him on the program, Kirsa can't tell.
AIDEN (O.S.)
Everyone back to your seats!
Aiden is up at the platform again. Ready to command.

People start shuffling back. Kirsa mouths a quick "I love


you" to Peter. He returns the gesture.
Maya steps up to Kirsa. Too close.
MAYA
I’ll be here the entire weekend.
Let me know if you need anything.
Her tone is comforting. But Kirsa is not comforted.
Kirsa walks back to her seat, at the other end. She glances
back and sees Maya escorting Peter to his seat.
INT. MULTIPURPOSE ROOM
The lights have been dimmed.
Everyone has their eyes closed. Aiden is on the platform,
sitting in a chair.
From the way people are concentrating, we can tell they’ve
been at this for a while. He’s mid-sentence:
AIDEN
... then you land and you’re home.
His voice is low. Hypnotic.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
It's the house you grew up in. It
feels almost sacred. Even if it was
a bad place sometimes, this is
where you learned happiness. Find
that happiness. Stay there.
Kirsa has her head hung, eyes closed.
18.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
You’re safe. Visualize the child
you were. A happy child. Hopeful.
This is before the time you knew
you could be harmed.
Aiden stands up. Slowly starts pacing.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
From a time when all hopes and
dreams were possible.
(long beat)
I want you to ask yourself one
question: Am I happier now, as an
adult, or was I happier as a child?
He descends from the platform.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
You know the answer. You knew
before you asked it. It's in your
gut. It used to be better. And that
child... That child is disappointed
in who you have become. You've lost
something, haven't you? And you are
not okay anymore. Not like you
were. You’re a goddamn mess.
Now this voice morphs into something cruel. It gradually gets
higher in volume until he’s full on shouting.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
Look at that child. You had so much
promise. But you turned out to be a
DISAPPOINTMENT. You FAILED
yourself! You gave up on yourself!
You LET YOURSELF DIE!
A man to Kirsa’s right cracks, starts sobbing. More people
start crying. Whimpering like children.
Kirsa opens her eyes, weirded out. Not willing to go with it,
but keeping her head down, weathering it out.
Aiden is now shouting at the top of his lungs.
19.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
WHY? Because you got HURT and
instead of DEALING WITH IT you
started AVOIDING and LYING and that
stuck, and that’s why YOU AVOID
BEING TRUTHFUL AND LIE and you SAY
IT’S OKAY when you feel like YOU’RE
IN SO MUCH PAIN YOU WANT TO JUST
FUCKING DISAPPEAR, but that CHILD
knows and you KNOW and YOU CAN’T
AVOID IT ANYMORE! YOU KNOW!
More people are crying. Ugly, guttural crying. It’s a
cacophony of raw pain.
Kirsa is absolutely still. Her heart is beating fast. A sick
anxiety blossoming in her chest.
Aiden climbs onto the platform and CLAPS his hands.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
Open your eyes. Look at me.
Kirsa lifts her head, looks around. People wipe their eyes
and noses, red-faced.
Kirsa glances over at Peter, who looks dazed.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
I SAID LOOK AT ME.
He points to someone in the back.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
Stand up.
Kirsa, and everyone else, turn to find a woman in her 40’s, a
SOCIALITE type, who is still sobbing, make-up running.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
Why does your life not work?
SOCIALITE WOMAN
... I don’t know.
AIDEN
You know. You fucking know.
She starts breaking down.
SOCIALITE WOMAN
I don’t know if I love my husband.
20.

She starts crying. Vocalizing the words gave them weight she
couldn’t carry. Aiden looks at her, emphatic.
AIDEN
We’ll figure it out together, okay?
She nods back, her hands intertwined across her chest as if
in a prayer. Sits down.
He walks up to a big chalkboard at the front of the room, and
starts writing on it: “PERSONAL RELATIONSHIPS”
He points to a devastated OFFICE DRONE in an ironed white
shirt sitting in front of Kirsa. He stands up.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
Why does your life not work?

A long beat. Then he spits the words out all at once.


OFFICE DRONE
I see prostitutes and I’m going to
stop but I can’t and my wife
doesn’t know. I have to stop.
He looks at the people around him, feels ashamed. Sits down
and starts rocking back and forth in his chair.
AIDEN
(softly, comforting)
We will fix that. Trust me.
The Office Drone stops rocking and looks up at Aiden. Nods,
wanting to believe Aiden so desperately.

Aiden goes to the chalkboard and writes down: “ADDICTION.”


Kirsa leans forward and looks towards Peter. His eyes are on
Aiden, listening intently, one with the crowd--
AIDEN (O.S.) (CONT’D)
Kirsa. Why does your life not work?
She snaps to Aiden. All eyes snap to her.
She stands up after a beat. Tries her best.
KIRSA
... I have a fear of failure.
AIDEN
Go on.
21.

KIRSA
I can take more responsibility at
my work. I practice family law at
large firm and I want to make
partner but... But I always hold
myself back for some reason.
Aiden walks to the edge of the platform, staring her down.
Obviously dissatisfied with her composed answer.
AIDEN
Go on.
KIRSA
That's... that's it.
AIDEN
Kirsa. Did you do the exercise?
KIRSA
Yes.
AIDEN
It didn’t work for you?
KIRSA
It did.
AIDEN
Kirsa, everyone in this room can
tell you’re not being truthful.
(giving her an out)
Because sometimes it doesn’t work.

A beat. Kirsa decides to take it.


KIRSA
I couldn’t quite get into it. Not
because of the exercise itself--
AIDEN
You were open to it? You committed?
(Kirsa nods)
Then you don’t have to elaborate.
KIRSA
(relieved)
Thank you.
AIDEN
As I said before, this course
doesn’t work for one person out of
a hundred. You must be that person
in this room.
(MORE)
22.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
(to the Tall Volunteer)
Give her a full refund, please.
She's paralyzed for a beat.
KIRSA
I don’t want to leave.
AIDEN
If this simple visualization
exercise didn’t work for you, I
don’t think you’re going to get
much out of the rest of the course.
KIRSA
I’ve been getting a lot out of it.

AIDEN
(final)
Trust me, Kirsa. You should leave,
there’s no use wasting either of
our time. I wish you the best.

The Tall Volunteer stands up. Waiting for Kirsa.


Kirsa stammers, not sure what to do. Peter looking at her.
Maya at the corner of her eye, observing her.
KIRSA
I will commit. Let me stay.

Aiden takes a long look at her.


AIDEN
Suit yourself. I’m not going to
have you dragged out. But don’t
blame me or the Process if the next
two days are torture to you. I
warned you. You ignored it.

Without even waiting for her to sit down, Aiden points at


someone new as if their conversation never happened:

AIDEN (CONT’D)
You. Why does your life not work?
Kirsa slowly sits back down. Admonished. A little humiliated.

INT. MULTIPURPOSE ROOM - LATER


People are exhausted. Kirsa too.

An older man sits down.


23.

Aiden writes something new onto the chalkboard: “SELF DOUBT”.


It's been filled up to the edges: "EGO," "RAGE," "TRAUMA,"
and more. He can hardly scribble the new one in.

Aiden points to Peter, the last one to go.


AIDEN
Peter.
(beat)
I did not forget about you. Tell
us. Why does your life not work?

Peter stands up. A beat. Kirsa watches him.


PETER
Drugs.

He sits back down. Aiden takes a beat.


AIDEN
Are you in recovery?

Peter nods "yes" without standing up. Aiden knows he's


getting as much as he's going to get out of him.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Well... That's progress.
Aiden underlines "Addiction."

He stands back, looks at the board.


AIDEN (CONT’D)
(to everyone)
And to think before you came here,
you all thought you were doing
good. What a bunch of fuck-ups you
all turned out to be.

People around Kirsa smile. It’s cathartic. Above all, Aiden


is saying: You’re not alone.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
I’m going to let you go to bed now.
BUT, before you sleep, I want you
to do some simple homework: There’s
going to be a piece of paper in
your rooms. On the left side of
that paper, I want you to write the
first words you have spoken in this
life.
(MORE)
24.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
Then draw a line to the right side
of the page and write down the last
words you think you will speak
before you die if you keep living
the way you've been living. If you
don’t solve these problems you got.
Do not be a fucking coward. Be
truthful. If it’s not hard, if it’s
not uncomfortable, that’s how you
know you’re lying.
(soothing, almost tender)
You owe it to yourself.
Kirsa clocks the people around her nod, taking in the lesson.
She’s a bit creeped out by how in sync they are.

The Tall Volunteer unlocks the doors and swings them wide
open. People stand up, file out.
CHIRPY VOLUNTEER (O.S.)
(directing people)
If you're A to L, please come with
me. If you're M to Z...

He keeps talking as Kirsa looks around for Peter.


She catches Aiden’s eyes. He is standing on the platform,
strangely motionless, looking straight at her.

She looks away and blends into the crowd, escaping.


INT. CORRIDORS - NIGHT

A crowd surrounds Kirsa. Together, they march down the dark


nondescript corridors, following the volunteers.
No windows, clocks or mirrors.

She’s looking for Peter in the crowd.


He comes up behind her.

PETER
Hey, beautiful.

She hugs him. Kisses him.


PETER (CONT’D)
Everything copacetic?

She leans against him as the answer to that.


25.

KIRSA
(venting)
I feel like I’m being punished
because my life works. Excuse me
for loving my husband and not
sleeping with prostitutes.
(whispering to him)
And it is a little too cult-y.
PETER
Eh.
(she’s surprised by that)
It is intense but it’s basically AA
for sober people.

KIRSA
Do they mass hypnotize you in AA?

PETER
No. But, you know, some people need
that shit.
KIRSA
What people? People who sleep with
prostitutes?
That was too loud. She slinks a bit, checks to see if anyone
heard her. They haven't.
PETER
When you're in that kind of haze,
sometimes you need someone to knock
you down to see which side is up.
KIRSA
(whispering)
What they need is therapy, not an
unqualified autocratic dictator
screaming at them for hours.

PETER
I don't know, man... He's obviously
trained in some way. Plus, the
people in the program who helped me
the most are not therapists. I'd be
surprised if they even graduated
from high school, you know?

She looks up at him, a little on edge.


KIRSA
So anyone can tell you what to do
and you'll just do it?
26.

PETER
I should apparently, if it's you
doing the telling.
She slides out under his arm.

PETER (CONT’D)
Look, all I'm saying is that it
might be good for some people.
Maybe not for us but, I mean, Trent
fucking Reznor did this thing and
loved it. If a stone cold genius
benefited from it, you know...

KIRSA
Did Maya tell you that?

PETER
What?
KIRSA
You were talking. I assumed.

PETER
I read it on the little pamphlet
thing. What are you saying?

KIRSA
Nothing. Just...

She goes quiet, embarrassed by her insecurity.


He stops her. Looks at her. They wait for the crowd to
continue marching, leaving them with some privacy.

PETER
I'm telling you, we can still
totally bolt if you want. I'm still
on your team.

She takes it in with a small smile. He perks up at that.


They start walking again, catching up to the crowd.

KIRSA
No. I need to stay. Last thing I
need is this asshole telling Arthur
I'm a lost cause.
PETER
Cool. Well. Let me know if I can
improve your stay. Wink-wink.

He rubs her back suggestively and wiggles his eyebrows.


27.

Silly but also adorable. Makes her crack up.


KIRSA
I need to finish the “homework”
first. But then...
She gives him an impish smile.

PETER
Wow. You brought the...?
(she nods)
Groovy.

Their bliss is invaded by the Tall Volunteer.


TALL VOLUNTEER
(pointing to a door)
This is your room.
KIRSA
Do I get a key or...?

TALL VOLUNTEER
No.

She opens the door, it’s unlocked. Peter follows her in.
TALL VOLUNTEER (CONT’D)
(to Peter)
Your room is down the hall.
PETER
We’re staying together.

TALL VOLUNTEER
All rooms are singles.
KIRSA
(getting frustrated)
We’ll figure out a way to share the
bed. Thank you.

The Tall Volunteer steps towards Kirsa, cranes his neck down.
TALL VOLUNTEER
Your homework requires solitude.

KIRSA
(not backing down)
We'll put on headphones.

It's suddenly tense. Peter sees it.


28.

PETER
Maybe he’s got a point.

KIRSA
What?
PETER
I mean, we’re doing this thing,
might as well do it full on.
KIRSA
“Full on”?
PETER
When in Rome... We're here, let’s
see if we can get something out of
it, you know?
Kirsa can’t believe her ears.

TALL VOLUNTEER
(approving)
Peter, this way to your room.

Peter hugs her goodbye, whispers into her ear:


PETER
Just play along. I’ll see you in
your room in an hour.
He gives her a quick wiggle of the eyebrows. She's overcome
with relief. She smiles.

PETER (CONT’D)
Good night.

KIRSA
Good night.
Kirsa watches as Peter is marched down to a room at the end
of the corridor by the Tall Volunteer.

Despite Peter's assurances, she still seems unsettled.


INT. WOMEN’S BATHROOM

It’s cramped. She goes for the sink. Washes her face.
Realizes there are no mirrors on the walls.

OLDER WOMAN (O.S.)


Each of us paid six hundred
dollars. Is a bathroom with mirrors
too much to ask?
29.

Kirsa raises her head and sees the Older Woman, in her late
60’s, fashionable, putting moisturizer on her face.

Aspen, the woman with a shaved head from earlier, chimes in.
ASPEN
I know, right? It’s like Orange is
the New Black in here.
The conversation is a breath of fresh air to Kirsa.

KIRSA
It’s worse. The warden on that show
is nicer than what we got.

The other women chuckle, agreeing.


KIRSA (CONT’D)
I’m Kirsa. You may remember me from
out there. Public Enemy #1.
OLDER WOMAN
(amused)
Lori.
ASPEN
I'm Aspen. I think I'm on his shit
list too.
Off Kirsa, happy to have made some allies.

INT. KIRSA’S ROOM - MAYBE DAY, MAYBE NIGHT


Kirsa enters in.

The room has no windows. It’s cramped. It wasn’t meant to be


lived in, it was an office space once. Feels like a cell.
She sits down. Takes in her surroundings.

On a desk is the blank piece of paper Aiden mentioned and a


pen that sits next to it.
She takes it... draws the line.

She has no idea what to write down.


INT. KIRSA’S ROOM - LATER

She has scribbled down a dozen things ("I wish I was more
truthful." "I love my husband too much?" "Go fornicate with
thy bottom, you quack.") but they're all scratched out.

She pushes away from the desk, frustrated. Looks at the door.
30.

Wondering where Peter is.

She grins. Has an idea. Walks to her suitcase.


EXT. CORRIDORS

Kirsa slinks out of her room. She waits. Listens.


It’s pitch dark and silent. Not a soul.

She’s wearing a dark nightgown and BLACK HEELS.


She takes a few steps but the heels make too much noise. She
takes them off and holds them instead.
She reaches Peter's door. Puts the heels back on.

Takes a deep breath, ready to make a blazing entrance--

When the door abruptly opens and Maya steps out.


MAYA
Kirsa! Are you here to see, Peter?
She scans Kirsa. Notices her heels.

KIRSA
(thrown)
... I was going to, yes.

MAYA
I’m sorry, he can’t right now. He’s
meditating on the homework.
(before Kirsa can ask)
I’m helping him out with it.

Something about Maya’s demeanor makes Kirsa want to grab her


by the throat, but she takes a beat. Adjusts her tone.

KIRSA
Helping him out how?
MAYA
Getting him to be open to the
possibilities of transformation.
KIRSA
He asked for your help?
MAYA
No. But I needed it when I did my
intro course. He needs it too.
(before Kirsa can reply)
(MORE)
31.
MAYA (CONT’D)
Are you done with your own
homework?
KIRSA
... I’m working on it.
MAYA
You should go back to your room,
then. You shouldn’t be out here.
She delivers that with a friendly smile but it has the tinges
of a warning.

MAYA (CONT’D)
Oh, and Aiden is hard on everyone.
He told Arthur to leave in our
first day too. It was demoralizing
for him back then but we laugh
about it now.
Is she being genuinely supportive? Is she invoking Arthur’s
name to make Kirsa comply? Kirsa can't figure it out.
She turns away and starts walking back to her room. Her heels
hitting the ground, echoing in the silence.

She glances back and sees Maya by Peter’s door, watching


Kirsa. The contours of her body visible in the darkness like
a ghost. She whispers, trying to not wake anyone up but it’s
unquestionably eerie:
MAYA (CONT’D)
Good night, Kirsa.

Kirsa reaches her room and gets in.


INT. KIRSA’S ROOM

She shuts the door. Composes herself.


Takes off her heels.

INT. KIRSA’S ROOM - LATER


On her desk is a clean piece of paper with one line: "I wish
I was more open to guidance."

Kirsa stands by the desk, removing her makeup. She's in PJ's.


She checks the door. The lock doesn’t turn, the door is
permanently unlocked. No privacy.

From her luggage, she takes out a MOUTH GUARD and a SLEEPING
MASK. She lies down on the bed.
32.

She starts to breathe in a particular pattern: Inhales for


four seconds, holds her breath for seven seconds, then
exhales for eight seconds.

Falling asleep is a challenge to her, an ordeal...


But she's doing it... drifting off...

AND SOMEONE KNOCKS ON THE DOOR, THREE TIMES like the start of
a fucking SWAT raid and the door is swung open.

CHIRPY VOLUNTEER
Wake up everyone! WAKEY-WAKEY!
Kirsa jumps from the bed. Takes off her mask. How long did
she sleep? Did she sleep at all?
She can hear all the Volunteers going down the corridor,
BANGING on doors and SHOUTING.

MATERNAL VOLUNTEER (O.S.)


It's TIME! Wake up!
Kirsa straightens up in bed. Groggy.

She steps out. Gently closes the door, trying to reclaim some
semblance of privacy.

She goes to her roller bag near the bed. Zips it open.
Inside are some clothes and other travel things. But she goes
straight for a little pocket inside the lid.

She freezes. There’s nothing there under the nets.


She takes a beat as panic coils through her.

She palms the other pockets of the bag. Then rifles through
the clothes. Whatever she’s looking for is obviously fucking
vital. And it’s not there.

Her heartbeat raises, she reflexively checks it, then


immediately regrets it. It's POUNDING.
She charges out of the room.

INT. CORRIDORS
It’s still dark. People are waking up, mumbling. It looks
like someone pulled the fire alarm at a hotel.
And then there’s Kirsa, exploding out of the room, more
animated than we’ve ever seen her.
33.

She goes to the first person she sees in a Volunteer’s


uniform who ends up being... Maya.

MAYA
(brightens up)
Kirsa!

KIRSA
There are things missing from my
roller bag.

MAYA
Oh, I’m so sorry to hear that.
What’s missing?

KIRSA
(she doesn't want to say)
Where is Peter?

MAYA
He already went down. He wanted to
get a head start on his
transformation.

A beat.
KIRSA
Do you people go through our bags?
MAYA
Well, there’s a security check.
Some people try to sneak in phones.
But I assure you--
KIRSA
It’s not a goddamn phone.

MAYA
Okay. But... What is it? I can’t
help you unless you tell me.

It pains Kirsa to admit her weakness. Especially to her. But


she’s desperate, she has to.

KIRSA
My Paxil.
MAYA
Is that some kind of medication?
KIRSA
For anxiety.
34.

MAYA
Oh. Mind-altering substances are
not allowed during the Process.
KIRSA
It’s medicine, not LSD.
Maya cocks her head a little. “If you say so.” Not
contradicting Kirsa but also not giving her anything.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
Did they take my pills from my
suitcase? Because I need them.
(dreading to say it)
Paxil withdrawals are... bad. Even
if I miss a single day. I have a
strict regimen, I take a pill first
thing in the morning which means I
haven’t taken it in a...
(realizes the severity)
What time is it?

MAYA
It’s the beginning of the second
session.

KIRSA
This is serious. What’s the time? I
need to know how long it’s been
since I’ve taken my last pill.

Maya takes a beat. Smiles. No menace in her voice.


MAYA
I’ll look into it for you, I
promise.
With that, she starts walking away, attending to others.

Kirsa squeezes her knuckles white.


INT. THE MULTIPURPOSE ROOM

The lights above have been dimmed for today. More intimate.
A desk nearby has a bunch of plastic cups filled with what
looks like a green smoothie.

Kirsa comes in. She is approached by the Maternal Volunteer


who hands Kirsa a cup of the drink.

MATERNAL VOLUNTEER
Breakfast! Try it, it's yummy.
35.

Kirsa takes it with a silent nod. She's about to walk away--


MATERNAL VOLUNTEER (CONT’D)
Kirsa, sweetie, I want to talk to
you about a possibility.
She launches into an obviously rehearsed sales pitch.

MATERNAL VOLUNTEER (CONT’D)


Some spots opened up in next week's
advanced transformation classes and
if you sign up right now, you can
get twenty percent off. I've done
those classes and trust me, this
deal is a steal!

Kirsa sees that the other smiling Volunteers are giving the
same pitch to the tired people streaming in.
KIRSA
(trying to get away)
I'll think about it.
Maternal Volunteer's smile fades for a second but then comes
back with a vengeance.

MATERNAL VOLUNTEER
If you wait, the spots might fill
and you might miss what could be
the best experience of your life!
KIRSA
(getting frustrated)
Thank you, maybe later.

A sudden manic desperation takes over the Maternal Volunteer.


MATERNAL VOLUNTEER
Dear, why do you think you're
resisting? What do you think is
stopping you from committing full
on to your transformation?

KIRSA
(finally snapping)
I don't know. My brain?!
(walking away)
Excuse me.
The Maternal Volunteer steps back, whispers something under
her breath at Kirsa, perhaps a curse, and latches onto the
next tired, defenseless person coming into the room.
36.

Kirsa finds Peter in the chair he was sitting yesterday. Bags


under his eyes, he hasn't slept at all. He waves at her.

Kirsa is about to beeline to him but the door CLOSES and


Aiden ascends to the platform, surveying his flock.
People start taking their places. It's about to begin.

Kirsa brightens when she sees an empty chair next to Lori and
Aspen. She walks towards them.

Lori is sipping from her “breakfast,” her face scrunched.


KIRSA (CONT’D)
(sitting down)
How much would you pay for a
Starbucks right now?
LORI
My Lord. Do not tempt me.

ASPEN
Oh no, I think we might be
"transforming" into basic bitches.

They share a laugh.


INT. MULTIPURPOSE ROOM - LATER

Lori looks down, wiping a tear, distraught.


She's on the platform, sitting across Aiden.

Kirsa is watching them. It's dead silent. Tense.


Aiden holds up Lori's “last words” paper. His finger on the
line from the first words to the last.

AIDEN
The thing is Lori, you’re much
closer to this...
(the “last words”)
...than to this.
(her “first words”)
I’m not saying that to hurt you,
you know that. It’s just the truth.
Lori forces a smile but she’s hit by that.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Time is a resource and you don’t
have the resources to live
unconsciously anymore.
(MORE)
37.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
You need to call your son and tell
him the truth. You need to tell him
you love him. If you still think
that way about him being gay...
Don’t talk about that. He’s your
son. His sexuality is, what, a
small part of him. He’s your
fucking son. You love him more than
anyone else can ever love him.

LORI
(voice breaking)
I do. I do.

AIDEN
Say it after me: It’s too late for
me. I need to fucking live.

LORI
(a hoarse whisper)
It’s too late for me. I need to...
live.

She starts to cry in the way only old people do.


Kirsa shudders in her seat, uncomfortable.

AIDEN
Lori. Lori?
(gently, charming)
Lori, that’s not what I said, was
it? You missed a word there. Starts
with F? I say it a lot?
A gentle laughter rises from the audience around Kirsa.

Lori breaks out a smile too.


AIDEN (CONT’D)
It’s fuck, Lori. You can say fuck.
We’re all friends here.
A supporting laughter from the crowd, some people clap to
show their support. They want Lori to do it.

Kirsa sees Aspen, next to her, is clapping too. Into it.


LORI
I need to...
AIDEN
(starting over for her)
It’s too late for me...
38.

LORI
It’s too late for me. I need to...
(meek)
fucking live.

AIDEN
Again.
LORI
I said it!
AIDEN
You gave birth to four children and
you squeak like a mouse!? I don’t
fucking buy it!
LORI
It’s too late for me. I need to
fucking live.
AIDEN
Again!

LORI
It’s too late for me--

AIDEN
Shout it! Top of your lungs!
LORI
(shouting)
It’s too late for me and--
AIDEN
LOUDER!

LORI
AND I NEED TO FUC--

AIDEN
NO! FROM THE START!
LORI
IT’S TOO LATE FOR ME--
AIDEN
LOUDER! LOUDER!

LORI
IT’S TOO LATE FOR ME AND I NEED TO
FUCKING LIVE!

The words echo in the room and she starts bawling.


39.

AIDEN
(lovingly)
Get up. Get up.

She does and Aiden embraces her. Tears in his eyes.


Thunderous applause rocks the room. Everyone gets up on their
feet. Kirsa follows suit out of obligation.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
See how strong she is, folks?
Vulnerability is a strength. Don’t
let anyone tell you otherwise.
Two Volunteers come up and escort Lori back down the stairs.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
If you want to find Lori during the
break or after the session and tell
her how brave you think she is...
you should. She deserves that.

Lori nears her seat. Aspen gets up and gives her a hug.
ASPEN
You’re very brave.
Lori smiles through the tears.

Kirsa tries to smile at her but catches Lori looking back at


Aiden. He’s her God right now.
Kirsa looks around her. Everyone’s faces are shining with
that ecstasy. He’s all of their God.

AIDEN
Alright, who’s next?
(pointing)
Peter. Yes, you. Come up. Everyone
give him a hand, will you?
Peter stands up, uncomfortable. Trudges up to the stage as
everyone applauds.
Everyone except Kirsa.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Share with us, Peter.
After a beat, Peter starts reading.
40.

PETER
My first word was: “Moose.” Or at
least that’s what my mama used to
say. I said moose before I said
mom, and she was so mad. She never
forgave me for it.

A few people in the audience chuckle.


PETER (CONT’D)
Last words... I wrote down: “Shit.”

AIDEN
Poetic.

PETER
I meditated on it a lot. I wasn’t
being lazy. It felt right.

AIDEN
Why “shit”?
PETER
It’s ending, you know? There are
things I still want to do but I
don’t have the time.
AIDEN
Why don’t you do them now?
(Peter seems confused)
The things you want to do, why
don’t you do them now?

PETER
(after a brief pause)
I am doing them, I just want to do
more of--

AIDEN
Why’d you pause?

PETER
I considered your question, I
didn’t pause--

AIDEN
Peter. Everyone in the fucking room
saw you pause before you answered.

Peter shrugs. Avoiding it.


41.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Fine, let’s do it your way:
Everyone who saw him pause, raise
your hands.
Kirsa watches as everyone raises their hands. She doesn’t.

Aiden scans the crowd, shows the result to Peter.


Peter takes it in.

Kirsa sees Aiden is looking straight at her. She now knows


she’s a player in this peculiar game.

Aiden directs his attention back to Peter.


AIDEN (CONT’D)
Do me a favor, Peter. Rate your
life out of ten.

PETER
Seven, eight. Decent.

AIDEN
That’s not decent, Peter. That’s a
B- if it’s an eight. C- if it’s a
seven. That’s decent?

PETER
(attempt at humour)
I sucked at school, man. C- would
have made my mama thank God.
He’s good at it, some people chuckle but Aiden rolls through.

AIDEN
What’s missing? Why not a ten out
of ten?
PETER
Nobody is at a ten.
AIDEN
You were never at a ten?

PETER
When my son was born, maybe.

AIDEN
Then it creeped down to seven?
PETER
Don't say that like that's a weird
thing. That's how life works.
42.

AIDEN
You're at a C- and you’re an expert
on how life works?
Now Peter is getting pissed off.

PETER
Your life is a ten? A+? Being
you’re the life expert and all?

AIDEN
Of course it is.

PETER
(fuck you)
Right. ‘Cause you’re the butterfly.

AIDEN
Peter, how hard did your mother hit
you when she beat you?
All the air is sucked out of the room.

Peter is thrown by the sudden pivot, he’s paralyzed.


AIDEN (CONT’D)
You talked about her twice. First
time, she was getting mad at you
for something beyond your control.
Second time, you sounded relieved
she wasn’t angry. Am I wrong?
PETER
...I don’t want to talk about that.

AIDEN
(without missing a beat)
You have a son. Are you married?

PETER
... yeah.
AIDEN
Rate your marriage for me.
(Peter is still paralyzed)
Is it “decent”? Six, seven. C-? C+?

PETER
(barely a whisper, still
thrown)
... Ten.
43.

AIDEN
It was the conviction in your voice
that really sold that.

Peter straightens up. Looks at Kirsa, then back at Aiden.


PETER
She’s the best goddamn thing that
ever happened to me. Ten.
If he’s lying, he’s great at it. He glances at Kirsa again
and she nods at him, steeling him up against Aiden.

AIDEN
(changing tracks)
You’re a photographer.
(re: Peter's surprise)
I Googled you. I Google everyone,
by the way. I do my homework, too.
PETER
Yearbook photographer. I do high
school yearbooks.
AIDEN
That’s an important distinction?
(Peter shrugs)
It is. You’re not an artist.

Peter shrugs again, and Aiden... laughs.


It takes everyone by surprise, including Kirsa.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Here I am digging for some deep...
(his voice trails off)
Peter, you’re just an average Joe
who hates his fucking job.

PETER
I don’t “hate” my jo--

AIDEN
All who think Peter hates his job
raise your hand.

Again, everyone in the room raises their hands except Kirsa.


The room has relaxed now with Aiden laughing. Even Peter
chuckles at the result.

But Kirsa is getting pissed. Her hands rubbing against each


other, almost manic, cracking her fingers.
44.

PETER
What do you want me to say. It’s a
job, man. You hate it sometimes--

AIDEN
No. Stop resisting. You hate it all
the goddamn time.
(Peter is silent)
Do you know why? Because it’s a
betrayal of your being. You gave up
on your calling.

PETER
I didn’t give up anything. Don't
make it sound dramatic. I just...
wasn’t that good at it.
AIDEN
Tell me what you mean by that.

PETER
I mean not everyone gets to be...
you know. Some people become
craftsmen. No shame in that.

Aiden takes a beat. Then looks at a Volunteer near the door.


The Volunteer switches OFF the lights. A PROJECTOR whirls up.

A white curtain rolls down behind them. Aiden and Peter


become silhouettes against it.

AIDEN
I wasn’t going to start on false
narratives until tonight but this
is such a perfect example.

Aiden stands up, back to lecture mode.

Aiden (CONT’D)
What he said, that bullshit about
some people becoming craftsmen...
that’s his false narrative. That’s
what he tells himself to make sure
his dreams stay impossible and far
away. Hurts less that way.

He turns back to Peter.


AIDEN (CONT’D)
It’s the answer you have when you
ask yourself why you gave up. Which
you do. Every. Fucking. Day.
45.

Peter doesn’t answer.


AIDEN (CONT’D)
Often, these false narratives don’t
feel false. We think we have a firm
grasp on the truth of who we are,
but that’s not true. We are all
unreliable narrators of our own
lives.
A few people around Kirsa have “a-ha” moments, they nod
meaningfully. Some even tear up in the intimate darkness.

Behind Aiden and Peter, a PHOTOGRAPH lights up the room.


It’s a younger PETER, looking straight at the camera. He has
dark STRINGS attached to his hands that go down to smaller
versions of him, controlling them like marionettes.

It’s evocative. Warm colors, dark iconography. But Peter


sinks down into his seat, embarrassed.

PETER
I thought I deleted this shit.

Aiden stands up, looks at the photograph.

AIDEN
You think this is bad?

PETER
It's just empty and edgy. It's like
My Chemical Romance in photographic
form.
(waving at the Volunteer)
Seriously, can you turn it off?

But more photographs appear behind them. All self-portraits


from the same series: Peter dosing a smaller version of
himself on fire. Peter ripping angel wings off of a smaller
version as if he’s plucking wings off of a fly.

AIDEN
These are beautiful. Even you have
to admit: these show great
potential.

PETER
Everything and everyone has
potential. Potential doesn't mean
shit if it doesn't become
something.
46.

AIDEN
Why didn't it become something?

PETER
I don't know, man. Life.

He glances at Kirsa for a split second, then looks away.

Kirsa stews in worried silence.


AIDEN
Peter. You're not dead. Whatever
you had, you still have it.

Peter can’t help but look up at his past work. Dwarfed by the
life he left behind.

Aiden turns to the crowd.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
"I wasn’t good at it," he says. "It
doesn't mean shit" he says. He
needs to be right. He needs to be
shit. Otherwise it means he's
responsible for his own hell.
(appealing to the crowd)
What do YOU say, folks? Is this guy
talented or what?

People start clapping. It starts slow but soon everyone is on


their feet and THUNDEROUS APPLAUSE is shaking the room.

Peter is shocked. Not the reaction he expected at all.


AIDEN (CONT’D)
See the truth, Peter. Hear the
truth. They’re not lying.

He leans into Peter, as if he’s sharing a secret.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
The thing is, this isn’t only about
your aliveness. Do you understand?
Peter look up at him curiously.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Are you prepared for the day you’re
going to have to tell your kid to
give up on his dreams?

And that just breaks Peter. He tears up.


47.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
You know from personal experience
that unhappy parents make unhappy
children. Do you want to do that to
your kid? Do you want him to have
the kind of life you hate?

PETER
... no.

AIDEN
Are you going to continue your C-
life, Peter? Or do you want more?

PETER
... yes.

AIDEN
Yes, what?

PETER
Yes. I want more.

Everyone starts CLAPPING like mad again. Standing up, showing


their utmost support for Peter and his transformation.
Kirsa is still. What the fuck is happening to her husband?

AIDEN
You want more, you have to take it.
(to a volunteer)
Let’s get this man a phone.

Maya walks up and takes out her phone: a black smartphone


with ornate snake decorations at its edges.

She gives it to Peter. On the phone's screen is a number,


ready to be dialed with a simple tap.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
I want you to call your work and do
what needs to be done.

PETER
What?

AIDEN
You know what you have to do.

PETER
(after a beat)
You want me to quit?
48.

Kirsa grips the sides of the chair. Her eyes boring into
Peter's but they don't look at her anymore.
They look up at Aiden.

AIDEN
I want you to wake the fuck up. I
want you to commit to your
transformation.

Aiden leans even closer. His voice drops to an intimate


whisper, reverberating through the room.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
(so fucking sincere)
You said your last word on this
earth is going to be “shit”.

Peter looks down at the phone in his hands.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Because you know you're wasting it.

Peter’s eyes are drilling into the phone.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Tell me I’m wrong. Tell me “Aiden,
you’re talking outta your asshole
and you’re making me do this.”

Peter looks up. Resolute.


PETER
No. You're not wrong.

Absolute silence as he dials the number, lifts the phone--


And Kirsa stands up.

KIRSA
Peter. Hang up.
(beat)
Peter. Hang up now!

All eyes turn to her. Including Aiden and Peter’s.

Peter hangs up at once. Snapping out of his reverie.

Aiden’s eyes mark Kirsa. They are brimming with wrath.


He turns to the Volunteer by the door. Signals.

The projector whirls to a stop. The lights come up.


49.

Aiden stands. Looking down at Kirsa.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
I'm sorry, but I had to say
something. I'm his wife.
AIDEN
(barely contained rage)
Here, you are Kirsa and he is
Peter. You are individuals. If you
cannot sit still and listen, you
have to leave the room until his
exercise is over.
KIRSA
I was only trying to help. He was
making a mistake and--

AIDEN
If you are still committed to your
transformation, leave the room and
someone will let you know when you
can come back in. If you are not,
talk to any of the volunteers for a
refund and go home.

Everyone stares at Kirsa. It's humiliating and intimidating.

Maya approaches her.

MAYA
Come with me, Kirsa.

Kirsa simmers, then seeing she has no choice, starts to leave


her row. People drag their chairs back to let her pass as if
she's radioactive. Even Aspen and Lori.

KIRSA
(powerless, to Peter)
Promise me you won't quit your job.

Peter nods weakly. She glares at him, wanting more than that.

PETER
Yeah. I promise. I won't.

Maya escorts her to the double doors in complete silence.


The Tall Volunteer unlocks the door for her. Holds it open.

Behind her, Aiden sits down across from Peter.


50.

AIDEN
Let's talk more about your
marriage, Peter. Truthfully.

Kirsa shoots one final look at them before the Tall Volunteer
escorts her out, shuts the door and locks it again.

INT. CORRIDORS
He leads her down the dark hallways.

We stay with them for an uncomfortably long time.

Kirsa gets more scared and tense with each step.

Then the Tall Volunteer stops.


INT. EMPTY ROOM

There is nothing here except for a single bulb dangling from


the ceiling, emanating blindingly bright light.
The door unlocks. The Tall Volunteer signals for Kirsa to
step in. She does, shielding her eyes.

KIRSA
How long am I going to be here?

THE TALL VOLUNTEER


(closing the door)
Until his exercise is over.

KIRSA
Wait, do you know what time it is?
He doesn't answer. Closes the door, then locks it.

Kirsa keeps shielding her eyes. Leans against a wall.

INT. EMPTY ROOM, LATER

Kirsa is pacing like a mad woman, picking at the sides of her


nails. We don't know how long it's been. She doesn't either.

In silence, the light bulb BUZZES.

She looks for a light switch on the walls, but there is none.
The light bulb BUZZES even LOUDER somehow. As if the buzzing
is coming from inside her skull.
KIRSA
Shut up. Please.
51.

She stops. Swallows. She's having trouble breathing.

She takes DEEP BREATHS but the BUZZING persists and in a few
seconds, her DEEP BREATHS quicken. Anxiety taking over.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
You can breathe. If you're
speaking, it means you can breathe.
It does little. She goes to the door, tries to open it.

It's locked. Of course. She BANGS on it.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
Is anyone out there?

No answer.

The BUZZING is still there. She looks up at the light bulb,


shielding her eyes, then takes off her jacket, wraps it
around her hand and reaches for the bulb.
She unscrews it, delicately but urgently.

It works. The room goes completely DARK and SILENT.

But her breathing quickens even more. It sounds worse,


somehow, when it's the only sound.

She tries to calm herself, taking slow, measured breaths.

Except she hears people TALKING now, in a neighboring room.


She nears the wall. The voices are muffled.

PERSON 1
This square is red.
Now a chorus of people speak up. Ritualistic:

EVERYONE
That is true.
Kirsa puts her ear onto the wall. The voices get clearer.

She recognizes them:

MAYA
Mallory, you failed to sign up a
single person for the advanced
transformation class.

EVERYONE
That is true.
52.

MAYA
What else is true?

A long, somewhat ominous beat.

VOLUNTEER #1
You smell like a disgusting old
person.

MATERNAL VOLUNTEER (MALLORY)


That is true.
VOLUNTEER #2
You couldn't sign up your kids.
Your own children hate you.

MATERNAL VOLUNTEER
(her voice breaking)
That is true.
MAYA
Even the people who love you don't
like you.

Maternal Volunteer chokes down a sob.

MAYA (CONT’D)
Is that true or false?

Maternal Volunteer doesn't answer or maybe won't answer.

A loud SLAP silences her.


MATERNAL VOLUNTEER
(giving in)
That is true. It's true.

She unravels. Breaks down, sobbing.

Kirsa steps away from the wall, seriously freaked out.


INT. EMPTY ROOM - LATER

Kirsa is sitting on the ground, hugging her knees.

The door opens. The light makes her wince.

The Tall Volunteer fills the doorframe.


He looks up at the dangling cord that used to be connected to
the light bulb, but doesn't say anything.
53.

INT. CORRIDORS - LATER


Kirsa, disheveled and spent, walks side by side with the Tall
Volunteer as if she's his prisoner.

INT. MULTIPURPOSE ROOM - LATER


The door opens and Kirsa steps in.

People are sitting. Their eyes on her.

Aiden is on the platform. A chair across him.

AIDEN
Kirsa. Come up. Sit.

She walks towards the platform, slowly, as the door BANGS


behind her, making her jump. People's eyes trail her.

She sees Peter in the crowd, sitting at his chair. He catches


her eyes. He looks drained. They all look drained.

Kirsa notices the Maternal Volunteer and Maya, leaning


against the wall at the back, standing side by side.

They both brightly smile at her.

Kirsa is so frazzled she doesn't know if she heard them


earlier or if she imagined it.

She steps onto the platform.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Sit. Please.

She does. Aiden takes a seat across her.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
We talked for a little while with
Peter and one thing became crystal
clear: He loves you.

Kirsa straightens up, surprised at how warm Aiden sounds.


KIRSA
I love him too.

She says that while looking at Peter. He smiles back.


AIDEN
How did you meet?
KIRSA
He hasn't told you?
54.

AIDEN
He did.

KIRSA
So then why?

AIDEN
I'd love to hear it from you too.
And the non-bullshit version,
please. We know what you usually
say to people. We already went down
that road with Peter. So, just give
us the truth.

Kirsa takes that in. When she starts speaking, she is


vulnerable. Maybe because of the exhaustion. Maybe because
Peter's love is the only anchor in this mad place.
KIRSA
I met him in the hallway of a
courthouse. I was there to
represent a client, and he was
waiting for his trial. He had
stolen a laptop from a coffee shop
to... well, to feed his heroin
addiction. He was trying to get
clean, then. But he wasn't when he
stole the thing. He looked like a
man who was too tired to cry and
too sad to sleep.
She looks at Peter. He's watching her. Nods her to go on.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
The owner of the laptop was a
wedding photographer. Peter went
into the computer, and saw all
these photographs of a couple who
had gotten married the day before.
They were all going to get lost
forever if he sold it to someone.
So he went back to the coffee shop
and tried to track this guy down.
That's why he got caught, because
he was trying to do the right
thing. Again, this was before he
was clean too. Imagine the will
power and selflessness that must
have taken. The simple goodness in
that. It made me fall for him. I
wanted to help him.
A long beat.
55.

AIDEN
So, in a way, you rescued him?

KIRSA
I don't know about that. But I saw
him, this wonderful person who was
lost and afraid, and he needed
stability, and love.

AIDEN
You make him sound like a cute
little puppy.
KIRSA
Excuse me?
AIDEN
You talk about Peter like a dog you
rescued from the pound.

KIRSA
Seriously?
(beat, then to Peter)
You got nothing to say about all
this?
Peter says nothing.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
(rising frustration)
Do you think I treat you like a
cute little puppy dog?

No answer from Peter.

AIDEN
He can't speak. He took a temporary
vow of silence. If he speaks, he
will be removed. Here, you are
individuals, not husband and wife--

KIRSA
(curt)
I know.
(beat)
Okay, then, is that how he said he
feels, or is that your
"professional opinion"?

AIDEN
It's what he showed me. No matter
what I said, he refused to make
that call to his boss.
(MORE)
56.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
Even though he wanted to. Because
he promised you. You have him on a
short leash.

Kirsa puts on a tight-lipped smile. Aiden is trying to get to


her, and she's not going to let him.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
You punish him to keep him there.
In his little place where he can't
get away from you.

KIRSA
And how am I punishing him?

AIDEN
He's living a C- life and you're
not letting him transform. That is
the definition of punishment.

KIRSA
The only thing I've done today is
stop him from making a huge life
decision without thinking it
through--

AIDEN
Do you always make Peter "think
things through" whenever he
disagrees with you? Does he need to
"think things through" until he
does agree with you?

Kirsa scoffs at that, not even dignifying it.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
I see. You think you know what's
best for him.

KIRSA
Maybe I do. Because I've known him
for years, you've known him for a
day. I'm his wife.

Aiden stands up, turns to the crowd. Lecturing, using Kirsa


as an example:

AIDEN
“I’ve known him for years. I’m his
wife.”
(points to Kirsa)
Kirsa’s belief that time is how we
know someone is ignorant.
57.

Anger bubbles in Kirsa by Aiden’s dismissal of her.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
We don’t talk, really talk, with
the people closest to us, do we? We
speak, but most of the time it’s
nothing authentic, nothing
truthful.
(raising his hand)
Raise your hand folks if you feel
that the people who think they know
you--your partner, your mother,
your father, your brothers and
sisters--they don’t really know
you.

Every person in the audience raises a hand.

Peter doesn't, but averts his eyes when Kirsa looks at him.

Aiden gets to his feet, towering over her.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Kirsa thinks she knows her husband.
But we listened to Peter speak. He
has made himself known to us and--
KIRSA
This is ridiculous.
(turns to Peter)
You're just going to let him talk
about us like this? Or is this how
you actually feel?

Peter's eyes are boring into the ground.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
Peter! Look at me!

AIDEN
Bark, Peter! Roll over, Peter!

Kirsa whips around to Aiden, furious.

A beat. She laughs in nervous anger. Disbelief.

KIRSA
Oh my God! I knew this would be
crazy but this is crazy.

Aiden is calm. Not reacting to her outburst.


58.

AIDEN
Let's talk about why Kirsa is
punishing Peter--

KIRSA
Punishing? I saved his life. I
helped him get clean, I helped him
get a job--
AIDEN
(to the crowd, lecturing)
"I saved his life." That's Kirsa's
false narrative. That's what she
tells herself when she is
challenged about their
relationship.
KIRSA
It's the truth!

He whips back around at her and leans into her, close.


AIDEN
(raising his voice)
No. The truth is that you're tired
of justifying your mistake.
(pointing at Peter)
You never meant to be with him, did
you? Maybe a quick fuck but have a
child with him? A life with him?

Her eyes find Peter, betrayed by his silence.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
How long have you known Peter?

Kirsa doesn't answer.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
(louder)
How long?

KIRSA
Four years.

AIDEN
How old is your son?
Kirsa just glares at Aiden.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Four.
(beat)
(MORE)
59.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
You got together, got married and
had a child in the same year. Life
rushed you along and you gave in.
You told yourself and your family
it was fate. They must have told
you it was a mistake for you to
marry a junkie but you said, no,
it's not.
(a whisper that slithers
through the room)
But now you know they were right
and you were wrong. Look at what
you're stuck with. With a child
that derailed your career! With a
husband you have to take care of!
That’s why you punish Peter!
Because you made a mistake and you
HATE yourself for it!

Her eyes flare and she PUSHES Aiden back so hard that Aiden,
a giant of a man, STUMBLES BACK.
Kirsa glares at him, shaking with primal rage.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
If you thought I was wrong, you
could have just told me I’m wrong.
Why do you think you pushed me
instead, Kirsa?
KIRSA
Fuck you. You’re insane. This whole
thing is insane!

She rushes down the stage towards Peter.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
Come on. We're leaving.

She grabs him by the arm. She pulls him up out of his chair.

He lets her. They charge down towards the doors.


Aiden watches them... Then smiles.

AIDEN
I told you folks, didn’t I? You
will resist. You will hate me, you
will want to hit me... I said it.

Across the room, Kirsa and Peter get to the doors and she
pulls at the handle... except it doesn’t turn. Locked.

Kirsa snaps at the Tall Volunteer, who is standing nearby.


60.

KIRSA
Open the doors.

The Tall Volunteer looks up at Aiden for instructions.

Aiden descends from the platform. Slowly, he walks towards


Kirsa and Peter, every step echoing in the silent room.

AIDEN
I told you that you will kick and
scream. You'll want to leave. The
truth can do that to you.

Kirsa white knuckles Peter’s hand, standing tall.


KIRSA
We’re not prisoners here. You have
to let us go.

Aiden reaches them... Walks past them, towards the Tall


Volunteer. He takes the KEY from him.

AIDEN
If any of you want to leave, this
is your chance. You will get a full
refund, no questions asked.
However, if you choose to stay,
that means you’re committing to
stay until you are truly
transformed. Is that understood?

People stir in the crowd. An OLDER MAN speaks up:


Older Man
You mean until Sunday?
Aiden wait for a somewhat ominous beat before:

AIDEN
This introductory class runs from
Friday to Sunday.

He says it with some ambiguity, but the Older Man sits down.

Kirsa’s eyes are burning into the door, every cell in her
body commanding her to get the fuck out.

KIRSA
Open the door.

Aiden turns to her and Peter. Scans them.

Then inserts the key into the door and turns it.
61.

He swings the doors wide open.


Kirsa launches out, holding Peter, but Aiden stops them.

AIDEN
Peter. One more thing, before you
go.

Aiden walks up to Peter and SLAPS him across the face, hard.
There are GASPS from the audience.

The Volunteers are not fazed at all. They've seen it before.

KIRSA
Get your hands off him!

But Aiden lunges at Peter and puts his hands at the sides of
Peter’s head, as if he’s going to wring his neck.

AIDEN
That hurt? That fucking hurt?
(Peter nods, scared)
That’s temporary pain, Peter. It’s
nothing. You won’t remember what it
felt like in ten minutes. But you
stay in this job buddy, you stay in
this life? You’ll know real fucking
pain. Slow, life-long pain that
will fucking rot whatever’s left of
your fucking soul and your kid’s.

And with that, he gently lets go of him.

KIRSA
Peter. Peter, we have to go.

But Peter starts sobbing.

Kirsa hugs him, trying to contain his unraveling.


KIRSA (CONT’D)
Peter?
(to Aiden)
You assaulted him! That’s battery!

Peter takes a deep breath, composing himself.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
Peter, come on, let’s go back home.

Peter looks up at Aiden.


62.

AIDEN
You can speak now. You are released
from your vow of silence.

Peter steels himself. Turns to Kirsa.

PETER
I can’t leave. I’m sorry.

KIRSA
(holding it together)
Peter, I know it feels hard right
now but it’s because of this place.
He’s brainwashing us and he's good
at it. Once we get home, you will
feel so much bett--

PETER
No.
(vomiting the words)
This is how I always feel. You’re
just seeing it for the first time.
Kirsa’s face falls, devastated.

Aiden pulls Peter up. Grabs his shoulders.

AIDEN
You’re so brave, Peter.

He embraces him, then escorts him back into the room.

KIRSA
Peter.

Kirsa powerlessly trails them.

AIDEN
Isn’t he so brave, folks? That took
guts, didn’t it?

People start to clap but--

KIRSA
This psycho hit him and you’re
cheering? Think for yourself, he
will hit you too! We all need to
leave!

It seems to snap some people out of their reverie but Aiden


nips it in the bud.
63.

AIDEN
They committed to staying until the
end of their process, Kirsa.

The subtext is clear: Nobody is allowed to leave.

Kirsa can sense people are unnerved by the way Aiden declared
that but not enough to stand up to him.

Aiden turns to Kirsa now, his arm still draped around Peter.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
You have not. Will you?

She looks at Peter.


PETER
You don’t have to stay, Kirs. You
got your shit together. Go home.
I’ll see you in a few days.
She knows “in a few days”, he is going to be a pod person.

KIRSA
I can't leave you here.
AIDEN
Well, then, Kirsa. Are you
committed?

She looks between Aiden and Peter.

Kirsa steels herself. Makes her choice.


KIRSA
I'm not leaving.

AIDEN
I need to hear you are committed.

A long beat. She looks straight at Peter.


KIRSA
I'm committed.

It’s clear what she means: I’m committed to you.


AIDEN
Congratulations. Now, sit your ass
back down and shut the fuck up.

Aiden tosses the key back to the Tall Volunteer.

Kirsa watches Peter wipe tears, embarrassed.


64.

The Tall Volunteer SLAMS the doors shut and LOCKS them.

INT. MULTIPURPOSE ROOM - LATER

Kirsa's skin is wan, her eyes sunken, the Paxil withdrawal


really starting to drown her in nausea. Her head is in her
hands. The ceiling feels lower, the lights murkier.
She snaps out of it when everyone START CLAPPING and get on
their feet. Aiden, on the platform, is hugging Aspen.
Kirsa doesn't get up or clap. She winces at the sound.

Aspen comes over and is embraced by Lori.

Everyone sits down.

Aiden walks to the edge of the platform.


AIDEN
You've all done great work here
today. You are alive. Isn't it
fucking great, being alive?
A THUNDEROUS APPLAUSE. Kirsa presses her palms into her ears.

Aiden waits for it to die down. Warm again. His voice softer.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
I know it wasn't easy but you
persevered. If anything, you now
know you are stronger than you
thought you were.

People around Kirsa nod meaningfully.

Aiden pulls up an empty cork board.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
At your rooms, you will find one of
these and a collection of pictures.
I want you to use them to show us
what your transformed life will
look like. You will pin them onto
your board. You will bring the
board with you to our next session
and present it to us as a totem to
your aliveness and we will unleash
your life onto you.
He stops for a long beat. Stares everyone down.
65.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Make sure you believe in it. You
might have to bleed for it.

He doesn't elaborate what he means by that and people in the


room are too drained to ask.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Go now. Get some sleep.

The Tall Volunteer UNLOCKS the doors. Swings them open.

People stand up and make their way towards their rooms.


THE CHIRPY VOLUNTEER
You know the drill, if your last
name starts with A to H, you're
with me...
It gets loud and crowded really quickly.

Kirsa catches a glimpse of Peter in the outgoing herd. He's


walking to the doors, Maya buzzing alongside him, chattering
into his ear. Pouring poison into his weakened mind.

Other volunteers descend upon the vulnerable people like


vultures. They pass by Kirsa, barely giving her a glance.

The Maternal Volunteer approaches Aspen, and Kirsa overhears:

MATERNAL VOLUNTEER
Oh, Aspen, I'm so happy for you.
What a breakthrough. I thought you
might be interested in signing up
for the next class...

Kirsa pushes past them, tracking Peter in the crowd...

But she can't find him.


INT. CORRIDORS - LATER

The silent herd of people march in creepy unison.

The lights above are dim. Kirsa searches their faces in the
darkness for Peter, one after another. No luck.

She passes by a Volunteer standing besides Lori as she fills


the Advanced Transformation class form on a clipboard.

People start streaming into their rooms.

Kirsa beelines towards Peter's room.


66.

INT. PETER'S ROOM - CONTINUOUS

Kirsa bursts in.

KIRSA
Peter--

But Peter's not there. Maya is. She's making the bed.
MAYA
Oh, I'm sorry, it's just me. We
moved Peter to another room.

KIRSA
... Why?

Maya tucks in the bedsheets.

MAYA
We had to separate you. We knew
you'd visit him. You're too close.
KIRSA
He's my husband.

MAYA
Here, he's Peter and you're Kirsa.
Two individuals focusing on your
own transformations--
Kirsa makes a sound that's half-laugh, half-scream.

KIRSA
Does he know you hid my Paxil? I
imagine he'd have trouble
"focusing" if he knew that.

MAYA
I didn't hide your Paxil, Kirsa. We
looked everywhere, you probably
forgot to bring it.

Maya turns back around to finish smoothing the blankets.

Kirsa clocks the PHONE protruding out of Maya's back pocket.

KIRSA
I need to know he's okay.

MAYA
He is okay. He is better than he
has ever been.
67.

KIRSA
How would you know? You've met him
yesterday.
MAYA
You get to know people quick here.

KIRSA
I don't know what that means. Does
it mean you tried to fuck him?

Maya stops. That bland smile still on her face.

MAYA
Kirsa, you sound a little paranoid.

KIRSA
Do I?! Maybe MY FUCKING ANTI-
ANXIETY DRUGS COULD HAVE HELPED
WITH THAT!?!

After the outburst, she's breathless for a second. She sits


onto the bed, sinks in.

Maya gingerly sits next to her.

MAYA
Arthur was the same way. He saw the
worst in people. It must be because
of what you do. You see people at
their worst. Even good people must
get nasty when they're going
through a divorce.

Kirsa looks at her. Gazing into her fucking soul.

Then she nods.


KIRSA
I'm sorry. You're right.

She embraces Maya.


Maya is surprised but accepts the hug.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
My job is basically destroying
people's lives.

That's an oddly threatening thing to say but she says it in


such a... peaceful tone. Maya can only smile back.
68.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
I should go back to my room. I have
homework.
MAYA
Sure thing. See you next session!
She's happy Kirsa is getting on with the program.

INT. CORRIDORS -

Kirsa walks towards her room. But it's different now, she
doesn't seem lost. She knows exactly what she's doing.

INT. KIRSA'S ROOM

She comes in and closes the door.

She pulls out Maya's PHONE.


She dials a number. It rings.

She sees the corkboard on the desk and a collection of


printed pictures. They're all abstract: An empty house with a
Sun shining inside it. Two naked people embracing each other
inside a flying globe of water...

The person on the other end picks up the phone.

KIRSA
Hey, it's Kirsa. I need you to do
me a favor and run me a name: Aiden
Caul. C-A-U-L. Founded an
organization called The Process.
It's an emergency.
(listens)
No, I don't. Sorry, they don't let
us know the time while we're here--
(listens)
Wait, what day is it? ...No,
that's-- but I slept. It can't be
Friday, we came here Friday
morning.

She takes a glance at the phone screen.


It is Friday Night, 11:43 PM.

She starts pacing, angered by this manipulation.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
These fuckers. They've been messing
with our sleep schedule.
(listens)
(MORE)
69.
KIRSA (CONT’D)
No. I'm fine. Did you get the name?
I want everything on him. Just say
it's for a potential client. I need
all the dirt you can get.

After a beat, the person on the other end responds.


A smile blooms on Kirsa's face.

INT. KIRSA'S ROOM - LATER

KNOCK KNOCK, deafeningly loud, and the door swings open.

It's the Chirpy Volunteer--


CHIRPY VOLUNTEER
Rise and shine!! It's time for--
He's surprised to see Kirsa is already up. Make up on,
armored in her power suit.

KIRSA
Thank you.

She picks up her cork board and strides by a somewhat puzzled


Chirpy Volunteer.

INT. CORRIDORS - LATER

People are groggily following the Volunteers down the hall.


Kirsa is wide awake, alert.

Other people, including Aspen and Lori, give her a wide


berth. They know she's the enemy.
She sees Maya scuttling from one Volunteer to the next--

MAYA
I can't find my phone. Did you see
it anywhere?

Kirsa can't help but crack a satisfied smile.


INT. MULTIPURPOSE ROOM -

She's one of the first ones here.

AIDEN (O.S.)
You look like you finally
committed.
He's on the platform, beaming down at her like a prophet.
70.

KIRSA
You're right. I am committed.

She sits down in her seat.


INT. MULTIPURPOSE ROOM - LATER

Peter is among the late stragglers. Kirsa watches him take


his seat and start slurping his green smoothie.
The Tall Volunteer SLAMS the doors and LOCKS them.

AIDEN
Alright, how is everyone feeling?

People mostly grunt back.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Like shit, huh?
(that draws some laughs)
You're meant to. It means you're
doing hard work. I know you feel
like death but trust me, you're
more alive than you've ever been.
(a beat, deliberating)
Let's start with something
different. Wake you all up.
(points to Kirsa)
Come up. Let's talk.

People are taken aback. Not sure whether to applause or not.

She raises from her seat.


AIDEN (CONT’D)
Go ahead. Give her a hand.

They obey but it's still smattering, hesitant.


She climbs the platform. Sits down across Aiden. Faces him.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
What do you have for us?
Kirsa turns her board to the audience and to Aiden.

At the center is a photograph of her, Peter and baby Sam


together. It's surrounded by the abstract photographs.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
That's your family.
71.

KIRSA
Peter and our baby Sam. I had the
photograph in my wallet.

AIDEN
You put them at the center.

KIRSA
Sorry, is that corny? My son is the
center of my universe. It becomes
that way when you have a kid.
(light banter)
Do you have children? I realized,
you know us better than most people
in our lives but we don't know
anything about you.

The audience stirs. They are definitely interested.

AIDEN
You're deflecting. This isn't about
me. This is about your aliveness.

KIRSA
This is going to be about you, a
little bit at least.

After a tense beat, she points to a picture of light shining


through the clouds onto two blurry men on a beach.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
This powerful, blinding light is
this program, the Process. The man
on the left is Peter. And this man
is you, his therapist.
(pointing)
You're the one on the right because
that one looks like a doctor.
Aiden is catching onto what she's doing.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
You are a doctor, right?

AIDEN
I never said I was.
KIRSA
I'm sorry. I was-- What we do, it
feels like a form of therapy and--

AIDEN
It's not therapy.
72.

KIRSA
You're not a therapist? I assumed.
AIDEN
Kirsa, it feels like we're talking
about everything except you.

She leans in now. A declaration of war.

KIRSA
Why don't we ever talk about you?
You take away our phones, lock us
in rooms, we even let you hit us.
But we have no idea who you are.

The crowd is eagerly waiting to see where this goes.

AIDEN
Kirsa, ever since the beginning of
this class you have been
slandering, deflecting, resisting--

KIRSA
You've done the same. And I know
why. I know who you are.

Aiden's eyes narrow.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
You're an abusive, disgraced
therapist who drove his last
patient to commit suicide.

An older woman in the audience actually GASPS.

AIDEN
If you know of that incident, you
also know I was cleared.

KIRSA
Criminally. They still took away
your license for patient abuse.
Because of your experimental
therapy "technology" which is
basically what we have been doing
here. Isn't that true, Aiden?

AIDEN
He was a troubled man.
KIRSA
Five of your ex-colleagues
testified that the Process was the
reason Warren Rich killed himself.
73.

AIDEN
They did.

She pulls out her trump card: Maya's phone. On it is the


photograph of a young man in his 20's. Thin with big eyes.
KIRSA
(going in for the kill)
Are you using the techniques you
used on Warren Rich on us?
He glances at the phone for a second but then looks away.

She turns the phone towards the crowd.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
This boy put his trust in Aiden and
he killed him. We should not make
the same mistake.

She gives the phone to someone in the front row.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
Scroll down and you can read all
about it.

People gather around the phone. Peter. Aspen. Lori.

A sense of unease overtakes the room. Volunteers look at each


other, confused about what they should do.

Aiden sits motionless for a long beat, then stands up.

He walks towards Kirsa and she steps aside, afraid of him,


but he goes past her, into the crowd.

He extends his hand to Aspen, who hands the phone over to


him. He looks down at the photo.

Kirsa thinks maybe he's going to smash the phone or something


but he turns it towards the crowd. Walks through the rows,
making sure everyone sees Warren's face.

AIDEN
When Warren was twelve, he drank an
entire bottle of Drano. And when
that didn't kill him, he jumped
from a sixth store window onto
concrete. He couldn't talk after
that, which made things worse. He
came into my care after his sixth
suicide attempt.
Suddenly, he's almost at the edge of tears.
74.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
That is not an excuse. He was in my
responsibility. I should have done
better by him.

He continues to hold the phone towards his flock.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
I was a young man, the Process was
primitive and I didn't trust
myself. When Warren pushed back
against the Process, I decided to
stop and go back to what we'd tried
before... More therapy.

He lifts his hand up.


AIDEN (CONT’D)
How many of you have been to
therapy and got nothing out of it?
Just a guy, sitting across you like
a fucking Buddha, nodding to every
thing you say but has nothing to
say back to you other than vague
aphorisms and thin platitudes?

Hands go up. Slowly but surely. He got that one right.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Warren is the reason why I expanded
the Process. Because I saw that
providing him with gentle guidance
and coping strategies was not
enough.
He pauses for a long while. Making sure everyone takes a look
at Warren's face, to see what he has lost.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
If I need to push you to
resuscitate your aliveness, I WILL.
I don't want you to cope, I want
you to live. You are free to ask
for your money back or call me a
quack after we're done with your
graduation. But until then, you are
mine.
(final)
I lost him. I will not lose you.

He gives the phone back to Maya, then declares to the crowd:


75.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Let's take a quick break. I will be
here to take all the questions you
might have.

People scuttle towards Aiden, surrounding him. Their savior.


Now even more fascinating than before.

Kirsa is left on the platform. Powerless and alone.

She sees Peter emerge from the crowd, walks towards her.
Maya is on his heels but he turns around, strict:

PETER
I want to talk to her alone.
Maya wants to argue but he's resolved. He walks up to Kirsa.

PETER (CONT’D)
Hey. You're alright?
She shakes her head. No.

INT. MULTIPURPOSE ROOM - LATER

Kirsa and Peter are huddled up in a corner.

PETER
Your Paxil? The fuck.

KIRSA
I've been trying to tell you but
they've been keeping us apart.

PETER
Well, fuck, how are you holding up?
KIRSA
Like I'm under a heavy, invisible
blanket of needles.

PETER
Jesus.

He embraces her. She takes it in. Feels validated. At home.

PETER (CONT’D)
You saw this coming.
(shaken)
You stayed because of me. I pulled
you into my shit again.

She doesn't correct him.


76.

PETER (CONT’D)
I regretted staying the moment you
decided to stay, you know.

KIRSA
Why?
He doesn't go on for the longest time.

PETER
Aiden was right about a lot of
things. My mother, you know. How I
feel about my work at the studio--

KIRSA
You don't hate your work, Peter--

PETER
I do. He was right on that. He
allowed me to come out and say it.

KIRSA
He attacked you--

PETER
Kirs, can I finish?

Kirsa backs down. Nods; go on.

PETER (CONT’D)
He was right about everything when
it came to me.
(beat)
So I was like... What else is he
right about, you know?
KIRSA
He was wrong about plenty things.

PETER
I guess. He was wrong about one
thing at least. You saved my life.
That’s the truth.
(beat)
That’s why I could never ask why we
got married so quickly. I think I
was afraid you’d tell me.

He sheds the weight. This was a long time coming.

KIRSA
I married you because I love you.
77.

PETER
Man, I was so not marriage material
back then.

KIRSA
To me, you were.
He lifts his head a little. Wanting more.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
Do you remember when you helped
Lauren move out of her place?

PETER
Lauren... Lauren my ex?

KIRSA
She got you addicted to poison. She
hurt you so bad. But you helped her
when she needed you. You got her
into the program. You never, ever
called her a bitch or a cunt, which
is so rare, trust me. You didn't
hate someone you had so much cause
to hate and most people are so
petty and terrible. Every day I see
them spend thousands of dollars
just to screw over their exes. Over
some worthless trinket they don’t
even want. But you... You don't
hurt people even when you're hurt.
I wanted to be with you, Peter. How
can I not? You're the best.

She's so sincere it almost makes him cry.


PETER
Why the rush though? Why did we get
married so quick?

KIRSA
I wanted to lock your ass down, you
idiot.
PETER
(smiling)
My ass. That’s the reason?

KIRSA
You bet your ass it is.

He laughs. She smiles, things are back to their old normal.

She takes his hand in hers. He kisses her.


78.

AIDEN
Alright, recess over. Let's work.

He signals to the Volunteers and they start folding up the


chairs, carrying them away to the corners.

Kirsa and Peter watch. With anticipation. With dread.

Aiden turns towards the two of them.


He walks towards where Peter was sitting and pulls up his
cork board.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
Peter. Is this yours?

Peter looks at Kirsa. Unsure what he should do.


Aiden walks up to them. People are starting to form a circle
around them, curious.

PETER
Why?

AIDEN
Tell us about it.

Peter again looks at Kirsa, Aiden reads his hesitation.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Fuck it, you know what it's about.
You did the work. I can tell.
(beat)
Everyone come with me. Peter, you
go over there.

He points across the room, towards the doors.

Aiden starts to walk to the other end of the room. People


follow their shepherd.

Kirsa stays with Peter, holding his hand. Aiden sees it.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Kirsa, he's not going to float away
if you let go of his hand.
Kirsa doesn't reply.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
What do you think is so wrong with
him that you don't trust him to
make his own decisions?
79.

Peter turns to Kirsa, hushed:

PETER
Go. Let's just get this over with.
KIRSA
No. He's being vindictive, he's
punishing me through you.

PETER
He's going to do that either way.

KIRSA
Peter, he's a bully. He's not going
to magically stop. We have to stand
up to him together.

Aiden has lost his patience by now:

AIDEN
(to the Volunteers)
Do it.

Six Volunteers SWARM Kirsa and Peter.

Kirsa and Peter resist but they are forcefully separated,


each dragged to the opposite ends of the room.

The crowd watches, impassive. More fascinated than anything.

The Volunteers leave Kirsa before Aiden, then flutter away


back to their positions.

She doesn't even look at Aiden, she walks by him and blends
into the crowd.

At the other end of the room, the Volunteers leave Peter near
the doors, next to the Tall Volunteer.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Peter!
Aiden walks to a wall near the crowd and hangs Peter's board
onto a nail there. Looks over it.

It's filled with a myriad of pictures to the edges. Peter


really worked hard on whatever this is.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
You did this board truthfully, I
can tell. I don't know what these
mean, but you do. This is what you
want your new life to be.
80.

He turns around and faces Peter down across the room.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
So come and get it.

PETER
What?
AIDEN
Nobody is going to just give it to
you. You need to come and get it.

Peter is not sure what's going on but starts walking


tentatively towards his board to get it over with.

Aiden turns to the crowd.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Keep him away from his board.

Now they're confused too.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
(to Peter)
See, this is not some bullshit
Oprah vision board. You need to
fucking fight for it if you want
your life to change. Your life
won't change just because you feel
bad about it. Addicts know drugs
are bad for them but it doesn't
stop them from using. You know
that, Peter. So, if you want to
start living, you need to fight.
You will only change when the pain
of staying the same becomes larger
than the pain of changing.
(to the crowd)
You are the obstacle. You are the
pain. Unless he has it in him to
break through you, then he will
never change. Do it for him.

People in the crowd exchange glances. Then a BIG MAN steps


forward, followed by two other men.

Aiden stands to the side.

Kirsa is at the back, watching. Doesn't want to engage.


Peter bumps into the three men and they push back. He tries
to side-step them but they won't let him.
Peter laughs. This is silly.
81.

PETER
Yo gang, I'll give you a dollar
each if you let me through?

AIDEN
Your jokes won't work. We all saw
you, Peter. We know who you are.

PETER
No, actually, you don't.
AIDEN
We know you're unhappy. We know
your dreams matter to you. We know
you want to start living again.

PETER
By touching a board?
AIDEN
You need to start somewhere. Go.

Peter does another attempt at crossing through the men but


it's half-assed. They push him back again with ease.

PETER
Okay guys, stop it. This is stupid.

He folds his arms over his chest, giving up.

AIDEN
Do you enjoy being pushed around?
Do you like not trying? Maybe
that's why you liked drugs. Your
life sucks but it's not because of
you, it's because of the drugs.
Perfect, easy scapegoat.
(pointing at Kirsa)
You know she controls you because
you cede control over to her.

Peter raises both hands into the air and flips Aiden off.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Did you want to come here and try
out the Process, Peter?

PETER
You kidding me? Fuck no.

AIDEN
But you're here. She made you.
82.

PETER
Yeah, that's called a compromise.
It's something grown-ups do when
they're in a relationship.

AIDEN
Compromise only works if both sides
are telling the truth. Otherwise,
it's manipulation. Would you agree?

Peter is silent. Kirsa stirs. Where is this going?

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Your wife told you Arthur, her
boss, gave her two tickets: one for
her and one for you. You had to
come, or risk being rude to her
boss. Is that correct?

PETER
Are you telling me it's not?
AIDEN
Arthur only gave her one ticket.
She bought yours. It wasn't a
compromise. It was manipulation.
She made you come here.

Peter shakes his head: no. No fucking way.


AIDEN (CONT’D)
Why don't you ask her?

Peter finds Kirsa through the crowd.


The crowd parts for a clearer look at her.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
Ask her.
KIRSA
We're not your playthings. We're
not going to--

PETER
Is what he's saying true?

KIRSA
You're playing his game, Peter.

PETER
I want to play. Answer me.
83.

KIRSA
We'll talk about it when we get
home. Okay?
Peter starts laughing in disbelief.

He starts pacing and ends up bumping against one of the men


who are keeping him from getting to the board.
PETER
Dude if you push me one more
fucking time, I swear I will cave
your face in.
(yelling at Kirsa)
What are we DOING HERE, Kirsa?

KIRSA
I'm sorry.

PETER
Why would you lie to me!? What the
fuck is wrong with you?
(better question)
What the fuck is wrong with us?
KIRSA
There's nothing wrong.

AIDEN
I'll tell you what is wrong: She
doesn't respect you.

PETER
Shut your fucking mouth, man!

But then, he looks to Kirsa for an answer. He wants one.

KIRSA
I'm sorry. You know you would've
come anyway. I didn't want to
argue. That's all.

PETER
"That's all"? That's your defense?
You're supposed to be a lawyer!
KIRSA
Peter. Think, he's trying to get
into your head--

PETER
And here I was, feeling fucked up I
made you stay!
(someone pushes him back)
(MORE)
84.
PETER (CONT’D)
What did I say before?! Do you want
me to fucking hit you?

Aiden nears Peter. The mood is tense but he's calm.

AIDEN
Remember how you told us she
doesn't trust you with women? I
think it's a clue.

He's next to him now. He has his ear.


AIDEN (CONT’D)
She's projecting. She wonders if
she made a mistake by marrying you,
so she thinks you have the same
doubts. She thinks you're always
looking for a way out.

KIRSA
That's not true at all.

Peter glances between Kirsa and Aiden. Stuck in the middle.

AIDEN
She doesn't trust you, Peter.
What's a relationship without
trust? What's a relationship
without respect--

Peter loses it, lunges towards the three men. To shut Aiden
up. To keep himself from hearing Aiden.
PETER
All I need to do is touch the
fucking board? I'll touch the
fucking board! Let me through!

They push him back. But this time, he pushes back. Hard.

AIDEN
(to the crowd)
They need help. He's waking up.

Additional men and women join in, helping to keep Peter away.
PETER
Let me THROUGH!! LET ME THROUGH!
He's in it now, elbowing his way, flailing his limbs, trying
to make a way for himself, boring a way through--

Someone in the crowd hits the ground. A young man gets


elbowed in the face and steps back, holding his nose.
85.

Peter is still pushing through sweat and tears but the crowd
is still a barrier-- Peter pushes and pushes--

AIDEN
Physical pain is temporary, Peter!
Transformation is forever!
The back of Peter's right hand gets caught in someone's belt
and the skin bleeds and the blood blends with the sweat--
AIDEN (CONT’D)
YOUR LIFE DOESN'T WORK ON ITS OWN!
YOU HAVE TO MAKE IT WORK!

Peter falls to the ground but gets up and continues pushing


with abandon-- He lets out a loud GRUNT as he lunges into a
LARGE MAN and they both fall and finally he pushes THROUGH
the crowd and he's face to face with--

Kirsa.

The only one left between the board and him.


PETER
Get out of my way.

KIRSA
Peter.

She puts up her hands, trying to calm him down.


KIRSA (CONT’D)
You said it yourself. This is
stupid. You're going to touch a
cork board because he's making you?
PETER
Move, Kirsa.

KIRSA
You can't see what's happening?
He's manipulating you. Peter!

Peter charges for the board behind Kirsa.

She steps into his path, blocking him.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
Peter--

Peter side-steps her, still going for the board--


She digs her fingers into his shirt, grabs him and--
86.

PETER
LET GO OF ME!

He pushes her away and he doesn't realize how powerful he is,


how angry he is, and he THROWS her to side--

She hits the ground with a loud SMACK.

She's stunned. On the ground. Blood running down her nose.


Suddenly, the crowd erupts into APPLAUSE.

Kirsa looks up to see Peter. He's holding his cork board. He


even smiles a bit, relieved.

And then his eyes meet hers, and slowly, it sinks in what
he's just done.
Kirsa looks away. Notices all eyes are on her. The
participants. The Volunteers. Aiden.

She climbs to her feet, her heart beating at her throat.


Peter catches up with her.

PETER (CONT’D)
Kirsa. Kirs. I'm so sorry.

She charges towards the doors. Peter on her heels.

KIRSA
(to the Tall Volunteer)
Open the doors.
TALL VOLUNTEER
You committed to staying until the
end.

Her heart is beating like it's a living thing trying to claw


out of her chest and she SCREAMS--

KIRSA
LET ME GO!!
TALL VOLUNTEER
You committed.
And Peter catches up, tries to put his hand over her shoulder
but she tears away from his grip, tries her best to be
composed as she commands the Volunteers to--

KIRSA
OPEN THE--
87.

But she can't even finish the finish the sentence. The words
are choking her, she's WHEEZING and she CAN'T STAND.
She slowly sinks into the ground, on her hands. She starts to
cry, in the midst of a full blown anxiety attack. Paralyzed.

She tries to get up but her vision begins to wobble and tilt.
Her limbs go weak, and she can only look up at the ceiling
and Peter comes into view, his face aching with concern--

PETER
Shit, she's-- She's having an
anxiety attack.

People start crowing around Kirsa. Her vision is fading away


but she can see Aiden, leaning in, his face inscrutable:

AIDEN
It's okay, Peter. She'll be okay.
(leaning down onto Kirsa)
We'll take good care of her.

Her vision goes dark, wanting to scream but unable to,


Aiden's words ringing in her head as she passes out.

FADE TO:

INT. KIRSA'S ROOM


It's a dreamy transition as Kirsa opens her eyes. She's
groggy as hell, holding her head.

Her vision comes back slowly...


She's in the cramped room she was staying in but it has been
cleared of all her possessions.
It's dark. Silent. She's in a teal hospital gown.

She climbs out of the bed but her limbs are heavy and she
stumbles towards the wall. Something is wrong.
Undeterred, she presses on. Labors her way to the door.

She's about to reach it... And it opens.

It's Maya, holding a green smoothie. She's not in her


Volunteer uniform but wearing a dark shirt and jeans.

MAYA
You're up!

KIRSA
Where... What's going on?
88.

Kirsa can hardly stand up. Maya puts the smoothie onto the
bedside table, then helps her stand.
MAYA
Let's get you back to bed.

Kirsa has no choice but to give in.


KIRSA
Where am I?
MAYA
You're in your room.

Maya fluffs Kirsa's pillow and straightens the sheets like a


nurse before putting Kirsa into the bed.

KIRSA
... Where is Peter?

MAYA
Oh, he went back home. He's taking
care of Baby Sam. I'll tell him you
woke up.

KIRSA
... He left?

Maya hands over the smoothie to Kirsa. She's famished, she


takes a sip from it. Winces, but drinks more.

MAYA
Yeah, he graduated the other day!

KIRSA
When?
MAYA
You're still in the class, Kirsa!
You know I can't tell you that.

KIRSA
What... What day is it?

Maya smiles in response.

Kirsa takes a long beat. Looks at Maya's civilian clothes.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
Is the course over?

MAYA
Not for you.
89.

KIRSA
... no?

MAYA
You committed to staying until you
transformed. You remember.

Kirsa puts the smoothie down. Shocked at the implication.

KIRSA
Maya, listen to me. I want to
leave. If you stop me, it's a clear
cut case of kidnapping and
imprisonment. In California, that's
sixteen to twenty years in prison.

MAYA
But you committed.

Her voice is serene, angelic.


KIRSA
Let me go.
She tries to get out of the bed, pushing Maya, the smoothie
drops to the ground--
MAYA
Kirsa, you need to be in bed.
KIRSA
Please. Let me go. LET ME GO!!
She tries to stand up but falls to the ground. Tries to claw
her way back up but she's powerless.
She looks at the smoothie, oozing into the floor.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
What... what... was in that...
Maya pulls Kirsa up to the bed.
MAYA
Just some natural stuff to help
your body get rid of the drugs you
put into it all these years. It
will help you regain your
equilibrium.
Kirsa can't speak now. Her body sinking into the bed.
90.

MAYA (CONT’D)
Don't worry. It's all organic and
plant based.

Kirsa's fading away, she strains her eyes to fight against


the incoming darkness but everything is fading...

Her eyelids slowly droop, in a slow motion blink--


INT. KIRSA'S ROOM

Eyes open, she's suddenly laying face-up in her bed. Groggy,


nauseated.... And possibly high on something. Everything is
tilted, wobbly, dreamy.
Kirsa holds her aching head, confused.

She tries to get out of bed--


But the door opens and Aiden walks in. Scans her face.

AIDEN
Easy. You're fine. You're safe.

KIRSA
(slurring)
What do you want from me?
AIDEN
You are here because there are no
distractions and you can meditate
better on your exercises.

KIRSA
I don't want to do any more
exercises. I want to go home.

AIDEN
You will. Soon.

He takes out a pen and grabs a note pad from the desk.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
For your next exercise, I want you
to write down what you want your
obituary to be. How you want people
to remember you.
He offers them to her. She doesn't take them.

KIRSA
Someone will know I'm missing.
91.

AIDEN
You have to face this head on.
There is no way out except through.
KIRSA
When they know I'm missing, they'll
come for you. They'll know I'm--
AIDEN
Peter already knows. Arthur already
knows. They're both supporting you.

He leaves the pen and paper onto her lap.


KIRSA
You're lying. Peter wouldn't--
AIDEN
He has transformed, Kirsa. He knows
how powerful that is and he wants
you to experience it too.

KIRSA
I don't believe you.

AIDEN
Truth doesn't change depending on
whether if you believe it or not.
KIRSA
I don't believe you! I DON'T
BELIEVE YOU!
She throws the pen and paper back at Aiden, losing control,
and tries to claw at his face-- Except she starts shaking,
anxiety gripping her again, her body betraying her at the
worst moment, her heart pounding, choking on her words....

KIRSA (CONT’D)
I don't... believe...

Aiden hushes her as he tucks her back into the bed.


AIDEN
It's okay, Kirsa. You're having
another anxiety attack. It will
pass. All this will pass.

He stays with her, hushing her, consoling her as she has her
attack and she can only look at him with absolute horror in
her eyes-- She blinks and--
92.

INT. KIRSA'S ROOM


Suddenly, she's sitting in a chair. Disoriented. Her vision
still fuzzy and stretched.
There's a notepad and a pen on the desk in front of her. The
same ones Aiden gave her earlier.
She looks past them. Defiant.

She can see the door if she cocks her head to the right.
She takes a deep breath. Very, very carefully steps up.

It's hard. She's wobbly but she's going to get out of that
fucking door one way or another--

Her legs fail her, she collapses but covers her face with her
hands as she hits the ground. She crawls on her elbows.

She's by the door now. She reaches for the door knob and
pulls herself up. It takes everything in her power just to
stay standing, her legs wobbling--
She turns the knob and pushes--

Except it doesn't turn. It's locked.


KIRSA
It wasn't locked-- NO--
She frantically tries to turn the knob but it doesn't work
and she collapses to the ground again and lets out a CRY.
The door opens. It's Maya.

MAYA
What are you doing out of bed?

KIRSA
Don't fucking touch me.
MAYA
(pulling her up)
Kirsa. You should do your exercise.

Kirsa tries to resist but Maya is stronger. Like a play


thing, Kirsa is hauled and deposited into the chair.

MAYA (CONT’D)
There you go. I'll be leaving now
and you will too if you focus on
finishing your exercises. Okay?
93.

Kirsa doesn't reply. Maya steps towards the door.

MAYA (CONT’D)
Oh and is there anything you want
me to tell Peter? Any message?
Kirsa's voice is so small.

KIRSA
... Peter?
MAYA
He's looking for a new job and Sam
is a handful, so I help him around
the house. He can't cook, can he?
She says that as if she expected Kirsa to laugh along.

KIRSA
... You've been in my house?

Maya responds in a flat affect that does not recognize the


sheer terror on Kirsa's face:
MAYA
It's beautiful! Ah, that garden...
You're very fortunate. I'd love to
have a place like that someday. I
still rent. Ugh.
KIRSA
How long... When...
MAYA
Sorry, I gotta go. But you should
work on your homework. I'll come
check on you later.

Maya leaves. Kirsa looks down onto the pen and paper.
She slowly writes out a word. She nods off--
INT. KIRSA'S ROOM - LATER

Kirsa opens her eyes again, now on her hands and knees on the
ground. She is staring down at a bucket filled with greenish
vomit. She wipes fresh puke off the corners of her mouth.
She sees Aiden sitting at the foot of the bed, reading
Kirsa's "obituary". He seems lost in thought.

She presses against the ground, balances herself.


He looks up at her. Then goes back to reading.
94.

Her legs wobble under her weight but she can stand.
She tries to appear composed. Stand up straight.

KIRSA
I tried to be brave. And open.

Aiden doesn't react.


After an agonizingly long time, he gives her back the pad.
AIDEN
I'm sorry. I don't believe it.
KIRSA
Truth doesn't change depending on
whether if you believe it or not.
AIDEN
But this isn't true, is it?
(pointing at the pad)
She was transformed... She lived
life full-on...
(back to her)
You don't mean any of this. You
need to dig deeper, Kirsa. You have
to let me get to know you.
He leaves the pad onto the desk. Turns to leave.
KIRSA
(pleading)
Aiden. You said the first day, it
doesn't work on 1 out of 100
people. Maybe I'm that person.
Maybe that's what happening.
AIDEN
I was guiding you when I said that.
I knew you would stay.
All of her composure melts away, leaving a desperate woman.
KIRSA
Maya's going to see Peter in my
house. Do you know about that?
AIDEN
She's helping with housework
through Peter's transition. He's
part of our family now.

KIRSA
You don't understand...
95.

AIDEN
You're tired, Kirsa. Maybe you
should go to bed.
KIRSA
(starting to cry)
Let me go.... Please... let me go.

Aiden looks at her, then leaves. Locks the door after him.
She starts crying, heaving, her ears RINGING--
INT. KIRSA'S ROOM

Kirsa jolts up in the bed as if waking from a nightmare.


She looks around the swirling room.

Her eyes find the pad and the paper.


They first focus on the pad... then at the pen.
Her eyelids are heavy again. Everything is out of focus...

INT. KIRSA'S ROOM - LATER


And back in focus. She's looking at a gray wall.

She slowly realizes she's sitting in the chair.


Maya is washing her hair over a metal bucket of water.
MAYA
Then we watched the new episode of
Game of Thrones, which I will not
spoil for you, so don't even ask.
But, seriously, Peter is such a
scaredy cat. There was this, no
spoilers, violent scene and he just
kept looking away. It was so funny.

Kirsa searches for something under her clothes.


MAYA (CONT’D)
(not really hearing her)
Anyway, he graduated from his
advanced seminar today. It was SO
powerful. I think he's still in the
building but only third tier
members are allowed onto this
floor, sorry.
Kirsa tilts her head all the way. Looks up at Maya.
96.

KIRSA
How many third tier members are
there?
MAYA
Not many. It's a struggle to climb
that high, let me tell you. Even
Arthur isn't there yet.

KIRSA
Good.
She has an intense look in her eyes. From Maya's POV, Kirsa's
face is upside down and it makes it especially unnerving.
MAYA
Can you put your head down, so I
can...
(pointing at the pad)
You can work on your exercise.
She grabs the notepad from the desk. She gives it to Kirsa,
looking around for something--
MAYA (CONT’D)
Huh. I can't find the pen.
KIRSA
I know where it is.
Maya turns to Kirsa, puzzled--

And Kirsa STABS her in the FACE with the PEN.


Maya lets out a PAINFUL SCREAM but Kirsa drops on her and
STABS HER AGAIN and covers her mouth--
She grabs a nearby smoothie and pours it into Maya's mouth--

Some of the green ooze overflows and mixes with the blood
running down her face--

It's a struggle until Maya's body finally goes limp.


Kirsa searches her pockets for keys-- Finds a ring of keys--
She climbs to her feet, her body is still uncooperative--

Kirsa struggles toward the door. Her eyelids droop-- But she
SLAPS herself in the face to stay away. Once. Twice. Hard.

It seems to be working. The pain is waking her up--


She leans against the walls-- Goes to the door--
97.

Tries the keys... First one doesn't fit. She tries another--
Hears Maya GRUMBLE on the ground, waking up--
Kirsa's eyes are closing-- She SLAPS herself-- Doesn't work.

She STABS HERSELF IN THE LEG with the PEN.


The pain jolts her awake. Blood runs down her leg.
She goes back to trying the second key on the door. It
doesn't work either. She lets out a long GROAN.
Behind her she can hear Maya softly CRYING in PAIN. She's
holding her face, confused.
MAYA
... Kirsa?
She shoves the next key into the door and turns it--

It works. The door opens--


She charges out-- But collapses to the ground--

INT. CORRIDORS -
She STABS HERSELF in the leg again with the pen.
Deep, powerful stabs. Pain waking her up. Keeping her alive.

She can look around now. Pulls herself up.


Maya is GROANING in the room. Kirsa knows she needs to run.

MAYA
(low)
Heeelp.
Kirsa stumbles down the dark corridor, into the maze--

MAYA (CONT’D)
(clearer)
HELP! SOMEBODY HELP!
Kirsa spots The Tall Volunteer appear at the other end of the
corridor. He sees her.

She starts RUNNING now, powered by adrenaline and pain--


She finds a door, opens it--
INT. MORE CORRIDORS -

More labyrinthine corridors.


98.

She charges down one of the corridors, the footsteps behind


her getting closer, every sound echoing in the silent halls--

THE TALL VOLUNTEER


STOP HER!

More footsteps now, her pursuers have joined up with others--


She STABS herself again, this time burying the pen deeper,
TWISTING IT, and she SCREAMS--
She goes for a door, it's locked-- Another, locked again--
One opens-- She SPRINTS DOWN--

INT. ANOTHER CORRIDOR


She's running on fumes now, and it's yet another almost
identical corridor--
She's getting nowhere. She STIFLES a SCREAM in frustration--

She starts crying softly, defeated. Her eyelids drop and she
lets them. Surrendering...

But she sees PETER standing in the darkness-- Peter-- Is it


him? Is she dreaming-- No, it is him--

She sprints towards him. Falls into his arms.


KIRSA
Peter!
(suddenly alert)
They're coming. We need to go, now.

But Peter says nothing. He just looks at her.


She is confused. Then anger bleeds through.
KIRSA (CONT’D)
You knew I was here. They said...

Peter just looks at her. Feeling for her but not speaking.
KIRSA (CONT’D)
You knew and you did nothing. They
weren't lying.

No answer. Betrayed, she steps away from him. Anger building.


KIRSA (CONT’D)
They drugged me! They imprisoned me
and you let them! You let her...!
99.

He doesn't answer.
But that's an answer in itself. Her eyes tear up with ANGER.
So much ANGER. Her entire body is shaking. ENRAGED.
KIRSA (CONT’D)
You're weak. You're worthless. I
never should have married you.
Peter steps back. His face falls.

Kirsa realizes the gravity of the words she just said. She
wants to take them back but it's too late.

FOOTSTEPS come up behind her but they are measured, not the
frantic footsteps of her pursuers.

She looks back at them, confused.


Then the doors behind Peter open up and reveal that familiar
multi-purpose room-- and all the people in it--
Everyone streams out of the room, led by Aiden. The
Volunteers in their uniforms. Aspen, Lori and the others.
AIDEN
Your vow of silence is over Peter.
Peter doesn't react. It's not like he has anything to say.

She understands now, she was tricked-- She turns to Peter--


But one look at Peter and she knows there is no coming back
from those words.
Aiden approaches her.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
You finally spoke your mind, Kirsa.
You are finally truthful. You have
made your first step towards your
transformation. You're so brave.

Aiden leads everyone to hug her in a circle.


Kirsa tries to repel them but she has no strength left and
they all take turns, hugging her and telling her--
ASPEN
Kirsa, you're so brave.
LORI
Kirsa. You're so brave.
100.

And so on... As Kirsa tries to find Peter in the crowd but


he's already walking away. Not even looking back for her.
INT. MULTIPURPOSE ROOM

Kirsa is back in her clothes and looking lucid.


She stands by the double doors. They are open.

Peter stands in front of the platform, on ground level,


encircled by the Volunteers and the participants alike.

He's reading from a paper. It's intimate.


PETER
... Peter died at the age of
eighty-nine. A celebrated
photographer, his self-portraits
have been featured in Tate Modern
and MOMA...

He looks down a bit, bashful... but the crowd cheers him on


with encouragements.
Peter manages a smile, continues.
PETER (CONT’D)
He died peacefully in his sleep,
surrounded by friends and family,
including his son Sam, who made
Peter a proud father and... the
happiest man in the world.
No Kirsa.

His voice breaks at the end and everyone hugs him to know
he's loved here. Even Aiden gets into the hug.

Kirsa limps away from the room. Her legs still aching with
hurt, her body and soul broken.

Aiden's eyes track her.


INT. CORRIDORS
She's walking away.

AIDEN (O.S.)
Kirsa.
She whips back around, faces him. They are alone.
101.

KIRSA
I will sue you. I will take down
this entire organization.

Her voice is hoarse, raw with rage.


Aiden's is tender.
AIDEN
People have said that to me
hundreds of times. People I pushed
even further than you. None of them
ever sued us. You know why?
No reaction from Kirsa.

AIDEN (CONT’D)
I gave you so many chances to
leave, Kirsa. I ordered you to
leave. But you didn't. Because you
knew, deep down, you needed to find
out who you really are. And you
did. That's what we gave you.
Nothing less, nothing more.
KIRSA
That wasn't me saying those things.
AIDEN
Who was it then?
KIRSA
You. You drugged me. You said I
hated him again and again until it
took root in my mind.

AIDEN
The Process is designed to unearth
thoughts, not create them. It
can't. I wish it could.
KIRSA
Bullshit.
AIDEN
Being in an altered state gives
people permission to say what they
are really feeling inside.

KIRSA
No, no, you did something more.
Some kind of neuro-linguistic
programming or mind control--
102.

AIDEN
Kirsa. Those things aren't real.
(comforting, simply)
I know you are in denial now, but
in time you will see that this was
a good thing.
KIRSA
A good thing?
AIDEN
Yes. You were incompatible.
(beat)
Your marriage would have slowly
collapsed over the years, ending in
a bitter divorce that would have
hurt you, Peter and your child.
This hurts too, but you ripped off
the band-aid and it will get
better. It might not feel like it
now, but you will soon realize we
saved you from long years of pain.
She can't even conjure a reply. Disgusted beyond words.

He understands this might be goodbye.


Hoping it's not, he takes out a brochure from his pocket and
extends it to her. She takes it.
AIDEN (CONT’D)
We can do much more for you. I hope
you sign up for the next course.
I'm teaching that one too.
After a long look at her, he turns around and walks away.

She rips that brochure apart. Loud enough so he has to hear.


INT. EXIT CORRIDOR - DAY

It's the corridor Peter and Kirsa entered through.


The sunlight streams onto the beige carpet.
Now tables are set up all around. Many participants are
signing up for the next class. There are long lines.
Kirsa sifts through a luggage cart for her roller bag.

She finds it. It's next to Peter's tattered backpack.


She grabs her rollerbag and puts the backpack over her
shoulders.
103.

She looks for Peter in one of the lines and finds him.
KIRSA
Peter.
He looks like he aged ten years. She offers him the backpack.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
Let's go home.

He looks at her in disbelief.


After a beat, he takes the backpack but only offers a cold:
PETER
Thanks.
KIRSA
We can still fix this. We can go to
therapy, talk through it--
PETER
We did talk. I heard you.
The line goes forward. Peter steps forward. Kirsa follows.

KIRSA
I was drugged. You know what that's
like. I wasn't myself.
Peter doesn't react. Not buying it.

The line moves up. Peter steps forward.


Kirsa changes tacks. Pleads with him as others look on.

KIRSA (CONT’D)
You can't sign up. If you're going
to find a new job, you need to save
your money, not spend it on--
PETER
It's free if you volunteer.
Kirsa glances at the Maternal Volunteer smiling goodbyes to
those who are leaving like an air hostess after a flight.
KIRSA
Remember when Aiden kicked me out
when I stopped your from calling
your boss? They put me into a room
and I heard things. These people
don't live a good life.
104.

He doesn't answer her.


KIRSA (CONT’D)
What about Sam, Peter? Have you
thought about that?
PETER
They do have a course for children
but he has to be at least seven
before I can sign him up.
(re: her horrified face)
I'm joking.
She smiles, at least a part of the old Peter is in there.
PETER (CONT’D)
We'll split custody. You're a good
mom. This isn't about that.
Her face falls. He sounds so final.

PETER (CONT’D)
Just do me a favor and never tell
him you regretted having him.
(speaking from experience)
That tends to fuck people up.

KIRSA
I'm not-- Of course I don't regret
having him, why would you say that?

He looks at her but his face is devoid of warmth. Of that


easy intimacy they used to share.

PETER
I don't know anymore.

He's not even angry. He's just lost. It speaks to the fact
that what they used to have might be now irrecoverable.

The line steps up and it's Peter's turn and he doesn't look
enthusiastic about signing up but it's clear he'd rather be
in here with these people than be out there with Kirsa.

He walks towards the desk... manned by MAYA, of all people,


wearing a few bandages on her face.

She welcomes him with a smile.


Kirsa, broken and defeated, leaves.
EXT. CONCRETE BUILDING - NIGHT

She steps out.


105.

She sits down onto a nearby ledge, trying to compose herself.


Footsteps approach her from the direction of the building--
Is it Peter, coming after her?

No. It's Maya. She extends Kirsa her phone. She takes it.
MAYA
We found this too.
It's her Paxil bottle. She grabs it.

She looks at Maya's face. The bandages.


MAYA (CONT’D)
I knew it might happen when I
signed up for it. It was worth it
to see you transform--
KIRSA
(I don't give a fuck)
You destroyed the most important
relationship in my life.

Maya takes her time. This is a more thoughtful Maya than


we've been used to seeing.
MAYA
You love him.
(no response from Kirsa)
You don't have to lose him. This
happens to many couples during the
intro course. I've seen them
survive through it.
KIRSA
... how?
MAYA
When they both do the advanced
course and hash things out.
KIRSA
My life ended back there and your
priority is to try and recruit me?
MAYA
That's not what this is about.
She stands up, looks at Kirsa. Sincere and empathetic.
106.

MAYA (CONT’D)
If you still love him... It might
work. I've seen it work.

She walks back to the building, leaving the glass doors open
for Kirsa if she wants to come back in.

Kirsa sits there. She can see Peter talking with the
volunteers, shaking their hands and embracing them, now as
equals, ready to morph into one of them...

And Kirsa, on the outside, feeling guilty, feeling like she's


abandoning him to his fate, a part of her needing him, all of
her still loving him... Perhaps thinking of saving him...

FADE TO BLACK.

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