Descriptive Essays: Describing People
Descriptive Essays: Describing People
Descriptive Essays: Describing People
In descriptive essays, you have to describe a person, place or thing. If the question states
“describe a person that helped you in the time of need”, don’t just go on about how the person
helped you, you have to describe the person and his attributes as well.
Describing people:
Add the characteristics of the person such as “tall, well built, shiny black hair, etc.”.
Remember to describe the height, age, build, face, eyes, hair and clothing of the person.
Describe the attributes and hobbies of the person and why he/she inspires/motivates you.
Example(s):
Describing places:
State where and what the place is (For example Lulu Island in Abu Dhabi).
Describe how far the place is from your house (how you got there) and why do you like
the place.
Describe the unique features of the place and what is so good about it. Describe the
weather and how it felt “hot” or “cold” when you were there.
Would you recommend the place to others (for vacations, etc.)? If yes, then why?
Example(s):
She strolled to the back of the house by herself, and she saw the most beautiful backdrop. Trees
were everywhere and sunlight was trying its best to penetrate the thick lush greenery. Right at
the very middle of the trees was a small lake. Danielle leaned against the fence and admired the
scene before her with awe.
Describing things:
Name the thing and what type of gadget/thing it is (For example your 24-carrot Rolex
WATCH ? )
Describe the appearance of the thing, remember to be precise in mentioning the color,
shape and size of the object.
Describe the features of the object and why it is so special to you.
Starting Descriptives; start by naming the person/place/thing. For person, describe if he’s
popular or not. For places, describe its location and popularity. For things, name the brand and
how the people world – wide adore it.
Ending your essay; conclude your essay by summarizing all you’ve described and
recommending (in case of place) or wishing best of luck (in case of people such as
teachers/sportsmen) or admiring the object that you hold so dear.
Key point; in descriptive, VOCABULARY is very important because you want the reader to
imagine what you’re describing! Nobody just likes to read a description of a person or place or
object. With appropriate vocabulary you have to make it an interesting read.