ENGLISH8 - Q4 - M4 - Compose Effective Paragraphs
ENGLISH8 - Q4 - M4 - Compose Effective Paragraphs
ENGLISH8 - Q4 - M4 - Compose Effective Paragraphs
English
Quarter 4 – Module 4:
Composing effective paragraphs
Subject Area – English Grade 8
Self-Learning Module (SLM)
Quarter 4 – Module 4: Composing effective paragraphs
First Edition, 2020
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Quarter 4 – Module 4:
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Skills in Understanding Philippine Culture. Please help them achieve our learning objectives.
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For the learner:
Welcome to the English Grade 8 Self-Learning Module (SLM) on composing
effective paragraphs!
The hand is one of the most symbolized part of the human body. It is often
used to depict skill, action and purpose. Through our hands we may learn, create
and accomplish. Hence, the hand in this learning resource signifies that you as a
learner is capable and empowered to successfully achieve the relevant
competencies and skills at your own pace and time. Your academic success lies in
your own hands!
This module was designed to provide you with fun and meaningful
opportunities for guided and independent learning at your own pace and time. You
will be enabled to process the contents of the learning resource while being an
active learner.
This module has the following parts and corresponding icons:
What I Need to Know This will give you an idea of the skills or
competencies you are expected to learn in
the module.
Introduction
Everyone has a story to tell and ideas to express. You see it in Facebook,
Twitter and the like where your friends rave or rant about their days, post pictures
captioned with what they would like to express or say anything in a paragraph.
Paragraph writing is an essential skill. Similarly, a well-structured paragraph is the
foundation of great writing.
In this module, you will learn how to write effective paragraphs. In the first
part, you will study its key parts. As you go along, you will understand how its
unity and coherence contribute to the effectiveness of the paragraph. You are
expected to employ those key points as you compose your own effective paragraph.
All you need to do is write right now, and let the world hear your voice through
writing.
Objectives:
At the end of this module, you should be able to:
1. identify the structure of a paragraph;
2. develop mastery in organizing details of a paragraph in terms of the
elements of unity and coherence; and
3. compose an effective paragraph.
What I Know
DETAILS:
a. I really like swimming in the waves and body surfing.
b. The beach is never crowded with people.
c. I don’t like the hot dogs sold at the cafeteria at the beach.
d. Sometimes crabs come out of their holes in the sand and play in the
water.
e. My mother and father let me stay up later in the summer.
f. Being outside in the sunshine gives me a good appetite at lunch time.
g. I like playing in the sand.
h. Sometimes we have a barbeque at the beach and I really like the
hamburgers my dad makes there.
Directions: For items 14-15, fill in the blanks with the correct topic sentence and
concluding sentence to form a paragraph. Choose your answer from
the box. Write your answer on a separate sheet of paper.
14.)______________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________Most of the traditional forms of
Asian performing art combine drama, dance and music into a kind of whole in
which it is difficult to draw a clear borderline between these art forms. Most of the
Asian traditions employ either dance-like, stylized movements, while movements
are frequently interwoven with text. In addition to this, most of the traditions are
characterized by their own specific musical styles or genres. The acting technique,
which employs dance-like body language, is usually very intricate and it demands
many years of arduous training as western ballet technique, for example does. 15.)
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Asian Traditional Theater and Dance -Searching for Knowledge- Learning Module for English- Grade 8-p.91
What’s In
“It has been suggested that the term “learning” defies precise definition because it is
put to multiple uses. Learning is used to refer to (1) the acquisition and mastery of what
is already known about something, (2) the extension and clarification of meaning of
one’s experience, or (3) an organized, intentional process of testing ideas relevant to
problems. In other words, it is used to describe a product, a process, or a function.”
–From Learning How to Learn: Applied Theory for Adults by R.M. Smith
Guide questions:
1. What are the similarities of the definitions given?
2. What are their differences?
3. What significant understanding have you learned from the definitions?
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What’s New
Activity 1: Lemonade!
Directions: The following sentences in the box are not in their proper order.
Rearrange them to make a paragraph. Then give it a good title. Start
with the sentence – It is enjoyable to make lemonade, even though it
is easy to buy it at the store. Write your answer on a separate sheet of
paper.
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What Is It
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Now, you are ready to get on the next phase of your search for knowledge as
you go along with this module.
Paragraph
“In its simplest and most basic form, a paragraph is a group of sentences about
one topic. Paragraphs are the fundamental building blocks of texts. Their purpose
is to inform, give an opinion, state facts or explain. An effective paragraph is logical
and well-structured and clear” (Courtald, 2008).
An effective paragraph starts with the topic sentence, the details which
compose of three (3) to five (5) or more sentences and then the closing sentence.
In a good paragraph, every sentence plays a role. Notice the role of each
sentence in the paragraph that follows.
TOPIC SENTENCE Historic changes in Asia brought dramatic and sometimes tragic
STATES THE MAIN IDEA events in the quest for a peaceful and independent life. Even today, in
the international relations of the states in the multi-faceted Asian
continent, we see the interaction, interlacing, and clashing of diverse
factors – historical, political, socio- economic, cultural and
psychological. We are aware of the complex problems which the Asian
people have inherited from both the distant and the recent past.
SUPPORTING DETAILS Among these are the gaps in the levels of economic development of
DEVELOP MAIN IDEA
the various countries on the continent, the independent status of
many of them in the system of the world’s capitalist economy,
territorial disputes, religious contradictions, ethnic differences,
CONCLUDING SENTENCE
among others. These complicated problems become more acute
PROVIDES A STRONG because of acts of subversion of forces hostile to the peace and
ENDING freedom of Asian Nations. As a result, instability still prevails in the
Asian region.
Changing Perspective-Learning Module for English Grade 8-p.435
a. Topic Sentence
Because it states the main idea, a topic sentence is usually more general
than the sentences that develop the idea. In the following example, the main idea is
general enough for the supporting details to support it. At the same time, the main
idea is specific enough to be developed adequately in one paragraph.
TOPIC SENTENCE
Fighting a major fire takes a tremendous strength and
endurance. The protective clothing that a fire fighter wears into
a burning building will weigh more than 20 pounds. To protect
himself from the smoke, the fire fighter will usually wear an
oxygen tank and mask. These self- contained breathing units
may weigh as much as 50 pounds. The weight of the hose and
other tools that the fire fighter carries will raise the total weight
to more than 100 pounds.
-Walter Brown/ Norman Anderson, Fires
As the above example shows, the topic sentence is general enough to cover
all the details yet specific enough to develop adequately in one paragraph.
b. Supporting Details
The following topic sentence begins a paragraph about firefighting that takes
a tremendous strength and endurance.
Readers will naturally wonder, “What were the reasons that firefighting takes a
tremendous strength and endurance?” The supporting sentences answer the
question.
When you write supporting sentences, think of the questions that readers
might ask and answer those questions.
c. Concluding Sentence
A concluding sentence recalls the main idea and adds a strong ending to a
paragraph.
1. Unity
Unity in paragraph means that the entire paragraph should focus on one
single idea. The supporting details should explain the main idea and the
concluding sentence should end the paragraph with the same idea. Thus, a unified
paragraph presents a thought, supports it with details. If it is to achieve such
focus, each succeeding sentence must show a clear connection to the topic idea.
2. Coherence
The chart below provides examples of transition words which can express each of
these types of arrangement.
Type of Examples
Arrangement
Time then before next
afterwards later eventually
now meanwhile
Physical Order to the right to the left in the distance
above below straight ahead
under beside
Order of more importantly to some degree to a lesser
Importance extent
What’s More
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Activity 5: Exercise for Unity
Directions: The topic sentence for a paragraph is given below, followed by a
number
of details. Decide which should be included in a paragraph which uses
the given topic sentence. Write the letter of your choice on a separate
sheet of paper.
TOPIC SENTENCE: On the bus next to me sat the strangest looking person I have
ever seen.
DETAILS:
a. She carried a large shopping bag loaded with fireworks and another one
with groceries.
b. She had long, red hair which stood up all over her head.
c. As she breathed in and out, she gasped for air.
d. She looked like she was over a hundred years old.
e. Her orange and green floor-length dress had long sleeves, but it was
ripped and tattered.
f. She looked like she was enjoying the ride on the bus.
g. She got on the bus at Maple Street and got off at Simcoe Hall.
h. Her cheeks were sunken and pale.
i. She had a wart on her chin and the wart was covered with hairs.
j. She stared straight ahead and did not say a word.
TOPIC SENTENCE: On the bus next to me sat the strangest looking person I have
ever seen.
DETAILS:
1. She carried a large shopping bag loaded with fireworks and another one
with groceries.
2. She had long, red hair which stood up all over her head.
3. As she breathed in and out, she gasped for air.
4. She looked like she was over a hundred years old.
5. Her orange and green floor-length dress had long sleeves, but it was
ripped and tattered.
6. Her cheeks were sunken and pale.
7. She had a wart on her chin and the wart was covered with hairs.
8. She stared straight ahead and did not say a word.
An Effective Paragraph
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all relate closely to the main idea. There are two essential elements of an
effective paragraph which are unity and coherence. In order to achieve unity, a
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What I Can Do
Welcome to my Blog!
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Post- Assessment
Directions: Write the letter of the topic sentence that is specific enough to be
covered adequately in a single paragraph.
Directions: For items 13-15, choose one of the general statements below and
write
a topic sentence that is specific enough to be developed adequately in a
single paragraph. After writing a topic sentence, write three sentences
that would support your topic sentence. Finally, write a concluding
sentence. Write your answer on a separate sheet of paper.
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Additional Activity
If there’s life, there’s hope. Since my elementary years, I’ve been dreaming of …
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A paragraph is a group of sentences about one topic. It has topic sentence, supporting details and concluding
sentence that all relate closely to the main idea. There are two essential elements of an effective paragraph
What’s More
Activity 3: Level- up the Label!
The virus that causes COVID- 19 is in the family of viruses called Coronavidae.
Antibiotics do not work against viruses. Some people who become ill with COVID-19 can also
develop a bacterial infection as a complication. In this case, antibiotics may be recommended by a
health care provider. There is currently no licensed medication to cure COVID19.
Printed Resources
Wolpert, T., The Random House Achievement Program in Composition. Mc- Graw Hill
Education.p.40
Gadd T.,How To Write A Paragraph.1997. The Solski Group. pp 5-15.
Internet Sources
Accessed: June 6, 2020
http://www.occc.edu/mschneberger/howtoparagraph.html
Accessed: June 6, 2020 https://writingcenter.unc.edu/tips-and
tools/paragraphs/paragraph-development-examples/
Accessed June 6, 2020 https://writingcenter.unc.edu/tips-and-
tools/paragraphs/paragraph-development-examples/
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