Argument Essay Draft
Argument Essay Draft
Argument Essay Draft
Musa Abuhaidar
Professor Matthew
8 December 2020
The United States uses its healthcare system more for business than for the individuals'
health. Health care should be accessible to anyone who needs it in the United States, however
there are millions without healthcare and are not receiving medical help due to that issue. Many
believe that the United States has the best healthcare, but it does not. The United States is not
ranked in the top for the best healthcare; instead most of the European countries such as Asturia,
United Kingdom, and Germany are leading with the best healthcare in the world. The United
States needs to make the change and adopt a free healthcare system to better help millions of
Adopting free healthcare can benefit the people who do not have healthcare, and make it
affordable for everyone. In the United States a 2018 survey found that 22% of Americans were
not able to pay for their deductible, and 64% reported that they were not able to seek medical
help due to the cost of the treatment (Pros & Cons - ProCon.org). Insurance providers are
sometimes unable to pay for expensive treatments just as cancer treatment, but with free
healthcare people are able to afford these types of treatments, and not worry about the deficit that
comes with the treatment. Moreover, “...Harvard researchers, “lack of health insurance is
associated with as many as 44,789 deaths per year,” which translates into a 40% increased risk of
death among the uninsured” (Pros & Cons - ProCon.org). The lack of health insurance is causing
an increase in mortality, especially in the older generations. In countries such as, Spain, France,
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Australia, Israel, and Norway, their free healthcare system has proven that their citizens are
living up to five years longer than the people in the United states (Pros & Cons - ProCon.org).
Free healthcare has provided statically numbers that people are living longer and receiving better
Free healthcare is less expensive compared to the United States healthcare system. The
United States healthcare costs are extremely high because the healthcare system is run as a
business. The United States runs their healthcare through Pharmaceutical companies, Insurance
companies, Hospitals, and even your local doctors’ office, which all these examples are
businesses (Point Turning Point). All of these companies are sustained by healthcare, they are
paid by our medical needs as individuals. With the United States healthcare being so expensive
the effect is that millions of people are left untreated, undertreated, and facing financial hardship.
As a result, “Some 37 percent of American adults went without recommended care, did not see a
doctor when sick or failed to fill prescriptions in the past year because of costs…” (Deliver Us
From Injustice). Thirty-seven percent of American adults went without recommended care
because they were not able to afford the treatment, but Britain had 4 percent and Sweden had 6
percent (Deliver Us From Injustice). These European countries have free healthcare and they are
representing that it has done much better at providing its citizens with medical care statically.
Furthermore, in America nearly a quarter of the adults were not able to pay their medical bill or
had issues paying them, but France has 13 percent (Point Turning Point). This is significantly
lower than the United States and it proves that free healthcare is less expensive.
Nonetheless, there are several that disagree with the United States adopting a free
healthcare system. Free healthcare can boost the economy in several ways. First, free healthcare
lowers the costs of the medical market. Better prices can be negotiated for cheaper medical
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products, but still get the same quality. Lowering the cost of medical products, then, “... lowers
the cost of care because services and medication tend to be lower”(17 Universal Health Care
Pros and Cons). This helps the economy by reducing the amount of money spent on medical
products. In relation to free healthcare lowering the cost of medical products and service, it will
also decrease the percentage of people filing for bankruptcy. In America, “A comprehensive
study conducted in 2018 found that 62% of bankruptcies are due to medical bills…” (Point
Turning Point). Since the medical product prices become lower it decreases the cost for medical
Moreover, with free healthcare everyone receives the same type of treatment. In the
United States there are multiple different types of insurance that limits a person to what type of
medical treatment they can receive. Receiving equal medical treatments keeps everything
balanced. No one is getting better treatment or worse treatment than the person next in line.
Adopting the same type of healthcare will make the economy much simpler and easier for money
transfers, rather than having hundreds of different types of insurance. For example, “... U.S.
doctors spend four times as much as Canadians dealing with insurance companies” (Why
America). As a result having the same healthcare will make the life of a doctor much easier
because they do not have to see what patients insurance covers. Also, having the same
healthcare, “Forces hospitals and doctors to provide the same standard of service at a low cost”
(Why America). This ensures that everyone is receiving equal treatment, which also makes the
life of a doctor easier not having to worry about using top of the line methods to cure a cold.
If the United States adopts a free healthcare system taxes will increase (Pros & Cons -
ProCon.org). Yes, taxes do increase because free healthcare comes from the taxes that each
citizen pays, but wages are increased to counteract the rise in taxes. The wait for medical
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treatments becomes long and it could be weeks until I receive treatment. Even though treatment
time increases, each person is ensured to be treated and everyone is treated equally. The adoption
of free healthcare could cause an increase in the United States debt (Pros & Cons - ProCon.org).
As stated before free healthcare comes from the tax money, so the money is being reused. The
United States is not losing money because the money is coming straight from the economy.
As a result, The United State needs to adopt a free healthcare system. There are many
positives that the United States can benefit from. Free healthcare provides everyone with
healthcare, which allows for everyone to receive medical help because there are millions in the
United States without healthcare to receive medical help. Also, there are less expensive medical
bills and products. With free healthcare everyone is receiving the same healthcare, so pricing for
medical service is the same and is usually less expensive. Lastly, free healthcare helps the
economy because medical service is less expensive and is paid for, less people become bankrupt,
which is extremely negative towards the economy. With free healthcare millions of people will
benefit from the decision and this can become the new start of a better healthcare system for the
United States.
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Work cited
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