Writing Good Reports
Writing Good Reports
Writing Good Reports
A Handbook for
Civil & Environmental Engineers
David Adams
Department of Civil & Environmental Engineering
Michigan State University
August, 2001
© Copyright 2001 by the Department of Civil & Environmental Engineering,
Michigan State University.
We think that the ideas presented here reflect a broad consensus about what constitutes good
technical writing. Please feel free to copy and use this handbook as long as you attribute its
source.
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Table of Contents
1.0 OVERVIEW.................................................................................................... 5
Overview ............................................................................................................................ 7
Overview .......................................................................................................................... 11
Overview .......................................................................................................................... 13
Overview .......................................................................................................................... 19
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1.0 Overview
"We don't actually manufacture anything. Most of the time,
the tangible products of this department [engineering] are
reports."
—a project engineer at a major electronics firm.
If you end up working the way most engineers do, writing and other
communications tasks will be a regular and important facet of your daily life. Most
surveys suggest that you will spend on average between 60-70% of your time
communicating with others. In response to concerns by alumni and employers, we
have made writing an important part of your training as engineers. We hope Writing
Better Reports will help you with that task.
That emphasis sets technical writing apart from other types of writing.
A poet, for example, may write a poem that a reader can't understand. The language
and content of the poem may be too foreign to that reader's experience. Yet it may
still be a wonderful poem. But if an engineer pens a report that a manager can't
understand, that report cannot be wonderful. In technical writing, readers must be
able to use a report. Making sure they can is the writer's task.
This guide begins with a summary of the opinions of faculty who teach in this
department—their opinions on student writing. Those opinions translate into
guidelines, which you should be able to use to improve your reports. You will also
read about the format of memos and letters, as well as the importance of planning
and revision.
Faculty express strong opinions about what they dislike in student reports. In the autumn of
1999, faculty in the Department of Civil & Environmental Engineering at MSU completed a
survey regarding problems in student writing. They listed the problems in order of importance.
A summary list of those problems reads like this:
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This list should not surprise anyone. These complaints are typical of those expressed by readers
of technical reports. Looked at closely, this list reveals paired concerns. First there is a tone of
frustration in these "peeves." Well, readers do get frustrated. Trying to make sense of complex
information is a hard task all by itself. When the writing just makes the task harder, naturally
readers get a bit annoyed (hardly the attitude you would prefer in the person reading and
evaluating your report).
Second, these complaints point toward a dislike of writing that is not clearly organized and that
does not convey precise meaning. There are things you can do to avoid such writing. In the
pages that follow the list above is recast as a set of guidelines for writing technical reports. These
guidelines don't cover every problem or situation you are likely to encounter when writing a
report. But they will help you address some concerns of the people who will read your work in
this in the CEE department.
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Overview
You can eliminate a host of writing problems by using strong, precise verbs in your writing.
Weak verbs generate wordiness, misplaced modifiers, and vagueness—none of which
contribute to effective writing. In this module we will illustrate two methods for
strengthening verbs:
§ Minimize passive voice constructions.
§ Reduce usage of “is” verbs.
Notice that the second version contains two more words. Passive voice sentences are almost
always longer. That extra length can really cloud readability over the course of a report, not
to mention wasting space. Active voice sentences tend to make relationships more directly
clear since they follow the natural Subject → Verb → Object word order that is most
common in English. You should use active voice constructions in most instances.
Use passive voice constructions sparingly, for example—when you wish to de-emphasize the
subject or provide transition across sentences:
§ The car was returned to the owner immediately. (Here the person returning the car
is understood or unimportant.)
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§ The case was dismissed for lack of evidence. (Note how the subject ends
A lack of evidence remains the most common one sentence then begins the
reason that magistrates dismiss cases brought next.)
by this office.
Example
Here is an example of how to strengthen verbs by converting passive voice to active voice.
Weak Improved
The cost reduction goals in the annual plan The accounting and engineering divisions
will not be reached by the accounting and will not reach the cost reduction goals in the
engineering divisions. (18 words). annual plan. (16 words).
It has been found that fewer pipes We found that oxidation degraded
were degraded by oxidation than had fewer pipes than expected. (9 words)
been expected. (15 words) or
Testing revealed that oxidation degraded
fewer pipes than expected. (9words.)
Skilled writers can employ a passive voice sentence to maintain the flow of ideas
across two sentences. For example:
But you should avoid passive voice in most instances. Below you can see how it's
possible to write the same sentence in different voice and point-of-view.
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is are
was were
am be
These verbs are not incorrect, but when you rely on them too heavily, you can clutter your
prose with wordy, ineffective constructions. Normally you might find a perfectly good verb
hiding in the sentence as some other part of speech. For example:
If you need a rule of thumb, limit your use of “is” verbs to around one-third of your
sentences.
Example
Here is an example of how to strengthen verbs by choosing alternatives to common “is”
constructions.
There is a lack of will by these officials to These officials lack the will to resolve the
resolve the issues. (13 words). issues. (9 words).
This project is made up of three segments. This project consists of three segments.
(8 words). (6 words)
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Data from the last seven quarters are revealing a Data from the last seven quarters reveal a steady
steady drop in occupancy rates in our three drop in occupancy rates in our three largest
largest hotels. Allowing for differences in size, the hotels. Allowing for differences in size, the
overall occupancy rate in these properties is down overall occupancy rate in these properties fell
37% during the period. Morgan Mountain is 37% during the period.
down 32%; Coast Hill Chalet is down 39%; and
the Riverwalk Palace is down 35%. This trend is Morgan Coast Hill Riverwalk
unacceptable. Interim financial reports are Mountain Chalet Palace
already well below targets. The reasons for the
drop are not clear from the current level of -32% -39% -35%.
analysis. Senior management feels that it is
necessary to discover the reasons for the falling This trend cannot continue. Interim financial
occupancy rate within the next two months. A reports are already well below targets. The
meeting to address this issue is to be convened at current level of analysis fails to explain the drop.
corporate headquarters on January 18 at 8:00am. Senior management expects to know the reasons
It is expected that all management personnel will for the falling occupancy rate within the next two
be present. months. All management personnel will attend a
(130 words) meeting to address this issue at corporate
headquarters on January 18 at 8:00am.
(103 words)
Notice how a list can reduce the number of words. Notice that two “is” verbs remain. That
fact is just to remind you that you can use them; just be economical about that use.
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Overview
For some reason we grow up with the impression that more is better when it comes to
writing. In too many instances we get reports that we ought to weigh instead of read, as if
the writers expected us to pay them by the pound. In an age when we are already deluged
with information, we can’t afford to wade through such grain silos of reports looking for a
kernel of meaning. Don’t complicate the reader’s job by writing inflated sentences.
We’ve already seen how using strong verbs can eliminate extra words. In this module we’ll
examine another strategy for writing lean sentences.
• Trim inflated phrases.
Wordy Concise
For the purpose of for
Along the lines of like
In the event that if
Make an announcement announce
Subsequent to after
For the reason that because
With regard to about, concerning
In view of the fact that since, because
It is interesting to note that note that
We are of the opinion that we believe
Affects an improvement improves
In a situation in which when
Makes an adjustment in adjusts
Are in receipt of received
Has made a report on reported
Together with with
Being in possession of possessing
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Example
Here is an example of how to strengthen sentences by eliminating unnecessary words.
Wordy Improved
It is often the assumption that due to the fact People assume that our widely dispersed
that our operations may be viewed as being operations make it difficult to schedule face-
widely dispersed, that connections in real- to-face meetings. (14 words).
time for the purpose of meetings might be
deemed too difficult. (34 words).
In the opinion of supervisors, too many Supervisors contend that current regulations
times field engineers are required, by virtue too often require field engineers to spend
of current regulations, to undertake time writing reports that do not contribute
reporting of activities that make insufficient to the primary mission of this division.
contributions to what is the primary mission (26 words).
of this division.
(35 words).
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Overview
When you describe complex issues or events, make sure you write sentences in which related
words appear together. Readers easily get lost when they have to rearrange material that you
should have arranged properly in the first place. Sometimes you even provide a little comedy
when you don’t mean to. Here’s an example:
Flying 20 feet higher than the trees, the The warden noticed the osprey flying 20 feet
warden noticed the osprey. higher than the trees.
Developing and launching, without a labor Without a labor agreement, developing and
agreement, this new line of products will be launching this new line of products will be
difficult and risky. difficult and risky.
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Judy and Mary were both at the meeting, Judy and Mary were both at the meeting,
but, as usual, she left early. but, as usual, Judy left early.
The report showed a continuing drop in The report showed a continuing drop in
thefts and assaults in January and February. thefts and assaults in January and February.
These suggest a new trend. These results suggest a new trend.
For example:
What is "high frequency?" It could mean too wide a range of frequencies. Give
values wherever possible, then characterize them.
The pipes failed more than 40% of the time during peak demand; by our
standards that is a high rate of failure.
Don't call something a "program" in one sentence, then refer to it as a "system" three
sentences later. Readers need consistent usage. Novice report writers who have been
taught to vary their vocabulary in essay writing sometimes misunderstand that
advice, and by trying to constantly substitute words, end up confusing readers.
Here's an example:
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Probably not a great sentence to begin with, but a tendency is not a mechanism.
Perhaps the most important factor in using words carefully is to consider the possible
interpretations of what you've said. Will your readers interpret your words correctly?
Or might readers misunderstand you?
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Such parallelism accomplishes two things: 1) it helps your reader understand the grouping
and ordering you employed when organizing your document; 2) it lets you see how clearly
and precisely you have organized your information.
Headings. Think of headings as elements of your Table of Contents (or outline). Use
parallel headings at equivalent levels in your reports.
Lists. Although lists may fall within a sentence, they often appear as discrete parts of a
document. The simplest way to keep list items parallel is to remember what type of
information they represent and begin each list item with the same part of speech.
They considered the following issues: They considered the following issues:
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Sentences. The most common instance of faulty parallelism in sentences occurs in shifted
constructions: phrases or clauses that have different structures.
1) The report was both accurate 1) The report was both accurate
and readable and it was easy to read.
3) First splice the wires and then 3) First splice the wires and then
wrap the exposed metal. the exposed metal must be wrapped.
The passage below contains two serious instances of faulty parallelism. Read on and you’ll
see how to correct them.
Although voluminous data exist from various attempts to solve the thermal stratification
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problem, this study compares the experimental results of Matulevicius to computed results.
The Matulevicius data were chosen because they were taken in a highly controlled laboratory
environment, an effort to create a truly two-dimensional flow, and the Modified Rayleigh
number. This Rayleigh number represents a condition of limited turbulence, a flow regime
in which many space-based applications are included. Such applications make this regime a
logical starting point in the checkout process.
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Although voluminous data exist from various attempts to solve the thermal stratification
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problem, this study compares the experimental results of Matulevicius to computed results.
The Matulevicius data were chosen because they were taken in a highly controlled laboratory
environment, an effort to create a truly two-dimensional flow, and the Modified Rayleigh
number. This Rayleigh number represents a condition of limited turbulence, a flow regime in
which many space-based applications are included. Such applications make this regime a
logical starting point in the checkout process.
Although voluminous data exist from various attempts to solve the thermal stratification
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problem, this study compares the experimental results of Matulevicius to computed results.
The Matulevicius data were chosen for three reasons: 1) they emerged in a highly controlled
laboratory environment; 2) they represented an effort to create a truly two-dimensional flow; 3)
they employed the modified Rayleigh number. This Rayleigh number represents a condition of
limited turbulence, a flow regime that includes many space-based applications. Such
applications make this regime a logical starting point in the checkout process.
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Overview
All good writing has a visual structure. We might forget this fact unless we stare at a page of
badly designed writing. Such a design is anything that tends to bury information—whether
it’s filling the page with words until it resembles a bowl of black ink, or jamming
information together with no obvious visual pattern. A list is one way to give structure to
information on a page.
The visual structure you see here is called “chunking,” and this structure helps readers to
recognize and remember bits of related information.
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Example
Here are two versions of a passage. The first ignores the guidelines; the second follows them.
You must consider the following when you You must consider the following when you
design your proposal. design your proposal.
• Do the current facilities support the • Do the current facilities support the
size and weight of the new equipment? size and weight of the new
• The cost must be within the capital equipment?
budget projected over the next five years. • Will the cost be within the capital
• Will current staff be sufficient to budget projected over the next five
manage the project? years?
• Identify construction, zoning, and • Will current staff be sufficient to
environmental regulations that may manage the project?
come into play during this project. • Which construction, zoning, and
environmental regulations may come
into play during this project?
Notice the lack of parallel structure and hanging indents in the list on the left.
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This next passage displays forecast and echo statements within a report.
Use these devices to help readers manage and absorb what can become highly
complex clusters of information.
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Still, it's easy to say "Go forth and revise!" Revising and editing can be complex tasks. Where do
you begin? You need to develop a system that works for you. These suggestions may help.
• Allow some time to pass before you revise. You need to gain some distance
from your words before you can see them with a cold eye. Even 2 or 3 hours
away from the work will help, but try and allow yourself a day.
• Have someone read your report to you out loud. At work you will seldom write
in isolation, so get in the habit of using another person as an editor. Just having
someone read your report aloud to you will help you hear problems you couldn't see.
Ask this person to tell you what was important in the report.
• Look at each page. Can you see hierarchy in the design of the information or does it look
like a blob of ink?
• Revise according to a plan. Use your planning sheet (See Chapter 6.0) as a guide to
revisions. Measure what you’ve written against your plan, particularly your goals
and uncertainties.
• Edit in stages. Don't try to catch every type of problem in one pass. For example,
edit for organization and detail first. Those sorts of changes will govern the
other editing you may do. If, for example, you cut a paragraph, it would have
been a waste to check it for grammar first.
• Allocate your energy. If pressed for time, spend your energy revising the most
crucial parts of the report (those parts that readers weigh most heavily–Conclusions,
Results & Discussion, for example).
• Know your tendencies. If you constantly receive comments on the same writing issues, be
aware that you need to pay special attention to correcting those problems. Bug someone
until you understand how to correct those problems.
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3.1 Overview
Letters and memos are different forms of the same thing, but you would normally send a
letter to someone outside your organization and use a memo for readers within your
organization. Much of the day-to-day communication in an organization occurs in one of
these two forms. Both letters and memos have conventional formats.
In this module you will observe examples of each format, and review some basic tips for
writing effective letters and memos.
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Heading
Date
We enclose our proposal written in response to your RFP 21.07 for the System Management
Software for your constructed wetlands leachate pumping system. As you know, we have designed
successful systems that are now in place at three existing sites in Ohio.
Letter
Body
Please note the additional modules for leachate sampling in our system design. These modules will
place the system in compliance with the new regulations of the Ohio EPA for monitoring leachate
components at new and existing landfills.
We look forward to the opportunity of working with you on this project. Please do not hesitate to
contact me personally if you have any questions about the proposal.
Sincerely,
Closing
Toby Smithson
President Typed Signature
TS:blg
Enclosure: Proposal Steno/Enclosure Marks
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Date: 8/31/2001
Last week (8/10) I completed the quarterly safety inspection of buildings A2 and A3. This inspection
revealed serious safety problems in Building A3, problems that not only put technicians at risk, but
also may expose the company to significant penalties from state and federal agencies. My complete
report is attached, but this memo highlights the most significant issues under each safety category.
Hazardous Materials
Subheadings § I found approximately 5kg of beryllium powder left in open containers in Room 25.
and lists help Employees in this room were not wearing protective clothing and were exposed to
give structure undetermined amounts of this powder. No Material Safety Data Sheet (MSDS) exists
to the memo. for this material, and there is no documentation as to its lot number.
§ Technicians in the irradiation lab (Room 23) have been storing various isotopes in
unlocked cabinets, and it appears that three inventory sheets for these isotopes have
either disappeared or were not completed in the first place.
Safety Equipment
§ Six of the 25 fire extinguishers in Building A3 were of the wrong class for their location,
and two of the six were three months beyond their expiration date.
The attached report details these problems, as well as a series of less critical transgressions. The
potential consequences for Black Bear could be dire. We corrected the problems for the moment
although we still have not located the missing inventory sheets. I recommend that we institute
weekly inspections, as well as a review of our current safety training for new employees. Let’s discuss
my report at Friday’s meeting.
Enclosure
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§ Make the subject line or title specific and have it indicate why the subject is
important. For example:
Weak Specific
Re: Safety Inspection Re: Serious Violations of Safety Regulations—
Building A3
Weak Specific
As you know, it is my duty to Last week (8/10) I completed the quarterly
perform quarterly safety inspections safety inspection of buildings A2 and A3. This
of all buildings in this complex. inspection revealed serious safety problems in
Building A3, problems which not only put
technicians at risk, but also may expose the
company to significant penalties from state and
federal agencies.
• Use first and second person pronouns (I, we, you) to establish a conversational tone.
• In letters or memo headings, use the reader’s correct title.
• Put yourself in the reader’s place. What will he or she expect to find in your letter or
memo?
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You may have noticed that most of the concerns expressed by faculty in the Overview
to this book touch upon questions of organization. In terms of the writing you do as
engineers, you might define organizing as consisting of two tasks:
That sounds simple enough, but in practice it can be your most difficult writing
problem. You can solve that problem by making sure your writing includes
Summary, Superstructure, and Subordination.
You can't group and order, or incorporate the features above, unless you can develop
organizing principles. In other words, on what basis do you put things in groups?
How do you decide in which order to present things? You may get some help from
set formats (say, in a lab report), but much of the work is left to you.
You may group and order items by time, as with steps in a procedure. The steps may
occur in an order, and you may group them in stages that make whole process easier
to comprehend.
You may group and order items by criteria, or standards by which you judge a
procedure or product. Such criteria might include cost, specifications, speed, etc.
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You may group and order things by cause and effect (this gets tricky) such as when attributing
turbulent flow to a mixture of physical features on an apparatus. The relative causes may be quite
complex, and that's when organization becomes crucial to understanding.
Many groupings and orders are possible. The best organization is that which makes it
easiest for readers to locate, absorb, and use the information you have gathered.
For example, suppose you were asked to examine different valves that might be used
in a high-pressure pipeline and put the results in a report for a manager who must
decide which to select. You could simply discuss the investigation of each valve in
turn. Or you might organize the report around the features examined (such as price,
technical specifications, reliability, etc.) and then discuss each valve under those
categories. The diagrams below illustrate the two patterns.
Pattern 1 Pattern 2
Valve A. Price
--price --Valve A
--specifications --Valve B
--reliability --Valve C
Valve B. Specifications
--price --Valve A
--specifications --Valve B
--reliability --Valve C
Valve C. Reliability
--price --Valve A
--specifications --Valve B
--reliability --Valve C
Pattern 1 will have the reader jumping back and forth. In this case Pattern 2 might
be the better choice because it puts comparative information together, where it is
easier to find and easier to use. Of course, you can always combine patterns and put the
information in a table. That choice might be best of all.
The overall patterns above display the superstructure of the report. The second level
groups reflect subordination (price, apparently, most important here), and in a
complex report you may have many levels of subordination. This is a brief example,
but it leads to a final point about organization.
A report shouldn't look like a bowl of black ink. Remember, some things you write are
more important than others. The visual and textual components of your report
should clearly reveal its organization.
Group and order. That's the heart of organizing. And use summary to help readers
absorb information. Organize in-depth, from the level of the whole report down to
each paragraph.
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The technique used to measure volumetric heat capacity and thermal conductivity consists of
three major steps: 1) a heat pulse is applied to one end of the rod; 2) thermistors, connected
to both the rod and the ADC of the Apple IIe, monitor changes in voltage at two points
along the rod; 3) the voltage readings are converted to temperature readings, which are then
used to plot the change in temperature as a function of time for both points along the rod.
Fitting the model of the heat flow equation to this plot makes it possible to determine the
values of the constants s (volumetric heat capacity) and k (thermal conductivity).
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The technique used to measure volumetric heat capacity and thermal conductivity consists of
three major steps:
Fitting the model of the heat flow equation to this plot makes it possible to determine the
values of the constants s (volumetric heat capacity) and k (thermal conductivity).
Both passages use a forecast statement and a list. But notice how breaking the list
from the text makes the information easier to read. Multiply such effects over the
length of a report and you might understand why readers prefer reports with the
structure of the second version. Here are some other suggestions that might help.
The table that follows offers some advice on designing displays of data.
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Other possibilities:
Labels & Titles Let the title tell the story of the display, and
make sure every element is labeled. Identify all
units of measurement. Your audience should
understand the display without having to refer
elsewhere.
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By planning your report ahead of time, you will be able to use information gathered during the
task or experiment to give you a head start on writing the report.
Many writers find that using a simple device called a planning sheet helps them get a head start
on producing a good report. And time spent in planning usually reduces time spent later (and
more painfully) on revision. Planning sheets can serve as a sort of blueprint for the final report.
They appear in a variety of structures and different levels of detail. Here is a sample planning
sheet for you to consider.
—Abraham Lincoln
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Situation:
Communication Uncertainties: (What you need to know to achieve your goals minus
what you do know):
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Category/Title Description
General Texts
• Paul V. Anderson. Technical Both these books are comprehensive texts that cover a wide
Communication: A Reader- range of reports and situations. Both books offer pragmatic
th
Centered Approach. 4 Ed. 1999. advice on how to plan and create documents in workplace
Harcourt. settings.
• Rebecca E. Burnett. Technical
th
Communication. 5 Ed. 2001.
Harcourt.
Specialized Topics
• Lundgren and McMakin. Risk Risk Communication, written by two acknowledged leaders in
nd
Communication. 2 Ed. 1998. the field, is a handbook for communicating environmental,
Battelle Press. safety, and health risks. It’s a must for environmental
engineers. Procedure Writing presents a comprehensive set of
• Wieringa, Moore & Barnes.
nd research-based guidelines for constructing clear and effective
Procedure Writing. 2 Ed. 1998.
procedures. Molly Joss has written a wonderful companion to
Battelle Press.
Looking Good in Print. If you want to design killer
• Molly W. Joss. Looking Good in presentations, this book should be on your shelf.
rd
Presentations. 3 Ed. 1998.
Coriolus.
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References:
Paul Anderson. Technical Writing: A Reader-Centered
Approach. 4thd Ed. 1999. Harcourt Brace.
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Advice Table on Technical Memos
Use a direct, personal tone. Remember that memos are written by people Prefer a direct style:
for people (normally within the same
organization). Address your reader directly in We remain available to answer any questions you have
a level of formality that is appropriate to your about these findings.
working relationship and to the purpose of
Avoid stiff, institutional prose:
the memo.
It is stated that investigators in the Engineering Applications
Division will continue to remain available to render
assistance in the understanding of the above listed findings.
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Advice Explanation Example
Respond to your reader’s needs. Consider the factors that create your reader’s Rephrase the request as a statement to open your memo:
Interest in your memo and address those
factors in the way you organize your memo: • Here is the data you requested from the thermal diffusion
experiments. The results should be useful to the Composite
• Has the reader asked for specific Materials Group and should answer their questions
information? regarding the degree of uncertainty in our measurements.
• Is the reader aware of the subject and its The attached graph illustrates the time vs. temperature
importance? readings for three composite rods.
• Why does the reader need this
information?
• What level of detail or evidence will the
reader require to accept the content of
the memo?
Use the subject line (Re:) to your Let the subject line focus the reader’s Prefer a subject line such as:
advantage. attention by highlighting the critical ideas in
your memo. Re: Serious Violations of Safety Regulations—Building A3
Get to the point. Except for “bad news” situations, begin your Prefer a direct, specific openeing:
memo with the most important point you
wish to make. We believe the equations used in our procedures are valid for
use in the design your propose (followed by a list of reasons why
along with any limitations or qualifiers to your statement).
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