Raws Week 1
Raws Week 1
Raws Week 1
PATTERNS OF
DEVELOPMENT IN
WRITING ACROSS
DISCIPLINES
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
• Writing is one basic and important skill one should have in order to
communicate, whether it be for the humanities, sciences or business. Under
these various disciplines or fields where writing is required, we need to
determine which writing pattern is best to use.
• Composing paragraphs, essays or short answers for your homework are some
of the instances when you have to write. When you write, you need to know
your reason. Why do you need to write? What are you writing for? This sounds
a little difficult in the beginning. That is why it is necessary that you organize
your ideas first. How do you organize your ideas? Arranging your thoughts will
depend on the purpose you have for writing, hence, there are patterns of
written texts across disciplines.
PATTERNS OF DEVELOPMENT IN WRITING
Examples:
It was December 26, 2011. It was cold and rainy. The streets
were wet, and there were not many places to park with all the flooded
areas. It was the day I had to help my grandmother move out of her house
on the 28th . The house was being sold on the first of the year, and she was
moving into our house. Walking into the house was sad. It was empty. All
her belongings were in boxes heading to storage. She had two bags. Her
whole life was in those bags. I could see how sad she looked. I picked up
her bags, and I slowly helped her away from National Avenue for the last
time. She looked so sad. I hit the expressway and headed north. This was
the hardest thing I have ever done. I could not wait for this day to be over. I
just did not know what to say to her. She was so sad but never spoke.
IMPROVED
When the grave finished, the wasp return to the tarantula to complete her
ghastly enterprise. First, she feels it all over once more with her antennae. Then, her
behavior becomes more aggressive. She bends her abdomen, protruding her sting,
and searches for the soft membrane at the point where the spider’s legs join its
body - the only spot where she can penetrate the horny skeleton. From time to
time, as the exasperated spider slowly shifts ground, the wasp turns on her back
and slides with the aid of her wings, trying to get under the tarantula for a shot at
the vital shot. During all these maneuvering, which can last for several minutes, the
tarantula makes no move to save itself. Finally, the wasp corners it against some
obstruction and grasps one of its legs in her powerful jaws. Now, at last the
harassed spider tries a desperate but vain defense. The two contestants roll over
and over on the ground. It is a terrifying sight and the outcome is always the same.
- Alexpander Petrunkevitch, The Spider and the Wasp
STEPS IN WRITING A NARRATIVE
PARAGRAPH
The subway is an assault on your senses. You walk down the steep, smelly
steps on the subway platform. On the far right wall, a broken clock show that
the time is four-thirty. You wonder how long it has been broken. A mother and
her crying child are standing to your left. She is trying to clean dried chocolate
syrup off the young child’s face. Farther to the left, two old men are arguing
about the most recent tax increase. You hear a little noise and see some
paper trash roll by like a soccer ball. The most interesting thing you see while
you are waiting for your subway train is a poster. It reads “Come to Jamaica.”
Deep blue skies, a lone palm tree, and sapphire waters call you to this exotic
faraway place.
VARIETIES OF DESCRIPTION
1. Objective Description
- looks into factual and scientific characteristics of what is being
described as objectively as possible
- the witer stays away from emotional impressions or responses
and instead, describes the scene as it is.
2. Subjective Description
- a sort of description that the author would normally use to
“paint a picture” of how he sees a character, or how he wants
the reader to see a character
- also used in a literary discourse when there is a stereotyped
image that can be attributed to a person, place, or an event.
EXAMPLE
- explains not just what something means or is, but also what
something does, what something is used for, what something
looks like,.
• The trouble is, though, that if, for any reason, the body has
more cholesterol than it needs, there is a tendency to get rid of
it by storing it on the inner surface of the blood vessels-
especially the coronary vessels that feed the heart. This is
“atherosclerosis”
• In an argumentative or persuasive objective in a written
text, terms should be defined so readers will have a
clear understanding of the idea being presented to them.
It is easy for readers to be persuaded or be moved to
take on a position on something they understand.
TYPES OF DEFINITION
1. Use Synonyms
- This is applied by using words having
similar meanings with the word being
define.
Example:
amiable = friendly
2. Use Comparison
- Define an unfamiliar term by using a technical term which is
more familiar with readers.
Example:
use window instead of casement
3. Describe the term defined by providing details about the
subject.
Example:
An airbag is an inflatable cushion which protects the
passengers in a vehicle during collision.
4. Use examples by illustrating a word’s meaning.
Example:
A cold drink.
EXTENDED DEFINITION
For example, "There are three main problems associated with living
across from a high school: noise, trash, and traffic congestion." In
classification, we develop criteria for the items in a subcategory based
on relationships between the items.
• Classification sometimes refers to a ranking system by which things
or persons are evaluated.