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26 July 2024

• 06:2606:26, 26 July 2024 diff hist −1 m Olympic Games Original: "Although a wreath made from the sacred olive tree in the precinct of Zeus was the only official prize at the Olympic games, winners' fame brought them economic wealth, too, in the form of subsidies from their home towns and wealthy sponsors." Change: Capitalized "Games" and changed "home towns" to "hometowns" for consistency. Tag: Visual edit

20 July 2024

• 18:1618:16, 20 July 2024 diff hist −1 m Paul Kagame Original: "In the 1980s, Kagame fought in Yoweri Museveni's rebel army, becoming a senior Ugandan army officer after many military victories led Museveni to the Ugandan presidency." Correction: Remove the comma after "army". Corrected: "...Kagame fought in Yoweri Museveni's rebel army becoming a senior Ugandan army officer..." Tag: Visual edit
• 18:1418:14, 20 July 2024 diff hist −1 m Game of Thrones Original: "...Jon Snow (Kit Harington), who, along with his scholarly friend, Samwell Tarly (John Bradley), serve in the Night's Watch under Lord Commander Jeor Mormont (James Cosmo)." Correction: Remove the comma after "friend". Corrected: "...along with his scholarly friend Samwell Tarly (John Bradley), serve in the Night's Watch..." To adhere to proper punction rules. Tag: Visual edit

9 July 2024

• 16:0616:06, 9 July 2024 diff hist −389 User:JojoeditsWiki No edit summary current Tag: Visual edit

7 July 2024

• 21:1721:17, 7 July 2024 diff hist −1 m Bronny James Description: The punctuation change is the correction of the possessive form of "James" from "James'" to "James’s" for grammatical accuracy. This follows the standard English grammar rule for possessives of singular nouns ending in "s." Tag: Visual edit

4 July 2024

• 19:4619:46, 4 July 2024 diff hist +6 m Lander Institute No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 19:4619:46, 4 July 2024 diff hist +16 m Coffee production in Rwanda No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 19:4419:44, 4 July 2024 diff hist +6 m Epigenetic regulation of transposable elements in the plant kingdom No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 19:4419:44, 4 July 2024 diff hist +6 m MLS Innovation No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 19:3419:34, 4 July 2024 diff hist 0 Barker and Stonehouse add a comma for better flow current Tag: Visual edit
• 19:1819:18, 4 July 2024 diff hist +6 m Business Intelligence Markup Language No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 19:1519:15, 4 July 2024 diff hist −1 m BeeGFS Replaced "Whilst" with "While" for standard American English usage. Tag: Visual edit
• 19:1419:14, 4 July 2024 diff hist +1 m Ericaamerica Added a comma after "references" and changed the placement of the comma after "elegance" for clarity. current Tag: Visual edit
• 19:1419:14, 4 July 2024 diff hist +1 m Osemozotan Corrected the misspelling of "show" to "shown. Tag: Visual edit
• 19:1319:13, 4 July 2024 diff hist 0 m A.T. Charlie Johnson Description: Removed a comma before the title to correctly punctuate the sentence Tag: Visual edit

3 July 2024

• 21:1621:16, 3 July 2024 diff hist +6 m Lyra2 No edit summary Tags: Manual revert Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 21:1621:16, 3 July 2024 diff hist −6 m Lyra2 No edit summary Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 21:1021:10, 3 July 2024 diff hist +1 m Miarmy added a period at the end of the sentence current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 21:0821:08, 3 July 2024 diff hist −1 m Society for Music Analysis Removed the comma after “England” to adhere to standard English conventions. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 21:0721:07, 3 July 2024 diff hist −1 m Women & Politics Institute Removed the comma after “American University” to adhere to standard English conventions. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 20:4820:48, 3 July 2024 diff hist 0 m Puigpunyent changed the position of a comma a comma to separate a clause correctly. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 20:4620:46, 3 July 2024 diff hist −1 m Launch Housing Removed the unnecessary comma for correct punctuation Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 20:4520:45, 3 July 2024 diff hist +1 m World Tavern Poker added a comma for clarity Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 20:4120:41, 3 July 2024 diff hist +1 m RAD51 Changed to: "RAD51 family members are homologous to the bacterial RecA, Archaeal RadA, and yeast Rad51." Description: Added an Oxford comma for clarity in the list. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

2 July 2024

• 05:1305:13, 2 July 2024 diff hist +1 m Toronto "Toronto is an international centre of business, finance, arts, sports, and culture... Added Oxford comma for clarity. Tag: Visual edit
• 05:0705:07, 2 July 2024 diff hist +1 m Scary Mommy Added a comma after "current events" in the first sentence. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

1 July 2024

• 17:2317:23, 1 July 2024 diff hist +1 m Nutter Fort, West Virginia Added a comma after "As of the 2010 census". Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

30 June 2024

• 22:0122:01, 30 June 2024 diff hist −1 m ChatGPT Sentence : ChatGPT was launched on November 30, 2022 by San Francisco–based OpenAI: the creator of the initial GPT series of large language models; DALL·E 2, a diffusion model used to generate images; and Whisper, a speech transcription model. Removed the comma after 2022 to streamline the sentence and replaced the parentheses with a colon to better introduce the list of items, improving readability and clarity. Tag: Visual edit
• 21:5221:52, 30 June 2024 diff hist −6 m Superhero film Changed "In the years 1941 to 1943, Max Fleischer Studios produced a series of animated short subjects based on the Superman comic." to "During 1941 to 1943, Max Fleischer Studios produced a series of animated short subjects based on the Superman comic." Explanation: Replaced "In the years" with "During" for a more concise and direct expression of the time period during which the films were produced. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 21:4921:49, 30 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Ann Makosinski Changed "Makosinski attended the University of British Columbia from 2015 to 2018 where she studied English Literature." to "Makosinski attended the University of British Columbia from 2015 to 2018, where she studied English Literature." by adding a comma after "2018" to clarify the clause separation. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 21:4721:47, 30 June 2024 diff hist 0 m MindSphere Changed “IoT as a service” to “IoT-as-a-service” to clarify the compound noun. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 21:4421:44, 30 June 2024 diff hist +4 m Deezle Changed "lead" to "led" to correct the verb form. Capitalized "Grammy" for proper noun. Replaced "&" with "and" for consistency. Corrected "single 'Gimme That' & 'Graffiti,'" to "singles 'Gimme That' and 'Graffiti,'". Removed unnecessary colon before "Right to Return". Removed comma before "Jonathan Demme" for correct punctuation Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 21:3821:38, 30 June 2024 diff hist −1 m Silvery salamander Changed "takes" to "take" to correct subject-verb agreement, and added a comma before "and the blue-spotted salamander (A. laterale)" for consistency in listing. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 21:3621:36, 30 June 2024 diff hist 0 m C. D. Darlington Replaced the comma with a semicolon in "its role in inheritance; and thus its importance to evolution" to separate the clauses more effectively. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 21:3421:34, 30 June 2024 diff hist +1 m October 2016 Bhopal encounter Added a comma in "a leaked, low-quality video" to correctly separate the adjectives. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

29 June 2024

• 14:5914:59, 29 June 2024 diff hist +4 m YouTube Changed "YouTube launched" to "YouTube was launched" to maintain consistency and proper tense in the sentence. Tag: Visual edit
• 14:5514:55, 29 June 2024 diff hist 0 m UEFA Euro 2024 Replaced the comma after Championship (in the first paragraph) with a semicolon to properly separate the two independent clauses, improving clarity and flow. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 14:5014:50, 29 June 2024 diff hist 0 m Nicole Joseph-Chin Replaced the comma with a semicolon to properly separate the two independent clauses, improving clarity. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 00:0500:05, 29 June 2024 diff hist +242 User talk:Mdann52 →A goat for you!: new WikiLove message Tag: wikilove
• 00:0300:03, 29 June 2024 diff hist +498 User talk:JojoeditsWiki →Welcome!: Reply current Tag: Reply

28 June 2024

• 23:5323:53, 28 June 2024 diff hist −1 m Bank Islam Malaysia Removed the comma after "population" in the sentence "Bank Islam was established primarily to assist the financial needs of the country's Muslim population and extended its services to the broader population" for grammatical correctness. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 07:5507:55, 28 June 2024 diff hist +293 User talk:JojoeditsWiki →June 2024: Reply Tag: Reply

27 June 2024

• 21:4621:46, 27 June 2024 diff hist +49 User:JojoeditsWiki No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 21:4521:45, 27 June 2024 diff hist +7 User:JojoeditsWiki No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 21:4521:45, 27 June 2024 diff hist +332 User:JojoeditsWiki No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 21:4121:41, 27 June 2024 diff hist +319 User talk:JojoeditsWiki →Edits reverted: Reply Tag: Reply
• 21:3821:38, 27 June 2024 diff hist +392 User talk:JojoeditsWiki →June 2024: Reply Tag: Reply
• 20:4520:45, 27 June 2024 diff hist +6 m Google No edit summary Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 20:4220:42, 27 June 2024 diff hist +6 m Atmosphere of Earth No edit summary Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 20:4020:40, 27 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Kings Gap Environmental Education Center No edit summary Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit