Talk:Calculating Infinity/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 22:28, 22 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Review coming tomorrow... Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:28, 22 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

is the debut full-length studio album → "full-length" is irrelevant here, so please remove it
Link "critics" to Music criticism
aggressive nature of the album's music → aggressive nature of the album's material
album's music and the complex arrangements and instrumental work present → album's material, as well as the complexity of the arranngement and instrumental work
back catalogue → leave out "back"
as a whole, crediting its influence on the genres and the work of several subsequent → as a whole. They also credited its influence on the genres and on the work of several subsequent
The lead further needs to include information on the album's genres and its lyrical topics

Done all except the last one, still working on that dannymusiceditor ^oops 16:02, 29 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

Image needs ALT text

Wish I knew what those were. dannymusiceditor ^oops 16:03, 29 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@DannyMusicEditor: Add the "alt" parameter in the infobox (|alt=) and describe what you can see in the cover artwork. Cartoon network freak (talk) 05:17, 30 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Forgot to update this, it's done now. dannymusiceditor ^oops 13:23, 30 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Recording and production

added that "In the studio → added: "In the studio
Weinman commented that "We weren't → Weinman commented: "We weren't

Done Andre666 (talk) 18:50, 29 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Promotion and release

releasing the vinyl edition → releasing a vinyl edition
on the band's second EP → on the band's second extended play (EP)
toured in support of Mr. Bungle → oured in support of American group Mr. Bungle (for further context)
an invitation from the band's frontman → an invitation from their frontman (to avoid word repetition)
as well as appearing → as well as appeared

Done Andre666 (talk) 18:51, 29 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Composition and lyrics

Link "Commentators" to Music criticism
the band's guitarist Ben Weinman → the band's guitarist Weinman + unlink him
of the music on the album → of the album's material
than the band's first two EPs → than the band's first two extended plays
which she had noted featured → which she had noted featuring
concluding that "Most of the lyrics → concluding that "most of the lyrics
recalled to Decibel that "Since so much → recalled to Decibel: "Since so much

Done Andre666 (talk) 18:52, 29 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Reception and legacy

and highlighting "43% → and highlighting the tracks "43%
Unlink "Decibel" Not done Why? Andre666 (talk) 18:54, 29 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Andre666: You've linked "Decibel" before and things shouldn't be overlinked. Cartoon network freak (talk) 05:18, 30 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Done Sorry, I didn't realise overlinking was counted between sections, but that makes sense :) Andre666 (talk) 08:29, 30 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Decibel magazine's Kevin Stewart-Panko claimed that "Regardless → Decibel magazine's Kevin Stewart-Panko wrote: "Regardless
noted that "This noisy album → noted that "this noisy album
later listed the album third on their list of "25 Best → replace "the album" with "the record" for avoiding word repetition

Done except the point above. Andre666 (talk) 18:54, 29 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Track listing

Track 11 "Variations on a Cocktail Dress" ends at 2:16, the track then includes 3 minutes of silence, followed by a hidden track for the remaining 2:39. The hidden track was created by editing audio clips from the 1959 film The Diary of Anne Frank → the given source is not reliable in any way, so you will have to shorten the sentence to: "Track 11, "Variations on a Cocktail Dress", contains almost four minutes of silence, followed by samples from the 1959 film The Diary of Anne Frank", as cited here. The link is a review which could be useful for a "Reception and legacy" expansion

The reference you've given here is equally unreliable as it is user-submitted. dannymusiceditor ^oops 15:06, 31 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Other stuff

Copy-violation

22.5% is a very good score!

References

As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
No dead links! Good job!

Outcome

On hold for 7 days. This was a very interesting reading, and there are just some minor things to be fixed before this can be promoted to GA. Btw, I listened to "Variations on a Cocktail Dress" on YouTube to convince myself that it contained Anne Frank samples. After a few seconds, my ears were bleeding, but I don't know if that's a good or a bad thing... In any case, I wish you good luck with editing! Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:51, 23 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

If I had known you were going to do that, I'd have saved you the trouble. Someone who generally likes Inna and Alex Stan probably shouldn't be listening to anything labeled grindcore.

I'm not even a huge fan of the album, I just saw a quality article on an album that's a landmark in mathcore, so I thought I'd help. In any case, I'll get to this after Deftones is finished, which should be shortly (like today). dannymusiceditor ^oops 15:42, 23 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hell, I haven't even listened to the album and I wrote the article! I just thought it was important, and I have an interest in music history, so it worked out well. Thanks for the GA nomination and review, guys. Andre666 (talk) 18:55, 29 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Cartoon network freak, I believe we're finished here unless Andre or I missed anything. dannymusiceditor ^oops 15:03, 31 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@DannyMusicEditor: @Andre666: It was great working with you two, and you can now enjoy your new GA!

Maybe some of you has time to look over one of my GANs? Just ignore if you don't. Best of regards and congrats; Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:18, 31 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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