Эссе по англ
Эссе по англ
Эссе по англ
Жиганов
Английский язык
ЕДИНЫЙ ГОСУДАРСТВЕННЫЙ ЭКЗАМЕН
тык готовых э с с
Учебное пособие
для общеобразовательных организаций
и школ с углублённым изучением
английского языка
2-е издание
Москва
«Просвещение»
2020
УДК 373:811.111+811.111(075.3) 12+
ББК 81.432.1я72.6
М71
Мишин А. В.
М71 Английский язык. Единый государственный экзамен. Сбор
ник готовых эссе : учеб. пособие для общеобразоват. органи
заций и шк. с углубл. изучением англ. яз. / А. В. Мишин,
Н. В. Воложанина, В. В. Жиганов. — 2-е изд. — М. : Просве
щение, 2020. — (Готовимся к экзамену). — 87 с. : ил. — ISBN
978-5-09-072900-0.
Сборник готовых эссе для учащихся 10— 11 классов предназначен для эф
фективной подготовки к Единому государственному экзамену. Пособие содер
жит рекомендации по подготовке и написанию сочинения, пошаговый разбор
первого сочинения, образцы сочинений-рассуждений, варианты работ выпуск
ников разных лет. В сборнике также представлены дополнительные схемы
оценивания задания 40. Раздел «Приложение» содержит основные фразы и
клише в дополнение к критериям оценивания. Пособие может быть использо
вано как для работы в классе, так и для самостоятельной подготовки дома.
УДК 373:811.111+811.111(075.3)
ББК 81.432.1я72.6
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Целью данного пособия является оказание помощи учащимся и
учителям при работе над сложным разделом ЕГЭ по английскому язы
ку — выполнением задания 40 (сочинение с элементами рассуждения
«Моё мнение»). В пособии представлены все основные рекомендации
по подготовке и написанию сочинения, пошагово разбирается первое
сочинение, далее предлагаются темы и образцы сочинений-рассужде
ний. Образцы сочинений не являются эталонами, это варианты работ
выпускников разных лет, выполненные под руководством авторов дан
ного пособия. В приложении можно найти репертуар основных фраз и
клише, а также критерии оценивания данного задания в максималь
ные 14 баллов.
С уважением,
Мишин Андрей Валентинович,
заслуженный учитель России, председатель предметной
региональной комиссии ЕГЭ по английскому языку
Раздел 4. Письмо
Данный раздел на экзамене представлен двумя письменными продук
тивными заданиями:
• написание личного письма другу по переписке в неформальном
(informal) стиле объёмом 100-140 слов. Максимальный балл за успеш
ное выполнение данного задания - 6, рекомендуемое время -
15-20 минут;
• написание сочинения в нейтральном стиле (развёрнутое письменное
высказывание «Моё мнение») по предложенной теме и плану, который
состоит из пяти основных пунктов. Максимальный балл за успешное
выполнение задания 40 - 14, рекомендуемое время - 50-80 минут.
Задание 40
Comment on one of the following statements.
40.1. The school uniform is useless.
40.2. It is right to read about historic places before sightseeing.
What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200—250 words.
Use the following plan:
• make an introduction (state the problem paraphrasing the given
statement);
• express your personal opinion and give 2 -3 reasons for your opinion;
• express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing
opinion;
• explain why you do not agree with the opposing opinion;
• make a conclusion restating your position.
Уточним, что вам предстоит сделать:
• с 2019 года вам предстоит осуществить выбор одной из двух тем
сочинения в задании 40. Важно прочитать обе темы, постараться
определиться за несколько минут, какая из тем вам ближе, понят
нее; по какой из двух тем у вас набирается больше аргументов и
контраргументов (можно поработать с черновиком, но ВАЖНО не
затягивать процесс выбора - помните, что у вас в среднем есть 60
минут на выполнение этого сложного задания уровня В2);
• составить письменное высказывание «Моё мнение» в соответствии
с коммуникативной задачей, поставленной в задании, объёмом
200-250 слов. В данном случае у выпускника (мы остановили свой
выбор на 40.1) запрашивают его мнение о том, бесполезна (нужна)
ли школьная форма;
• высказать своё мнение и мнение оппонента полно, точно, развёрну
то и привести аргументы и контраргументы, доказательства, при
меры;
• сделать вывод в конце сочинения;
• последовательно и логически правильно строить своё высказывание
«Моё мнение»;
• использовать соответствующие средства логической связи;
• употребить языковые средства оформления ниеьменного высказы
вания точно и правильно.
Контраргумент(ы)
для 4 -гоабзад а
сочинения
• explain why you do
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opposing opinion
These days the school uniform seems to be a thing of the past. How
ever, at some schools it is still part and parcel. Some people believe that
school uniform should be compulsory for students to wear while others
think it is absolutely ineffective and should be done away with. Person
ally, I share the former point of view.
• express an opposing opinion and give 1—2 reasons for this op
posing opinion
On the other hand, there is a large number of people who believe
that the school uniform is not completely useful. They also claim that
it limits students’ self-expression. Children are not able to be creative
with what they wear every day. That’ s why a lot of students hate the
school uniform.
All in all, I do believe that the school uniform can prove to be really
beneficial. Of course, it has some drawbacks but the pros outweigh the
cons. Eventually, nothing can hide your personality.
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ГЛА В А 2
Постановка проблемы
• 1-й абзац сочинения — постановка проблемы. Внимательно прочи
тайте формулировку предложенной темы.
Например, “Boys should learn to cook” . Определим основное на
правление темы. Это, во-первых, COOKING и, во-вторых, FORMING
THE BOYS’ CHARACTER. Значит, в постановке проблемы вам следует
подчеркнуть важность данных аспектов и наметить две противобор
ствующие точки зрения, которые должны столкнуться в 1-м абзаце.
В противном случае писать сочинение не имеет никакого смысла.
Итак, проблема в том, стоит или не стоит учиться готовить — should
learn or should not learn.
Неплохо начать эссе с вводной фразы, отражающей тематику эссе.
Обязанности По дому
В итоге получаем:
• Итак, допустим, что ваш выбор - 1-й вариант {Boys should learn
to cook)y так как, на ваш взгляд, эта точка зрения более аргумен-
тирована. Теперь подберём логические связки к каждому аргументу
и выстроим 2-й абзац нашего сочинения. •
• 2-й абзац следует начать с предложения, которое определяет выбор
вашей точки зрения (если вы не выразили её в 1-м абзаце вместе
с постановкой проблемы). Помните, не стоит делить абзац, в про
тивном случае вы получите больше абзацев, чем заявлено в плане
письменного ответа.
Personally, I believe that cooking food is a must for all boys. Firstly,
every young man should know how to cook breakfast for himself
without asking his mother or grandmother for help. It makes him
independent and mature. Secondly, if a boy is interested in cooking,
he will get his friends’ respect. He could set a good example to his
peers. Thirdly, if the boy does his best in cooking, he can choose the
idea of becoming a cook or a chef in his future career. This job has
become really prestigious, for men in particular.
If you ask me, I would definitely agree with the latter point of view.
To start with, it is a waste of time and a chance to spoil the dish.
Boys do not know how to do it properly. Girls can do it much better.
Besides, cooking as a boy’s hobby sounds ridiculous. His classmates
will laugh at him. Last but not least, when he marries, his wife will do
the cooking for him. Boys must earn money and support the family.
Furthermore, ....
Lastly, ...
Personally, I believe that cooking food is a must for all boys. First
ly, every young man should know how to cook breakfast for himself
without asking his mother or grandmother for help. It makes him in
dependent and mature. Secondly, if a boy is interested in cooking, he
will get his friends’ respect. He could set a good example to his peers.
Thirdly, if the boy does his best in cooking, he can choose the idea of
becoming a cook or a chef in his future career. This job has become
really prestigious, for men in particular.
On the other hand, we can find an opposing opinion on this issue.
To start with, it is a waste of time and a chance to spoil the dish.
Boys do not know how to do it properly. Girls can do it much better.
Besides, cooking as a boy’ s hobby sounds ridiculous. His classmates
will laugh at him.
If you ask me, I would definitely agree with the latter point of view.
To start with, it is a waste of time and a chance to spoil the dish.
Boys do not know how to do it properly. Girls can do it much better.
Besides, cooking as a boy’ s hobby sounds ridiculous. His classmates
will laugh at him. Last but not least, when he marries, his wife will
do the cooking for him. Boys must earn money and support the family.
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Работаем над следующей темой: “Household chores make families
quarrel” . Продолжите начатые абзацы.
• 1-й вариант:
Moreover, ...
On the other hand, some people think that household chores make
families even friendlier. When members of the family share household
duties, it unites them as they all try to achieve the same aim — to
make their flat clean, comfortable and cosy. Also, ...
• 2-й вариант:
I am absolutely sure that the work about the house is not the reason
for a quarrel. Firstly, when members of the family share household
duties, it unites them as they all try to achieve the same aim - to
make their flat clean, comfortable and cosy. Secondly, ...
Thirdly, ...
There are still people who support another idea. When parents make
their children clean their rooms, do the washing-up or shopping, they
often hear rude answers back. Or they do not keep their promise to
do it later which causes an argument. Besides, ...
• 2-й вариант:
Контраргументы,
точка зрения выражающие
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Boys should learn to Boys should not
cook learn to cook
Every young man should It is a waste of Boys must be per
know how to cook break time and a chance sistent to learn to
fast for himself without to spoil the dish. cook. Simple recipes
asking his mother or Boys do not know from cookery books
grandmother for help. how to do it prop* or the Internet and
It makes him indepen erly. Girls can do good mother’ s ad
dent and mature. it much better. vice can help.
If a boy is interested Cooking as a boy’ s The classmates will
in cooking, he will get hobby sounds ri envy the boy who
his friends’ respect. He diculous. His class can cook. He will
could set a good exam mates will laugh at encourage them to
ple to his peers. him. start cooking.
If the boy does his When he marries, Boys as future hus
best in cooking, he can his wife will do the bands must share
choose the idea of be cooking for him. cooking with their
coming a cook or a chef Boys must earn wives who are very
in his future career. money and support busy with children.
This job has become re the family. Besides, children al
ally prestigious, for men ways appreciate what
in particular. fathers do.
• И 2-й вариант:
Personally, I believe that cooking food is a must for all boys. First
ly, every young man should know how to cook breakfast for himself
without asking his mother or grandmother for help. It makes him
independent and mature. Secondly, if a boy is interested in cooking,
he will get his friends’ respect. He could set a good example to his
peers. Thirdly, if the boy does his best in cooking, he can choose the
idea of becoming a cook or a chef in his future career. This job has
become really prestigious, for men in particular.
If you ask me, I would definitely agree with the latter point of
view. To start with, it is a waste of time and a chance to spoil the
dish. Boys do not know how to do it properly. Girls can do it much
better. Besides, cooking as a boy’s hobby sounds ridiculous. His class
mates will laugh at him. Last but not least, when he gets married, his
wife will do the cooking for him. Boys must earn money and support
the family.
I disagree here. Mothers are always pleased to cook for their sons to
show their love and care. And sons should leave the cooking for them.
Moreover, boys should choose the job that will bring them moral satis
faction and good money. You cannot become the second Jamie Oliver.
• И ко 2-му варианту:
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families even friendlier. When members of the family share household
duties, it unites them as they all try to achieve the same aim - to
make their flat clean, comfortable and cosy. Also, ...
I disagree with this point of view. Children usually argue who will
clean the room and it sometimes causes fighting and calling names.
Besides, ...
• 2-й вариант:
I am absolutely sure that the work about the house is not the reason
for a quarrel. Firstly, when members of the family share household
duties, it unites them as they all try to achieve the same aim - to
make their flat clean, comfortable and cosy. Secondly, ...
Thirdly,
There are still people who support another idea. When parents make
their children clean their rooms, do the washing-up or shopping, they
often hear rude answers back. Or they do not keep their promise to
do it later which causes an argument. Besides, ...
I do not believe they are right. It is not difficult for the parents
to explain their kids that they belong to the family and their help can
be very important for everybody. Also, ...
• И наконец, самостоятельная работа по теме “ Shopping is the best
relaxation” . Заполните таблицу по образцу.
• Рассмотрим 1-й вариант:
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• 2-й вариант:
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Тема “Boys should learn to cook” .
• Начинаем с завершающей фразы. Она подведёт сочинение к логи
ческому завершению. Вот примеры таких фраз:
— То sum up, ...
— In conclusion, ...
— To conclude, ...
— To put it in a nutshell, ...
— All things considered, ...
— All in all, ...
• Вывод по 1"му варианту может звучать следующим образом:
Personally, I believe that cook To sum it all up, I still hold the
ing food is a must for all boys. view that boys should do their
Firstly, every young man should best in cooking. Life is long and
know how to cook breakfast for this ability can be useful.
himself without asking his moth
er or grandmother for help. It
makes him independent and ma
ture. Secondly, if a boy is in
terested in cooking, he will get
his friends’ respect. He could
set a good example to his peers.
Thirdly, if the boy does his best
in cooking, he can choose the idea
of becoming a cook or a chef in
his future career. This job has be
come really prestigious, for men
in particular.
• 2-й вариант:
• 2-й вариант:
• 2-й вариант:
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А теперь посмотрим на итоги нашей работы — ГОТОВЫЕ
СОЧИНЕНИЯ:
• 2-й вариант:
I disagree here. Mothers are always pleased to cook for their sons to
show their love and care. And sons should leave the cooking for them.
Moreover, boys should choose the job that will bring them moral satis
faction and good money. You cannot become the second Jamie Oliver.
In conclusion, I guess it is not a must for boys to spend a lot of
their precious time in the kitchen if it is not their cup of tea. Either
somebody or fast food can help them not to die of hunger.
I would rather say that quarrels often occur while doing housework.
When parents make their children clean their rooms, do the washing-
up or shopping, they often hear rude answers back. Or they do not
keep their promise to do it later which causes an argument. ...
• 2-й вариант:
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Тема “ Shopping is the best relaxation” .
• 1-й вариант:
• 2-й вариант:
Работа над сочинением завершена. Теперь необходимо проверить
количество слов, которое должно войти в диапазон 200-250. Воз
можны отклонения + / - 10%. Если слов меньше 180, такая работа
не подлежит проверке и будет оценена в 0 баллов. В данном случае
ситуацию можно исправить, дав дополнительную аргументацию в
каких-нибудь абзацах. Для этого после каждого абзаца во время
работы над сочинением целесообразно оставлять пробел, чтобы в
случае необходимости им воспользоваться. Это поможет решить
проблему не переписывая текст.
Если вы написали более 275 слов, необходимо уменьшить объём ва
шего сочинения путём зачёркивания лишних слов. Целесообразно
в первую очередь удалить предложения, которые не представляют
большой ценности в аргументации точек зрения. Возможно удале
ние отдельных слов й словосочетаний. Но чтобы такого не произо
шло, нужно следить за объёмом в процессе выполнения работы:
подсчитывать слова в каждом абзаце.
Важна регулярная тренировка в написании сочинений. Это можно
делать на уроке под руководством учителя или дома.
Важно следить за временем. На сочинение отводится 60 минут плюс
сэкономленные минуты от заданий по чтению, лексике и грамма-
ГЛ А В А 3
СОВЕТЫ и РЕКОМЕНДАЦИИ:
• Внимательно прочитайте обе темы сочинения, остановите свой
выбор на одной из двух тем.
• Ещё раз просмотрите предложенный план к заданию 40.
• Начните работу с черновиком (в данном пособии авторы после
каждой темы предложили свой вариант черновика).
• Попытайтесь полностью или частично перестроить (перифра
зировать) предложенную тему задания 40.
• Продумайте противоположное суждение для первого абзаца
общего плана (while/whereas other people do not agree ...), что
бы показать проблемность и дискуссионность заявленной темы
сочинения.
• В таблицу черновика занесите ваши идеи по данной теме: под
берите аргументы за и против. Необязательно в черновике в
данную таблицу записывать целые предложения, задача - на
бросать ключевые идеи вашего сочинения.
• ПОМНИТЕ про четвёртый пуню* плана - вы должны напи
сать, почему вы не разделяете противоположную точку зрения,
и аргументировать её.
• Продумайте заключение вашего сочинения, которое чётко и
ясно ещё раз подтвердит ваше мнение (restating your point of
view).
• Написав в бланке ответов № 2 первый абзац, внимательно
перечитайте его. Таким образом поступайте с каждой после
дующей частью сочинения.
• Обязательно по завершении работы на чистовике (в бланке
ответов № 2) перечитайте всё сочинение полностью и внима
тельно просчитайте количество слов.
• Всегда помните, что вам рекомендовано 60 минут на выполне
ние данного задания.
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1. Young people prefer Internet communication to personal contacts.
What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
3. When 16 years old, teenagers should not ask their parents for pocket
money.
What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
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What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
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13. Many years ago young people were more responsible and mature.
What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
14. Some people think that a supermarket is a better place for shopping
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3. When 16 years old, teenagers should not ask their parents for
pocket money.
What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
These days there is a popular opinion that 16-year-olds should not ask
their parents for pocket money. However, some people doubt it saying
teenagers ought to turn to parents when they need money. Personally,
I agree with the latter point of view.
First of all, I believe that if youngsters ask their parents for cash,
they learn how to be economical because they have to spend their parents’
money wisely or else teens may not get it another time. I think it is
important to learn how not to spend too much, not to waste money from
the young age. Moreover, young people simply do not have their own
money as they do not have jobs, so teenagers turn to their parents.
16-year-olds are not experienced enough to get a greatly paid job, so
asking parents appears to be the only way of getting cash.
On the other hand, some people claim that young people, when they
are 16 years old, should not always ask their parents for allowance.
Teenagers have to work in order to get pocket money.
Nevertheless, I do not agree with this point of view. To my mind, if
16-year-olds work, they will not have time for getting their education,
so I believe it is quite normal to ask parents for a small amount of
money each week.
All in all, I think that when you are 16 years old, you have no other
way of getting pocket money but ask your parents for it. Youngsters
do not need too much, so it is not a disaster if they ask for some cash.
4. It’s a waste of time to read the same book more than once.
What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
These days there is a popular opinion that reading the same book more
than once is a waste of time. However, some people doubt it saying it
is better to reread interesting books. Personally, I agree with the latter
point of view for a number of reasons.
First of all, I firmly believe that as time flies, people forget many
important and interesting things from those books they have once read.
It is really beneficial to read them again in order to refresh this or that
plot in your memory. Moreover, some books are just meant to be read
many times throughout one’ s life. They can include eternal truths that
are much valued and may be understood in a different way at each stage
of your long life.
On the other hand, some people have another point of view and claim
that there is no use rereading books as the first impressions of them are
usually the rightest ones.
Nevertheless, I do not agree with this opinion. I think that as we
grow, our beliefs change, so when we read the same books again, we
may notice precious things that were hidden from us before.
All in all, I consider that all books that grab your attention should
be read more than once so as to be better understood and perceived.
10. Some people think that it is better to study six days a week at
school.
What is your opinion? Do you agree with this, statement?
These days many people would agree that it is more appropriate for
pupils to study six days a week. Others argue we should not overestimate
students’ abilities and overload them with 5 -6 other classes on Saturday.
As for me, I believe studying on Saturdays should be prohibited.
To start with, the pupils who study five days a week have more spare
time they chn spend preparing school homework. It means teachers’
tasks will be done properly and that is really crucial for the process of
education. What is more, we do understand how significant it is to care
about students’ health. One of the main problems teenagers suffer from
is lack of sleep. That is why having two days o ff school allows them to
get enough sleep which helps young people to stay healthy.
On the other hand, as an old English proverb says “ a coin has two
sides” and there are people who subscribe to the opposite point of view.
They claim that students should always concentrate bn their studies even
on Saturdays because they would like to pass all final exams successfully
and to enter prestigious universities.
Nevertheless, I cannot agree with this statement. Little do we realise
that students always try to work hard in order to succeed in passing
their exams but they also need a break to relax before starting a new
week which is filled with obtaining new knowledge.
All things considered, in my opinion it is better to study five days a
week. Only in this way will the educational process be really efficient.
13. Many years ago young people were more responsible and mature.
What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Some people, especially older ones, think that many years ago a young
generation was more reliable and grown-up. Others argue that modern
pace of life makes young people more rational. As for me, I suppose
that behaviour of many teenagers leaves much to be desired these days.
To begin with, in the past parents paid more attention to child-
rearing. Not only were they just stricter or more demanding, but also
endeavoured to foster important moral statures. These days it can often
be seen that children are left' to themselves and get into a bad company.
What is more, people used to be more religious. Faith tradition regulated
people’s behaviour, being some kind of dos and don’ts. Because of this,
there were not as many criminal cases with the involvement of the young
people as we have now.
On the other hand, some claim that young population is no longer
repressed by out-of-date principles and can become more independent
and take responsibility for their actions, so their immaturity is not
the case.
Nevertheless, I disagree with this point of view, many young people
cannot make the best of this freedom and instead of developing themselves
often become addicted to poor habits, to dependence and sponging these
days.
To sum up, although youths have more chances to take responsibility
for the life, very few of them can use it properly. I firmly believe that
many years ago young people were under stronger supervision and that’ s
why they were more responsible and mature to become the shield and
buckler of the family.
18. If you are fluent in English, you will not have communication
problems in any country of the world.
What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Hardly can it be argued that English is incontestably the international
language of today’ s world, so the assumption that being fluent in English
you can easily communicate with the whole world seems quite reasonable
to me, notwithstanding the fact there’ re a lot of opponents of this point
of view.
First of all, due to the globalisation tourist flow to different countries
is increasing rapidly and the more it flourishes, the better level of
command is demonstrated. Even the Moscow police are now obliged to
brush up their English! Awful as their pronunciation may be, you will
still be able to understand them.
The opponents of this idea, though, claim that if while travelling in
Russia, for instance, you found yourself in some village in the middle
of nowhere, your chances of finding an English-speaking person would
be slim, to say the least.
I can’t help but partly agree with this statement. Nonetheless,
I adhere to my standpoint. Seldom do the tourists try going somewhere
o ff the beaten track and visiting the popular tourist destination they are
bound to find someone who will understand them.
To put it in a nutshell, I am of the view that fluency in English will
spare your communication difficulties in any country of the world.
19. Big cities all over the world have lost their national identity and
now look the same.
What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Globalisation seems to be becoming more and more intense these
days. Although people from different countries are communicating more,
international business is flourishing, it is said that at the same time
countries start losing their identity and all the big cities have already
become similar. Personally, I do not share this opinion, though.
First and foremost, although there can be some modern structures
that look alike in big cities, each and every of them has its own history
and, hence, historical sights. Obviously, you can’ t mistake London for
another city because of the Tower Bridge, Big Ben, St Paul’s Cathedral,
etc. Furthermore, while constructing new buildings modern architects of
each country try their best to create something unique. Not only is it
ancient buildings that express the originality of London, but it can also
be, for instance, the Cucumber Tower.
Some people claim, however, that if you found yourself in some
bedroom community of a capital far away from the known sights, you
wouldn’t be able to tell the difference between Berlin and Paris.
Notwithstanding the fact that there’ s a grain of truth in this opinion,
I adhere to my standpoint. I don’ t think that two districts that seem
slightly alike can be enough to justify the claim that the whole cities
have become impossible to tell apart.
To put it in a nutshell, I am convinced that globalisation does no
harm to national identity and appearance of big cities.
20. You cannot become popular at school if you have low grades.
What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
These days there is a common opinion that it is impossible to become
popular at school having low grades. However, some people doubt it
saying that marks are not the thing that really matters. Personally,
I agree with the former point of view.
First of all, I believe that school is a place where you gain knowledge
and experience, so the better you study, the more attention and positive
feedback from the teachers you get. Tutors will definitely appreciate
your persistence and praise you in front of other students. Moreover,
if you pass all your tests with flying colours, your peers will look up
on you and always ask for advice. Good marks can help students get
a great reputation that will make them more popular among other
pupils.
However, some people claim that grades have never been a big deal in
the question of popularity. They say that students can get school-famous
partying with their peers at discos, because many popular scholars spend
their free time this way. Thus, if you do so, you will make it into the
most famous school company.
Nevertheless, I do not agree with this point of view. I think that if
all you do is partying, you will get not famous but notorious for it, as
it will show your immaturity. I believe that to become popular you need
to stand out in the crowd, not be a part of such an ill-mannered group
of underage people.
Summing everything up, I would like to say that at school your results
affect your reputation greatly. Hence, it is crucial to get good marks in
order to become famous at school.
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However, it is claiming that fashionable parties raid luxurious
ceremonies actors attend can easily make up for far-fetchedinconveniences
of their lives.
Despite this widespread belief, I adhere to my standpoint. Recognition
is a mere tip o f the iceberg beneath which lie long hours of hard and
strenuous work every day. Actors are often forced to make ends meet
as nobody wants to give them parts in films or performances.
To put it in a nutshell, glorious though a celebrity’s life may seem,
I do believe it is not entirely as splendid as hordes of screaming fans
believe.
24. Sewing and knitting clothes at home is a waste of time and money.
What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
In today’s trendy world the main objective of eccentric teenagers
has become self-expression. That’ s why a great number of modern girls
take up hobbies their grandmothers were keen on - sewing and knitting,
which nowadays are considered by some a complete waste of time and
money. Personally, I do not share this opinion and do believe the effort
put in sewing or knitting clothes is indisputably going to be paid off.
First and foremost, only if you make your clothes yourself, provided
you possess a certain level of creativity, can you be sure they are
unique. Assuredly, designer clothes can be one of a kind as well, but
they are undoubtedly much more expensive. Furthermore, this can be an
additional source of income, since if you are skilful enough, not only can
you make your own clothing items, but you also have the opportunity
to sell them to others in order to make some money.
Those who oppose this opinion, however, claim that the quality of
a handmade piece of clothing might not be up to the stock clothes’
standard, so they are not worthy of rubbing your fingers to the bone
while making it.
Notwithstanding the faet that there’s a grain of truth in this opinion,
I adhere to my standpoint. Quantity makes quality, so the more you sew
or knit, the better you become at it.
To put it in a nutshell, I strongly believe sewing and knitting are
hobbies of great usefulness and taking them up may not only save you
some money, but also bring you satisfaction.
31. Public libraries are becoming less popular and they will soon
disappear.
What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
The issue of public libraries is quite controversial nowadays. Most
people claim that they are no longer necessary in a day of instant
technology and are likely to disappear in the near future. Still, others
think that public libraries will manage to survive. Personally, I disagree
with those who say that public libraries will be in demand.
In my opinion, a library can be compensated by the Internet. In the
first place, going to the library is time-consuming. One has to scroll the
contents of numerous books to find the material, whereas the Internet
helps get the information more quickly and without even leaving home.
Furthermore, a library holds a limited number of titles. Therefore, a
book might not be available and a person will have to wait until it is
returned.
On the other hand, it is argued that libraries contribute to the
research being done effectively. Silence and a study environment suggest
that one can concentrate on the work while the Internet tempts a person
with incoming messages and advertising pop-ups which take the focus
away from work.
Nevertheless, I am still convinced that the library is not as beneficial as
it is considered to be. The focus and attention depend on the personality
rather than the source of information. An individual can get distracted
even in a library if he or she is not serious about the work.
Taking everything into account, whilst there are strong arguments in
favour of public libraries, I firmly believe that they will struggle to keep
current in view of modern technology dominating our life.
32. One must discuss all important decisions in the family circle.
What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Sometimes people face really controversial situations and they do not
know what to do. Some of them think it is a good idea to discuss their
problems in the family circle while others believe it is up to everyone
to decide what to do in this or that situation. Personally, I share the
former opinion.
I do believe that people should discuss all important decisions with
their family members. First of all, when you share your problems with
someone else, you are likely to get a useful piece of advice. It will help
you find a solution more quickly. Moreover, it is vitally important to
discuss issues which might affect your family members because you
cannot make such resolutions without their agreement. Finally, it is
better when you have a variety of solutions to choose from. You can
think over all pros and cons and decide on the best option.
However, some people claim that nobody can solve your problems
better than you yourself, so you should not discuss it with anybody else.
It is your own business. Sometimes bad advice can lead you astray.
Nevertheless, I cannot agree with this point of view. You are not
expected to follow someone’s advice strictly. You should just listen to
others and then make your own conclusion. Sometimes you can be given
such extraordinary but still effective advice that you cannot find yourself.
All in all, I firmly believe that discussing your problems in the family
circle is a really good idea. Eventually, a problem shared is a problem
solved as the old English proverb says.
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