okay this was a huge let down, had a strong star but then the writing went to shit at like chapter 7. and when i mean it went to shit i mean 1.5 stars
okay this was a huge let down, had a strong star but then the writing went to shit at like chapter 7. and when i mean it went to shit i mean it was insanely bad. Shaw hart needs a editor for this or someone to tell her to redo the book cuz that was wasted potential right there, it got so rushed i had to put it down. i do not recommend this book. it seemed as if the book after chapter 7 was a rough draft and a page to put in ideas? idk but it wasn’t good.
my second problem was the heroine, i like her up until chapter 7. She sleeps with the hero and then right after she berates him and belittles him saying he’s “too scared to run daddy’s business because of a little pressure” like bitch stfu. that was so insulting idk why he wanted her after that. He had just told her one of his biggest insecurities which was running his father’s business because he didn’t want to destroy everything his father and grandfather had built and right after she makes fun of him for it… it was very out of character for her which is another reason the writing was bad. she was a nice character but then turned into a bitch after that. hero deserved better.
also she never apologized…
i don’t think she’s a virgin now that i read back on it. it never mentions it and she seems to have done things before… the sex was a little to smooth and easy so idk…
slow insta billionaire rich no ow/om drama no protection one smut scene… garbage smut btw annoying heroine push/pull from h drama side char time skip 5 years… abrupt ending/rushed scenes bad writing safe hea epilogue w/kids spicy lvl 1/5 waste of time don’t recommend...more
i wish we had more sex scenes, they only did it once and that was at the end… i’m not a fan of them getting together at the very end of the boo3 stars
i wish we had more sex scenes, they only did it once and that was at the end… i’m not a fan of them getting together at the very end of the book ...more
okay… this was pretty disappointing. had a good strong start but then just went down hill. The hero 2.5 stars
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okay… this was pretty disappointing. had a good strong start but then just went down hill. The hero doesn’t make sense or his writing is inconsistent? idk, same with the heroine. There was one part where the hero’s coworker literally calls a prostitute a prostitute and he gets mad? like that’s her job and she gotta make bank somehow, that’s literally what she is...more
okay no. heroine is stupid and annoying, unlikable and doesn’t know what she wants just like the hero.2 stars
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okay no. heroine is stupid and annoying, unlikable and doesn’t know what she wants just like the hero. Chopping writing, choppy story telling, inconsistent. Disappointing hero, he hurts her but never apologizes, never grovels and the heroine is a pushover, doesn’t know her worth. No “i love you’s” not romantic, just bad sex. They sleep together then it’s a 3 years time skip and all of a sudden they are okay now? yeah no i dnf after that.
virgin heroine idk hero slow insta disappointed disappointing hero pushover heroine obnoxious heroine voyerism… (she give the Hero a BJ and she tells him to send a picture of it to her dad and he does…) kidnapping stalking no grovel or apology time skip (3 years??) no i love you not safe (not for me) slight violence no protection no ow/om drama push/pull from both dnf spicy lvl 2.5/5...more
i don’t really like hero’s who play games and don’t know what they want. this hero really disappointed m2 stars
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i don’t really like hero’s who play games and don’t know what they want. this hero really disappointed me, and i hate when they admit there love for each other AFTER they have sex, it’s like… really? Heroine was kinda a idiot too, why would you sleep with someone when you know they don’t want to commit to you like you want them too?
v heroine, i think H is a manwhore slowinsta disappointed disappointing H disappointing h annoying h not alpha male enough no protection i love you’s AFTER SEX?? (that’s a no go for me) no after care shown hero played games push/pull from H pushover h slight ow drama (a girl had a crush on him and called the h fat) no om drama (there was one point where h got jealous of a guy who didn’t even like her) hea epilogue w/kids (first time i didn’t feel a connection between the parents and the kids) spicy lvl 3/5 ...more
a part that made me super uncomfortable was the author trying to paint the Landlord as approp2.5 stars
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a part that made me super uncomfortable was the author trying to paint the Landlord as appropriating the spanish language/latin culture? She described the guy as a “white” looking man but white hispanics exists, i don’t think the author knows that… i don’t know but i’ve definitely started to see a trend in white authors (i’m assuming the author is white, it sure looks/sounds like it) white authors writing the struggles/experiences of other races idk. that whole scene came out weird and forceful…
my other problems was that it was just sex. you can’t connect with the characters or feel the relationship between them because all they do is have sex. yes we know they’ve known each other forever and that they know everything about each other but we, the READERS don’t. They couldn’t have one conversation without sex or dirty talk. i’m all down for smut but like damn, that’s why i felt no spark, they couldn’t flirt without it, it made the epilogue bad, it was just disappointing because i can’t see this couple being together for real like years into the future.
so yeah disappointing.
dual virgins 10/10 not instalove lust hea epilogue no protection (that’s a plus) daddy kink spicy 2.5/3
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2.5 stars
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a part that made me super uncomfortable was the author trying to paint the Landlord as appropriating the spanish language/latin culture? She described the guy as a “white” looking man but white hispanics exists, i don’t think the author knows that… i don’t know but i’ve definitely started to see a trend in white authors (i’m assuming the author is white, it sure looks/sounds like it) white authors writing the struggles/experiences of other races idk. that whole scene came out weird and forceful…
my other problems was that it was just sex. you can’t connect with the characters or feel the relationship between them because all they do is have sex. yes we know they’ve known each other forever and that they know everything about each other but we, the READERS don’t. They couldn’t have one conversation without sex or dirty talk. i’m all down for smut but like damn, that’s why i felt no spark, they couldn’t flirt without it, it made the epilogue bad, it was just disappointing because i can’t see this couple being together for real like years into the future.
so yeah disappointing.
dual virgins 10/10 not instalove lust hea epilogue no protection (that’s a plus) daddy kink spicy 2.5/3...more
A few problems with this one. First off the side char are annoying especially the (ow) i guess you co2.5 stars
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A few problems with this one. First off the side char are annoying especially the (ow) i guess you could call her. She’s a grown ass woman hiding behind a fake relationship cuz of her family, like seriously? If they don’t accept you then they can fuck off and you can grow up and stop hiding behind a fake relationship. She fr was acting like she was in high school or something. she was annoying and i hated that the H and h came together BECAUSE of her. So obnoxious.
the H was pretty disappointing. he didn’t really grovel or apologize (that’s a no from me) h was a doormat, they get together at the end and the book ends, those endings are disappointing.
v heroine ex manwhore h slow insta misunderstanding miscommunication disappointed H disappointing h not enough/no grovel doormat h annoying side char (i’m sick of side char) some om drama (she was friends with this guy that was interested in her and pretended to be her fiancé for like a minute) some ow drama (H was in a fake relationship cuz the ow was annoying and could grow some balls to stand up for herself either… she’s a adult…) no protection time skip (like 6 months i think and then another one for like 2 weeks) loyal separation hero didn’t chase… annoying push/pull from both safeish hea epilogue w/kids spicy lvl 3.5/5...more
idk something about this one feels different then Minks other books. it was missing something and it fel2 stars
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idk something about this one feels different then Minks other books. it was missing something and it felt new, idk i could just tell it was a new one (i checked it was pretty new after all) meh just not my fav mink book
v heroine slow insta boringish dnf disappointed slightly annyoing heroine annoying die char overused back story ...more
okay so this was surprisingly safe for a sam creasing book. probably her best book so far, however ju2.5 stars
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okay so this was surprisingly safe for a sam creasing book. probably her best book so far, however just because it’s her best book doesn’t mean it’s the greatest thing ever. I had a lot of problems with it (typical) but again, pretty good for a sam creasent book.
I did not like the hero (compared to her other books he was a angle tho) i don’t like when it’s a soulmates book and they slept with other ppl knowing they had a soulmate out there. I don’t get it. I don’t like how he belittled the thought of soulmates and saying stuff like “why wait” the heroine was again way to much of a pushover and for some reason infatuated with the hero. To much side character drama, to much unnecessary description, it was basically boring and took away from the main couple. Also, it really felt like the hero just wanted sex from the heroine, no fluff, not really, not great romance just fast sex. pretty sad.
virgin heroine, fuck boy hero (idk if Sam has a thing for fuck boys but it gets old) soulmates slow insta shifter (wolf) no ow/om drama no protection i think she’s a curvy gal age gap (18 years) dnf disappointed no chemistry to much side char drama drama angst safe-ish? spicy lvl 3/5...more
yeah, i can see why Sam Creasent books never get a 4 stars now.
virgin heroine, celibate hero only when2 stars
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yeah, i can see why Sam Creasent books never get a 4 stars now.
virgin heroine, celibate hero only when he meant her, prior he was manwhore reflection story (i almost never like these because authors don’t know how to make the hero properly grovel) angst soulmates shifter (wolfs) slowinsta push/pull from both disappointing hero annoying heroine asshole hero not enough groveling misunderstandings pushover heroine no ow drama/ slight om drama (her bsf wanted her) not alpha male enough not possessive enough disappointing first time no protection poor romance safe epilogue spicy lvl 3.5/5...more
okay this one was meh. The hero was disappointing and the heroine had no backbone. I liked the book 2.5 stars
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okay this one was meh. The hero was disappointing and the heroine had no backbone. I liked the book and i feel there was more potential to make it a genuine 4 stars but it missed the mark in a fee things.
The hero needed to show he was sorry more and he needed the have the heroines back wayyyy more. It felt like the heroine was the one that really only cared for a deeper relationship other then sex and babies, hero was all about sex and babies and i wished he could it more effort into convincing both the heroine and the reader that he did in fact care about her. The whole Alpha bitch thing was just obnoxious and a stick in my side, it made no sense, he was really stupid for a good portion of this book.
I also hate that 98% of the book they argued and like right at the end they have sex and get together FINALLY. Yeah i wasn’t really convinced that he cared a whole lot about her, i feel like he was more interested in the baby and she was a accessory. Yeah i hate when they have sex and get together right at the end. Poor grovel and not much affection…
V heroine (she explained that he was her first and only but we dont get to read it in the book) slow insta soulmates shifters misunderstanding miscommunication angst not good enough grovel disappointing hero pushover heroine push/pull from h ow drama (the pack has a “alpha bitch” who was in love with the H and she caused all of the misunderstandings. H sides with her wayyyy to much and does a shitty job of reassuring the h that he wasn’t sleeping with her) no om drama safeish no protection time skip to epilogue (i hate that) abrupt ending hea epilogue w/kids disappointing epilogue spicy lvl 2.5/5 ...more
okay this one seriously disappointed me. the first 12 chapters of this book just talks about and recaps2 stars
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okay this one seriously disappointed me. the first 12 chapters of this book just talks about and recaps the events of the first book and we mainly get content of the first h and H of this series, this felt like a poor excuse of filler to make this book like 30 chapters long.
Also i hated the fact that the hero and heroine were being hypocritical about the fact that she was a virgin and mafia world treasured virgins and they didn’t accept or like that yet the male lead got horny and happy that she was a virgin and the heroine hated that she was a virgin?? My problem with JS books and just these types of book in general is that they will make a big paragraph in the book talking about how “i’m a virgin but it’s not like i’m waiting for marriage and the whole concept of virginity is stupid and being a virgin sucks and blah blah blah” yet ALL OF THEM ARE VIRGINS??? Like who’s team are you playing here? PICK ONE. There’s nothing wrong being one and there’s nothing wrong with not being one, so why tf are you playing sides here and bashing virgins the praising none virgins but yet are still a virgin??? Please be consistent at least ...more
this one was meh, there was nothing like wrong wrong but it was just kinda boring and bland? Also the2.5 stars
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this one was meh, there was nothing like wrong wrong but it was just kinda boring and bland? Also there are a lot of spelling errors and the h pet went from a cat to a dog a few times, so yeah a few inconsistencies. The h was kinda annoying didn’t really connect with her, a lot of crying moments, not cute cringe just cringe. The brothers also act like they are 5 so did the H at times, was a ick. I did like how the H didn’t play games and new what he wanted.
v heroine insta love lust age gap love at first sight no ow/ slight om drama (some unwanted flirting and a creepy boss) no protection one sex scene sadly push/pull h fast read boringish safe epilogue w/kids it was only like 2 pages long spicy lvl 3/5...more
a little disappointed, only one sex scene and a time skip after that, hate when authors tell us what hap3 stars
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a little disappointed, only one sex scene and a time skip after that, hate when authors tell us what happened instead of showing us, basically a writing problem. rushed and somethings unclear. also, didn’t like how the last chapter (not epilogue) centered around the other couple and not the main couple, bad promo.
virgin heroine instalove kinda no protection mixed feelings/unclear misunderstanding no om drama/ slight ow drama(girls kept flirting with hero) boring-ish wasted potential billionaire/rich 1 sex scene time skip safe slight drama hea epilogue w/no kids spicy lvl 2/5...more
only problem was the Heroine, there was something about her i didn’t like nor/connected with. i feel t3.5 stars
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only problem was the Heroine, there was something about her i didn’t like nor/connected with. i feel the Hero deserved better then her, also i think the author forgot about his personality and how he was supposed to be dirty minded and silly one of if the group, besides that i loved this one, especially the hero.
dual virgins instalove slight misunderstanding soulmates shifter (bear) action no ow/om drama slight side drama push/pull from h no protection curvy gal hea epilogue w/kids spicy lvl 3.5/4...more
someone said that it seemed like this author had no clue what to write or where the direction of the b2.5 stars
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someone said that it seemed like this author had no clue what to write or where the direction of the book was going until 60% in and i 100% agree, i feel like i wasted time getting to the actual plot… The whole moon arc was boring and added absolutely nothing to the book either. Felt like filler, this whole book was mostly just chaotic and rushed, especially the epilogue, felt artificial and unnatural… also, we don’t get a lot of chemistry between the 2, just sex and that’s all, couldn’t connect with them.
(farming simulator was the best part of the book)
dual virgins slow insta kidnapping cross species (hornet/man) action asshole-ish hero? conflicting hero violence no protection no om drama/ slight ow drama, the queen wanted the H) safeish?? disappointed and disappointed first time having sex rushed parts hea rushed epilogue/pregnant spicy lvl 3.9/5...more
v heroine slow insta stalker-ish (both ends) hitman a3 stars
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this was kinda meh, ending was abrupt and rushed
v heroine slow insta stalker-ish (both ends) hitman assassin no ow/ slight om drama (some guy offers a threesome and gets beaten up by H) chase (i really liked his chase, he mowed her lawn ...more
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