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Much Ado About You by Eloisa James
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really liked it
bookshelves: series, regency-victorian, historical-romance

I enjoyed this one. It had some touches which made it more enjoyable than most, although the plot was somewhat predictable.

Things I liked:
- The four sisters are like real sisters. They love each other, but also drive each other nuts, argue, sulk, bitch and complain a bit. This is soo much better than all those romances where sisters just love each other and think the the sun shines out of each other's #@!*. Nope. Sorry. I've never met sisters who are like that. There's always tension there, and this book captures it well
- The sisters are an integral part of the story, but the main romance isn't lost in all the side-stories. I'm still trying to figure out how the author accomplished this, but it's probably because..
- It was well-written, although I got the impression the author could have been a bit more expansive in the language used. It was clear and there was minimal repetition of words (a pet-peeve of mine, using the same word over and over again).
- The hero is great. He's quiet, strong, gorgeous, but I got the impression I never get to completely know him, and I do like a bit of mystery about him
- Not everything is resolved, although the pieces which are not resolved are not particularly important. I find it a bit off-putting when everything is wrapped up neatly at the end. The only thing I really care about being resolved is the HEA
- The introduction of the secondary characters, aside from the sisters, is great. It's not clear up-front who the heroine will end up with, and I absolutely loved that ambiguity. It made for a much more entertaining read, and, at a time when an aristocratic woman's lot in life was to essentially marry, probably more realistic.
- I loved Rafe. Paunchy, a bit of a drinker, but essentially a wonderful human being. I can't wait for him to find true love.

Things I didn't much like:
- The heroine was a bit irritating. Yes, I get that she felt she raised her sisters and was in-charge, but it would have actually been a bit more interesting to make her the irresponsible oldest sibling (yes, they do exist). It just felt a bit formulaic.
- She interfered with the hero's family, and I felt she should have been made the see the error of her ways more clearly. I wouldn't have wanted to see her exactly "punished", but the hero didn't even lose his cool and she effectively interfered when she was clearly told to keep her nose out. I just don't think she should have got away with that.
- All the sisters are described as "beautiful". This is a minor peeve in the bigger scale of things, but it does annoy me. Can't just one of them being Miss, or Lady, Average rather than paragons of exceptional beauty. Gets a bit wearing, to be honest.

So, overall, nice story, nice background, well-written, providing a really great introduction to the rest of the series, without overwhelming with lists of physical attributes for the entire cast.

4 stars.
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Reading Progress

July 19, 2010 – Shelved
December 2, 2010 – Started Reading
December 2, 2010 – Shelved as: regency-victorian
December 2, 2010 – Shelved as: series
December 2, 2010 – Shelved as: historical-romance
Finished Reading

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 Danielle The Book Huntress Good review, Ruth.


Ruth Thanks Lady D. I'm now reading the next in the series Kiss Me, Annabel (Essex Sisters, #2) , and already loving it.


message 3: by Cyn (new) - rated it 5 stars

Cyn I loved your review. I have read this book a few times and I agree with almost all your points, especially about guessing who she would end up with, the description of the hero, oh bless dear Rafe, and I loved the scene where they are at home after visiting his family and she figures out that the unobtrusively fixes things. But I agree that I wish we had seen more. That she apologized more for subjecting them to his mother and determined to protect him from her cruel words in society. I'm glad we all learned the truth from the dad. I love that the girls, especially Tess is an accomplished rider, especially among all those horse mad men.


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