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Going Back to Find You by P.G. Forte
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Unsatisfying romance-wise, but interesting world building.

So Jason and Liz knew each other over 15o years ago when he left without a kiss or word of goodbye.
They were starcrossed lovers belonging to different vampires who were feuding. Both their sires were horrid, evil, manipulative people, and I get that, but I still think he could have said something to her before he left. And he's had a LOOoOOoong time to think about it and never tried to get in touch with her since???

So now he is with a different sire and her sire has recently died. So here's his chance to go find her and make up for the callous way he dumped her.
Liz is preparing to leave town but falls back into bed with him almost immediately.

Jason was a beta hero at most. Disappointing really. I like beta heroes, but he didn't have the cojones to wipe his own ass without asking his sire for permission first.

Then there's the writing style. I found it frustrating how the writing was constantly going off on tangents. A character would think about doing something but before they do it there would be a page of other stuff that was kinda interesting but also annoying because it made everything seems so distracted.

The whole ending was a complete fizzle. Another vampire shows up and takes over and it was like there had never been any conflict between Liz and Jason ever. He never talks to her about his leaving and she never asks him.

And what's with the creepy pervert of an orange cat?

No idea about safety. There's no mention of others at all.
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Reading Progress

January 2, 2020 – Started Reading
January 2, 2020 – Shelved
January 7, 2020 –
50.0% "a little slow. Not crazy about Jason. he's not even strong enough to be a beta. Liz jumps in the sack with him to quickly. Where's your pride woman?
He was a douche nugget. 100 years and he couldn't think of a way to let you know he cared??"
January 7, 2020 –
72.0% "There's so many good things about this story, but i find the prose meanders too much. It breaks the flow of yhe story almost every paragraph."
January 8, 2020 – Finished Reading
January 10, 2020 – Shelved as: sexy-vampire
January 10, 2020 – Shelved as: short-100-to-150-pgs
January 10, 2020 – Shelved as: ending-meh
January 10, 2020 – Shelved as: romance-luke-warm
January 10, 2020 – Shelved as: writing-meh-prose-is-meh

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