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Every Summer After by Carley Fortune
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it was ok

Outlier alert!
Let me start out by saying that there are many great reviews for this book, so if the synopsis appeals to you, go read those reviews and take mine with a grain of salt. One of the reasons this book didn't connect with me was that I just got finished reading another coming of age novel (Our Little World ) which I thought was much better and rang more authentic, so I couldn't help but compare.

This is a story told in two timelines: When Persephone is thirteen, her parents buy a lake house on Barry's Bay and she meets brothers Sam and Charlie, and they become friends. Sam and Percy develop a very close friendship over the years, which eventually turns to romance. Something happens that splinters the relationship and Sam and Percy haven't spoken for twelve years. Until Charlie calls with the news that their mother has died, and since she was like a second mom to Percy over the years, Percy returns to Barry's Bay for the funeral and to see Sam again.

The Canadian setting is fantastic and well described. I got a real sense of place with this book and would love to visit the places the author talks about.

What didn't really work for me:
So much of this book feels like a really bad YA novel. The dialogue is stilted and unrealistic, and I realize that teenagers are super focused on sex but some of the scenes involving those situations were just cringey to me. Instead of talking about their feelings, everyone is jumping into bed at the slightest provocation (even as adults).

I could never get a real sense of the time period. If the present day was really the present day, then Sam would have gone to college in 2010. Why was she calling him on the "dorm phone"--why didn't he have a cell phone? She mentions texting a little bit and email, but it felt off the with the way they were communicating with each other.

I called the "big twist" way before it was revealed, I know that others might like that the author waited until 80% into the book to reveal it, but it felt to me as if it was drawn out for longer than it needed to. Plus...anyone who has read my reviews knows how I feel about (view spoiler)

Overall, I don't feel like I read the same book as everyone else who adored it. I didn't connect with the characters and got alternately bored and annoyed with them throughout the book. You may like this if you're looking for a beach read, and I'm definitely the outlier because many of my trusted reviewer friends loved it.


I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book, all opinions are my own.
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Reading Progress

May 8, 2022 – Started Reading
May 8, 2022 – Shelved
May 11, 2022 – Finished Reading

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message 1: by Srivalli (new) - added it

Srivalli Rekha Fab review, Melissa. Sorry that this one didn't work for you. Hope your current read is better.


message 2: by Michael (new)

Michael David (on hiatus) Fantastic review,Melissa! Sorry this was such a letdown. I’ll skip it.


Nilguen Stellar review, Melissa! Sorry this was a disappointing read. Hope you’ll enjoy your next book 🧡!


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Srivalli wrote: "Fab review, Melissa. Sorry that this one didn't work for you. Hope your current read is better."

Thanks Srivalli, hoping to get a better one next!


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Michael wrote: "Fantastic review,Melissa! Sorry this was such a letdown. I’ll skip it."

Thanks Michael!


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Nilguen wrote: "Stellar review, Melissa! Sorry this was a disappointing read. Hope you’ll enjoy your next book 🧡!"
Thanks Nilguen!


message 7: by Catherine (new) - added it

Catherine (alternativelytitledbooks) - so very behind! Bummer this didn’t work for you Melissa! Considering you liked Our Little World better, maybe this isn’t for me 😔 but we shall see! Great review!


message 8: by Sarah-Hope (new)

Sarah-Hope Go for the outlier status! We have to call them as we see them, and I think there's not a book out there that works for everyone. I, for example, despise The Little Prince, even though everyone else I know thinks it's a work of genius. :-)


message 9: by Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) (last edited May 11, 2022 09:18AM) (new) - rated it 2 stars

Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Catherine wrote: "Bummer this didn’t work for you Melissa! Considering you liked Our Little World better, maybe this isn’t for me 😔 but we shall see! Great review!"

Thanks Catherine! I certainly wouldn't read them back to back if you're going to read both.


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Sarah-Hope wrote: "Go for the outlier status! We have to call them as we see them, and I think there's not a book out there that works for everyone. I, for example, despise The Little Prince, even though everyone els..."

So true! I try to always be honest about what I think about a book.


message 11: by Jayme (new)

Jayme I rarely enjoy YA/Coming of age so thanks for this helpful review! 💕


Maureen ( NOT RECEIVING NOTIFICATIONS) Hope your next is a winner Melissa!


Julie Sorry this one was a miss. Terrific review, though. 💖


message 14: by Canadian Jen (new)

Canadian Jen Hope your next one hits it out of the park, Melissa


message 15: by Nevin (new)

Nevin Reading your review, I may skip this one. Thanks for an honest review Melissa 💝


Carlene Inspired I love a good outlier review, though! Hope the next is amazing!


message 17: by Rosh (new) - added it

Rosh Fabulous review, Melissa! I've been seeing only praise for this book so your perspective helps tremendously. Hope your next book is going much better! 💕


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Jayme wrote: "I rarely enjoy YA/Coming of age so thanks for this helpful review! 💕"

Yes, I think it is not a book for you.


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Maureen ( NOT RECEIVING NOTIFICATIONS) wrote: "Hope your next is a winner Melissa!"

Thanks Maureen!


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Julie wrote: "Sorry this one was a miss. Terrific review, though. 💖"

Thanks Julie!


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Jen wrote: "Hope your next one hits it out of the park, Melissa"

Thank you Jen!


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Nevin wrote: "Reading your review, I may skip this one. Thanks for an honest review Melissa 💝"

Thanks Nevin, just wasn't for me.


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Carlene Inspired wrote: "I love a good outlier review, though! Hope the next is amazing!"

Thank you!


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) RoshReviews wrote: "Fabulous review, Melissa! I've been seeing only praise for this book so your perspective helps tremendously. Hope your next book is going much better! 💕"

Thanks Rosh!


message 25: by Chantel (new)

Chantel great & honest review, Melissa! glad that the Canadian scenery was well-done, at least yay for that haha


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) C wrote: "great & honest review, Melissa! glad that the Canadian scenery was well-done, at least yay for that haha"

I always appreciate when a book has a good sense of place, that you can't just pick it up and move it anywhere (ahem, The Paris Apartment).


message 27: by Kay (new) - rated it 4 stars

Kay Ugh can't stand unnatural dialogues, thank you for the review! I'm usually in agreement with you so this is a skip for mee!💕


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Kay wrote: "Ugh can't stand unnatural dialogues, thank you for the review! I'm usually in agreement with you so this is a skip for mee!💕"

Thanks Kay, it got really annoying after a while.


Margaret M - (too far behind to catch up although trying to spend more time on GR) Another excellent review Melissa 💖


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Margaret M wrote: "Another excellent review Melissa 💖"

Thanks Margaret!


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Katie Fitzgerald I wish I'd seen your review before I started this one! I decided to DNF and your list of things that didn't work for you confirms I made the right call.


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Katie wrote: "I wish I'd seen your review before I started this one! I decided to DNF and your list of things that didn't work for you confirms I made the right call."
Glad I could confirm!


message 33: by cheeriotin (new) - added it

cheeriotin Did one of the love interests cheat on the other? if yes this book is an instant skip for me🥲


message 34: by Ellie (new) - added it

Ellie Spencer (catching up from hiatus) I need to hurry up and read this one, I am so sorry it was a miss for you Melissa! I always feel disappointed when I guess twists! Thank you for your great and honest review! 🧡


Maren’s Reads Excellent review! So sorry this one missed the mark. Hope your next one is a winner!


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) darlington wrote: "Did one of the love interests cheat on the other? if yes this book is an instant skip for me🥲"

See my spoiler above, but the short answer is (view spoiler)


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Ellie wrote: "I need to hurry up and read this one, I am so sorry it was a miss for you Melissa! I always feel disappointed when I guess twists! Thank you for your great and honest review! 🧡"

I'll be interested to see your thoughts, hope you enjoy it more than I did.


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Maren’s Reads wrote: "Excellent review! So sorry this one missed the mark. Hope your next one is a winner!"

Thanks Maren!


Chantal Côté I agree the twist was VERY predictable!


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Chantal wrote: "I agree the twist was VERY predictable!"

I was hoping for more!


Vanathi Santhuru I'm with you on this review. I really wanted to love it because of the way it started out but too much of it was cringey and very predictable. Great review!


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Vanathi wrote: "I'm with you on this review. I really wanted to love it because of the way it started out but too much of it was cringey and very predictable. Great review!"

Thanks Vanathi, I was hoping it would be better based on everyone's high praise, but it just didn't work for me.


Kat I always appreciate an honest review, Melissa! I loved this book, but I can understand where it fell short for you. I guessed the twist very early on as well, but it didn't ruin my enjoyment somehow. 💗


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Kat wrote: "I always appreciate an honest review, Melissa! I loved this book, but I can understand where it fell short for you. I guessed the twist very early on as well, but it didn't ruin my enjoyment someho..."

I know that I'm definitely an outlier on this one. It just did not connect with me.


message 45: by susana ♡ (new)

susana ♡ Yikes. Officially removing it from my TBR. Truly feels like PWMOV 2.0. BYEEE!


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) susana ♡ wrote: "Yikes. Officially removing it from my TBR. Truly feels like PWMOV 2.0. BYEEE!"

I never read that one and I'm glad I didn't now if it sounds like this one.


Addison i also feel like charlie took advantage of her vulnerability she was already so emotional abt sam then he kept talking abt how sexy she was it was weird


Melissa (Sailing the Greek Isles) Addison wrote: "i also feel like charlie took advantage of her vulnerability she was already so emotional abt sam then he kept talking abt how sexy she was it was weird"

I completely agree! I thought it was pretty slimy of him to do that.


message 49: by Lit with Leigh (new)

Lit with Leigh Nope nope nope. I'm good on this one. Also I don't like when the time period is ambiguous as well... what is a dorm phone lmao. I went to uni in 2011 and there certainly was no dorm phone. Disgusting communal showers, yes. Dorm phone, no.


Annesa I’m so glad I found your review! I was wondering if I was the only one who felt the same exact way about this. The cheating, Charlie taking advantage of her vulnerability.. her giving in so easily. It was all too much and .. I just felt for Sam. He was wronged in so many ways


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