Holly's Reviews > Game Play

There is no denying the chemistry these two have and it translates to lust as they act like 2 lustful teenagers quite a bit. In their jobs should they risk getting caught for a quickie?
Lincoln and Jolene are still struggling to see if their rekindled relationship will stand the strains of their families, their jobs and everything else that is happening around them. An away event helps fan the flames but then they get sloppy. Someone is watching them and they aren’t smart enough to hire a PI to find out who? Lincoln is definitely thinking with the wrong head and still letting his father control him. Rivera is still a threat. Sam…she kind of seems like she is okay but I still have my doubts about her. Jonah wants Coach Nash around where Cade wants him gone. Lots of drama in this book.
I love the series and this book was really good but I am noticing run-on sentences and they are kind of driving me a little nuts. Many sentences are 6 lines long. I even came across one that was 7. When the subject of a sentence changes, it’s time to start a new sentence. I am finding it annoying and it is taking away from the story for me. Maybe it’s a pet peeve? Maybe I should become an editor or proofreader?
An explosion is on its way with all that is happening with Rivera, Sam these 2 and their families. I anxiously await the next book in the series.