Ticket Id: 51298r 6.10.2018 DR Elizabeth Smith Dear DR Smith, Re: Mrs Alice Woot, Aged 59
Ticket Id: 51298r 6.10.2018 DR Elizabeth Smith Dear DR Smith, Re: Mrs Alice Woot, Aged 59
Ticket Id: 51298r 6.10.2018 DR Elizabeth Smith Dear DR Smith, Re: Mrs Alice Woot, Aged 59
6.10.2018
Dr Elizabeth Smith
Dear Dr Smith,
Re: Mrs Alice Woot, aged 59
Thank you for accepting Mrs Woot into your care for further assessment and management for her breast
lump. Her daughter, Ms Jenny, is worried that her mother might have breast cancer. Commented [OET1]: Jenny Woot
On 6.10.2018, Mrs Woot presented to the health clinic with a hard, fixed and painless lump in her right Commented [OET2]: at
breast. There is also evidence of progression in size, as well as a bloody discharge from the nipple. Apart
from the natural medication that she takes, she started to take medication for her lump three months ago.
In addition, she initially did not want to be seen by a doctor, as she is anxious about the hospital
procedures and treatments, like radiotherapy and chemotherapy. Consequently, she opted not to undergo
a mammogram.
Additionally, she has moderate hypertension, for which she agreed to monitor her blood pressure for the
next three months. Other than that, she is physically fit and active.
In view of the above, it would be greatly appreciated if you could reassure Mrs Woot and discuss with her
about the treatment options appropriate for her condition. In order to lessen her anxiety, interactions
built on trust and empathy would be helpful. Lastly, please note that she agreed to be seen only by female
doctors.
Your sincerely,
Registered Nurse
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