IELTS Writing Task 2 - Conclusion
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Conclusion
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Conclusion
1 IELTS Preparation
IELTS
WRITING
TEST
TASK 2 –
Conclusion
Writing a conclusion
In conclusion, while part time jobs can provide children with the
opportunity to gain valuable work experience and appreciate the
value of money, they will lack freedom to explore their personal
interests and they may end up ignoring their school responsibilties.
Therefore, on balance, I remain firmly convinced that the merits are
eclipsed by the demerits.
Question: More and more people are overweight. Why is this happening?
What can be done to overcome this?
To sum up, not only does socializing online create difficulties in building
strong connections, but also leads to the possibility of facing depression. I,
therefore, remain firmly convinced that the growing trend in online social
interaction can only be seen as a negative for society.