Writing Workshop
Writing Workshop
Writing Workshop
ACTIVITY 1
In groups of four, discuss the information you found and summarize five features of this kind of text
1. _________________________
2. _________________________
3. _________________________
4. _________________________
5. _________________________
ACTIVITY 2
Individually, watch the video http://bit.ly/1RESCoS (from 00:00 to 2:38) and complete the chart.
Definition
Tip a)
Introduction 1. _______________:
2. _______________:
(1 paragraph) 3. _______________:
Paragraph 2: ______________
Conclusion 1. _______________________________
(1 paragraph) 2. _______________________________
ACTIVITY 3
In groups of 4, identify with different colors the structure described and explained in the video in the sample essay
you received.
ACTIVITY 4
In pairs, SS discuss the following questions
1. How do you think the author arrived to that product?
2. What did the author have to think about to produce that piece?
ACTIVITY 5
• 1. Hook:
• 2. Background:
Introduction • 3. Thesis:
• Topic sentence:
• Similarity 1:
Comparison
Paragraph: • Similarity 2:
• Topic sentence:
Contrast
Paragraph 1: • Difference 1
• Topic sentence:
Contrast
Paragraph 2: • Difference 2:
• Restatement of Thesis:
• Summary:.
Conclusion • Opinion:
ACTIVITY 6
Check http://bit.ly/1q0GogH and either choose the topics from the list or decide on your own topics for your essay.
Download and print the outline template available in the 5th hour activities-week 2. Use the template to write your
ideas about the chosen topics.
PART 2
ACTIVITY 1
In pairs, exchange your outline and check if your partner include all the elements of the essay and revise if his/her ideas
are clear and organized. Then, edit your outline and hand it in.
ACTIVITY 2
1. Read the following strategies to write a hook and rank them from 1 (you like the most) to 9 (you like the least)
1.1 In pairs compare your ranking and reach an agreement on the one you most and least prefer
ACTIVITY 3
The introduction will provide any background information needed to understand the essay. Such information is needed
so that the reader has a CONTEXT in which to understand the ideas presented in the essay. Therefore, the background
information must answer the following questions:
WHO/WHAT?
WHEN/WHERE?
2. Read the following introductory paragraph and highlight the background information
Technological and social advances have led to a great many changes in all aspects of life. People have changed their
way of living, entertaining, working and studying. These changes have created different forms of learning and teaching
methods. Some students prefer taking private lessons whereas some others prefer learning in a classroom. The purpose
of this essay is to compare the similarities and contrast the differences between private lesson and classroom lesson.
ACTIVITY 4
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2. Read the following information and classify the types of thesis statements below.
A direct thesis statement gives a specific outline or the main topic developed through out of the
essay.
In an indirect thesis statement, no such outline is provided; however, the reader will still know
what aspect of the topic the essay is going to discuss
Thesis statement D I
“In today’s rapidly changing technology market, only technopreneurs
who possess certain qualities will succeed while those who do not will
falter and fall in the battlefield.”
ACTIVITY 5
Look at the following expressions to write your thesis statement and choose one you feel comfortable
with.
This essay is written in order to ... The purpose of this essay is to...
2. Write a 70-word introductory paragraph about the topics you chose. Include hook (red), background
(blue) and thesis statement (green). 20 MINUTES
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ACTIVITY 7
1. Exchange your introductory paragraph with a partner. For the feedback you need:
a. List of conventions
b. Checklist
2. Use the list of conventions to provide feedback on grammar use, spelling, punctuation, vocabulary, etc.
3. Tick each circle if your partner took into account each factor. Please write a comment on your partners’
performance writing the paragraph.
Introductory paragraph checklist
Tick each circle if your partner took into account each factor. Please write a comment on your partners’
performance writing the paragraph.
o Did your partner include a hook, which catches the reader’s attention?
o Did your partner include background information that describes the topics’ context?
Comments:
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SS Sentence Structure I want that you open the door (ss) I want you to open the door.
SVA Subject Verb He walk (sva) to school every day. He walks to school every day.
Agreement
WC Wrong Connector She is tall. However, (WC) she is intelligent. She is tall and intelligent.
or insert a
connector
VF Verb Form She has been wait (vf) for 2 hours. She has been waiting for 2 hours
WO Word Order She has eyes blue. (wo) She has blue eyes
XYZ Unnecessary Word His happy birthday is on January 15. His birthday is on January 15.
S/P Singular-Plural form My child (p/s) were playing in the street when My children were playing in the street
they saw the accident. when they saw the accident.
Cap Capitalization Many people visit madrid (Cap) every year. it Many people visit Madrid every year. It
(Cap) has become the driving force of has become the driving force of the
the(Cap) spanish economy nowadays. Spanish economy nowadays.
PUN Punctuation Crepes staff are helpful (pun) friendly and Crepes staff are helpful, friendly and
polite (pun) polite.
PART 3
ACTIVITY 1
Paragraph general structure and connectors:
To begin with, there are significant similarities between learning through private lessons and classroom
studies. The first similarity is to have a schedule. For example, students, both in private lessons and
classroom, have to follow a certain schedule. Subjects are taught according to a program, not randomly.
The second similarity is that students have to do homework in both situations. If students do not do
homework, they cannot improve their knowledge about that lesson. In brief, having a certain schedule
and doing homework are important similarities between private lesson and classroom studies.
ACTIVITY 2
1. Get familiar with some linking words to use them in your comparison paragraph.
LINKING WORDS
In comparison and contrast, transition words tell a reader that the writer is changing from talking about
one item to the other. Transitional words and phrases help make a paper smoother and more coherent by
showing the reader the connections between the ideas that are being presented.
To compare
Likewise/Like
Also In the same manner /way
As well as Same/Similar/Similarly
As The same as
Both Too
Most important
WRITING TASK 2
20 MINUTES
Write a 70-word comparison paragraph about the topics you chose. Include two similarities and examples.
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Exchange your comparison paragraph with a partner. Tick each circle if your partner took into account each factor.
Please write a comment on your partners’ performance writing the paragraph.
o Did your partner include a topic sentence starting the comparison paragraph?
o Did your partner include two similarities about the chosen topics?
o Did your partner include an example and/or explanation to support each similarity?
o Did your partner include a concluding sentence in the comparison paragraph, which summarizes the two
similarities?
o Did your partner use connectors to start the comparison paragraph, introduce each similarity,
examples/explanations and concluding sentence?
Comments:
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Improved version: Based on your partner’s feedback, improve the introductory and comparison paragraphs.
LEVEL 6 2016-01
WRITING TASK 1
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PART 4
ACTIVITY 1
1.1. Based on the information presented on the video you watched in the 5th hour activities, gather in groups of three
and summarize three features/characteristics of this type of paragraph.
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1.2. In the same groups, share main ideas from the video based on the questions you answered about it.
ACTIVITY 2
Based on the video, identify and underline with different colors the following features:
Topic sentences: green
Differences: red
Concluding sentences: blue
Connectors: yellow.
Despite similarities, the iPhone and Samsung phones have some differences as well. The first
difference is that both smartphones have different operative systems, iOS and Android. iPhone
runs under the iOS operative system like all Apple products. On the contrary, the Samsung 5
operates under the Android operative system. Therefore, even though both systems are robust
and support the device, the decision to purchase one or the other lays on the end user’s preference.
In addition, both smartphones have different app stores available to customers. iPhone users use
the App Store for their purchases, while Samsung users have the Google Play store at their
disposal. Thus, users can download and purchase apps easily in the store available through their
provider. In brief, different operative systems and app stores are the main differences these phones
have.
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PART 5
AIM:
ACTIVITY 1
1.1. Last term, you chose two topics to write the introduction and comparison paragraph (similarities):
-Which were them? __________________________ and ________________________.
-Use your outline to copy in the Venn diagram the two similarities and differences between both topics.
Similarities
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3 Paragraph 4
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ACTIVITY 2
Write your third and fourth contrast paragraphs (differences) about your topics. (130-140 words in total)
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ACTIVITY 3
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Checklist
o Did your partner include a topic sentence for each paragraph?
o Did your partner describe two differences about the chosen topics?
o Did your partner include an example and/or explanation to support at least one of the differences?
o Did your partner use connectors to start the contrast paragraphs, introduce each difference, contrast each topic,
provide examples/explanations and state concluding sentences?
Comments:
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SS Sentence Structure I want that you open the door (ss) I want you to open the door.
SVA Subject Verb He walk (sva) to school every day. He walks to school every day.
Agreement
WC Wrong Connector or She is tall. However, (WC) she is She is tall and intelligent.
insert a connector intelligent.
VF Verb Form She has been wait (vf) for 2 hours. She has been waiting for 2 hours
WO Word Order She has eyes blue. (wo) She has blue eyes
XYZ Unnecessary Word His happy birthday is on January 15. His birthday is on January 15.
S/P Singular-Plural form My child (p/s) were playing in the street My children were playing in the street when
when they saw the accident. they saw the accident.
Cap Capitalization Many people visit madrid (Cap) every Many people visit Madrid every year. It has
year. it (Cap) has become the driving force become the driving force of the Spanish
of the(Cap) spanish economy nowadays. economy nowadays.
PUN Punctuation Crepes staff are helpful (pun) friendly and Crepes staff are helpful, friendly and polite.
polite (pun)
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LEVEL 6 2016-01
NAME ____________________________________
Improved version GROUP ____________________________________
CODE ____________________________________
Based on the feedback given by your partner, write two contrast paragraphs for your compare and contrast essay.
(130-140 words in total)
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PART 6
AIM:
ACTIVITY 1
Below you will find six practical tips to write an effective title.
1. Write your essay. Most often, titles are written at the end of the writing process, so the first step in creating a
great title is to write your essay.
2. Consider your audience. Of course, you thought about your intended audience before and while writing your essay,
but think about who will be reading your work again when choosing a title. Think about what is most likely to appeal
to them.
3. Does the essay assignment ask a question? Asking a question in a title can be an effective way to spark the curiosity
of readers, but it’s usually a good idea to give the answer in your title.
4. Re-read your essay. If a good title doesn’t suddenly come to mind, write down your topic and key words from your
essay. These words reflect the main concept or ideas of the whole essay.
5. Join these words together in a sentence, or sentences. Convert these sentences into shorter phrases.
ACTIVITY 2
Imagine you work in an advertising agency and you have been asked to write an effective title for the
posters below. Compare your proposals with a classmate.
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ACTIVITY 3
1. _________________
Conclusion
2. __________________
3. __________________
ACTIVITY 4
1. Read the paragraph below and underline the three features identified in activity 3 and connectors.
Use different colors.
To sum up, there are not only similarities but also differences between private lessons and classroom studies.
Both settings share significant similarities which are related to the schedule and homework. Students usually
have the lessons within a specific time set either by the teacher or student; in addition, students have to do
some extra activities to practice what they have learned during the class. On the contrary, those methods
differ in aspects such as the learners’ comfort learners when asking questions and the setting where the
lesson takes place. As far as l am concerned, both forms of learning can work as long as students are
determined to achieve their goals and while learning.
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ACTIVITY 5
1. Read the chart below and circle the connectors you feel comfortable with in order to write your
conclusion:
ACTIVITY 6
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ACTIVITY 7
5. Exchange your concluding paragraph with a partner. For the feedback you need: writing rubric, list of
6. Use the list of conventions to provide feedback on grammar use, spelling, punctuation, vocabulary, etc.
7. Tick each circle if your partner took into account each factor. Please write a comment on your partners’
Checklist
o Did your partner restate the thesis?
o Did your partner summarize the two similarities and the two differences?
o Did your partner include an explanation to support the two similarities and two differences?
o Did your partner include a Supper So What! Sentence in which your partner state his/her opinion?
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o Did your partner use connectors to start the concluding paragraph, introduce similarities, differences and the
Super So What! Sentence?
SS Sentence Structure I want that you open the door (ss) I want you to open the door.
SVA Subject Verb Agreement He walk (sva) to school every day. He walks to school every day.
WC Wrong Connector or She is tall. However, (WC) she is intelligent. She is tall and intelligent.
insert a connector
VF Verb Form She has been wait (vf) for 2 hours. She has been waiting for 2 hours
WO Word Order She has eyes blue. (wo) She has blue eyes
XYZ Unnecessary Word His happy birthday is on January 15. His birthday is on January 15.
S/P Singular-Plural form My child (p/s) were playing in the street when My children were playing in the street
they saw the accident. when they saw the accident.
Cap Capitalization Many people visit madrid (Cap) every year. it Many people visit Madrid every year. It
(Cap) has become the driving force of the(Cap) has become the driving force of the
spanish economy nowadays. Spanish economy nowadays.
PUN Punctuation Crepes staff are helpful (pun) friendly and polite Crepes staff are helpful, friendly and
(pun) polite.
Comments:
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ACTIVITY 8
Write your improved concluding paragraph for your compare and contrast essay.
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