I really liked it up until the part where the heroine dressed in a little revealing way and the hero didn’t like that (understandable for me3.5 stars
I really liked it up until the part where the heroine dressed in a little revealing way and the hero didn’t like that (understandable for me) but the part that annoyed me was when he called the alpha and the alpha commanded her to change, that part was weird as shit and even worse, he was wearing clothes that the heroine didn’t want him to wear and he didn’t change. it was basically a double standard, unless he changed too i wouldn’t have minded. Also he didn’t apologize and brushed it off, the heroine had thought “what if this continues? he calls the alpha whenever he doesn’t like something and commands me to do it?” yeah that was never addressed and the author wrote in some bs drama (some guys wanted to kidnap her for ransom money) right after that scene so we couldn’t get around to talking about how that was a double standard. the hero really annoyed me after that and acted as if the heroine not being okay with his clothes was due to her being pregnant… like you want her to respect your wishes then respect hers.
a common issue in this series i find is the heroines being to forgiving or being a push over, and the hero using sex as a way for her to forget about the issues they have. i love when the hero is alpha and possessive and stuff but hate when they don’t respect the heroine and her wants on the process… ALSO, the hero snapped at the heroine in the start of the book and called her annoying and stuff and gave a half ass apology… they have a issue where he’s a asshole and she’s a push over, hate that…
other then that issue it was okay
dual virgins shifter (wolves) soulmates slow burn drama no ow/om drama no protection attempt kidnapping asshole hero slightly disappointing hero slightly disappointing heroine asshole ish hero pushover/doormat heroine after care ish time skips fast/abrupt scenes/rushed safe hea epilogue w/baby spicy lvl 3.5/5 wish was longer lack luster...more
okay this was the best book out of this whole series. Other books were okay-ish the second book was th4 stars
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okay this was the best book out of this whole series. Other books were okay-ish the second book was the second best, it also has things that were a no for me but this one was a hit. It had everything i liked, dual virgins, each others one and only, kids, had there priorities straight, i love the old school themes too. Best book 10/10 will read again.
dual virgins slow insta (slow ish for the heroine but she came around) arranged marriage (hero “bought” heroine) kidnapping (heroine gets kidnapped but not by hero) OTT HOT Hero gets a 3 out of 3 in all my categories (possessive/obsessive/protective) AFTER CARE YESSS breast kink milk kink Fluff angst violence safe no ow/om drama (unwanted flirting from random people) jealous hero jealous heroine i loved the heroine and the hero lovely first time slight push/pull from h, she comes around will read again hea epilogue w/kids spicy lvl 4.5/5 wish was longer cuz it was good...more
so i ended up liking this a lot more then i thought i was. it had a lot of the things i liked, after c4 stars
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so i ended up liking this a lot more then i thought i was. it had a lot of the things i liked, after care, married couple, h was virgin before meeting H, fluff, a lil grovel, baby making blah blah.
2 things i didn’t like, yeah i never really care for side characters, they just feel like filler to me and a waste of space for other things that we could be reading. the second thing is that it had nothing to do with stalker, i feel like the title was meant for another book? the H wasn’t a stalker just a hitman, there was zero stalking so i think the title was a mistake or something?
v heroine (she wasn’t in the book but her backstory is that she lost her v to H) insta love married couple (if anyone has any married couple rec where the heroine has only ever been with Hero let me know) hitman OTT hot no ow/om drama fluff no protection pregnancy misunderstanding lil grovel slight push/pull from h action violence hea epilogue w/kids spicy lvl 4/5 i recommend this ...more
this one was pretty disappointing. good writing is you writing it and we reading it, showing us it, it 2 stars
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this one was pretty disappointing. good writing is you writing it and we reading it, showing us it, it is not telling us about it. basically, we get a lot of time skips and we are expected to feel this chemistry between two characters who both literally haven’t had a normal convo at all. They both meet each other for the first time and it’s a 2 weeks time skip, then we find out they like each other and we are told about how romantic he was treating her during that two week time skip, we didn’t get to see any of the romance, we were told about it, then it’s another 2 week time skip and they have sex… yeah no… good writing is showing us these things i can’t like a story or characters who have no chemistry, i came here to READ about romance, not the characters telling me that there was romance… anyways yeah that’s a big pet peeve.
v heroine slow insta no chemistry assholeish hero (at the beginning) push/pull from h from what i saw no ow/om drama NO AFTER CARE no protection disappointed dnf safe ...more
A few problems with this one. First off the side char are annoying especially the (ow) i guess you co2.5 stars
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A few problems with this one. First off the side char are annoying especially the (ow) i guess you could call her. She’s a grown ass woman hiding behind a fake relationship cuz of her family, like seriously? If they don’t accept you then they can fuck off and you can grow up and stop hiding behind a fake relationship. She fr was acting like she was in high school or something. she was annoying and i hated that the H and h came together BECAUSE of her. So obnoxious.
the H was pretty disappointing. he didn’t really grovel or apologize (that’s a no from me) h was a doormat, they get together at the end and the book ends, those endings are disappointing.
v heroine ex manwhore h slow insta misunderstanding miscommunication disappointed H disappointing h not enough/no grovel doormat h annoying side char (i’m sick of side char) some om drama (she was friends with this guy that was interested in her and pretended to be her fiancé for like a minute) some ow drama (H was in a fake relationship cuz the ow was annoying and could grow some balls to stand up for herself either… she’s a adult…) no protection time skip (like 6 months i think and then another one for like 2 weeks) loyal separation hero didn’t chase… annoying push/pull from both safeish hea epilogue w/kids spicy lvl 3.5/5...more
was short and sweet, after first 50% of book has drama, after that it’s all fluff. no drama at all but i do wish the H knew the h was engaged 3 stars
was short and sweet, after first 50% of book has drama, after that it’s all fluff. no drama at all but i do wish the H knew the h was engaged before meeting him, that was really overlooked. what i like about this tho is that for once the book doesn’t actually end RIGHT when they get together, it actually shows there relationship and is just straight fluff. loved that. sex was kinda mid tho, we didn’t really get to see them having it, it kinda just told us they did it. one part that annoyed me was the Heroine met the Hero’s friends and she was kinda lusting after him and everytime she did she’d kinda remind herself that she’s with the Hero or she’d say “but Justin has my heart” yeah there was no point to that… i kinda hated that
virgin heroine, celibate hero instalove one night stand pregnancy loyal separation push/pull from h hero wasn’t actually too mad no one drama/ slight om drama, the h had a cheating fiancé but she leaves him quickly, we never hear from him again and i don’t think the Hero knew about that. Heroine kinda was starting too long at the Hero’s bsf… A WHOLE LOTTA FLUFF AFTER CAREEES slightly annoying heroine no protection miscommunication hero was a lil too good for heroine sex scenes were a let down heroines first time was disappointing safe hea epilogue w/kids spicy lvl 3.5/5 ...more
okay this one was meh. The hero was disappointing and the heroine had no backbone. I liked the book 2.5 stars
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okay this one was meh. The hero was disappointing and the heroine had no backbone. I liked the book and i feel there was more potential to make it a genuine 4 stars but it missed the mark in a fee things.
The hero needed to show he was sorry more and he needed the have the heroines back wayyyy more. It felt like the heroine was the one that really only cared for a deeper relationship other then sex and babies, hero was all about sex and babies and i wished he could it more effort into convincing both the heroine and the reader that he did in fact care about her. The whole Alpha bitch thing was just obnoxious and a stick in my side, it made no sense, he was really stupid for a good portion of this book.
I also hate that 98% of the book they argued and like right at the end they have sex and get together FINALLY. Yeah i wasn’t really convinced that he cared a whole lot about her, i feel like he was more interested in the baby and she was a accessory. Yeah i hate when they have sex and get together right at the end. Poor grovel and not much affection…
V heroine (she explained that he was her first and only but we dont get to read it in the book) slow insta soulmates shifters misunderstanding miscommunication angst not good enough grovel disappointing hero pushover heroine push/pull from h ow drama (the pack has a “alpha bitch” who was in love with the H and she caused all of the misunderstandings. H sides with her wayyyy to much and does a shitty job of reassuring the h that he wasn’t sleeping with her) no om drama safeish no protection time skip to epilogue (i hate that) abrupt ending hea epilogue w/kids disappointing epilogue spicy lvl 2.5/5 ...more
virgin heroine instalove possessive alpha one night stand loyal separation pregnancy no ow/om drama sl4 stars
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virgin heroine instalove possessive alpha one night stand loyal separation pregnancy no ow/om drama slight drama slight side character no protection time skip (4 months) safe hea epilogue w/kids wish was longer AFTER CARE spicy lvl 3.5/5 ...more
okay FINALLY a good grovel book we’re it actually felt like the Hero worked for the heroines affecti3.5 stars
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okay FINALLY a good grovel book we’re it actually felt like the Hero worked for the heroines affection and love back. however a few things did bug me that are typically shown in married couple books.
First off, i was disappointed about the amount of time skips (at most was 3 months) and i was seriously annoyed with the Heroines lack of communication, after the second time jump it felt like it was dragging out. Another thing that annoys me is that right after they get together, FINALLY, the book ends… I would’ve liked to see them building there relationship back up and some more fluffy cute moments instead of them just finally coming together then a epilogue 5 years later… Anyways, besides those issues i really liked the book, again a great grovel book.
no virgins (it’s implied that they were each others first? so that makes me happy, gets a pass) separation (loyal) no om/ow drama side characters misunderstanding grovel pregnancy chase push/pull from both (mostly h) protection was used in the pass but no protection was used during it safe divorce threats slight angst time skips (like 3 or 4) asshole ish hero (in the beginning) slightly annoying heroine (during the grovel, tho she kinda has a pass to be annoying after what he put her through) hea epilogue w/kids spicy lvl 3/5...more
Ella’s books are usually a hit or miss for me and this one was a miss, i really wanted to like it too 1.5 stars
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Ella’s books are usually a hit or miss for me and this one was a miss, i really wanted to like it too but the made absolutely no sense. The characters were unbearable and just straight up stupid. I felt like they were truly childish and immature, I get miscommunication but this was unnecessary. The heroine i think was the most annoying part in all of this, she was just straight up avoided maturity and conversation about anything, and what makes it worse is that they LIVE TOGETHER. Like so many problems could have been avoided…
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1.5 stars
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Ella’s books are usually a hit or miss for me and this one was a miss, i really wanted to like it too but the made absolutely no sense. The characters were unbearable and just straight up stupid. I felt like they were truly childish and immature, I get miscommunication but this was unnecessary. The heroine i think was the most annoying part in all of this, she was just straight up avoided maturity and conversation about anything, and what makes it worse is that they LIVE TOGETHER. Like so many problems could have been avoided…...more
disappointing. rushed writing, didn’t feel natural, bad writing in general, no chemistry. also pregnant2 stars
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disappointing. rushed writing, didn’t feel natural, bad writing in general, no chemistry. also pregnant woman (3rd trimester especially) don’t like it from behind LMAO.
v heroine instalovelust protection? idk she said she was on birth control but i think she lied? was never addressed. loyal separation safe-ish dnf disappointing
virgin heroine celibate hero nice/gentle first time slowinsta breeding age gap boss employee no protec4 stars
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virgin heroine celibate hero nice/gentle first time slowinsta breeding age gap boss employee no protection slight om/ow drama, just unwanted/uninterested flirting safe some drama hea epilogue w/kids spicy lvl 4/5...more
okay wow. that was a whirlwind of emotions, whiplash for sure. I loved the hero, super protective fo4.5 stars
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okay wow. that was a whirlwind of emotions, whiplash for sure. I loved the hero, super protective for the heroine and super OTT, loved that, he was amazing. Only reason why i didn’t give it 5 stars was they had 2 separations, that was a little annoying, also the fact that he changed his name and she just went with it. He’ll always be Hoss to her but to the public he should be Daniel, felt like he was denying a part of himself. But i do love how he fixed himself up and became “clean” cuz of her and the baby, i do also still love how we were shown some of his “crazy” at the end there, and i wished we had more chapters!! they get together and the end and then the story just ends… ahhh classic JK
Virgin heroine instalove underrated recommend 100% stalking OTT daddy kink giggle/tickle kink action safe-ish 10/10 hero/crazy hero pregnancy no ow drama/slight om drama at the end (unwanted flirting) no protection separation/loyal hea epilogue w/kids spicy lvl 5/5 omg ...more
this one was meh. another review said exactly what i think, The H really did seem to want the h only cu3 stars
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this one was meh. another review said exactly what i think, The H really did seem to want the h only cuz she could give him kids. no chemistry (at least towards the middle and end) and they really didn’t feel right for each other, idk…
Virgin heroine slow insta no ow/om drama meh hero push/pull emotionally by H, and physical push/pull from h pushover/to giving heroine breeding cross species (alien) no protection action loyal separation hea epilogue kinda w/ wedding spicy lvl 3/5
okay i wanted to like this one. had a strong start but fell off very fast. first off, the heroine ne2.5 stars
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okay i wanted to like this one. had a strong start but fell off very fast. first off, the heroine needs to get better friends. second off, oh shit it was rushed, quick and fast paced, way too fast, no chemistry cuz of how rushed it was. The first time they had sex was horrible, so was the other times, no forplay and unrealistic, not sexy at all, smut was bad then right after that was a 4 month timeskip and she’s pregnant??boring, bad, uncool.
anyways.
virgin heroine disappointed instalove yes sir kink no ow drama/ slight om drama, some unwanted flirting smut 0/5. just bad. no protection timeskip safe hea epilogue 2/kids spicy 0/5
v heroine instalove mafia boss violence action time skip separation pregnancy (heroine was told she couldn’t hav3.5
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v heroine instalove mafia boss violence action time skip separation pregnancy (heroine was told she couldn’t have kids) no ow/om drama no protection safe hea epilogue w/kids spicy lvl 3/5 (wanted more)...more
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