The sex scenes are pretty hot though, and the first few ones are nonconsensual so idk what that says about me.
Oddly, I think this would be much better as a fanfic with a toxic pairing that I actually cared about because I honestly don't give a fuck about Adeline and Zade. They're both written like caricatures of human beings....more
What in the Ebony Darkness Dementia Raven Way did I just read???
PURPLE eyes??? Are you fucking kidding me??
And the love interest is the ~Silver-eyed DWhat in the Ebony Darkness Dementia Raven Way did I just read???
PURPLE eyes??? Are you fucking kidding me??
And the love interest is the ~Silver-eyed Devil~ ???? Just... Why????
The way he kept calling her "little crow" reminds me of "violence" in Fourth Wing, and honestly, I just can't anymore. Vad can give Xaden a run for his money. Moody, possessive alpha males, my ass.
Lord, even as a trashy romance this was HORRIBLE. I laughed at some of the sex scenes. The male love interest came off as a predator. This felt like a thinly veiled Harry Potter fanfic. It was also the textbook definition of insta love.
Also the first few sex scenes read as SA to me because of the power dynamics and how helpless the FMC sounded like. He kept cornering her in the library like??? Totally normal thing for an instructor to do to a student.
And the way he kept emphasizing that he's ~dangerous~ seriously reeks of sex predator. Guys, get this man fired please.
I picked this up because the professor/student forbidden love trope is one of my weaknesses, but goddamn, this ain't it. I've read much better fanfic on AO3.
I thought we've all moved on from shitty Wattpad stories, but I guess not......more
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