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Carmen is on page 23 of 319
"Okay. Okay. I should get ready for Saskatoon anyway. What if we'd got there just in the middle of it? Hello Mom. Hello Daddy. Excuse me just a minute here while I -Wa - hoo!" - What. A. Moron. Seriously. THIS is who you choose to have an affair with? This guy!?!? Incredible.
Sep 09, 2014 11:20PM
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Carmen is on page 307 of 319
Roly Grain, his name was, and he does not have any further part in what I'm writing now, because this is not a story, only life. - Yes, that's blatantly obvious, Munro, thank you. These stories are so flippin' boring that they could only be "life."
Sep 11, 2014 04:16PM
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Carmen
Carmen is on page 248 of 319
As the shops and their signs were an insult, and the noise of the cars with their stops and starts. Everywhere the proclaiming, this is life. As if we needed it, more of life.
Sep 11, 2014 03:44PM
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Carmen
Carmen is on page 211 of 319
When they were walking they might brush hands, and he made himself get used to that. then when she changed the accidental to the deliberate, he found that he could get used to that also, overcoming a slight dismay.
He grew calmer, and was even prepared for kissing.
- Kissing! Prepare yourself! ¡Prepárate! :) Yay, kissing...
Sep 11, 2014 02:34PM
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Carmen
Carmen is on page 190 of 319
My great-aunt lived in abject poverty just like the woman in this story.
Sep 11, 2014 01:57PM
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Carmen
Carmen is on page 157 of 319
Some creepy fortune hunter was bound to snatch her up... She seemed both bold and childish. At first, a man might be intrigued by her, but then her forwardness, her self-satisfaction, if that's what it was, would become tiresome. Of course, there was money, and to some men that never became tiresome. - Fuck you, Howard.
Sep 10, 2014 11:11PM
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Carmen
Carmen is on page 153 of 319
This book is so boring. I guess I'll finish it tomorrow. Boring, boring, boring.
Sep 10, 2014 09:28PM
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Carmen
Carmen is on page 90 of 319
That was a story basically about nothing.
Sep 10, 2014 08:30PM
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Carmen
Carmen is on page 66 of 319
I am very disappointed with this book so far.
Sep 10, 2014 08:00PM
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Carmen
Carmen is on page 57 of 319
He did not want me to say anything. he took me to bed. Had this been in the cards all along, or was it almost as much of a surprise to him as it was to me? My state of virginity at least did not appear to be a surprise- he provided a towel as well as a condom... - Another asshole move. You're letting him fuck you!?!!? What are you THINKING?! Do you have no self-respect!?!? Grow a spine!
Sep 10, 2014 07:49PM
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Carmen
Carmen is on page 56 of 319
He had been brutal. It shocked me, that he had been so brutal. To one so much in need. But he had done it for me, in a way. So that his time with me should not be taken away. This thought flattered me and I was ashamed that it flattered me. - Fuck you too, lady. You have terrible taste in men.
Sep 10, 2014 07:45PM
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