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    The author takes a life-changing trip to the Rinjani Mountains with friends where they go hiking, camping, and exploring the stunning natural scenery. On the first day, they wake up early to hike one of the tallest mountains in the area which proves to be a grueling climb, but reaching the summit together is incredibly rewarding. Over the next few days, the group explores more of the mountains through activities like horseback riding and hot springs before departing with new appreciation for nature and memories to last a lifetime.

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    The author takes a life-changing trip to the Rinjani Mountains with friends where they go hiking, camping, and exploring the stunning natural scenery. On the first day, they wake up early to hike one of the tallest mountains in the area which proves to be a grueling climb, but reaching the summit together is incredibly rewarding. Over the next few days, the group explores more of the mountains through activities like horseback riding and hot springs before departing with new appreciation for nature and memories to last a lifetime.

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    The author takes a life-changing trip to the Rinjani Mountains with friends where they go hiking, camping, and exploring the stunning natural scenery. On the first day, they wake up early to hike one of the tallest mountains in the area which proves to be a grueling climb, but reaching the summit together is incredibly rewarding. Over the next few days, the group explores more of the mountains through activities like horseback riding and hot springs before departing with new appreciation for nature and memories to last a lifetime.

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    Name: Anang Ali Assegaf

    Nim: E1D022056
    A Life Changing Mountain Trip

    The mountains have always held a special place in my heart. The sheer size and

    beauty of these natural wonders leave me in awe every time I see them. So, when the

    opportunity presented itself to take a trip to the mountains with some friends, I jumped at the

    chance.

    Our destination was the Rinjani Mountains, and as we drove closer, I could feel my

    excitement building. We had rented a tent before start the trip, surrounded of wilderness and

    stunning views. The tent was comfortable, with a roaring fire and cozy blankets that made us

    feel right at home.

    The next day, we woke up early to begin our hike up one of the tallest mountains in

    the area. As we started our climb, I couldn't help but feel intimidated by the sheer size of the

    mountain. But I was determined to reach the summit, and I pushed on, one step at a time.

    The hike was grueling, and at times, I felt like giving up. But my friends encouraged

    me to keep going, and we pushed each other to reach the top. As we climbed higher, the

    views became more and more breathtaking. We could see for miles in every direction, and

    the feeling of being so high up was exhilarating.


    Finally, after several hours of hiking, we reached the summit. The sense of

    accomplishment and satisfaction that I felt was indescribable. We took a moment to catch our

    breath and soak in the view. The sun was setting, and the colors of the sky were like nothing I

    had ever seen before.

    As we began our descent, I couldn't help but reflect on the journey we had just taken.

    The hike had been challenging, but it had also been incredibly rewarding. I had pushed

    myself physically and mentally, and I had come out stronger because of it.

    Over the next few days, we explored more of the mountains, taking in the stunning

    scenery and enjoying each other's company. We went horseback riding, visited a hot springs,

    and even went white-water rafting. It was a trip that I would never forget.

    As we drove away from the mountains, I knew that I had been changed by the

    experience. I had gained a newfound appreciation for nature, and I had learned the power of

    pushing myself outside of my comfort zone. The mountain trip had been a life-changing

    experience, and it had left me with memories that I would cherish for a lifetime.

    Correction by Ananda Radith [ E1D022055 ]

    A. Yes, it follows the 5 rules.

    B. Not really, i think the best hook is with adding “ even if i have exam next

    week “

    C. The statement is direct.


    D. The statement is clear and based on whole story.

    E. Each topic sentence in each body paragraphs are related to the thesis ( good ).

    F. It’s not really summarize the main poin, but it does give an opinion.

    G. The structure are very good, and the story is surprisingly interesting.

    No. Point Incorrect Correction

    We had rented a We had rented a

    1 Grammar tent before start tent before

    the trip. starting the trip.

    2 Spelling - -

    Over the next Over the next

    few days, we few days, we

    explored more of explored more of

    the mountains, the mountains.

    3 Punctuation taking in the Taking in the

    stunning scenery stunning scenery

    and enjoying and enjoying

    each other’s each other's

    company. company.

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