DLP Eng G10 Q3 Melc 3
DLP Eng G10 Q3 Melc 3
DLP Eng G10 Q3 Melc 3
“You may not always write well, but you can edit a bad page. You can’t edit a blank
page.”
— Jodi Picoult
B. Activity/ Motivation This time the teacher asks her students to answer the short quiz to prepare them
for the new lesson.
B. Directions: Read the statements below. In your notebook write a check (√)
mark if the statement is a characteristic of a critique; write an X mark if it
is not.
1. A critique should be subjective.
2. A critique should be flexible.
3. A critique should be acceptable.
4. A critique should be long to be comprehensive.
5. A critique should be constructive.
C. Analysis/Presenting - The teacher will then ask the following questions. (Please answer complete
examples of the new in complete sentence).
lesson where the
concepts are clarified 1. How did you find the activity?
2.Did it prepare you for the new lesson?
3.Are you ready for the new lesson?
4.What do you think will be the new lesson of the day?
D. Abstraction The teacher introduces the days lesson by telling the students that they will be
acquainted on what is a critique how to write it.
There are several criteria on how to write a critique paper that you can use,
depending on primary objectives. Basically, you may use the following standards:
Bias. Critique essays may focus on the balance between facts and fiction.
Basically, the criterion applies where two sides of an argument exist. In this case,
students determine the vagueness of the information presented when organizing
critique papers.
There are a variety of ways to structure a critique. You should always check
your criteria. The following template, which showcases the main features of a
critique, is provided as one example.
Typically, the introduction is short (less than 10% of the word length) and you
should:
Name the work being reviewed as well as the date it was created and the
name of the author/creator.
Describe the main argument or purpose of the work.
Explain the context in which the work was created. This could include the
social or political context, the place of the work in a creative or academic
tradition, or the relationship between the work and the creator’s life
experience.
Have a concluding sentence that signposts what your evaluation of the work
will be. For instance, it may indicate whether it is a positive, negative, or
mixed evaluation.
Briefly summarize the main points and objectively describe how the writer
portrays these by using techniques, styles, media, characters, or symbols. This
summary should not be the focus of the critique and is usually shorter than the
critical evaluation.
This section should give a systematic and detailed assessment of the different
elements of the text, evaluating how well the writer was able to achieve the purpose
through these.
Ø what types of evidence or persuasion are used? Has evidence been interpreted
fairly?
Ø What literary devices and techniques were used? Are they effective in conveying
the message of the writer?
Ø How did you respond to the piece? Did you like it? Did it appeal to you? Could
you identify with it?
Ø Did you find any errors in reasoning? Any gaps in the discussion?
The closing paragraphs contain a summary of the overall evaluation of the work.
Basically, one should include:
The Analysis
This section of critique papers serves as the heart of the analysis. Students
should use compelling examples to support the main ideas and arguments.
Moreover, the inquiry method used must align with the one mentioned in the thesis
statement.
Closing Paragraph
One must seek advice from the instructor on how to close the paper for learning how
to write a critique paper. For example, some instructors may require students to
restate the thesis statement at the end of critique essays. Effective conclusions:
I will apply__________________________________________
G. Assessment - The teacher asks the students to read the short story on “The Necklace” by
Gay Maupassant and write a short critique composed of three or more
paragraphs. Please be reminded of the guidelines in writing a critique.
Your work will be graded based on this rubric.
The Necklace
by Guy De Maupassant
At the ball, Madame Loisel is a hit: elegant, joyful, and desired for waltzes.
She and M. Loisel return home at nearly 4 o’clock in the morning, and only when
they arrive home does Mme. Loisel realize she lost the necklace. After a week
with no news, M. Loisel proclaims that they must replace it, and the couple finds a
replacement for 36,000 francs. Loisel has 18,000 francs from his father’s will and
borrows the remaining sum, bit-by-bit and making “ruinous promises” (p.36)
along the way. After all this, Madame Loisel is able to return the newly bought
necklace in the original’s case, apparently rousing no suspicion.
To pay off the debt, both Monsieur and Madame Loisel must work tirelessly.
After ten years, they are finally able to pay off all of their debts. One day, while
taking a walk, Madame Loisel runs into Madame Forestier. She approaches her
old friend, but Mme. Forestier almost doesn’t recognize her. In sudden emotion,
Madame Loisel reveals her entire story of losing the necklace, replacing it, and
working off the cost of the replacement ever since. In response, Madame Forestier
replies that the original necklace contained not actual diamonds but rather fake
diamonds, meaning the original necklace cost no more than 500 francs.
V. REMARKS
VI. REFLECTIONS
A. No.of learners who
learned 80% on the
formative assessment
B. No.of learners who
require additional
activities for remediation.
C. Did the remedial
lessons work? No.of
learners who have
caught up with the
lesson.
D. No.of learners who
continue to require
remediation
E. Which of my
teaching strategies
worked well? Why did
these work?
F.What difficulties did I
encounter which my
principal or supervisor
can help me solve?
G. What innovation or
localized materials did I
use/discover which I wish
to share with other
teachers?
Prepared by:
JOSEPHINE V. AUSTERO
English Teacher