2024 reread: this wasn't as bad as I remembered?? I enjoyed it a lot more this time around - though SRB's influence/writing *cough* Peru *cough* remai2024 reread: this wasn't as bad as I remembered?? I enjoyed it a lot more this time around - though SRB's influence/writing *cough* Peru *cough* remains painfully bad, and the strongest stories by far are those that link in to TSC directly.
What Really Happened in Peru: 1/5 stars The Runaway Queen: 3/5 stars Vampires, Scones, and Edmund Herondale: 4/5 stars The Midnight Heir: 5/5 stars (oh how I wish TLH had followed through on this characterisation of James and Grace) The Rise of the Hotel Dumort: 3.5/5 stars Saving Raphael Santiago: 3.5/5 stars The Fall of the Hotel Dumort: 3.5/5 stars What to Buy the Shadowhunter Who Has Everything: 4/5 stars The Last Stand of the New York Institute: 5/5 stars The Course of True Love (And First Dates): 4.5/5 stars The Voicemail of Magnus Bane: don't feel I can really rate this one as it's not even a short story, really....more
Like Out of the Shadows, this errs more towards the younger side of YA, which again isn't a problem in and of itself, but it does mean that the juveniLike Out of the Shadows, this errs more towards the younger side of YA, which again isn't a problem in and of itself, but it does mean that the juvenile writing of the characters make them seem a lot younger (and more immature) than they actually are: Reath is 19, but comes across more like a 15/16 year old (and he seems a lot less mature than in his previous appearances), and Ram is 15 but acts and talks like a 12 year old, which made him extremely irritating. This did improve somewhat when the novel got to its meatier second half, which was definitely a lot stronger than the first half.
Not entirely sure DJO handled having so many characters' POVs very well, either, and the lack of skill in this regard did weaken the narrative somewhat. Really, you could have removed Zeen's POV and it wouldn't have made much difference (you could've even taken Zeen out of the whole novel, really, without much loss) and used that page time to develop the others a bit more. Also wished we'd had Cohmac's POV again - and that he actually got to spend some time with Reath - given what happened with him at the end. On a related note, whilst I applaud DJO's commitment to non-binary representation, I don't really get why we needed to waste so many pages with flashbacks to Kantam's past love affair. I kept waiting for it to be relevant to the events of the novel, and it wasn't. Another waste of pages that could have been cut and devoted to developing the novel's weaker elements.
Still, it was a fun read with good action and a really strong and emotional finish. A solid closing out of Phase One of the High Republic series....more
A solid enough read, but certainly the first weak link in a chain of great instalments (which I guess was inevitable with a grand project like this thA solid enough read, but certainly the first weak link in a chain of great instalments (which I guess was inevitable with a grand project like this that has multiple authors across various media types).
The pacing wasn't great. It was a very slow read - a lot of talking for 300 pages, until the final 100 pages of action (action that was very brief, and far too easy; there were no stakes) which, though being anti-climactic, also did a lot to advance the Nihil lore, so this book really can't be skipped. I had also expected this book to pick up the threads of Into the Dark (Cohmac's internal struggles, Orla's Wayseeking, Reath in general, the Drengir threat), but that wasn't the case, so it was a bit jarring to suddenly lose Cohmac's POV, have Reath relegated from a protagonist to a side character with just three or so POV chapters, and instead have the protags be Vernestra (who I liked) and Syl (a new character who I just did not care for at all). In fact, you could have entirely cut Reath and Cohmac from the book and it wouldn't have made a bit of difference, because they literally did not do anything, which was a shame as 1) they were a great part of Into the Dark, and 2) Nan was featured fairly prominently in the novel, and yet nothing was really made of her connection to Reath. So yeah, it was really disappointing in that regard.
I know this entry is YA, but a lot of the above problems stem from the novel's focus on the Syl/Jor romance at the expense of everything else. Comparatively, though Into the Dark is also YA, it felt a lot more mature - it was paced well, with good dialogue and action, and had actual stakes so that you actually feared for the characters. This was lacking in Out of the Shadows, so much so that when Reath and Imri were kidnapped, there was no doubt that they'd survive, and they all escaped the Nihil's ship far too easily. The contrast between the two is probably down to author skill/experience/style - given that Justina Ireland has written a few of the child/junior entrants into the High Republic series, the sedate tone of those seems to have seeped into her writing in Out of the Shadows, leaving it lacking the elements that have made the adult and other YA entries so damn great.
(Also, would the Jedi really let Vernestra have a padawan at such a young age? She's only what, 17? and Imri's only a couple of years younger than her? I find that hard to believe.)...more
Adam's story was very touching and moving, but I'm less convinced by Katherine's, and I thought they'd intertwine more. I liked the idea of K3.5 stars
Adam's story was very touching and moving, but I'm less convinced by Katherine's, and I thought they'd intertwine more. I liked the idea of Katherine's vengeful ghost, but I just couldn't really buy the whole Queen/faun thing....more
This was a book of two halves, for me. With five years between Jedi: Fallen Order and Jedi: Survivor, there was a lot of potential for storyt3.5 stars
This was a book of two halves, for me. With five years between Jedi: Fallen Order and Jedi: Survivor, there was a lot of potential for storytelling here, and I don't think it quite hit the mark. Personally, I think it would have been better for the novel to act as a bridge between the two games, perhaps by tying it more directly to the overarching narrative by showing how the Mantis crew broke up and Cal ended up going to work for Saw. Because when the novel did foreshadow the events of Survivor (Greez losing his arm, Cere's desire to set down roots for the Jedi's future, Cal's fear about falling to the Dark side), it was at its strongest, because it was more meaningful. Along this line of thought: the Fifth Brother, teased on the cover and blurb as the major antagonist, had just two appearances in the book. His first fight with Cal was great, and really showcased the threat of the Inquisitors, and the novel needed more of this sense of threat.
The writing was pretty hit and miss, too. The action scenes were written well, but things started to fall apart with some of the dialogue - just clumsy writing, such as not keeping track of characters' positions in scenes so that they randomly appeared in different places, without actually having moved there. There was also an issue with characterisation. Sometimes, it was spot on, other times they felt very out of character, particularly Merrin, which was largely as a result of Fret and their relationship. I have no problem with Merrin being bi, but I just couldn't buy her head-over-heels insta-love of Fret. It transformed Merrin from a competent, terrifying fighter into a lovesick teenager, who jeopardised the safety of her team, kept important secrets from them, and was constantly distracted on the mission because the stormtrooper was sexy. Game!Merrin would never, and it felt like a lazy way to try and inject some emotional investment/stakes into a lacking story. Honestly, Fret just seemed like a self-insert OC, and her relationship with Merrin - and how OOC it made Merrin - made those portions of the novel read like a badly written fanfic, with the author imposing her own personal headcanons onto Merrin regardless of whether they make sense.
Overall, I'm glad I read it because I love Cal and co, but it was definitely a wasted opportunity....more