Kolev Strategy 2017
Kolev Strategy 2017
Kolev Strategy 2017
by
Marinda Kolev
in the
FACULTY OF HUMANITIES
at the
UNIVERSITY OF PRETORIA
August 2016
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FACULTY OF HUMANITIES
DECLARATION
Title of dissertation: Strategy and procedures for translating proper nouns and
Afrikaans
I declare that this dissertation is my own original work. Where secondary material is
used, this has been carefully acknowledged and referenced in accordance with
university requirements.
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Acknowledgements
I would like to thank the following people for their support during my work on this
dissertation:
First of all, thank you to my supervisor Dr Helena Kruger-Roux for her support,
patience and expert guidance.
Thank you to my parents, Willie and Heléne Bekker.
Lastly, a very special thank you to Jaco Swanepoel who, amongst other things,
spent hours searching for Ossory.
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Summary
The history of translation has been built on the notions that the translator either leaves
the writer alone and moves towards the reader (domesticating the text), or leaves the
reader alone and moves towards the writer (foreignising the text). These strategies
have been called many names, but the translator has always been faced with the choice
between domesticating or foreignising the target text.
This study considers the options available to a translator when translating the proper
nouns and neologisms in a fantasy novel. The translator should not move towards and
stand next to the reader to create a target text that is unrecognisable compared to the
source text. At the same time, the translator cannot remain next to the writer and thus
not change the proper nouns and neologisms to ensure that the target-text readers can
understand all – or most of – the potential meanings. If the translator does not move
closer to the readers, they cannot have the same experience as source-text readers.
This study looks at the translation theories, strategies and procedures that can be
applied when translating proper nouns and neologisms used in Terry Pratchett’s Small
Gods. It is limited to the study of the neologisms that act as proper nouns, and does not
look at other neologisms in the novel. The study identifies translation procedures that
retain the meaning potential of the proper nouns and neologisms in the source text in
the process of translating them into an Afrikaans target text. It compares the
procedures that may have been used by the Dutch translator, by Venugopalan Ittekot,
of the novel, Kleingoderij, into Dutch with the procedures that are identified to be used
by a translator of the text into Afrikaans. This study identifies the procedures most
appropriate to a possible translation of proper nouns and neologisms in Small Gods to
Afrikaans in order to retain the meaning potential. The translation procedures that has
been identified are addition, cultural adaptation, internationalisation, literal
translation, neutralisation, substitution, transference, transliteration and transposition.
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These procedures can be used to attain equivalence at word level and in such a way
that the meaning-potential is retained.
Key terms
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Contents
1 INTRODUCTION.................................................................................................... 1
2.7 Strategy and procedures for translating proper nouns and neologisms . 52
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Procedures to translate proper nouns and neologisms ............ 56
3 METHODOLOGY ................................................................................................. 83
3.1 Introduction.............................................................................................. 83
4.1 Introduction.............................................................................................. 97
St Sevrian Thaddeus Ungulant and the small god Angus ........ 110
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Brutha ...................................................................................... 113
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Lu-Tze ....................................................................................... 141
Substitution.............................................................................. 171
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Descriptive equivalent ......................................................... 173
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List of figures
Figure 1: Polarities of directional equivalence (adapted), ............................................. 23
Figure 4: A scheme for analysing and comparing original and translation texts .......... 37
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List of tables
Table 1: List of translation procedures for proper nouns (in alphabetical order) ........ 68
Table 2: Names occurring more than ten times in Small Gods ..................................... 98
Table 3: Comparison of translation procedures for proper nouns in Afrikaans ......... 160
Table 4: Comparison of translation procedures for proper nouns in Dutch ............... 163
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1 INTRODUCTION
‘Before you can kill the monster – I always say – you have to be prepared to say its name’
Fantasy and science fiction writers often use neologisms, compounds and complex
words when they create new worlds, societies, cultures and characters. Fantasy fiction
contains plots that could not reasonably happen in the real world and are often set on
imaginary planets or in fictional places where magic, witchcraft or super-human powers
commonly occur.
Small Gods (1992) is the thirteenth novel in the Discworld series. The Discworld is a flat,
disc-like planet, resting on the backs of four celestial elephants, who stand on the back
of a giant turtle. This fictional setting is populated with dwarfs and trolls, as well as
witches, wizards and sorcerers; nobles and commoners; vampires and werewolves;
golems and zombies; and humans in every possible form and shape. Terry Pratchett
parodied the fantasy genre when he created the Discworld series. His witches and
wizards do not do magic, his vampires do not suck blood and the humans on the
Discworld do not possess super powers. As Pratchett and Wilkins (2015:20-21) said,
fantasy is not, as is popularly thought, about fabricating things:
As an alternative world, the Discworld distanced Pratchett from reality to criticise and
satirise what is considered to be ‘normal’ everyday life. It is said that satire ‘demands
at least a token fantasy, a content which the reader recognises as grotesque, and at
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least an implicit moral standard’ and that satire employs humour to attack an issue
(Childs and Fowler, 2006:212). Satire has little tolerance for human imperfection, as can
be seen in Small Gods.
The first Discworld novel, The Colour of Magic, was published in 1983 and the last
Discworld book, The Shepherd’s Crown, was published in August 2015. In the
intervening 32 years Pratchett wrote another 39 Discworld novels and a further
19 books about the Discworld, some in collaboration with other writers. His oeuvre
includes short stories, Discworld maps, graphic versions of some of the novels,
Discworld art books, and 13 novels not based on the Discworld (The L-Space Web,
2014). Pratchett’s books have been translated into 37 languages, including Hebrew and
Japanese (Briggs, 2012a:339). More than 85 million books have been sold worldwide
(Wikipedia, 2016i). Pratchett won several prizes, including the Carnegie Medal, and was
awarded a knighthood for his service to literature (Pratchett and Wilkins, 2015:60).
Sir Terence David John (Terry) Pratchett died on 12 March 2015, suffering from
Alzheimer’s-related disease (Pratchett and Wilkins, 2015:14,15).
In his book Small Gods, Pratchett created more than a hundred new words, compounds
and derivatives that were used as proper nouns and personal names, as well as names
for places and objects, gods and goddesses, and philosophical ideas and religions.
An increasing number of books are being translated into Afrikaans (Eloff and Van
Staden, 2016: pers.comm.) and translators need to be aware of the strategies and
procedures available to translate proper nouns and neologisms effectively. The absence
of a consistent translation strategy and procedures, and the results thereof, have been
highlighted by Bruwer (2005), who described the Afrikaans translations by Janie
Oosthuysen of the proper nouns in the Harry Potter books by J.K. Rowling. The absence
of a consistent translation strategy and procedures were manifested in the
inconsistencies between the ways in which the proper nouns were translated in the first
Harry Potter book as opposed to those used in translating the fifth book. Bruwer
(2005:52) found that Oosthuysen transferred more proper nouns in the fifth book than
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in the first book (published in 1997), and that proper nouns which were translated
(often localised) in the first book were merely transferred from the source text in the
fifth book (published in 2003).
The influence of the Harry Potter films on the translation strategy and procedures
cannot be discounted. The films (in English) were instant international successes. The
first film, Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone, grossed $90 million in its opening
weekend in the United States, which was a worldwide record (Wikipedia, 2016b). The
combined budget for the eight Harry Potter films was $1,15 billion and the films grossed
$7,7 billion worldwide (Time, 2013). The films gave the characters a physical
manifestation, with their original English names. As a result, ‘Broddelwerk’ and
‘Hermien’, as chosen in the translation of the first book, for instance, could not easily
be recognised as ‘Fudge’ and ‘Hermione’as translated in the fifth book (Bruwer,
2005:83,84).
The influence of films is not a relevant consideration when translating Small Gods, as
only three Discworld films1 have been made. These films were not shown on the
international film circuit, but as television films on the British channel Sky One (The L-
Space Web, 2016d). Television films are produced for or by a television network,
whereas theatrical films are made expressly for film theatres (Wikipedia, 2016h). Other
major differences are that theatrical films are shot on film with a multiple-camera
setup, whereas most television films are shot on video with a single-camera setup. The
greatest factors are time and money: theatrical films have bigger budgets and larger
crews (Buchman, 2014; Hodgetts, 2014)
1) Hogfather (2006), The Colour of Magic (2008) and Going Postal (2010).
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nouns and neologisms from English to Afrikaans in Terry Pratchett’s fantasy novel Small
Gods.
The Concise Oxford Dictionary of Current English states that fantasy is a ‘genre of
imaginative fiction involving fantastic stories, often in a magical pseudo-historical
setting’ (Fowler, Fowler, & Thompson, 1995:488).
According to The Routledge Dictionary of Literary Terms (Childs and Fowler, 2006:82)
fantasy writing can be described as a genre where the supernatural or seemingly
supernatural occurs. This includes gothic fiction and ghost stories and other fictional
works where the worlds and plots seem implausible. This genre includes works by
Tolkien (The Lord of the Rings series) and C. S. Lewis (the Narnia series) (Childs and
Fowler, 2006:82). Fantasy involves magic or witchcraft and takes place on another
planet or other dimension of the world, but everyday details are intertwined with the
fantastical to create a world with more possibility and opportunity (ibid.:83).
Fantasy books often have a mediæval setting (the architecture, clothing, language, and
technology corresponds to the European Middle Ages), as for instance The Lord of the
Rings, and often the characters are mythical creatures such as witches, wizards, dwarfs
and vampires or creatures from Greek and Babylonian mythology (Childs and Fowler,
2006:82). The fantasy genre should not be confused with science fiction writing which
involves technology that is advanced beyond what is available today. Some examples
are Star Wars and Isaac Asimov’s I, Robot (1950) (Bould, Butler, Roberts, & Vint,
2009:82).
Fantasy stories often take place in imaginary worlds where magic and magical creatures
are common. The fantasy genre generally stays away from scientific and horror themes
and rather contains elements of mythology and folklore. It is because of this fictional
setting and often mythical characters that fantasy writers create neologisms and
repurpose existing proper nouns as part of their characterisation.
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The Concise Oxford Dictionary of Current English (Fowler et al., 1995:1096) specifies that
a proper name (also proper noun) is a ‘name used for an individual person, place,
animal, country, title, etc., and spelt with a capital letter’. The Oxford Advanced
Learner’s Dictionary of Current English (Hornby, 2010:1176) defines a proper noun as ‘a
word that is the name of a person, a place, an institution, etc. and is written with a
capital letter’. The online dictionary Merriam-Webster (2016) describes a proper noun
as ‘a noun that designates a particular being or thing, does not take a limiting modifier,
and is usually capitalized in English – called also proper name’.
Proper nouns are those words that are used to identify individual people, places or
institutions, and which are written with initial capital letters. A neologism is defined as
‘a new word or expression or a new meaning of a word’ (Hornby, 2010:989). WordWeb
Dictionary (Lewis, 2015) defines a neologism as ‘a newly invented word or phrase or the
act of inventing a word or phrase’. The word neologism comes from the Greek néos for
new and logos for expression (Bussmann, 1996:794) and is a newly formed word or
phrase that is ‘recognized by at least part if not all of a language community as the way
to denote a new object or state of affairs’. Different types of neologisms are
differentiated (ibid.):
new expressions that are formed using existing words (for instance,
user-friendly, data bank, decriminalise);
the transfer of meaning (for instance, computer virus);
loans from other languages (for instance, sauté, mesa); and
expressions where a component is used metaphorically (for instance,
child’s play).
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strategy. In terms of this study, it refers to the procedures identified for the translation
of proper nouns and neologisms.
The research seeks to identify a translation strategy and the translation procedures
through which the meaning or potential meanings of the proper nouns that occur in
Small Gods (most of which are neologisms created by Pratchett, as the author) can best
be preserved in an Afrikaans translation. Other proper nouns in Small Gods are common
nouns used as proper nouns, for example, in one case, a string of words from different
word classes is used to form a proper noun (Cut-Me-Own-Hand-Off Dhblah). Terry
Pratchett often used neologisms to create unique proper nouns to describe the specific
qualities or characteristics of persons, objects and ideas. This frequently has the further
effect of contributing to the satirical humour. Pratchett is a master of satire, using clever
language nuances that often imply the opposite of what seems to be said (Lewis, 2015).
Some of the names may even have several different meanings that increase the
enjoyment for the reader.
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This means that words may have a potential meaning that may not have been part of
the original coding, but that is influenced by the culture in which the word exists. Jones
(2010) states that for Halliday ‘meaning’ is ‘function in context’. In this study, the term
meaning potential is used as the function of the word in the context – the role of the
word in the context but also the more abstract meaning associated with the word.
If a translator neglects to translate the full meaning potential of the word, readers may
fail to experience the entire range of meanings, or at least some of the meanings, that
were intended by the author of the source text. Readers of the target text should
theoretically have the same experience when reading the translated text as readers of
the source text had (Munday, 2009:186). This equivalent effect can be attained through
dynamic equivalence. It is the translator’s responsibility to ensure that the readers of
the target text are not denied access to the meaning potential of the source text and
can have the same experience. If the translator of Small Gods does not translate the
name of the character ‘Brother Nhumrod’, but merely transfers it to the target text,
readers in the target language will not understand the intended pun on Brother
Nhumrod’s physical condition. This is also true for the name of the freedom fighter
General Iam Fri’it. If his name is transferred to the Afrikaans text as Generaal Iam Fri’it,
he may become [Ie-ham Frit], and the irony that he is not only a soldier in the Omnian
Divine Legion but also an underground freedom fighter will be lost on readers. Readers
of the target text can only have the same experience as readers of the source text if
such proper nouns are translated to proper nouns with similar denotative and
connotative meanings, and if they have the same role in the text or the same role in the
norms (see below).
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that a word attains in the genre or that is evoked due to the external cultural influence
on the word (Loponen, 2009:13). In an ideal world, all four of these meanings will be
matched simultaneously in the source text and in the target text, but this ideal may not
be reachedin the actual translation context.
The aim of the study is to identify the translation strategy and the translation
procedures that can be used to translate proper nouns and neologisms with
equivalence ensuring that the full meaning potential is retained when translating the
proper nouns and neologisms in Terry Pratchett’s fantasy novel Small Gods from the
English source text into Afrikaans.
The translations of the proper nouns and neologisms in this study should have an
equivalent effect on the reader, that is, the target text reader should have the same
experience as the source text reader. If the source-text proper noun has a humorous
effect, the target-text proper noun should have the same effect. As indicated above, a
proper noun is a word that is the name of a person, a place, or an institution and which
is written with an initial capital letter. A neologism is a new word or expression, or an
existing word with a new meaning. This study is limited to neologisms that are proper
nouns.
In order to achieve the aim of the study, the following objectives were pursued:
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A thorough investigation of translation theories, strategies and
procedures pertaining to the equivalent translation of proper nouns
and neologisms.
The identification of the translation procedures used by the translator
in the Dutch translation of the novel, entitled Kleingoderij.
The identification of the selected proper nouns and neologisms in Small
Gods and the description of how they contribute to meaning in the
novel.
The identification and description of the most appropriate procedures
to translate proper nouns and neologisms in Small Gods into Afrikaans
for a possible Afrikaans version of the text.
In order to answer the central research question, that is, to identify the translation
strategy and the translation procedures that could be used by an Afrikaans translator
when translating neologisms and proper nouns in Small Gods from English into
Afrikaans, the following subquestions needed to be addressed:
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1.5 Chapter outline
Chapter 5 provides a summary of the findings and conclusions with suggestions for
further research.
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2 LITERATURE REVIEW
After the introduction to general translation theory, the chapter continues with a
discussion on strategies (domestication and foreignisation), before providing an
overview of procedures related to the translation of proper nouns and neologisms. The
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last part of the chapter provides a synopsis of Small Gods and of the secondary sources
that discuss aspects of the novel.
The aim of the study is to identify translation procedures that can be used to translate
proper nouns and neologisms in an equivalent way that will ensure that the meaning
potential is retained if Terry Pratchett’s fantasy novel Small Gods were to be translated
from English to Afrikaans. It is imperative to establish what equivalence is and how it
can be obtained.
Translation refers to the field of study, the product (the translated text) or the process
(the act of translating) (Munday, 2008:4). When translating, the translator changes the
original text (the source text) written in one language (the source language) to a
different text (the target text) in a different language (the target language) to reach a
wider audience and – according to Bassnett (2002:12) – in such a way that the surface
meaning of the source text and the target text is roughly similar.
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Catford (1965:20) defines translation as ‘the replacement of textual material in one
language (SL) by equivalent textual material in another language (TL)’.
Nida and Taber (1982:12) state that translating ‘must aim primarily at “reproducing the
message”’. If a translator does anything else, it is ‘essentially false’.
Eco (2004:6) believes that translation is a negotiation between several parties – the
source text, its author and the culture where it is situated opposed to the target text,
its culture and perhaps even the publishing industry. This negotiation requires each side
to relinquish something in order to achieve a greater aim. He considers the translator
to be the negotiator between all the parties.
Pym (2010:1,2) describes translation as a set of processes that lead one from the source
text in the source language set in a source culture towards a target text in the target
language set in a target culture, but suggests that each source can have a number of
previous sources and that a target can link forward to other targets and aims.
House (2015:5) argues that equivalence is ‘both a core concept in translation theory,
and the conceptual basis of translation quality assessment’, but she adds that it is one
of the most ‘controversial issues in recent decades’ (ibid.:6). She goes on to state the
following:
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1985); Pym (1995); and see Koller (1995, 2011). But there are very
vocal others who consider equivalence rather unnecessary, for
instance Hatim and Mason (1990) and Reiss and Vermeer (1984),
or reject it completely (Vermeer 1984; Snell-Hornby 1988; Prunč
2007). More recently, equivalence has been denied any value in
translation theory (Munday 2012: 77), or even denied any
legitimate status (Baker 2011: 5). Further, and rather oddly,
equivalence is sometimes linked to subjectivity in evaluation by
the analyst, e.g. by Munday (2012:68).
This researcher has a number of concerns regarding this statement by House. The first
is that this researcher cannot find substantiation for the statement that Hatim and
Mason (1997) consider equivalence ‘unnecessary’. Hatim and Mason (2005:5) discuss
translations that are not ‘communicatively, pragmatically or semiotically equivalent’.
They also say:
Hatim and Mason thus acknowledge and describe the importance of equivalence and
they do not, as House (2015:6) suggests, ‘consider it rather unnecessary’.
Secondly, Reiss and Vermeer do not consider equivalence ‘unnecessary’ either; Munday
(2008:72) states that Reiss’s work ‘builds on the concept of equivalence’ but that it
should rather be obtained at the level of the text and not at word or sentence level. He
adds that Reiss’s work is closely related to that of Koller (ibid.:47), who, House claims,
sees equivalence as an important concept. In his chapter overview, Munday (2008:72)
claims that ‘Reiss stresses equivalence at text level’ (emphasis added). Vermeer
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(1989:232) states that a translation aims to achieve an equivalent effect and he does
not ‘reject it completely’ (House, 2015:6).
This researcher cannot find the references as mentioned in the quote by House
regarding Munday’s alleged denial of equivalence in his 2012 edition of Introducing
translation studies: theories and applications (2012:77). This researcher has the first
(2001) and second (2008) editions and in these Munday does not deny the value of
equivalence.
Baker (2011:5) definitively does not deny the legitimate status of equivalence; she does
say that it is ‘always relative’, but almost 260 pages of her coursebook of 330 pages look
at equivalence at different levels.
Pym (2010:6) agrees with House’s statement concerning Snell-Hornby and equivalence.
Pym states that Snell-Hornby discarded equivalence as presenting ‘an illusion of
symmetry between languages which hardly exists beyond the level of vague
approximations and which distorts the basic problems of translation’.
The above arguments regarding House’s claim further prove what is stated in The
Routledge Companion to Translation (Munday, 2009:185) as well as the Routledge
Encyclopedia of Translation Studies (Baker, 1998:77), namely that the concept of
equivalence is one of the most contentious and disputed issues in translation studies.
Some writers have rejected the idea outright; some have considered it a tool for
teaching translation and others have stated that translation could not be done without
it. Stecconi (2004:21) concludes that ‘the idea of absolute equivalence [is] the original
sin of Western translation theory’ and that ‘at most we can speak of similarity relations’
(emphasis added).
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Equivalence is defined as the ‘translational connections’ (ibid.) between source texts or
source units, and target texts or target units. It has been differentiated as follows:
Jakobson (ibid.:115) argues that all existing knowledge can be described in any
language; therefore, where there are no equivalent forms available, words can be
‘qualified and amplified by loan-words or loan-translations, neologisms or semantic
shifts, and finally, by circumlocutions’.
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Equivalence is also described as ‘[t]he relation between the source text and the
translation [and] is then one of equivalence (“equal value”), no matter whether the
relation is at the level of form, function, or anything in between’ (Pym, 2010:6). Pym
further states that equivalence does not mean that languages are equal, but
equivalence presumes that there are equal values between languages and cultures.
Pym devotes two chapters in his Exploring Translation Theories to what he describes as
‘natural’ and ‘directional’ equivalence. Natural equivalence is achieved when the
translation contains the same values as the original text. These values can be words,
references or functions: ‘Equivalence need not say exactly which kind of value is
supposed to be the same in each case; it just says that equal value can be achieved on
one level or another’ (ibid.:8).
Natural equivalence
The linguists Vinay and Darbelnet did a stylistic comparison of English and French in
1958 and described equivalence in terms of cultural function. In 1965, Catford, also a
linguist, described translation shifts where equivalence can be achieved on one or
several layers. In his classification, Pym (2010:8,11) includes Vinay and Darbelnet (1958)
and Catford (1965) as theorists who believe in the possibility of natural equivalence.
Vinay and Darbelnet (Vinay and Darbelnet, 1958/1995:85-91, and Munday, 2008:56-
59) propose two strategies – direct and oblique translation – with seven general
procedures that can be used where there is no self-evident natural equivalence (also
cited in Pym 2010:13). Direct translation is similar to literal translation and is composed
of the following three procedures:
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Borrowing – where the source-language word is translated directly to
the target language, also called a ‘loan’ by Pym (2010:13); Vinay and
Darbelnet (1958/1995:85) call this the ‘simplest of all translation
methods’. Borrowing may be used to impart local colour to a
translation.
Calque – where the target-language expression is borrowed from the
source-language expression and each element is translated literally.
Vinay and Darbelnet (Munday, 2008:56-57) state that borrowings and
calque often become completely part of the target language.
Literal translation – where a word-for-word procedure is followed,
which is often used between languages from the same linguistic family
situated in a similar culture.
Vinay and Darbelnet (cited in Munday, 2008:57) argue that oblique translation should
be used when it is not possible to do a literal translation. Oblique translation is
comprised of four procedures:
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correspond with a similar cultural reference that is available in the
target language. Vinay and Darbelnet (ibid.:91) refer to this as the
‘extreme limit of translation’ where that which the source text refers to
is unknown in the target language or culture and can also be called ‘a
situational equivalence’.
Pym (2010:12,13) categorises the procedures formulated Vinay and Darbelnet as ways
to maintain natural equivalence or achieve equivalence when there are no apparent
natural equivalents. He suggests that the procedures could be seen as a vertical list with
loaning at the top and closest to the source text, and adapting at the bottom of the list
and closest to the target culture. He states that loans and calques should only be used
when the translator cannot find any natural equivalent and that adaptations can be
used for ‘loosely equivalent cultural functions’. In the quote that follows from Small
Gods (Pratchett, 2014:4-5), ‘national toboggan championship’ is a cultural reference
that may not be familiar in Afrikaans as tobogganing is not a sport practised in South
Africa:
Vinay and Darbelnet (cited in Pym, 2010:14-15) further describe a list of stylistic
procedures that function on sentence level:
2) Afrikaans words are in italics, unless the words are quoted from a text, then they are italicised and in
single quotation marks.
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amplification and reduction
explicitation and implicitation
generalisation and particularisation
When the translator uses more words for the target text than were used in the source
text, it is called amplification. The opposite procedure is reduction. When the translator
adds information that is implicit in the source text but that the target-text reader may
not know, it is called explicitation. The opposite is implicitation. When the translator
uses a more general word for a specific term, generalisation is used. The opposite is
particularisation. Pym (2010:14-15) summarises it as follows: ‘the translation can give
more (amplification, explicitation, generalization) or less (reduction, implicitation,
particularization)’.
According to Munday (2008:60), the model by Vinay and Darbelnet is related to what
Catford describes as translational shift. Munday adds that Catford analyses language as
‘communication, operating functionally in context and on a range of different levels
(e.g. phonology, graphology, grammar, lexis) and ranks (sentence, clause, group, word,
morpheme, etc.)’ and Munday states that equivalence does not have to be achieved on
all the levels at the same time. Pym (2010:18) notes that Catford describes equivalence
in terms of something that moves from ‘the phonetics of a text, to the lexis, to the
phrase, to the sentence, to the semantic function, and so on … [and] that most
translating operates on one or several of these levels’. He says that this correlates with
the model by Vinay and Darbelnet, as their procedures have a similar ‘hierarchy of
linguistic levels’ (ibid.).
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Textual equivalence is any target language text or portion of text which
that is ‘the equivalent of a source language text or portion of text’
(ibid.).
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In this section natural equivalence has been discussed. Natural equivalence occurs
when the target text contains the same values as the source text. It is not influenced by
directionality: a back-translation will create the same equivalence.
Directional equivalence
Pym (2010:25) states that directional equivalence does not assume that the relationship
between the source text and the target text is reciprocal. If a translator translates from
English to Afrikaans, and then back-translates to English, the same equivalence may not
be created. A translated text is only one of several possible representations of the
source text. As indicted above, the ‘national toboggan championship’ mentioned in
Pratchett (2014:4-5) (see page 19) can be translated into Afrikaans as nasionale
abseilkampioenskappe. A back-translation would be ‘national rappel championship’.
There is an asymmetrical relation between the source text, the target text and the back-
translation.
Pym adds that the procedures for directional equivalence are either foreignising
(remaining close to the source text) or domesticating (moving closer to the target
readers).
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Pym (2010:33) describes the polarities of directional equivalence as follows:
Sense-for-
Cicero and Horace (1st BC) Word-for-word
sense*
Dynamic*
Nida (1964/1969) Formal
(Functional)
Foreignising* Domesticating
Venuti (1992/1995/1998)
(Resistant) (Fluent)
3) The dates of the person’s major publications were added and the list was ordered chronologically.
4) The asterisk (*) indicates the method favoured by that person, if a clear preference is known.
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Nida and Taber (1982:12) describe translation as the reproduction of a text in a target
language with the ‘closest natural equivalent’ from the source language in terms of
meaning and style. They state that the translator ‘must strive for equivalence’. Nida
(1964b:159) argues that there cannot be something such as identical equivalency. Thus
a translator should aim to find the ‘closest possible’ equivalent to the source text.
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(Munday, 2009:186). Nida (1964b:162) argues that all translating ‘whether of poetry or
prose, must be concerned also with the response of the receptor’.
Munday (2008:42) states that formal equivalence is used to describe a translation that
remains close to the source-text structure, language and culture; and that dynamic
equivalence is used to describe a translation where the influence of the source text is
minimal. An equivalent response – the equivalent effect – is one of the four basic
requirements of a successful translation as described by Nida (1964b:164). A successful
translation should
make sense;
convey the spirit and the manner of the original;
have a natural and easy form of expression; and
produce a similar response.
Nida argues that if there are conflicts between meaning (content) and manner (form),
priority must be given to meaning.
In terms of this study, this researcher aims to ensure that the target-text reader has a
similar experience as the source-text reader and aims to translate the proper nouns and
neologisms with dynamic equivalence that leads to an equivalent effect. However, this
researcher is of the opinion that there is a continuum with formal equivalence on the
one end and dynamic equivalence on the other end, and a blend of the two between
the end points. In the case of Small Gods, the foreign locale and setting have to remain
close to the source text, but the proper nouns and neologisms may move closer to the
target text to ensure that the reader clearly understands the role of the character
concerned. As Nida (1964b:164) suggests, priority must be given to the meaning.
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adequate (the translator moves towards the source text) or acceptable (the translator
moves towards the target culture) (Munday, 2009:112).
Word-for-word
Adaptations
translation
Communicative
Semantic translation
translation
The strategies described on the left aim to maintain the source-text structure; the
strategies on the right are focused on creating texts that are appropriate in the target
culture (Munday, 2009:7-8). Word-for-word translations are the most literal and even
preserve the source-language word-order. In the first century BCE Cicero differentiated
between word-for-word (literal) and sense-for-sense (free) translations (Munday,
2001:19). Both St Jerome and Luther rejected word-for-word translations because it is
not possible to express the same meaning of the source text in the target text without
sounding nonsensical (Munday, 2001:20,23).
Adaptations are the ‘freest form’ of translation; the source culture is changed to the
target culture (Newmark, 1988:46). This would not be an acceptable proposition for
translating the proper nouns and neologisms in Small Gods. The perceived foreignness
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of the Discworld and the unfamiliar setting of Small Gods in particular is ingrained in
the appeal of the Discworld series.
In literal translation, the grammatical structures of the source language are changed to
the closest structures in the target language, but words are still translated directly.
Newmark (ibid.:46-47) calls a translation free when the target text is paraphrased and
the content is transmitted without preserving the form of the source text.
Semantic translation is more flexible than faithful translation and, according to Pym
(2010:32), looks back to and retains the formal values of the source text.
With the terms communicative translation and semantic translation Newmark aims to
bring the source language and the target language closer.
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language that they are most comfortable using. Semantic translations ‘empathise’ with
the author and are written at the linguistic level of the author. Communicative
translations function on the language and knowledge level of the reader. He
summarises it as follows: ‘At a pinch, a semantic translation has to interpret, a
communicative translation [has to] to explain’ (ibid.:48). According to Newmark (ibid.),
achieving equivalent effect is the ‘desirable result rather than the aim of any translation’
(original emphasis). Again, this researcher would aim to attain a position somewhere in
the middle between a purely semantic and a communicative translation. The language
used must come naturally and read comfortably, but this researcher empathises with
Pratchett and admires his linguistic skills and would not want lose any of his nuances.
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(ibid.:23) suggests that although foreignisation leads to an ‘alien reading experience’, it
allows the translator to move towards the linguistic and cultural difference of the
foreign text (Munday, 2001:147). He posits that foreignisation ‘reflects the SL norms
and reminds the target-culture readers that they are dealing with a translation, thus in
some ways bringing them closer to the experience of the foreign text’ and may include
procedures such as borrowing and calque (Munday, 2009:189). Venuti (2004b:20)
argues against domestication as it leads to an ‘ethnocentric reduction’ of the source
text. He states ‘that insofar as foreignizing translation seeks to restrain the ethnocentric
violence of translation, it is highly desirable today’. Venuti (2004b:1) posits that
Venuti (2004b:21) argues that these acceptable translations may produce fluent
translations that pretend to be genuine semantic equivalence.
When translating Small Gods, the cultural differences, and the linguistic and stylistic
peculiarities are an integral part of the narrative development and characterisation, and
should be retained. Even when ‘domesticating’ the proper nouns and neologisms, the
translator has to be careful and not translate them to strictly Afrikaans names unless it
is necessary for the characterisation. For example, translating the name of the freedom
fighter General Iam Fri’it to that of a well-known freedom fighter or soldier in the
Afrikaans culture or context would not contribute to the experience of the target-text
reader, and might confuse the reader.
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House’s model is discussed in Section 2.4 Discourse and register analysis approaches
but her differentiation of equivalence as being overt or covert is added here. House
(2015:6) states that equivalence means
… “of equal value” and that it is not at all about sameness or, worse
still, identity, but about approximately equal value despite some
unavoidable difference – a difference, we might add, that stems
from the (banal) fact that languages are different (emphasis
added).
House (2015) describes equivalence in terms of overt and covert translations in her
book Translation Quality Assessment: Past and Present. An overt translation does not
intend to be a second original and the readers are aware that they are reading a
translation as there are references to cultural and linguistic elements that are not part
of the target culture but are firmly embedded in the source culture (House, 2015:54).
House (ibid.:245) says: ‘An overt translation is thus both from a linguistic and a
psycholinguistic perspective a distinctly hybrid entity’. The equivalence is at the level of
the language, register and genre, whereas covert translations receive the same status
as an original text in the target culture and the readers are not aware that they are
reading a translation. House (2015:56) says that ‘[t]he translation is covert because it is
not marked pragmatically as a translation at all, but may, conceivably, have been
created in its own right’. Hatim and Munday (2004:337) explain in the glossary of their
bookthat a translation that reveals nothing of the foreignness of the source culture is a
covert translation and that an overt translation remains as close to the source text as
possible.
Other equivalence
Baker (2011:4,5) describes translation as a discipline which has to ‘concern itself with
how meaning is generated within and between various groups of people in various
cultural settings, and with what impact on society’ and views equivalence in translations
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as manifesting on several levels. In her book In Other Words: A Coursebook on
Translation (Baker, 2011), she differentiates the following:
word-level equivalence;
above-word level equivalence;
grammatical equivalence;
textual equivalence on thematic and informational structure level;
textual equivalence in terms of cohesion; and
pragmatic equivalence.
Baker points out that the term equivalence is used for the sake of convenience and that
equivalence is always relative as it is influenced by linguistic and cultural elements
(ibid.:5). Pym (2010) does not include her in either natural or directional equivalence,
but Baker’s work is relevant to this study as it discusses equivalence on the different
levels as described above. The procedures described by Baker (though she calls them
strategies) are relevant to this study but were not used as such, because this study
focuses specifically on the translation of proper nouns and neologisms. Baker’s
procedures cover the translation of words and expressions, combinations of words and
phrases, grammatical categories and the textual level of language, word order, and
grammatical and lexical relationships (Baker, 2011:4-5).
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Wyke, 2010:113). The recipients of the target text, with their culture-specific view of
the world, determine the purpose of the translation (Nord, 1997:12). Nord says that the
status of the source text is higher in equivalence-based theories than it is in the
Skopostheorie.
Pym (ibid.) describes the Skopostheorie as one where priority is given to the purpose of
the target text and suggests that one source text can have several different translations
in order to fulfil different purposes in the target language. He suggests that it is in
opposition to the equivalence paradigm, because the purpose – function – of the
translation is more important than achieving equivalence. However, he adds:
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little difference between the two paradigms: the relation between
source-text function and target-text function is still one of
equivalence (ibid.).
It can therefore be said that the premise of functionalism and the Skopostheorie is that
the target text should be based on the translation brief proposed by the initiator of the
translation, which then determines the purpose or intention that the translation will
have in the target culture. In the case of Pratchett’s text, although translating the
proper nouns and neologisms found in Small Gods is a purposeful activity, the method
and procedures of translation are not influenced by the purpose or the intention of the
translation as determined by an initiator (provided that the target text is still intended
to be read as a literary work). In this study it is thus assumed that there is not a
difference between the purpose or intention of the source text and that of the target
text.
In contrast with functionalism and the Skopostheorie (where the focus is on the purpose
of the target text as determined by the translation brief), discourse and register analysis
approaches study the cohesion and coherence of a text and regard the whole text as
the unit of translation (Newmark, 1988:54).
Newmark (ibid.) states that discourse analysis can be described ‘as the analysis of texts
beyond and “above” the sentence – the attempt to find linguistic regularities in
discourse’, and that the central ideas of discourse analysis focus on cohesion and
coherence. Baker (2011:300) differentiates between cohesion and coherence as
follows:
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Munday (2008:90) describes discourse analysis as the study of the way that ‘language
communicates meaning and social and power relations’. He adds that House’s
Translation Quality Assessment: A Model Revisited (1997), Baker’s In Other Words
(2011); and Hatim and Mason’s Discourse and the Translator (1990) as well as their The
Translator as Communicator (2005) use Halliday’s systemic functional model – also
called the Hallidayan model of language and discourse. This model aims to study
language as communication, where meaning resides in the language used by the
author, who is in turn situated in the broader social and cultural setting. The model
(Munday, 2008:90) is graphically depicted in Figure 3, overleaf. The red arrows show
the flow of influence.
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Sociocultural
environment
Genre
Register
Discourse
semantics
Lexicogrammar
Theme-rheme
Transitivity Modality
cohesion
Halliday’s model describes the influence that the sociocultural environment has on the
genre (the text type linked to the purpose of the communication). In turn, the genre
influences the register, which consists of the following:
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Tenor – defined in Munday (2008:91) as the ‘who’ that is doing the
communicating; and
Mode – defined in Munday (2008:91) as ‘how’ the communication is
done.
House’s model of translation quality assessment has several similarities with the
Hallidayan model, as it incorporates the analysis of field, tenor and mode. House
(2015:64) defines these as follows:
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House’s model (2015:65) to determine the quality of a translation can be represented
in Figure 4.
Genre
Register
(generic purpose)
Language/text
Figure 4: A scheme for analysing and comparing original and translation texts
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5. Compare the target-text profile with that of the source text to create a
profile of mismatches in terms of the field, tenor and mode, and in
terms of the function.
6. Create a ‘statement of the quality’ (ibid.:83) of the translation.
7. Categorise the translation as overt or covert. If covert, determine
whether a cultural filter has been applied.
A translation is overt when it makes no attempt at being a second original and is clearly
a translation (Shuttleworth and Cowie, 2014:118). A covert translation attempts to
conceal the fact that it is a translation (ibid.:33).
Baker (2011:11) proposes a model for analysing lexical meaning based on the book
Lexical Semantics by Cruse in 1986 with adaptation of the Hallidayan model’s
description of register. She starts by defining lexical meaning as the specific value that
a word has in a language and says that it becomes the ‘personality’ of that word. She
describes four types of lexical meaning:
propositional meaning;
expressive meaning;
presupposed meaning; and
evoked meaning.
Propositional meaning is the ‘meaning which arises from the relationship between a
word or utterance and what it refers to’ (Baker, 2011:303) whereas expressive meaning
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is the ‘meaning which relates to the speaker’s feelings or attitude’ (Baker, 2011:301).
Presupposed meaning refers to the ‘meaning which arises from co-occurrence
restrictions, namely selectional restrictions and collocational restrictions’ (ibid.:303).
Baker defines presupposed meaning as follows: ‘[S]electional restrictions are
semantically arbitrary restrictions which do not logically follow from the propositional
meaning of a word’ (ibid.). She states that collocational restrictions are ‘restrictions
which follow logically from the propositional meaning of words’ (ibid.:301). Evoked
meaning is created by the dialect (the language variety spoken by a specific group of
people) and the register (the language variety that is appropriate in a specific situation).
Baker (2011:14) distinguishes the following differences in register:
Baker (ibid.) says that the only type of lexical meaning that can be either false or true is
the propositional meaning. The other types of lexical meaning contribute to the
meaning in ‘subtle and complex’ ways. She states (ibid.:15) that a translator must try to
understand the meanings of words as fully as possible before attempting to translate
them into another language. The target text must be coherent, that is, the words and
ideas must have logical flow in the mind of the reader.
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Presupposition refers to the linguistic and extra-linguistic knowledge
that the author of a text assumes the reader of that text will have to be
able to understand the author’s intended message.
Implicature refers to the meaning implied by the author rather than
what is directly said.
The translator needs to be aware how each of these pragmatics in translation may
influence the translation. Baker (2011:263) concludes her description on pragmatics as
follow:
In this study, the researcher kept the above statement in mind and attempted not to
explain too much in the translation of the proper nouns, to avoid leaving a reader of
the translated Pratchett text with nothing to do. Small Gods should be translated
overtly, as it cannot be a second original in the target language. It will clearly be a
translation, even when the proper nouns and neologisms have been ‘domesticated’.
The main contribution of the register and discourse analysis models lies in the value of
the translation quality assessment model as described by House (1977, 1997, 2015),
Baker’s contribution to translator training with In Other Words (2011), and the
contribution to the field of translation by Hatim and Mason (2005).
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2.5 Polysystem theory
Emerging concurrently with the register and discourse analysis systems and also in
reaction to the simplification of the translation process presented by proponents of
functionalism and the Skopostheorie, the polysystem theory refers to a heterogeneous,
hierarchical system of systems that interacts and keeps changing to accomplish a
continuous development within the polysystem. The hierarchy in the system describes
the ‘positioning and interaction at a given historical moment of the different strata of
the polysystem’ (Munday, 2008:108).
when a polysystem has not yet been crystallized, that is to say, when a
literature is “young,” in the process of being established;
when a literature is either “peripheral” (within a large group of
correlated literatures) or “weak,” or both; and
when there are turning points, crises, or literary vacuums in a literature
(ibid.:193-194).
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The aim of the polysystem theory is to attempt to understand what happens when a
text is translated to another language and not to evaluate what was lost in that process.
Bassnett states that the polysystem theory concentrates ‘exclusively on literary
translations’ but includes dubbing, subtitling, children’s literature, popular culture and
advertising in that classification (ibid.:8).
The Descriptive Translation Studies model that was developed by Toury (cited in
Munday, 2001:111), and that was built on the polysystem theory (Bassnett, 2002:7), is
a descriptive model of translation. According to Gambier and Van Doorslaer (2010:96),
it is in opposition to the prescriptive model proposed by Chesterman (Munday,
2008:117) (emphasis added).
The Descriptive Translation Studies model places translation firmly in the social and
literary domains (Munday, 2001:112) and aims to describe what translations are, rather
than prescribing what they should be (Pym, 2010:65). Toury describes translation
outcomes as being adequate (compared to the source text) or acceptable (in terms of
its reception) (cited in Pym, 2010:32). He posits that translations aim to fill a need in
the target-culture’s literature and the focus of translation studies should, therefore, be
on the target system (cited in Bassnett, 2002:7).
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preliminary norms (governing translation policy on the choice of texts
or text types to be translated, or regarding the degree of tolerance to
indirect translation which resorts to intermediate texts); and
operational norms (including both matricial norms regarding the
degree of fullness of translation, textual segmentation and distribution,
and textual-linguistic norms governing the choice of target textual-
linguistic material to replace the one found in the source text).
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According to Munday (2008:117), Toury’s construct of norms ‘focused mainly on their
function as a descriptive category to identify translation patterns’ whereas Chesterman
states that ‘all norms “exert a prescriptive pressure”’.
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The relation norm determines the appropriate relation between the
source text and the target text. This may include equivalence or
‘optimal similarity’ or similarity of style or effect.
Chesterman’s professional norms correlate with what Nord says about the ethical
obligations of the translator (Pym, 2010:55): ‘[The] translator has ethical obligations not
only to texts (the traditional focus of “fidelity”) but more importantly to people: to
senders, clients, and receivers, all of whom merit the translator’s “loyalty”’.
The main contribution of the polysystem theory to translation theory is that it stresses
the interconnectedness of culture, literature, linguistics, economics, history (and
several others) and describes how these influence the translated text. It therefore
examines the role of the translated text in its new context and does not evaluate what
was lost in the translation process.
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rendered into other codes. As such, translation is nothing short of
an essential problem of semiosis: it is the problem of transfer of
codes.
Hatim and Mason (2005:9) define semiotics as the ways in which signs interact within a
sociocultural setting. They further assume that a text has ‘surface’ elements and
‘underlying’ meaning potential and these are signs that are part of the process to assign
meaning. Hatim and Mason (2005:33) quote Peirce’s (1931:135) definition of a sign as
‘something which stands to somebody for something in some respect or capacity’.
Bassnett (2002:26,27) refers to Ludskanov who called ‘semiotic transformation’ the
‘replacements of the signs encoding a message by signs of another code, preserving (so
far as possible in the face of entropy) invariant information with respect to a given
system of reference’. Bassnett (ibid.:34) describes Neubert’s distinction of translation
as process and product, and says that he attempts to solve the conundrum of
equivalence in translation by suggesting that translation equivalence should be looked
at as a semiotic category, consisting of a syntactic, semantic and pragmatic component.
Equivalence then results from ‘relation between signs themselves, the relationship
between signs and what they stand for, and the relationship between signs, what they
stand for and those who use them’.
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Intersemiotic translation – when the verbal signs are transformed to a
nonverbal sign system.
In his book Toward a Science of Translating, Nida (1964b:30) states that the principles
and procedures of translation cannot be discussed unless one has an in-depth
understanding of the way that meaning is conveyed through language as ‘a
communication code’. This code consists of parts, the way in which it operates and how
that is related to other codes. Nida suggests that a word adopts meaning due to its
context, especially when dealing with metaphorical meaning, and can have different,
complex meanings, depending on the culture where it exists. Words can have linguistic
meaning, referential meaning and emotive meaning (Munday, 2001:38).
Stecconi (2004:15) argues that he ‘move[s] from the assumption that translation is a
special form of sign-action or semiosis. Simply stated, this means that all translating is
semiosis but not all semiosis is translating’. In his article ‘Five reasons why semiotics is
good for Translation Studies’ (2004), he claims that natural language is only one sign
system amongst many others and that translation is not ‘existentially defined by
language’; it is something done with words, but also to words and to other signs
(original emphasis) (ibid.:18,19). Stecconi (2004:18) quotes Peirce’s definition of a sign:
Stecconi (2004:20) states that the original text is the semiotic object; the target text is
the sign or representamen and the interpretant is the significance of the translation by
those who receive it (see Figure 5 overleaf)
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(Receivers ) Interpretant
What the translation signifies to
those who receive it
Sign
Object
(Representamen)
Source text
Target text
Merrell (2005:29) states that a sign can only be a sign if there is a representamen, an
object and an interpretant; each of these must be involved with the other sign
components. He describes the representamen (the sign) as the start of the process: the
sign directs to the object and this leads to the sign’s meaning (interpretant). He states
that each of the components of the triangle can become one of the other components.
If, for instance, smoke is the sign of fire (the semiotic object), the interpretant is that
there is danger. However, the fire as object can become the sign that leads to the
object; which is that the fire destroys the environment. The interpretant is that the
danger is greater than initially thought. The danger (interpretant) becomes the sign that
could lead to the next semiotic object: a nearby campsite. The interpretant becomes
that there may be loss of life (see Figure 6, overleaf, Merrell, 2005:29).
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Figure 6: Semiosis based on Merrell’s Peircean sign
Merrell’s description becomes relevant to translation when fictional cultures (as exist
in fantasy literature and science fiction) and, therefore, (fictional) proper nouns and
neologisms, need to be translated. This becomes clearer when looking at
Loponen (2009).
In her article ‘Translating irrealia – creating a semiotic framework for the translation of
fictional cultures’, Loponen (2009:8,9) proposes a semiotic model to address problems
related to genres such as fantasy and science fiction. She posits that any text has two
levels of coding: that of natural language and that which is called the ‘semiosphere’.
The semiosphere refers to ‘all the norms, conventions, rules and texts of a culture or a
subset of a culture’. This makes it possible for a single text segment to have multiple
meanings. The translator then has to deconstruct the text into different segments and
create new codes for these.
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Loponen (ibid.:11) suggests breaking relevant textual elements down to
Denotation Denotation
Connotation Connotation
Source concept Target concept
Role in text Role in text
It may not be possible to match the meanings on every level from the source text and
culture to the target text and culture. This can be represented as follows (see Figure 8
overleaf (Loponen, 2009:14)).
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Denotation Denotation
Connotation Connotation
Source concept Target concept
Role in text Role in text
Role in norms
Role in norms
This framework can be used to overtly translate the fictional world of Small Gods and
the proper nouns and neologisms in the novel. A name such as ‘Ossory’ has denotative
and connotative meanings that would have to be translated. When applying Loponen’s
framework to the name Ossory, the process could be represented as follows:
Denotation
a receptacle for Denotation
the burial of been
human bones
Role in norms
Role in norms
Moses-like
Mosesfiguur
figure
The semiotic approach to translation theory is useful in the sense that it provides a
framework within which translation takes place and clearly defines the requirements
for the target text to be considered a faithful representation of the source text sign.
However, the semiotic approach does not offer specific procedures for accomplishing
this, but rather a holistic approach within which this quality can be attained. The next
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section discusses various strategies and procedures in translation theory and their
relation to the translation of specifically proper nouns and procedures in this study.
2.7 Strategy and procedures for translating proper nouns and neologisms
This study focuses on translating proper nouns and neologisms in Terry Pratchett’s
Small Gods. The novel is situated on the fictional planet, the Discworld, a flat convex
world carried on the backs of four elephants, who stand on the back of a giant turtle,
Great A’Tuin, who slowly swims through space, on his way from nowhere and going
nowhere forever. This places the book firmly in the fantasy genre. This study is limited
to the study of proper nouns and neologisms used as proper nouns.
Nord (2003:182-196) states that translators ‘do all sorts of things with proper nouns’
and that proper nouns in fictional literature do not refer to real people who exist in any
actual way. She posits that proper nouns are ‘mono-referential’ (referring only to one
entity) but not ‘mono-functional’. Proper nouns are deictic; the characteristics of a
proper noun depends on the circumstances in which it appears (ibid., and Fernandes
(2006:44-57)). Proper nouns can give information as to the culture that the name is
situated in (for example, names ending in –ov, such as Kalashnikov, Popov, etc., often
indicate a Russian or East European setting), the gender of a person (Carina is female
and Jacques is male), or even the period a child was born in (parents may give a
newborn a name that is particularly in fashion at the time of the birth). Fluffy is not a
typical name for a cat, unless it is part of the characterisation that the author intends,
as is the case in Pratchett’s Discworld novels where the character Death rides a real
flesh and blood horse incongruously called Binky – Binky sounds like a pet name for
little girl, not the steed that Death uses to move between time and space.
Names are often used to describe a specific characteristic of the person, for instance,
in Small Gods the character Death (the personification of death who always talks in
SMALL CAPITALS) accompanies a person who has died to the next world. General Iam Fri'it
(I am Free it) is a freedom fighter and the country where the monotheistic religion,
Omnian, is situated is called Omnia (Latin for everything or all). The names of the
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philosophers in Ephebe (a word from ancient Greece) have a distinct Greco-Roman
sound, for instance, Aristocrates, Xeno, and Ibid, which place them in a specific cultural
setting. This creates certain expectations with the reader concerning the roles that the
characters play in the novel.
Titles and forms of address are also used to characterise, for instance (from Small Gods),
Brother Nhumrod, Bishop Drunah, False Prophet Zeb and Sergeant Simony. The titles
Brother, Bishop and False Prophet place the characters in a religious environment,
whereas Sergeant refers to a military rank.
Proper nouns play a very important role in characterisation and often have cultural-
specific significance. The translation of proper nouns can become a major problem and
different strategies and procedures have been suggested.
Pym (2010:16) states: ‘Vinay and Darbelnet worked from examples to define seven
general procedures (“proceeds” although others sometimes call them “strategies”)’ and
that ‘[t]he terms for the procedures (or strategies) have clearly not been standardized’
as if procedures and strategies are interchangeable concepts. Pym (2010:20) also states
that ‘the theorists usually provided lists of procedures and techniques actually used by
translators’ from which one may deduce that procedures and techniques are more or
less the same. Baker (2011:76) uses the word ‘strategies’ to describe the procedures to
translate idioms; for instance, to use an idiom of similar meaning and form. Munday
(2009:37) defines strategies as the cline where lateral and free translations are
opposites as well as a ‘set of procedures’ but also limits the term ‘translation
procedures’ to the seven procedures described by Vinay and Darbelnet. Munday
(2009:56) further differentiates between two strategies as defined by Vinay and
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Darbelnet (direct and oblique translation) consisting of the seven procedures (as
previously discussed).
The Skopostheorie focuses on the methods and strategies that have to be used to
produce a ‘functionally adequate result’ (Munday, 2008:79). Nord (1997:28) also uses
the two terms interchangeably: ‘and the purpose aimed at by a particular translation
strategy or procedure (for example, “to translate literally in order to show the structural
particularities of the source language”)’. She describes using proper nouns common to
the source culture as well as the target culture as a strategy (‘another strategy might
be to ... use proper names common to both the source and target cultures’) (ibid.:75).
She also uses the word ‘techniques’ as a synonym (‘why translators have chosen
different techniques or procedures to solve similar or analogous problems’ (ibid.:115).
In this study the term ‘procedure’ is used to describe the course of action needed to
achieve a certain result, in agreement with the definition by Munday (2009:37), who
describes strategies as a ‘set of procedures’. The term ‘strategies’ then refers to
translation strategies such as foreignising or domesticating translation, or semantic or
communicative translation.
Munday (2008:4) states that the practice of translation is centuries old, but the
discipline of translation studies is a more recent development. Cicero and Horace wrote
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about faithful (also called literal) and free translations in the first century BCE (Snell-
Hornby, 2006:7; Munday, 2008:19). St Jerome cited Cicero in 395 CE to justify his use
of the sense-for-sense strategy as opposed to using a word-for-word strategy (ibid.:20).
Luther also rejected the word-for-word translation strategy as this sometimes renders
the target text incomprehensible (ibid.:24).
Dryden (1680, as cited in (Shuttleworth and Cowie, 2014:32)) used the term
metaphrase (word-for-word translation) and saw its opposite as imitation. Imitation is
not restricted by either word or sense, but allows for the influence of the emotions of
the writer. He also describes paraphrase – a strategy between metaphrase and
imitation.
According to Schleiermacher, these were two parallel roads that could never cross and
any attempt to use a combination of the strategies will lead to a highly undesirable
result.
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... foreignizing translation [is] a strategic cultural intervention in
the current state of world affairs, pitched against the hegemonic
English-language nations and the unequal cultural exchanges in
which they engage their global others. Foreignizing translation in
English can be a form of resistance against ethnocentrism and
racism, cultural narcissism and imperialism, in the interests of
democratic geopolitical relations (ibid.).
Venuti makes a strong political point that is not entirely relevant to this study as the
aim of the study is the translation of proper nouns and neologisms in a fantasy novel
from English into Afrikaans, but the influence of English culture on the translation is still
valid. Venuti’s critique of domestication is especially relevant to the works translated
by governments and organisations with a political motive, but also to the influence that
the publishing industry, literary agents and others who influence the commissions of
translated works have on the translation outcomes (Munday, 2008:143).
It is the opinion of this researcher that strategy is a not a binary line with two opposing
and fixed positions but a fluid and dynamic line on which the translator moves the entire
time. The overarching strategy used when translating a literary work will either be
foreignising or domesticating, but the researcher believes that the translator can, and
should, use domestication within a foreignised text.
Translators have diverse ideas when translating proper nouns and neologisms. The
Afrikaans translator of several of the Roald Dahl books,5 Kobus Geldenhuys, states that
he did not translate character names, because children need to learn that there are
5) Matilda, James en die reuse-perske, Charlie en die groot glashyser, Charlie en die sjokoladefabriek,
Die twakke, and Fantastiese mnr. Vos.
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other worlds as well and that everything cannot be localised (cited in Steinmair, 2016).
This is not a sentiment shared by the translation theorists examined for this study.
A number of sources have been studied in detail to find and describe existing
procedures for translating proper nouns and neologisms. These are discussed below.
Hervey and Higgins (1992:29-31) present the following procedures: exoticism (literal
translation), transliteration and cultural transplantation. They describe exoticism and
cultural transplantation as extreme opposites. When the translator uses exoticism, the
proper noun in the source text is used unchanged in the target text. No cultural
adaptation is made. The cultural foreignness of the target text is evident to the reader.
The translator does not move towards the reader’s language and culture but remains
close to the source language and culture.
Cultural transplantation requires the translator to replace the proper noun from the
source text with an indigenous target-language proper noun that invokes a similar
cultural meaning connotation (Hervey and Higgins, 1992:29-31).
Newmark (1981:151) suggests that the name and the attached meaning should be
transferred, but he also suggeststhat proper nouns should not be translated unless they
have a specific meaning implication in the text (Newmark, 1988:214-216). He states
that the proper nouns in imaginative literature have significance and should be
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translated: ‘I have suggested that the best method is first to translate the word that
underlies the SL proper name into the TL, and then to naturalise the translated word
back into a new SL proper name’. The names of objects may be transferred. Newmark
(1988:81-93,103) describes the following general translation procedures:
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The procedures as listed above are mostly applicable to translation in general. The
procedures which can specifically be applied to the translation of proper nouns are as
follows:
transference;
naturalisation;
cultural equivalent;
functional equivalent;
componential equivalent;
synonymy; and
through-translation.
Newmark (1988:150) categorises two types of neologism: existing lexical items with
new sense (words and collocations) and new forms (new coinages, derived words,
abbreviations, collocations, eponyms, phrasal words, transferred words, acronyms,
pseudo-neologisms and internationalisms). Newmark (1988:140-150) proposes 12
procedures to translate neologisms:
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Newmark (ibid.:143) states that a neologism in fiction should be recreated using the
same or similar morphemes. The procedures as described by Newmark (1988:140-150)
refer to neologisms in general and not just to proper names which are neologisms. Of
these procedures, the following are applicable to neologistic proper nouns:
target-text neologism;
a target-language derived word;
naturalisation;
literal translation; and
internationalism.
Hermans (1988:13) states that there are at least four procedures for translating
expressive names. The name can be reproduced in the target text, it can be transcribed
or transliterated, it can be substituted, or it can be translated. He (ibid.:14) suggests
that there can be various other procedures: the translator can use a combination of the
listed procedures, the name can be deleted, it can be substituted with a common name,
and a proper noun can be inserted in the target text while there is not a proper noun in
the source text (see also Aguilera, 2008:3; Mizani, 2008:6).
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Fernandes (2006:44-57) posits that the proper nouns in (children’s) fantasy literature
function on a level above the text and can have ‘semantic, semiotic and/or sound
symbolic meanings’. In fictional literature, proper nouns transfer a message to the
reader. Fernandes states that, in terms of the semantic meaning,
A character’s personality, their good, bad or general traits, can be summed up in their
name. The name may also give an indication as to the destiny of the character. This is
seen with the characters of Small Gods (although it would not be classified as children’s
literature). Brother Nhumrod’s name states his affliction clearly. The same applies for
the Discworld philosophers Xeno and Aristocrates, who share many features with the
Ancient Greek philosophers Zeno, Aristotle and Socrates.
In terms of semiotic meaning, Fernandes (2006:44-57) posits that names act as signs,
‘generating ancient or more recent historical associations’ (ibid.:46). Semiotic meaning
can also indicate gender, class, nationality, religious identity, intertextuality, mythology
and other culture-bound elements (ibid.:46-47).
Sound symbolic meaning refers to the use of imitative sounds (onomatopoeia) to create
proper nouns, though Fernandes (2006:44-57) says that the ‘actual component speech
sounds may only vaguely resemble the imitated sound’. In Small Gods, the name of the
god Om also refers to the most sacred mantra and mystic syllable (ॐ) in Dharmic
religions (mostly in India and Nepal). In Sanskrit, it is sometimes referred to as praṇava,
literally ‘that which is sounded out loudly’ (Lochtefeld, 2002:482). The online dictionary
Merriam-Webster (2016) lists Om as ‘a mantra consisting of the sound \ˈōm\ and used
in contemplation of ultimate reality’.
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Fernandes (2006:44-57) also refers to phonesthemes: the sound, sound groupings or
types of sound than can be associated with meaning:
The initial cluster /gl/, for instance, occurs in the following words:
glisten, glow, glare, glent, glimmer, glimpse, glister, glitter, glim,
and because they share the same common denominator /gl/, they
are usually associated with “light” and “shining”. Another example
is the initial cluster /sl/ which can be found in words such as slime,
slug, slithery, slobbery, slog, and they are usually connected with
“unpleasantness” (Fernandes, 2006:48).
When translating, proper nouns can be divided in two categories: conventional proper
nouns and loaded proper nouns. Conventional proper nouns seem to have no obvious
semantic meaning; their morphology and phonology do not need to be changed to fit
in the target language, or they have an international status. Conventional proper nouns
will most probably not be translated (ibid.:49). Loaded proper nouns can be ‘faintly
“suggestive” to overtly “expressive” names and nicknames’. Fernandes suggests that
there are ten procedures to translate proper nouns:
rendition;
copy;
transcription;
substitution;
recreation;
deletion;
addition;
transposition;
phonological replacement; and
conventionality.
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Rendition is used when it is clear what the name means and it is in standardised
language. The character called ‘Death’ has been rendered to ‘Dood’ by the Dutch
translator of Small Gods.
Fernandes’s procedure (2006:50) of copying is in line with what Vinay and Darbelnet
(1958/1995:91) call borrowing. The proper nouns are used in the target text as they
exist in the source text. Using the name ‘Om’ in the Afrikaans target text is copying. This
is also the procedure followed by the Dutch translator.
Fernandes (ibid.:51) uses the term transcription as a synonym for transliteration and
suggest that transcription is used between different alphabets. However, the examples
he uses are not strictly between different alphabets (for example, Cyrillic and Roman
alphabets) but languages where diacritical marks are used or not. In that case,
translating the name Omnia to Omnië is transcription.
Fernandes suggests recreation where the translator creates a new proper noun, thus
attempting to reproduce a similar effect in the target language. When using recreation,
a new proper noun is created that does not exist in the target language, unlike
substitution, where the proper noun already exists. Deletion is a very drastic procedure
and means that the proper noun in the source text is removed in the target text when
the proper noun has little meaning in or does not influence the plot development.
Addition is used when the translator adds information to the proper noun, for instance,
when a title (such as Mister) is used with a gender-neutral proper noun to indicate
gender (ibid.:53-54). Transposition changes the word class from the source language to
the target language ‘without changing the meaning of the original’ (ibid.:54).
In phonological replacement the translator replaces the source-text proper noun with
a target-text proper noun that has the same ‘sound image’ (ibid.) This is the procedure
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used by the Dutch translator in translating Brutha to ‘Broeda’. Conventionality refers to
the procedure ‘when a TL name is conventionally accepted as the translation of a
particular SL name’. This procedure is used for historical, literary and geographical
proper nouns (ibid.:55), for example, the name of the philosopher Aristocrates in Small
Gods can be translated as Aristokrates in Afrikaans using conventionality.
It is Pym’s view (2004:92) that proper nouns should not be translated, as there cannot
be qualitative equivalence. He says that ‘[p]roper names are untranslatable simply
because they do not have to be translated’. However, in the draft entry for the
Routledge Handbook of Linguistics, Pym (2014:4) states that borrowing and calque, as
suggested by Vinay and Darbelnet (1958/1995:91), can be used for translating names
and terms.
Nord (2003:182-196) states that there are ‘no rules for the translation of proper names’.
She also observed that translators often use different procedures in a specific text when
they translate proper nouns. According to Nord, if the name is descriptive (explicit), it
should be translated, but if the name has an implicit meaning, the meaning may be lost
in translation unless the translator adds extra information that could compensate for
this loss. She acknowledges that fictional names have a function, and argues that this
function can be translated: ‘Wherever the function of the proper name is limited to
identifying an individual referent, the main criterion for translation will be to make this
identifying function work for the target culture’ (Nord, 2003:184). Authors can use
existing proper nouns from their culture or can create new original fantastical proper
nouns for characters. She posits that translators use the following different procedures
when translating proper nouns (ibid.:182-183):
non-translation;
non-translation that results in a different pronunciation in the target
language;
transcription or transliteration;
morphological adaptation;
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cultural adaptation; and
substitution.
Nord (2003:182-196) has compared the proper nouns in several translations Lewis
Carroll’s Alice in Wonderland and came to the conclusion that these translators used
different procedures for translation. She lists the following:
reproduction;
adaptation;
substitution;
rendering proper nouns as common nouns;
neutralisation;
calques; and
deletion (ibid.:194).
When a translator reproduces a proper noun from the source text, it is used unchanged
in the target text, although this may include changes to the pronunciation of the target
word. Proper nouns may also be adapted according to the morphology of the target
language. During substitution the source-culture names are translated with target-
culture names. Translators have also changed source-text proper nouns to target-text
common nouns. Culture-specific proper nouns have also been neutralised to cultural-
neutral proper nouns. Calques are the literal translations of the proper nouns and the
strangeness of the names is preserved. Nord also suggests that explanatory notes may
be used but that the humour of the text may be lost (ibid.:196).
In his doctoral thesis, Vermes (2001:112-113) lists eight possible procedures for the
translator:
1. transference;
2. substitution;
3. transliteration or naturalisation;
4. translation (proper);
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5. modification or total transformation;
6. omission of the name, or part of it;
7. supplementing the name by an added element or addition; and
8. generalising the meaning of the name.
Vermes’s transference is the same as that of Newmark (1988) and similar to Catford’s
(1965) definition: it is used when the translator uses the proper noun from the source
text unchanged in the target text. Substitution is when there is an established proper
name in the target text that corresponds with the one from the source text. This is often
the case for geographical names. Vermes (2003:94) quotes the Newmark definition for
translation proper: ‘rendering the meaning of a text into another language in the way
that the author intended the text’. The target-text proper noun, or part of it, is
translated to have the same implied meaning, or part of it, as the original source-text
proper noun. During modification, the target-text proper noun is changed ‘logically, or
conventionally, unrelated or only partly related’ to the source-text proper noun. This
may mean significant changes to the form and significance of the original proper noun.
In his article ‘Children's literature in translation: challenges and strategies’, Van Coillie
(2006:123) states that proper nouns can have a ‘particular purpose or function’ in
literature of which some are to amuse the reader, give information or elicit an emotion.
Van Coillie (ibid.) differentiates between the following six functions (though these
pertain mostly to children’s literature, it may be true for other genres as well):
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The informative function calls on readers' knowledge and/or teaches
them something.
The formative function confronts readers with standards and values
and/or provides a moral compass.
The emotional function speaks to the emotions or enriches them.
The creative function stimulates the imagination.
The divertive function meets the need for relaxation.
The aesthetic function provides aesthetic pleasure.
Van Coillie (2006) focuses on the translation of proper names in children’s literature,
but his suggested procedures can also be applied to adult literature.
The procedures proposed by the authors in this section seem different as they do not
use the same terminology to describe the same procedure. However, when these
procedures are carefully compared it becomes clear that they can be categorised (see
Table 1 overleaf).
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Table 1: List of translation procedures for proper nouns (in alphabetical order)
Procedure As described by
The proper noun in the source text has a Hervey and Higgins (1992:29)
cultural meaning and it is adapted to a Nord (2003:194)
proper noun in the target text with a similar
Fernandes (2006:52)
cultural value.
Van Coillie (2006:126-127)
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Procedure As described by
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Procedure As described by
Vermes (2001:112)
Nord (2003:194)
Pym (2004:92)
Fernandes (2006:50-51)
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Procedure As described by
Nord (2003:194)
Fernandes (2006:51)
Many of the translation procedures described in this subsection overlap and it is one of
the objectives of this study to identify the most appropriate procedures to translate the
proper nouns and neologisms in Small Gods into Afrikaans. For the purposes of this
study, the term procedure describes the course of action needed to achieve a certain
result, in agreement with the definition by Munday (2009:37), who describes strategies
as a set of procedures.
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researcher’s opinion that this is a not a binary with two opposing and fixed positions
but rather a fluid and dynamic line along which the translator moves the entire time.
This study aims at identifying the translation strategy and the procedures, as described
in the categories in Table 1, above, that can be used to translate proper nouns and
neologisms in an equivalent way that will ensure that the meaning potential is retained
when translating Terry Pratchett’s fantasy novel Small Gods from English to Afrikaans.
Therefore, such a translation would have to focus on theories on equivalence and how
to attain equivalence at word level, as well as the equivalent effect, and translating
proper nouns (that can often be seen as signs) in such a way that the meaning potential
is retained.
The section that follows describes the position of Small Gods in the Discworld series and
gives a synopsis of the novel. A description of the Dutch translation follows. The section
concludes with a description of the Discworld wikis as sources of information and the
criteria used to identify the proper nouns and neologisms for translation from English
to Afrikaans.
Small Gods is one of the stand-alone fantasy books in the Discworld series. The
‘universe’ in which these books are set is described as follows:
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The Discworld is based on Hindu mythology, which posits four (or eight) large elephants,
considered the ‘elephants of the directions’, keeping watch over the four (or eight)
compass points that create a disc. A godlike creature rides on the back of each elephant.
This myth does not claim that the elephants carry the world. There is another myth that
states that the world is supported on the back of a single elephant, called Maha-Padma,
who is standing on a tortoise named Chukwa. It is also said that the god Vishnu once
took on the form of a vast tortoise or turtle (krma), so immense that the sacred central
mountain of the world could rest on his back. As with so many myths and stories, they
began to blend and some ‘Hindu mythographers’ are now willing to say that the world
is a disc supported by four elephants supported by a turtle (Pratchett and Simpson,
2008:7-8).
There is also a tale of a massive cosmic turtle in Chinese mythology, but with a different
perspective. According to the Chinese myth, ‘our world is not balanced upon the
creature’s back (with or without elephants), but is sloshing about inside it’ (ibid.). Based
on these myths, Pratchett created a fantastical world to form the foundation of the
series of books.
Small Gods is situated on this fictional planet and, as with other novels in the fantasy
genre, it has a time frame similar to some time in the European Middle Ages. Clothes,
architecture and technology resemble those of mediæval times. Another well-known
example of the fantasy genre is The Lord of the Rings trilogy (Childs and Fowler,
2006:82). Fantasy should not be confused with science fiction, which involves
technology that is advanced beyond anything available to contemporary readers, and
focuses on the imagined impact of science on society (Lewis, 2015). Science fiction
include subgenres that focus on alternate histories, apocalyptic events, future history,
space opera and ‘weird fiction’ (Bould et al., 2009).
Small Gods is the thirteenth novel in the Discworld series, and it was published in 1992.
Death and Lu-Tze are the only recurring characters in the series, though there are
Omnian priests and History Monks in later books. Small Gods differs from the other
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Discworld novels in that there are no magical, mythical creatures, or witches and
wizards. In most of the Discworld novels, Pratchett parodies the genre he selected: his
vampires do not suck blood; his witches do not do magic – rather, they are experts in
‘headology’ – and Death is not a scary skeleton, but an anthropomorphic creature with
a fondness for cats who rides a real, live horse called Binky. The Discworld is inhabited
by magical creatures such as wizards and witches, pixies and elves, dwarfs and trolls,
dragons and golems. But it is also inhabited by humans. It is in this combination of
characters that Pratchett has created a parody of the fantasy genre, especially as
presented by Tolkien, and of fairy tales, as collected by Grimm. Pratchett describes
fantasy as presenting something that is old and familiar in such a way that ‘you are
almost seeing it for the first time’ (Pratchett and Briggs, 2012:327).
The Discworld – just like Earth – is a place where characters fight battles with good and
evil, where wars have more losses than gains, where small decisions have big
consequences. On the Discworld nothing is politically correct, or sacred. Pratchett
tackles everything: racism; sexism; fear of others; religious intolerance; and
discrimination based on species, class, education and traditional roles; and death. As
well as Death. Pratchett looks at sound business practices and politics, trends in science
and technology and how these influence society, the way people6 think about these
changes and how the changes affect people’s behaviour. He investigates the coming of
age of younger characters (but never blushing princesses in frilly frocks or courageous
princes on white steeds) and the individual’s search for meaning. As a result, his
characters are often faced with moral choices between competing rights,
responsibilities and freedoms. As readers we, together with the characters, are
confronted with these issues as well as the human inconsistencies that are relevant to
our lives, every single day, whether directly or indirectly. Pratchett holds a mirror to
6) The word ‘people’ is used in the widest possible sense and includes all the human-like creatures on
the Discworld.
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what we believe and asks us to re-evaluate everything that we hold dear, whether it is
films – in Moving Pictures (Pratchett, 1991a), music – in Soul Music (Pratchett, 1995c)
and Maskerade (Pratchett, 1996), or religion and belief – specifically in Small Gods
(Pratchett, 1992) and Hogfather (Pratchett, 1997) but many others as well.
The small gods in the novel by the same name refer to those gods who are never really
worshipped because there is not enough belief to make them proper gods. Many things
on the Discworld exist because someone believes that they exist and the ‘appearance
of a god when manifest is directly proportional to the amount of belief they command’
(Pratchett and Briggs, 2012:211). A god can become a small god when people stop
believing in him, or a small god can become a god because of more belief. An example
of a small god is the ‘Oh God of Hangovers’, who only exists because of the exclamation
made by hungover people (Pratchett, 1997:172):
I was watching the news one day and some alleged holy man in
Iran or Iraq or somewhere was pictured standing in front of a
fountain flowing with fake blood and telling people how truly holy
it was to die for God. And I thought: no, even I can see through that
one. The backbone for the Small Gods plot was created right there.
The city Kom, capital of Omnia, is built entirely for the worship of the monotheistic god
Om, a god who used to be able to change his shape to a bull or a swan, and did much
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smiting and trampling of the infidels and the unrighteous. However, the reader soon
finds that the Great God Om has been reduced to the shape of a tortoise with a dusty
shell and one eye, and that he has only one believer in the entire city: Brutha, a simple-
minded boy who will never be more than a novice (Pratchett, 2014:7). He is illiterate
but has a phenomenal memory, as he cannot forget anything: ‘Brutha gaped at him.
This was nonsense. You couldn’t forget things just by wishing’ (Pratchett, 2014:65).
The city is, at least unofficially, ruled by Deacon Vorbis, who ensures that the Church’s
Quisition enforces the commandments which have been given by prophet after prophet
who claimed that they received it from the Great God Om, quite often after wandering
in the desert. The Church has currently intensified its efforts to be holy as it prepares
for the appearance of the Eighth Prophet.
The Omnian Church wages war against non-believers (people, cities and countries) and
tortures anyone it suspects of heresy. A small underground resistance group, called
‘The Turtle Moves’, has formed to overthrow the Church. Their resistance is based on
the heretical scroll De Chelonian Mobile (‘The Turtle Moves’) written by Didactylos, a
philosopher in Ephebe, in which he states that the world is a disc carried on the backs
of four elephants who stand on the back of a giant turtle. This is in direct contrast to
the Omnian Church’s belief that the world is a perfect sphere, spinning about the sphere
of the sun.
Vorbis and Brutha (with Om in a wicker box over Brutha’s shoulder and still in the shape
of a small tortoise) go to neighbouring Ephebe on a diplomatic mission, ostensibly to
sign a peace treaty. Vorbis needs Brutha’s impeccable memory to navigate the very
complex labyrinth around the palace of the Ephebian Tyrant. Ephebe is a parody on
ancient Greece: it is filled with toga-wearing philosophers – ‘someone who’s bright
enough to find a job with no heavy lifting’ (Pratchett, 2014:123). There is even a naked
man running down the street (like Archimedes) after he has leapt out of his bath after
having a great idea (ibid.), screaming ‘Eureka’, which the narrator claims literally means
‘Bring me a towel!’ (Pratchett and Briggs, 2012:108). Om and Brutha seek out the
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philosopher Didactylos so that he can explain where gods come from and help Om
change his shape back to that of a powerful god.
Instead of signing a peace treaty, the soldiers of Omnia invade Ephebe, forcing Ephebe
to become a diocese of Omnia. In the ensuing battle between Omnian soldiers and the
resistance movement, the Library is torched (though the first match is lit by Didactylos
himself), but not before Brutha has an opportunity to memorise as many of the scrolls
as possible in an effort preserve the knowledge.
After being shipwrecked, Brutha, Om and a severely injured Vorbis travel back to Omnia
in a journey across the desert (reminiscent of similar journeys by Moses, Jesus and
Mohammed). Brutha is determined to set right what has been wrong in the Church. In
the desert they find ruined stone temples haunted by forgotten small gods and for the
first time Om starts to care about his believers.
As they approach the city, Vorbis regains his strength, hits Brutha over the head and
tries to kill the tortoise that Brutha always carries with him. Vorbis does not know that
it is the god Om when he tries to kill the tortoise. He does it because he is an evil man.
Back in Kom, Vorbis proclaims himself the Eighth Prophet. He makes Brutha a bishop,
but then has him declared a heretic and Brutha is publicly tied to an iron statue of a
turtle to be burned alive. Om intervenes by allowing himself to be snatched up by an
eagle and dropped over the scene, hitting Vorbis on the head and killing him. The crowd
witnesses the miracle and they start believing in Om again. Their belief in him allows
him to become a powerful god again.
The Ephebians have meanwhile formed an alliance with several other nations, such as
Tsort and Djelibeybi. Although they hate one another, they all hate Omnia more and
come together to invade Omnia and break its power. Brutha attempts to broker peace,
but everyone is too distrustful of the Omnians and a fight starts. The Great God Om,
restored to his former glory by the belief of all who now really believe in him, travels to
Cori Celesti (the home of the Discworld’s gods) where he finds the gods gambling with
the fates of their believers. Om is shocked by their callousness and starts a fight with
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the gods. The soldiers on the ground must hide from the thunder, cornucopia shrapnel
and the grapes falling from the heavens. Om then forces the gods of each nation to talk
to their people and to stop the fighting.
Brutha becomes the Eighth Prophet. He ends the Quisition and brings great reform to
the Church. He introduces philosophy and debate, and for the next century there is
peace and freedom in Omnia. Brutha dies on the hundredth anniversary of the
beginning of the reformation and it is then revealed that the events have been
orchestrated by the History Monks, specifically Lu-Tze, to ensure that there is a century
of peace and not perpetual war.
In Small Gods Pratchett parodies the Catholic and Anglican Churches, as well as various
charismatic churches who venerate prophets and false prophets. He also hints at other
formally organised religions such as Islam. He even mentions the Krishna:
[Brutha] “There is no other god but you. You told Ossory that.”
[Om] “Well. You know. I exaggerated a bit. But they’re not that
good. There’s one of ‘em that sits around playing a flute most of
the time and chasing milkmaids. I don’t call that very divine. Call
that very divine. I don’t” (Pratchett, 2014:120) (emphasis added).
The italicised sentence refers to Krishna as an incarnation of the Hindu god Vishnu who
spent much of the time in his youth playing the flute and dancing with milkmaids
(Pattanaik, 2011:159,167; Breebaart and Kew, 2016).
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good people do evil. He turns people into things like himself. You can’t help it. You catch
it off him’.
Small Gods is a story of a boy’s journey with his god; it is a commentary on the habits
and practices of religious people, and it suggests that true faith overcomes all.
More than 85 million copies have been sold of Pratchett’s Discworld novels (Healy,
2015) and they have been translated into 37 languages, including Hebrew and Japanese
(Briggs, 2012a:339).
The Discworld novels were translated into Dutch by Venugopalan Ittekot, a pseudonym
used by Ruurd Groot. He started translating the Schijfwereld-boeken in 1991. In 2005,
his wife, Mieke Groot (also a translator), took over when Groot became ill, and she
continued to use the pseudonym Venugopalan Ittekot. The readers of his Dutch
translations are reported to consider the books to be of high quality (Wikipedia, 2016j).
Venugopalan Ittekot’s translation of Nation is described as follows: ‘De vertaling is
meesterlijk en weet precies de finesse van Pratchetts stijl te pakken’ (Venings, 2014).
The photographer Nico Janssen (2013, 2016) describes Venugopalan Ittekot’s
translations as ‘lyrical’ and he claim that the translator possessed a ‘magical ability to
translate British wit’. Kleingoderij (Pratchett, 1995b) was published in Dutch in 1992 and
again in 1995.
It has been suggested that translators of science fiction and fantasy books face an added
challenge in that these genres are dominated by (American) English and that readers
have to read the English books to stay up to date with developments in these genres.
They often buy the translation of a book to compare it with the original English version
(Briggs, 2012a:340).
Pratchett enjoyed Groot’s strategy of capturing the pun of the erotic Big Bang
hypothesis of the expanding universe (‘uitdijend heelal’) to ‘het Uitvrijend Model’,
which could be back-translated as ‘the Making Love Outwards Model’. When Pratchett
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heard about this, ‘he apparently sat there grinning and saying it’s the best ever title for
a scientific theory’ (ibid.:341). It has been suggested that ‘large’ nations such as the
French or Germans could localise jokes and get away with it, but that a Dutch reader
would find a strictly Dutch reference incompatible with the story: ‘[T]hey couldn’t
imagine someone in Britain, let alone on the Discworld, being aware of [the Dutch
references]. Sad, but true’ (ibid.). This may be true of Afrikaans readers as well. This
supports my aim of domesticating the proper nouns and neologisms only to the extent
that the target-text reader has the same experience as the source-text reader, and that
the target-text reader understands the role that the character’s name plays in the
characterisation, but that it must never alienate the target-text reader. This reader
must never find a name or reference incompatible with the setting or the story.
Pratchett (Briggs, 2012c:335) said that he does not envy the translators of the Discworld
novels and proceeded to give what is probably the greatest compliment that a
translator can receive: ‘I get on very well with the Dutch translator, who takes a kind of
skewed delight in tracking down the “right” words ...’
In this study, the Internet was used extensively to find information about Small Gods,
the Discworld, Terry Pratchett and fantasy writing. The readers of the Discworld books
are very passionate about the Discworld series, as well as about other works by
Pratchett. Hence, there are several websites, discussion groups, forums and blogs,
created and maintained by fans, followers and volunteers. In fact,
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There is a wiki7 focusing on the Discworld books: http://wiki.lspace.org. It is a ‘Terry
Pratchett-orientated website’ (The L-Space Web, 2016c) with more than 3 800 user-
generated articles. By 7 July 2016 the main page had been accessed more than seven
million8 times. The wiki site http://wiki.lspace.org is a sub-site of the website
www.lspace.org (LSpace.org, 2016). The name of the website, ‘L-Space’, refers to
‘library-space’ (Pratchett, Stewart, & Cohen 2002:348). It is based on the principle that
large quantities of both magical and ordinary books ‘distort time and space’ (Pratchett
and Briggs, 2003:255). Anyone who has ever been in a second-hand bookshop would
have experienced this phenomenon: it seems as if the quantity of books should not
logically and according to the laws of physics be able to fit in the available space,
especially those shops with ‘rows of shelves that end in little doors that are surely too
small for a full-sized human to enter’ (ibid.). As Pratchett and Briggs (ibid.) state:
7) ‘A wiki is a website which allows collaborative modification of its content and structure directly from
the web browser. In a typical wiki, text is written using a simplified markup language (known as ‘wiki
markup’), and often edited with the help of a rich-text editor’ (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wiki). The
Discworld Wiki (http://wiki.lspace.org) is a Terry Pratchett/Discworld-oriented wiki sub-site of L-Space
(www.lspace.org).
8) The page had been accessed 7 771 426 since its creation on 8 May 2012, according to the revision
history page (http://wiki.lspace.org).
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2.10 Concluding remarks on the Small Gods literature review
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3 METHODOLOGY
This chapter aims to describe the research methodology, with specific reference to
research methodology relevant to translation studies.
3.1 Introduction
Hofstee (2006:107) states that ‘if you are going to pose a problem to yourself and then
come to a conclusion about it, you have to do something to come to that conclusion.
That “something” is your method’ (original emphasis).
Saldanha and O'Brien (2013:5) describe research in terms of its orientation and classify
it as either product-orientated, process-orientated, participant-orientated or context-
orientated. They compare their differentiation to that of Chesterman (2000), namely
comparative models, process models and causal models; a causal model has linguistic,
cognitive and contextual dimensions. Saldanha and O’Brien (2013) also refer to the
textual-descriptive, cognitive, culturalist and sociological models proposed by Marco
(2009, cited in Saldanha and O'Brien 2013:7). These three models can be compared as
follows (see Figure 10 overleaf).
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Chesterman Saldanha and
Marco model
model O Brien model
Product- Textual-
Comparitive
orientated descriptive
Participant-
Process Sociological
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contextual
factors
Saldanha and O'Brien (2013:6,7) further state that empirical research needs to answer
the purpose of the research, and when unanswered questions remain, point out the
possibilities for further research. They add that all ‘research begins with theoretical
assumptions’ and that the assumptions determine which methodology is selected. The
methods must be able to answer the research question/s and this will determine the
success of the methodology.
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For the sake of consistency, the research principles, terminology and types used for this
study follow the guidelines as described in Research Methodologies in Translation
Studies by Saldanha and O'Brien (2013:10-13). As this study falls in the field of
Translation Studies, it makes sense to remain as close as possible to the research
principles, terminology and types as described in a textbook focusing on Translation
Studies. It ensures that terminology is used consistently and that the same meaning is
implied each time a term is used. As with the terminology surrounding translation
strategies and procedures, research terminology is often used interchangeably,
inconsistently and ambiguously across different fields.
Research principles
Social research concerns itself with ontology and epistemology (Saldanha and O'Brien,
2013:10-11). Creswell (2013:35) uses the term ‘worldview’ which refers to a ‘basic set
of beliefs that guide action’ to describe ontology (‘the nature of reality’) and
epistemology (‘how we know what we know’).
Ontology refers to the way the social world is perceived to be and what can be
presumed about the traits and reality of the social phenomena that constitute the social
world. The social world can be described as follows (Saldanha and O'Brien, 2013:10-11):
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Epistemology refers to the well-substantiated explanation of knowledge and how
knowledge is acquired. Knowledge can be obtained using the following (Saldanha and
O'Brien, 2013:10-11):
There are
factors that
affect the
social reality
Researcher Researcher is
remains Objectivism Constructivism
subjective
independent
Realism
Researcher Researcher
uses uses
Positivism Some Interpretivism
quantitative qualitative
knowledge
approaches approaches
can be
studied
objectively
Researcher
but some
uses
things are
observable
influenced
evidence
by invisible
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Ontology and epistemology can be used to determine the framework of research. This
study has a constructivist ontological position with an interpretive epistemological
position: its focus is subjective and a qualitative approach will be used. Saldanha and
O'Brien (2013:12) state:
An objectivist paradigm would have meant that the use of language in the fantasy
genre, proper nouns and neologisms are social phenomena that have inherent
meaning, and whose meaning is not derived and constantly re-evaluated by those who
interact with them. It would have meant that these aspects exist independently of
human interaction, and not because of it. However, this study is interpretive, as it is
subjective, and the researcher attempts to understand and interpret the social
phenomena from a personal point of departure. Any conclusion reflects this
researcher’s own subjective interpretations, albeit based on existing views and
interpretations and the application of current translation theory.
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translation procedures for the proper nouns and neologisms when translating Small
Gods to Afrikaans.
Research terminology
The following is a list of the research terms as used and described by Saldanha and
O'Brien (2013:12-13), which will also be used throughout this study:
Saldanha and O'Brien (2013:13) state that the terms methods and tools are often used
interchangeably. Methods are either qualitative or quantitative, whereas tools may be
the actual instruments that are used to collect the data, for instance, a voice recorder
or specific software. WordWeb (Lewis, 2015) defines tools as the means that are used
to accomplish the task.
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we know. Babbie (ibid.:24) describes quantitative and qualitative methods. Creswell
(2003:3) suggests that quantitative, qualitative and mixed approaches are frameworks
that have the following three elements in common:
Creswell (2003:5) states that methodology refers to the plan of action that connects the
methods to the results of the research. Creswell (2013:54) later describes methodology
as the process of research and methods as the techniques or processes that are used.
Babbie (2007:122) posits the following on the research terms concept and
conceptualisation: ‘In social research, the process of coming to an agreement about
what terms mean is conceptualization, and the result is called a concept’. Williams and
Chesterman (2002:59) state that, in translation studies, ‘concepts drive action: what
you think (e.g. your concept of translation) influences what you do (e.g. how you
translate)’.
In research, a case study studies a real-life phenomenon in its context within a defined
set of boundaries, and includes the researcher’s ‘personal involvement with the data’
(Saldanha and O'Brien, 2013:207,209). Hofstee (2006:123) suggests that a case study
be used when ‘detailed knowledge is required of any particular case for whatever
reasons’. The Encyclopedia of Case Study Research (Mills, Wiebe, & Durepos 2010:xxxii)
states that it is difficult to define what a case study is, as many different researchers
across various disciplines have delineated it according to different philosophies. They
propose that a case study has the following characteristics:
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It has the explicit intention of using the insights gained to create a
theory and/or contribute to an existing theory.
Babbie (2007:298) postulates that a case study is posited on limited attention being
focused on a particular instance. A case study can be descriptive or explanatory, and
can seek to understand or develop new theories.
This study conforms to the requirements of a case study as defined by Saldanha and
O'Brien (2013:207,209), as it studies a real-life phenomenon – the fantasy novel Small
Gods – within clearly defined boundaries – only the translation of the proper nouns and
neologisms to Afrikaans – and is influenced by the researcher’s personal involvement
with the data – the researcher makes choices and decisions which another researcher
under the exact same circumstances may make differently.
Research types
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Williams and Chesterman (2002:58) define empirical and conceptual research.
Conceptual research aims to define and clarify concepts, to interpret or reinterpret
ideas, to relate concepts into larger systems, to introduce new concepts or metaphors
or frameworks that allow better understanding of the object of the research. Empirical
research, on the other hand, seeks new data, new information derived from the
observation of data and from experimental work: it seeks evidence which supports or
disconfirms hypotheses, or generates new ones. This study is conceptual as it will define
and clarify the concepts of translating procedures for proper nouns and neologisms and
will interpret and reinterpret these ideas in order to allow a better understanding of
these procedures and their application in Afrikaans when translating Small Gods.
The model of this research study is a context-oriented case study. It studies delimited
linguistic units – proper nouns and neologisms – that are specific to a particular, single,
case – the fantasy novel Small Gods.
Yin (1981:58,59) holds the view that a case study can be either qualitative or
quantitative, and that there is no specific method for collecting data. A case study is a
research strategy and has the distinctive feature that it aims to examine ‘(a) a
contemporary phenomenon in its real-life context, especially when (b) the boundaries
between phenomenon and context are not clearly evident’. Yin (ibid.:60) adds that the
qualitative data should be categorised in a table before it can be incorporated with the
quantitative data.
Babbie (2007:379,G1) states that a case study aims to examine and understand a single
occurrence of a phenomenon by looking closely at the details pertaining to that case.
Dörnyei (2007:151) defines a case study as ‘almost anything … as long as it constitutes
a single entity with clearly defined boundaries’. According to Saldanha and O'Brien
(2013:210-211), case studies are used to test new models or the boundaries of existing
models. It questions established theories that can lead to changes or improvement of
those theories, or it may lead to the development of a new theory. They claim that,
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though the findings of case studies might not be extrapolated, they might be applicable
to a similar case, and that these findings could, therefore, be generalised, under certain
conditions and contexts. Saldanha and O'Brien (2013:214) advise against classifying a
case study as ‘typical’, but this researcher suggests that this study is indeed typical as it
can be representative of proper nouns and neologisms and generalised to the fantasy
genre. The translation of proper nouns and neologisms has been studied before and the
findings of this study may potentially be true for other novels in the Discworld series or
even fantasy writing in general. The suggestion of Saldanha and O'Brien (2013:15) that
a case study must have clearly defined boundaries is implemented. This study has the
following clearly defined limitations: only the translation of the proper nouns and
neologisms in Small Gods to Afrikaans are studied.
When applying the research principles, terminology and types as described by Saldanha
and O'Brien (2013) and, to a lesser extent, Williams and Chesterman (2002), it can be
said that this study framework is a constructivist ontological position linked to an
interpretive epistemological position: the study focus is subjective, and quantitative
approaches will be used. This study aligns with what Williams and Chesterman
(2002:58) and Saldanha and O'Brien (2013:15) define as conceptual research as it aims
‘to define and clarify concepts, to interpret or reinterpret ideas, to relate concepts into
larger systems, to introduce new concepts or metaphors or frameworks that allow
better understanding of the object of the research’.
The concepts that will need to be defined and clarified, so that there can be agreement
as to the precise meaning of those concepts, are equivalence and equivalent effect,
proper nouns, neologisms, the fantasy genre, and meaning potential. The typology of
the study is the translation procedures that have a specific focus on the translation of
proper nouns and neologisms.
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The methodology for this study is text-orientated (Saldanha and O'Brien, 2013:8) and
identifies predefined linguistic units in the source-text product. It relies on a qualitative
approach to analyse the identified words in terms of their role and their meaning
potential in the novel. The only quantitative aspect in this study is the frequency
counting of the proper nouns and neologisms in Small Gods.
The methods for data collection and analysis include the following:
the web browser Google Chrome™ and the scholarly text search engine
Google Scholar™ used for searching for information on existing
translation theories, strategies and procedures, Small Gods and the
Discworld;
Microsoft® Excel to create and manage a database, as suggested by
Saldanha and O'Brien (2013:224), of the lists of proper names and
neologisms and the different translation procedures;
various dictionaries and secondary sources; and
other Internet resources.
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Coded tables as described by Yin (1981:60) were used extensively in this case study to
list (in Microsoft® Excel) the characteristics of the name carrier and count the
occurrences of each proper noun in the novel. It was also used to compare the English
proper nouns with the Dutch proper nouns and the suggested Afrikaans names.
This research design can be represented as follows (based on Saldanha and O'Brien
(2013:14)):
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The unit of the data studied is at micro-level (Saldanha and O'Brien, 2013:23-24) as this
study aims to study an individual text and individual translation procedures. The units
of analysis at the micro-level of the specific text are the specific lexical items. In this
study, the unit of analysis is Terry Pratchett’s fantasy novel Small Gods, and the units of
analysis are the proper nouns and neologisms found in this novel. The proper nouns
and neologisms are the measurable dependent variables (Saldanha and O'Brien,
2013:25) in the study as their translation to Afrikaans may change depending on the
translation procedure that is applied. The translation procedures are the independent
variables that will be manipulated to access the effect on the dependent variables.
It should be kept in mind that there may be other variables that may influence the
dependent variables as well as the independent variables. Saldanha and O'Brien
(2013:26) refer to these as confounding variables; in this study there may be
intertextual and cultural-specific influences that this researcher may be unaware of, or
simply her lack of translation experience as well as the effect of time pressure.
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4 FINDINGS AND ANNOTATED TRANSLATION
4.1 Introduction
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Table 2: Names occurring more than ten times in Small Gods
Name Occurrence
Discworld 11
(Deacon)9 Cusp 12
Angus 12
(Imperiator) Borvorius 12
Ankh-Morpork 12
(Brother) Murduck 13
Aristocrates 13
Tsort 14
(General) Argavisti 15
(Sergeant) Fergmen 17
Death 22
(Bishop) Drunah 24
Xeno 24
9) The brackets indicate a part of the character’s name that was not included when the proper noun was
counted.
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Name Occurrence
Cenobiarch 29
(Prophet) Ossory 30
Cut-Me-Own-Hand-Off Dhblah 30
Tyrant 35
Lu-Tze 38
(Omnian) Quisition 43
Citadel 61
(Brother) Nhumrod 95
Didactylos 158
Urn 191
Vorbis 449
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Name Occurrence
Brutha 1 053
The corresponding Dutch names were searched for in the Microsoft® Word rich-text
format of Kleingoderij. These names were entered in the Microsoft® Excel spreadsheet.
The webpage called The Annotated Pratchett File v9.0 – Small Gods (Breebaart and Kew,
2016) provided much supplementary information about the main characters in the
novel. Many of the characters’ names have a specific meaning and are not merely labels
to distinguish between the people in the story. For instance, the name of the character
General Iam Fri'it can be pronounced as I am Free It. He is a soldier in the Omnian Divine
Legion but is really a freedom fighter for the De Chelonian Mobile (The Turtle Moves),
an underground resistance group.
Column A – list of English proper nouns and neologisms occurring more than ten
times in Small Gods.
Column B – descriptions of the character or possible meanings of the name. This
was a very dynamic column that changed constantly as information was added.
Column C – possible Afrikaans names.
Column D – the procedure used to translate the name to Afrikaans.
Column E – Dutch names from Kleingoderij.
Column F – procedure identified that may have been used by the Dutch
translator.
The procedures below that were identified in Section 2.7.3 Procedures to translate
proper nouns and neologisms and listed in Table 1 were used to translate the proper
nouns and neologisms:
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Addition
Cultural adaptation
Internationalisation
Literal translation
Neutralisation
Substitution
Transference
Transliteration
Transposition
Deletion and descriptive equivalents were not used. These were not considered valid
procedures for translating the proper nouns and neologisms in Small Gods in this study,
because only names occurring more than ten times were studied. Such names cannot
be deleted or replaced with a description, because these characters or places play an
important role.
4.2 Addition
This procedure was described by Vermes (2001:113), Fernandes (2006:53) and Van
Coillie (2006:128). Fernandes states that the translator adds information to the proper
noun that was not present in the source text. Vermes describes this procedure when
he suggests that the translator supplements a proper noun with an added element (he
calls it modification). Van Coillie suggests replacing the proper noun with a name that
has additional connotation.
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It can be argued that the denotative and connotative meanings of the target-text word
will not be fully equivalent to the source-text words, as information is added to the
target-text proper nouns and neologisms.
Murduck
Brother Murduck is sent from Omnia to Ephebe to convert the people of Ephebe to
Omnianism. The people of Ephebe believe in free speech but they also believe in free
listening and when they do not like what they hear, ‘they became a little … testy’
(Pratchett, 2014:150). Brother Murduck continues his speech, stating that Om is the
only real god and then he pushes over ‘the statue of Tuvelpit, the God of Wine. That’s
when the trouble started’ (Pratchett, 2014:150). After that an amphora, vegetables,
eggs and a few stones are thrown at him: ‘They only hurt his pride’ (Pratchett,
2014:150). However, this is not what is told in Omnia or what Brutha believes: ‘They
beat him within an inch of his life, Vorbis said, and flogged him the rest of the way. And
Brother Nhumrod said he saw the body, and it was really true. Just for talking’
(Pratchett, 2014:151). The supposed martyrdom of Brother Murduck becomes Vorbis’s
motivation for the ‘diplomatic’ journey to Ephebe:
The two men looked at Vorbis, a man who never raised his voice.
It was very hard to tell what Vorbis was thinking, often even after
he had told you.
“Really? Is this what we’ve come to?” he said. “No threat? After
what they did to poor Brother Murduck? The insults to Om? This
must not pass.” (Pratchett, 2014:22-23).
Also:
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“It is our duty,” said Vorbis. “Our holy duty. We must not forget
poor Brother Murduck. He was unarmed and alone.” (Pratchett,
2014:27).
The truth is revealed when Brutha asks Vorbis about Murduck’s death:
“But in the trivial sense of the truth,” said Brutha, picking every
word with the care an inquisitor might give to his patient in the
depths of the Citadel, “in the trivial sense, Brother Murduck died,
did he not, in Omnia, because he had not died in Ephebe, had been
merely mocked, but it was feared that others in the Church might
not understand the, the deeper truth, and thus it was put about
that the Ephebians had killed him in, in the trivial sense, thus giving
you, and those who saw the truth of the evil of Ephebe, due cause
to launch a – a just retaliation” (Pratchett, 2014:171) (Pratchett’s
emphasis).
Brother Murduck is mentioned 13 times. The name seems to have been created by
Pratchett. It is possible that the name was derived from the English word ‘murder’.
Translating Murduck with the target-language neologism Moerdok has a similar sound
and there is assonance and alliteration in Broer Moerdok. In the Groot
Woordeboek/Major Dictionary (Eksteen, 1997), the entry for ‘moer’ is as follows:
moer (-e) (platvloers) womb; matrix; dam (animal); anger; jou malle | ~ AFWAG, wait
an age; die | ~ IN wees, make one's hackles rise; be extremely cross, be the hell in; LOOP
na jou | ~!, go to the devil!; jy MAAK my (sommer) die | ~ in, you make me real mad,
man; NA sy | ~, a goner, gone west.
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I acknowledge that moer is considered pedestrian and crude, but it correlates with what
happens to the character, as Brother Murduck is ‘na sy moer’ (‘a goner’) after many
people were ‘die moer in’ (‘extremely cross’) (Eksteen, 1997) with him. Extra
information is added to the original name. The original proper noun is culturally neutral
but the target-text proper noun has additional evoked meaning that may contribute to
the humour enjoyed by the reader.
The Dutch translation is ‘Broeder Gisbret’ (Pratchett, 1995b). Gisbret has no apparent
meaning and this may be neutralisation. However, the German name Gisbert (Gijsbert
in Dutch) has the following elements (Behindthename.com, 2016b): the first part of the
name may mean ‘pledge or hostage’ or it may mean ‘spear’. The second part of the
name means ‘bright’. This may be relevant to the character of Murduck as he was a
bright spear for the Omnians who pledged his life to his faith.
St Sevrian Thaddeus Ungulant is a hermit who lives in the desert on a wheel ‘nailed flat
on top of a slim pole. It was just wide enough for one person to lie uncomfortably’
(Pratchett, 2014:255). He is mentioned 26 times.
“Um,” said Brutha. “What … religion … are you a saint of, exactly?”
“Uh. None, really. That was all rather a mistake,” he said. “My
parents named me Sevrian Thaddeus Ungulant, and then one day,
of course, most amusing, someone drew attention to the initials.
After that, it all seemed rather inevitable” (Pratchett, 2014:256).
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St Ungulant is a minor character, but one who plays an important role in the story: he
personifies what happens to someone who gives in to the roaming small gods living in
the desert. But, more importantly, he directs Brutha and Om to a water source when
they have completely run out of water on their journey across the desert. His
appearance is a humorous interlude in the perilous desert journey:
The name Sevrian seems to be a creation of Pratchett. The only remotely similar name
is St Severinus of Noricum (in Austria) who was a monk ‘somewhere in the East’
(Attwater and John, 1995:319), but whose life has no resemblance to the character in
Small Gods. However, the English word ‘sever’ has the denotative meaning to ‘set or
keep apart’ or to ‘cut off from the whole’ (Lewis, 2015). In the Groot
Woordeboek/Major Dictionary (Eksteen, 1997), the entry for sever is as follows:
sev´er skei; afsonder; (los)skeur, afsny, afbreek; | ~ one's CONNECTIONS with, as lid
bedank; jou betrekkinge verbreek met; | ~ ONESELF from, jou afskei van; | ~ RELATIONS
with, die betrekkinge verbreek met.
St Sevrian Thaddeus Ungulant definitely keeps himself apart and is cut off from the rest
of society (connotative meaning) and specifically the Omnian Church:
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encouraged them, on the basis that it was best to get madmen as
far away as possible where they couldn’t cause any trouble and
could be cared for by the community, insofar as the community
consisted of lions and buzzards and dirt (Pratchett, 2014:255-256).
When translating the name Sevrian Thaddeus Ungulant, one has to keep in mind that
the initials must be ‘ST’ as the ‘St’ in front of his name has been deduced from his initials
(Pratchett, 2014:256). This is possible as the abbreviation for heilige in Afrikaans is also
‘St.’ (Odendal and Gouws, 2005).
In terms of semiotic translation, it can be said that 'Sevrian’ is the representamen (the
sign) of the semiotic object ‘to be severed’ that leads to the sign’s meaning
(interpretant): the character’s isolation. To be able to keep the semiotic object, skei can
be used to form the name Skeidrik. The compound with -drik would be familiar to an
Afrikaans reader as it resonates with the Afrikaans name Hendrik. Ironically, the
expression ‘Holy Joe’ is translated with Brawe Hendrik and is described as ‘dominee,
kapelaan (iemand wat alte vroom is); fariseër, skynheilige’ (Du Plessis, 1999). This
correlates with the characteristics of Sevrian Thaddeus as a saint who is not a saint.
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Thaddeus.
The Dutch translation of St Sevrian Thaddeus Ungulant is ‘Sint Severjan Tedoor Bovinus’
(Pratchett, 1995b). ‘Severjan’ seems to be a compound of the English word sever and
the Dutch proper noun ‘Jan’, an ‘algemene jongensnaam’ [common boy’s name]
(Martin, 2011). The deduced meaning is therefore ‘the young man who is separate’.
This may be an example of addition, as the original name Sevrian has no indication of a
gender.
Vorbis
Deacon Vorbis is the main antagonist, the head of the Omnian Quisition, and without a
doubt the most feared man in Omnia:
It seems initially as if Vorbis’s name does not have any known words as root or
reference. However, if one looks at the word ‘orb’, the following can be seen: it is an
object with a spherical shape and it means to move around an object in a circle (‘the
moon orbs around the sun’) (Lewis, 2015). The word ‘orb’ comes from the Latin orbis
which means ‘ring’ (Soanes and Stevenson, 2016). Vorbis is the deacon of the Quisition
of the Church who believes that the world is a sphere, as Brutha tries to explain to
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Didactylos: ‘But surely the world is a perfect sphere, spinning about the sphere of the
sun, just as the Septateuch tells us’ (Pratchett, 2014:162). Three times Vorbis’s mind is
described as a steel ball: ‘And the mind behind it – that steel ball of a mind’ (Pratchett,
2014:77; emphasis added), ‘But Om remembered Vorbis’s absorbed expression, in a
pair of gray eyes in front of a mind as impenetrable as a steel ball’ (Pratchett, 2014:100-
101; emphasis added), and ‘Like Vorbis. That thought wouldn’t go away. Mind like a
steel ball, Om had said’ (Pratchett, 2014:272; emphasis added). Steel is impenetrable,
weapons made of steel are used to murder people, a steel will is unbendable – all of
these describe Vorbis. His name could be translated to a word that symbolises this.
However, attempts to incorporate the symbolic ‘steel’ and ‘ring’ or ‘orb’ in a sensible
proper noun become very convoluted. A name such as ‘Storb’ (a compound of the st-
from steel + -orb) may be apparent only to the translator and will not contribute to the
enjoyment of the reader.
Another train of thought follows a slightly different track. The first thing that people
notice about Vorbis is his skull. Unlike other Church officials, who grow hair and beards
‘you could lose a goat in’, Vorbis shaves all over and therefore ‘[h]e gleamed. And lack
of hair seemed to add to his power’ (Pratchett, 2014:11). This led me to the word koeël,
a gleaming round object – just like Vorbis’s skull – and a thing that could be used to kill
someone: ‘’n ronde metaalvoorwerp, metaalpunt in ʼn patroon wat uit ʼn geweer of
kanon geskiet word’ (Labuschagne and Eksteen, 2000). The Afrikaans saying ‘die koeël
is deur die kerk’ adds an ironic twist. A bullet head is a ‘ronde kop’ in Afrikaans (Eksteen,
1997). However, a compound or derivative of the word koeël again feels forced.
Nevertheless, a ‘koeël’ (as a gleaming round object) reminded me of the word ‘ghoen’
– ‘a large marble, a chucking stone (in play)’ (Eksteen, 1997), ‘’n groot albaster om mee
te skiet, gooiklip, ’n pure man, doring, staatmaker; hy is ’n ghoen’ (Labuschagne and
Eksteen, 2000). Vorbis could be called Ghoen. This incorporates the references to his
skull as well as his mind of steel.
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Daar was nie baie van die opperlede van die hiërargie wat hy sou
kon herken nie. Selfs die Aartsmonnik was net ʼn veraf vlek in die
skare. Maar almal het vir Ghoen die ekskwisiteur herken. Iets
omtrent hom het hom binne ʼn paar dae nadat jy in die Sitadel
aangekom het op jou gewete geprojekteer. Die God was bloot op
die oppervlakkige manier van gewoontes gevrees, maar Ghoen het
doodsvrees ontketen.
The Dutch translator opted to keep ‘Vorbis’ (Pratchett, 1995b), which is a transference
from the source text.
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cultural equivalent or adaptation (Newmark, 1988:82-83; Nord, 2003:194), and re-
creating a proper noun in the target cultural setting (Fernandes, 2006:52).
St Sevrian Thaddeus Ungulant’s surname is based on the English noun ‘ungulate’ and
refers to mammals with hooves (Lewis, 2015). This becomes more relevant when one
looks at the saint’s companion Angus. It is suggested that Angus is one of the small gods
(Breebaart and Kew, 2016) and he is mentioned 12 times. He is the spirit companion of
St Sevrian Thaddeus Ungulant:
“Er … but there’s … Angus?” said Brutha, staring at the spot where
he believed Angus to be, or at least where he believed St Ungulant
believed Angus to be.
“He’s over here now,” said the saint sharply, pointing to a different
part of the wheel. “But he doesn’t do any of the herming. He’s not,
you know, trained. He’s just company. My word, I’d have gone
quite mad if it wasn’t for Angus cheering me up all the time!”
(Pratchett, 2014:256) (Pratchett’s emphasis).
Angus is the name of the Celtic god of love and beauty, and also the patron deity of
young men and women (Lewis, 2015). This is very ironic as Sevrian Thaddeus Ungulant
‘was so thin that even skeletons would say, “Isn’t he thin?” He was wearing some sort
of minimalist loin-cloth, insofar as it was possible to tell under the beard and hair’
(Pratchett, 2014:225). This is not the picture of beauty or of a young person.
‘Aberdeen Angus’ or ‘Black Angus’ is a black hornless breed of cattle from Scotland
(Lewis, 2015; Soanes and Stevenson, 2016). This resonates with Sevrian Thaddeus’s
surname ‘Ungulant’, from the adjective ‘ungulate’: ‘having or resembling hoofs’ (Lewis,
2015).
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The character’s surname Ungulant could be translated to the surname Beeslaar. Several
references to the surname could be found on www.identitynumber.org
(IdentityNumber.org, 2016) with the earliest reference to a person who was born in
South Africa in 1890. The website www.name-list.net (Name-list.net, 2016) states that
the meaning of the surname is unknown and that its origin is probably the United
Kingdom or South Africa. The first part of the surname (Bees-) can be translated to
‘bovine’ which is an animal with hooves (an ungulate). Beeslaar has an equivalent
connotative and denotative meaning to ‘Ungulant’. This leads to the translation of
Angus as Brahmaan (Afrikaans spelling for Brahman). ‘Brahman’ refers to any of several
breeds of Indian cattle. Furthermore, it is the highest caste of the four Hindu castes,
that of priesthood. All these references colligate with the original meaning potential
that can be associated with Angus.
In the Dutch name ‘Sint Severjan Tedoor Bovinus’, Bovinus is not clearly based on a
Dutch word (Martin, 2011), but on a Latin word. Wild and domesticated cattle fall in
the genus Bos with the subfamily Bovinae or Bovini (Lewis, 2015) and Bovinus was most
probably deduced from that. This is in line with the surname Ungulant from the word
‘ungulate’ (having or resembling hooves) (Lewis, 2015).
The Dutch for Angus in Kleingoderij is ‘Herman’. Herman is a widely used Dutch name
(Babynamespedia.com, 2016). It means ‘army man’ (Behindthename.com, 2016c, and
Wikipedia, 2016c) and a ‘person of high rank’ (Thenamemeaning.com, 2016b). Angus is
not an army man or a highly ranked person and the name may be ironic.
Nhumrod
Brother Nhumrod is the novice master of the group that included Brutha. He has been
in the Citadel for 50 years (Pratchett, 2014:8) and has struggled with impure thoughts
(Pratchett, 2014:7) and voices ‘through every sleeping and waking hour’ (Pratchett,
2014:21).
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“But there are other voices,” said Brother Nhumrod, and now his
voice had a slight tremolo, “beguiling and wheedling and
persuasive voices, yes? Voices that are always waiting to catch us
off our guard?”
All the novices knew about those kinds of voices. Except that
usually they talked about fairly straightforward things, like the
pleasures of night-time manipulation and the general desirability
of girls. Which showed that they were novices when it came to
voices. Brother Nhumrod got the kind of voices that were, by
comparison, a full oratorio (Pratchett, 2014:9).
A rod is an obscene term for a male sexual organ (Lewis, 2015) and Nhumrod’s name is
a pun on a ‘numb rod’ which refers to his impotent struggles with the voices: ‘Brother
Nhumrod was prostrate on the floor in front of a statue of Om Trampling the Ungodly,
with his fingers in his ears. The voices were troubling him again’ (Pratchett, 2014:28).
‘Numb’ can be translated to ‘verstyf, styf word, styf wees [van (die) koue]’ (Joubert,
1997). This (om styf te wees) is the opposite of the affliction that Brother Nhumrod has.
The Afrikaans word lam is a closer description of the state of Brother Nhumrod’s
manhood: ‘heeltemal of gedeeltelik van beweging beroof; verlam; slap, kragteloos’
(Odendal and Gouws, 2005). Also (Labuschagne and Eksteen, 2000):
lam (b) =me =mer =ste Nie in staat om die ledemate te beweeg nie, lomerig, traag of
moeg in die ledemate.
The first part of his name could, therefore, be translated to Lam and, to keep it in line
with the original, an -h- could be added to retain the implication of an exotic and foreign
location, creating Lham.
A rod is often used to cane or flog someone (Soanes and Stevenson, 2016). The English
expression ‘spare the rod and spoil the child’ (‘wie die roede spaar, bederf die kind’)
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(Eksteen, 1997; Joubert, 1997) is applicable to Brother Nhumrod as he explains to
Vorbis: ‘“I’m sorry to say that beating young Brutha is like trying to flog a mattress,”
said Nhumrod. “He says ‘ow!’ but I think it’s only because he wants to show he’s
willing”’ (Pratchett, 2014:49-50). Brother Nhumrod does not believe in sparing the rod.
The Afrikaans of rod is roede and this is also a euphemism for and connotative of the
male sexual organ (Odendal and Gouws, 2005). Translating Nhumrod as Lhamroede is
a cultural adaptation and a recreation of Pratchett’s invented name attempting to
reproduce similar effect in the target language. It is also a target-language neologism
(Newmark, 1988:150). Both the actual, primary meaning (denotative) and the implied,
suggested meaning (connotative) were translated.
Brutha
Brutha is mentioned more than 1 050 times. Brutha is a novice in Omnia. He is the only
true believer left in Omnia and the only person who can hear the god Om speak:
And it came to pass that in that time the Great God Om spake unto
Brutha, the Chosen One:
“Psst!”
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“And, of course, one day we shall have to call you Brother Brutha,”
he said. “Or even Father Brutha? Rather confusing, I think. Best to
be avoided. I think we shall have to see to it that you become
Subdeacon Brutha just as soon as possible; what do you think of
that?” (Pratchett, 2014:61).
From this it can be deduced that ‘Brutha’ is pronounced the same as the English word
‘brother’, otherwise ‘Brother Brother’ or ‘Father Brother’ would not be funny. The
Afrikaans denotative translation of the word ‘brother’ is ‘broer, broeder, boet, boeta,
(klooster)-broe(de)r’ (Eksteen, 1997). Brutha’s name resonates with the Buddhist
prophet ‘Buddha’ and is an implied, connotative meaning. Translating his name to
Boeta echoes this resonance, and it also ensures that Broer Boeta and Vader Boeta are
still funny:
“En, natuurlik, ons sal jou eendag Broer Boeta noem,” het hy
[Vorbis] gesê. “Of selfs Vader Boeta? Bietjie verwarrend, dink ek.
Moet maar liewer vermy word. Ek dink ons sal moet seker maak
dat jy so gou as wat moontlik is Onderdiaken Boeta word, wat dink
jy daarvan?”
The Dutch translation is ‘Broeda’ (Pratchett, 1995b) and is also a cultural adaptation:
‘Broeda’ probably is derived from the Dutch word ‘broeder’ [‘man in klooster, lid van
een christelijke gemeente of medemens’] (Martin, 2011). The name also resonates with
‘Buddha’.
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4.4 Internationalisation
Newmark (1988:89), Nord (2003:194), Fernandes (2006:55) and Van Coillie (2006:126)
describe this procedure that refer to using the accepted translation for geographical
locations and internationally known historical and literary figures. Vermes (2001:93)
calls this substitution, but he specifically refers to geographical names which have
internationally accepted translations.
“Funny you should say that. Yes. Every once in a while. Just for a
bit of variety” (Pratchett, 2014:257).
Also:
St Ungulant smiled.
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He was, of course, mad. He’d occasionally suspected this. But he
took the view that madness should not be wasted (Pratchett,
2014:258).
In the Afrikaans Bible translation of 1953 (Die Bybel: E-Sword (Elektroniese Bybel,
Afrikaans Ou Vertaling), 1953) Thaddeus is spelled ‘Thaddéüs’ (Mattheus 10 vers 3):
‘Filippus en Bartholoméüs; Thomas en Matthéüs, die tollenaar; Jakobus, die seun van
Alféüs, en Lebbéüs wat genoem word Thaddéüs’. In Die Boodskap: die Nuwe Testament
in hedendaagse Afrikaans (Van Der Watt and Joubert, 1997:43), this verse reads: ‘dan
was daar ook Filippus, Bartolomeus en Tomas, Mattheus (die een wat Jesus by die
tolhuis ontmoet het) en Jakobus (Alfeus was sy pa); [en] Taddeus’. Die older spelling of
Thaddéüs seems exotic and foreign and would correspond with the foreign setting of
the book.
Thus choosing to translate Thaddeus to Thaddéüs for an Afrikaans version of Small Gods
is an internationalisation, as there is an accepted translation for the name of this
historical-biblical figure. The denotative and connotative meanings have been
translated.
Aristocrates
The accepted Afrikaans for Aristotle is ‘Aristoteles’ and for Socrates is ‘Sokrates’
(Eksteen, 1997). The combined name, a target-language neologism, will therefore be
translated to Aristokrates from Aristo- + -krates.
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The Dutch translation is ‘Aristocrates’ (Pratchett, 1995b): ‘“Ik heet Aristocrates. Ik ben
secretaris van de Tyran. Verzoek je manschappen alsjeblieft om hun wapens neer te
leggen.”’ This is either internationalisation or transference.
Literal translation occurs when each of the elements of the source-text proper noun is
translated literally to the target text. This procedure is described by Newmark
(1988:84), Vermes (2001:112), Nord (2003:194), Pym (2004:92) and Van Coillie
(2006:127). When translating literally, both the denotative and connotative meanings
should be retained in the target-text proper nouns and neologisms. The aim is to find
the word that resembles the original denotative and connotative meaning the closest.
The head of the Omnian Church is called the Cenobiarch, the Superior Iam:
The sun’s reflected glow shone down and across the tens of
thousands of the strong-in-faith who labored below for the greater
glory of the Great God Om.
Probably no one did know how many of them there were. Some
things have a way of going critical. Certainly there was only one
Cenobiarch, the Superior Iam. That was certain. And six
Archpriests. And thirty lesser Iams. And hundreds of bishops,
deacons, subdeacons, and priests. And novices like rats in a grain
store. And craftsmen, and bull breeders, and torturers, and
Vestigial Virgins …
No matter what your skills, there was a place for you in the Citadel
(Pratchett, 2014:10).
The Superior Iam fulfils a similar role as the Pope in the Roman Catholic Church or the
Islamic caliph (The L-Space Web, 2012a). The Cenobiarch is mentioned 29 times.
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The word ‘Cenobiarch’ is a compound neologism of the noun ‘cenobi(te)’ and the suffix
‘-arch’. A cenobite is a ‘member of a monastic community’ (Soanes and Stevenson,
2016). The prefix ‘arch- ’ means the ‘chief or principal’, for instance, an archbishop – ‘a
bishop of the highest rank’ (Lewis, 2015). The suffix ‘-arch’ refers to a ‘ruler or leader’,
for instance, monarch from the Greek monos for ‘alone’ and the suffix -arch for ‘ruler’
(Soanes and Stevenson, 2016). The denotative and connotative meanings of the prefix
as well as the suffix are applicable as the Cenobiarch is the chief ruler of Omnia, a
monastic community.
‘Iam’ may refer to the Bible, Exodus 3 verse 14, when ‘God said to Moses, I AM WHO I
AM’ (The Bible: E-Sword (Electronic Bible, English Standard version), 2001) (original
capitalisation). This should be translated literally to Ekis (‘EK IS WAT EK IS’ (Die Bybel: E-
Sword (Elektroniese Bybel, Afrikaans Ou Vertaling), 1953) (original capitalisation). The
literal translation of ‘Cenobiarch, the Superior Iam’ is Aartsmonnik, die Owerste Ekis in
Afrikaans.
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The Dutch translation is also a literal translation: ‘Aartscenobiet, de Icben Superior’
(Pratchett, 1995b). The spelling of ‘Icben’ was altered from ‘Ik ben’ to ‘Ic ben’, perhaps
to seem more exotic.
Cut-Me-Own-Hand-Off Dhblah
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Cut is ‘sny, afsny, stukkend sny, opsny, kap, wegsny kerf (twak)’;
Me/my is a possessive pronoun translated as ‘my’;
Own is an adjective translated as ‘eie’;
Hand is translated to ‘hand’; and
Off is ‘af’.
The root word for the surname Dhblah is ‘blah (blah)’. The Groot Woordeboek/Major
Dictionary (Eksteen, 1997) states the following:
Dhblah can, therefore, be translated to a word that has kaf as root, for instance Khaf.
The kh- sound is present in Afrikaans in borrowed words such as ‘khalifa (hoofpersoon
van ʼn Islamitiese godsdienstige seremonie of die seremonie self)’ and ‘khan (Tartaarse
of Mongoolse vors)’ (Odendal and Gouws, 2005), both of Arabic origin and completely
congruent with the character in Small Gods.
The Tyrant
Vorbis goes to Ephebe on a so-called diplomatic mission to meet with the Tyrant of
Ephebe:
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All over the world there were rulers with titles like the Exalted, the
Supreme, and Lord High Something or Other. Only in one small
country was the ruler elected by the people, who could remove
him whenever they wanted – and they called him the Tyrant.
The Ephebians believed that every man should have the vote10
(Pratchett, 2014:143).
The irony of the Ephebian Tyrant’s title is that tyrants are not democratically elected.
‘Especially in ancient Greece’ (Soanes and Stevenson, 2016), a tyrant was a ruler who
usurped power without having any legal right to it (Lewis, 2015). Tyrants are considered
to be cruel and oppressive dictators. If anything, Vorbis is a tyrant, as the Tyrant
recognises:
10) ‘Provided that he wasn’t poor, foreign nor disqualified by reason of being mad, frivolous or a
woman’ (original footnote; PRATCHETT, T. 2014. Small Gods. London: Gollancz.).
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The Tyrant of Ephebe is mentioned 33 times. ‘Tyrant’ is translated to ‘tiran’ or ‘despoot’
in Afrikaans (Eksteen, 1997). A tiran is an ‘alleenheerser, geweldadige heerser,
onderdrukker, of ʼn person wat met wreedheid sy mag uitoefen’ (Odendal and Gouws,
2005). A despoot is a ‘heerser met absolute mag; alleenheerser, dwingeland’ (Odendal
and Gouws, 2005). The word should be translated literally to retain the full denotative
and connotative meanings. The suggested Afrikaans translation is thus die Tiran.
The Dutch translation is ‘de Tyran’ (Pratchett, 1995b). This is also a literal translation:
“Ik ben Deken Vorbis van de Citadelse Quisitie,” zei Vorbis kil.
“Ja, dat weet ik al,” zei hij. “Jij martelt mensen voor je beroep.”
The Quisition
The Quisition is a parody of the Inquisition established by the Roman Catholic Church
in twelfth-century France with the purpose of combatting heresy (Wikipedia, 2016d).
As Brutha explains to Om: ‘Sinners and criminals are purified by fire in the Quisition’s
pits or sometimes in front of the Great Temple’ (Pratchett, 2014:37) (Pratchett’s
emphasis). Vorbis, an exquisitor, is the head of the Quisition. There are both inquisitors
and exquisitors working for the Quisition:
[Brutha] “Oh, no! The inquisitors do that. They work very long
hours for not much money, too, Brother Nhumrod says. No, the
exquisitors just … arrange matters. Every inquisitor wants to
become an exquisitor one day, Brother Nhumrod says. That’s why
they put up with being on duty at all hours. They go for days
without sleep, sometimes” (Pratchett, 2014:76).
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inkwisi´sie s.nw. [~s] In die Rooms-Katolieke Kerk – [die] ondersoek deur die kerklike
owerheid na die misdrywe teen die geloof en sedes van die kerk; ook, godsdienstige
regbank wat kettery in dié kerk moet opspoor en straf.
The Dutch is ‘de Quisitie’ (Pratchett, 1995b), a literal translation from the word
‘inquisitie’ (Martin, 2011).
The Citadel
A citadel is ‘a stronghold into which people could go for shelter during a battle’ (Lewis,
2015). The Citadel is the centre of the Omnian religion:
The Citadel occupied the whole of the heart of the city of Kom, in
the lands between the deserts of Klatch and the plains and jungles
of Howondaland. It extended for miles, its temples, churches,
schools, dormitories, gardens, and towers growing into and
around one another in a way that suggested a million termites all
trying to build their mounds at the same time.
When the sun rose the reflection of the doors of the central
Temple blazed like fire. They were bronze, and a hundred feet tall.
On them, in letters of gold set in lead, were the Commandments.
There were five hundred and twelve so far, and doubtless the next
prophet would add his share (Pratchett, 2014:9).
The city Kom may refer to Qom, the religious capital of Iran and considered holy by Shi`a
Muslims (Wikipedia, 2016g). The Omnian Citadel is similar to the Vatican in Rome or
Jerusalem in Israel. The name is an example of a common noun used as a proper noun.
A citadel is a ‘burg, vesting, slot, sitadel’ (Eksteen, 1997). ‘Slot’ is ‘(ietwat deftig)
versterkte kasteel, burg’; ‘burg’ is a ‘slot, kasteel van ʼn ridder’ and ‘sitadel’ is a ‘vesting,
fort wat ʼn stad beskerm’ (Odendal and Gouws, 2005). The definition of ‘sitadel’ is the
closest to the denotative description of the Citadel in Omnia: it is more than a
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‘versterkte kasteel’ or ‘kasteel van ʼn ridder’ – both implying a single building. The origin
of the word ‘sitadel’ is citadella which is the diminutive for citade, meaning ‘city’ in Old
Italian (Odendal and Gouws, 2005). A citadel, therefore, refers to a small city. The
Afrikaans translation is consequently die Sitadel. The name has been translated literally:
Die Sitadel het die hele hart van die stad Kom beslaan, in die gebied
tussen die woestyne van Klatsj en die grasvlaktes en oerwoude van
Hoedonderland.
The Dutch translation is ‘De Citadel’ (Pratchett, 1995b) and is also a literal translation:
‘De Citadel besloeg het complete hart van de stad Comma, in de streek tussen de
woestijnen van Klatsch en de oerwouden van Gwondonderland’.
Cusp
The inquisitor, whose name was Deacon Cusp, had got where he
was today, which was a place he wasn’t sure right now that he
wanted to be, because he liked hurting people. It was a simple
desire, and one that was satisfied in abundance within the
Quisition. And he was one of those who were terrified in a very
particular way by Vorbis. Hurting people because you enjoyed it …
that was understandable. Vorbis just hurt people because he’d
decided that they should be hurt, without passion, even with a kind
of hard love (Pratchett, 2014:278).
Deacon Cusp is an inquisitor for the Omnian Quisition. The Quisition is notoriously cruel
and is feared by all in Omnia:
And if your skill lay in asking the wrong kinds of questions or losing
the righteous kind of wars, the place might just be the furnaces of
purity, or the Quisition’s pits of justice (Pratchett, 2014:10).
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It has to be said … there was little to laugh at in the cellar of the
Quisition. Not if you had a normal sense of humor. There were no
jolly little signs saying: You Don’t Have To Be Pitilessly Sadistic To
Work Here But It Helps!!! (Pratchett, 2014:13).
In the same way, the Quisition could act without possibility of flaw.
Suspicion was proof (Pratchett, 2014:57).
[Brutha] “Oh, no! The inquisitors do that. They work very long
hours for not much money, too, Brother Nhumrod says. No, the
exquisitors just … arrange matters. Every inquisitor wants to
become an exquisitor one day, Brother Nhumrod says. That’s why
they put up with being on duty at all hours. They go for days
without sleep, sometimes.”
The common noun ‘cusp’ has the following meanings (Lewis, 2015): ‘point formed by
two intersecting arcs (as from the intrados of a Gothic arch), a sharp point or pointed
end; a point where an otherwise smooth curve comes to a point’. The Concise Oxford
English Dictionary (Soanes and Stevenson, 2016) describes it as ‘a pointed end where
two curves meet, each of the pointed ends of the crescent moon’. The Groot
Woordeboek/Major Dictionary (Eksteen, 1997) has the following entries for cusp:
‘knobbel (op die kroon van ʼn tand), spits, horing (van die maan), uitstekende punt’.
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All these meanings have some association with Deacon Cusp. Inquisitors use sharp,
pointed tools for torture:
But many of the inquisitors liked the old ways best (Pratchett,
2014:56).
The word ‘cusp’ also means ‘turning point’ (Lewis, 2015). The Concise Oxford English
Dictionary (Soanes and Stevenson, 2016) adds: ‘a point of transition between two
different states’. The Groot Woordeboek/Major Dictionary (Eksteen, 1997) describes
cusp also as a ‘keerpunt’. These connotative descriptions are also applicable to Deacon
Cusp as the people who are tortured are at a ‘turning point’ (Lewis, 2015) in their lives
and he is present at the ‘point of transition between two different states’ (Soanes and
Stevenson, 2016), the transition of life to death.
Cusp can be translated as ‘Spits’. The Groot Woordeboek/Major Dictionary (ibid.) states
the following (Eksteen, 1997):
spits (s) (-e) point; top, tip, pinnacle, spire, vertex, peak, summit; forefront; cusp (bot.);
iets op die ~ DRYF, bring to a head; aan die ~ van die LEËR, at the head of the army; (w)
(ge-), point; jou OP iets ~, set one's heart on.
When Deacon Cusp tortures someone he brings it to a head (‘op die spits dryf’). He also
sets his heart on it (‘op iets spits’). It thus makes sense to translate Deacon Cusp to
Diaken Spits. This preserves the different denotative references to sharp points and the
similarity between ‘turning point’ and ‘op ʼn spits dryf’.
The Dutch translator also literally translated Cusp with ‘Spits’ (Pratchett, 1995b):
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De inquisiteur die Deken Spits heette, was opgeklommen tot zijn
huidige stek – een plek waarvan hij momenteel niet zo zeker was
of hij er wel wezen wilde – omdat hij graag mensen pijn deed.
The word ‘spits’ in Dutch means ‘puntig uiteinde’, with the figurative meaning ‘het/de
spits afbijten’ or ‘op de spits drijven’ (Martin, 2011). This is in line with the character
‘de inquisiteur die Deken Spits heette ...’.
Discworld
Pratchett’s Discworld novels are set on a fictional, magical planet, the Discworld – a flat
convex world which is carried on the backs of four celestial elephants, who in turn stand
on the back of the giant turtle called Great A’Tuin. Great A’Tuin slowly swims through
space, forever on his way from nowhere going nowhere. Much has been speculated
about the gender of Great A’Tuin; in The Colour of Magic Great A’Tuin is described as
male:
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Pratchett describes the Discworld as ‘a flat planet – like a geological pizza, but without
the anchovies’ (Pratchett and Briggs, 2012:89). ‘Discworld is real. It's the way worlds
should work. Admittedly, it is flat and goes through space on the backs of four elephants
who stand on the shell of a giant turtle, but consider the alternatives’ (Pratchett,
Stewart, & Cohen 2006:1). The Discworld is a world but also a ‘mirror of worlds’ (Briggs,
2012c:332).
It is the setting for all 41 Discworld books. Eleven references are made to the Discworld
in Small Gods, including the following:
They live … well, in the nature of things they live wherever they are
sent, but their spiritual home is in a hidden valley in the high
Ramtops of the Discworld, where the books of history are kept
(Pratchett, 2014:3; Pratchett's emphasis).
The name is a composition of the common nouns ‘disc’ and ‘world’, and is a noun-
compound neologism (Newmark, 1988:145). The translation procedure suggested by
Newmark (1988:150) is to derive a target-language neologism.
The Afrikaans for ‘disc’ is ‘skyf’ (Eksteen, 1997). The HAT: Verklarende Handwoordeboek
van die Afrikaanse Taal (Odendal and Gouws, 2005) describes a ‘skyf’ as ‘ʼn platronde
voorwerp of iets wat as sodanig vertoon’ or ‘platronde voorwerp wat om ʼn spil (kan)
draai’. Skyf describes accurately what the Disc is. The Afrikaans for ‘world’ is ‘wêreld’
(Eksteen, 1997). The new compound neologism Skyfwêreld is an equivalent translation.
This corresponds with the procedure proposed by Newmark (1988:150) to create a
target-text neologism. It is also a literal translation. The denotative meaning – a disc-
like world – is retained as well as the connotative meaning – a skyfwêreld implies a
planet that is flat (a ‘platronde voorwerp’).
The Dutch translation is ‘Schijfwereld’ (Pratchett, 1995b). This is a literal translation and
a target-text neologism:
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Die wonen … tja, het is zo geregeld dat ze wonen waarheen men
ze stuurt, maar hun geestelijk tehuis ligt in een verborgen vallei in
het Ramtopgebergte van de Schijfwereld, waar men de boeken van
de geschiedenis bewaart (Pratchett’s emphasis, retained by the
Dutch translator).
Death
Death is the anthropomorphic personification of the Grim Reaper and who appears at
the moment of death of creatures (not just humans). He allows them to leave this world
and enter whatever it is that they expect to find after life, as he describes to Mort in
Mort (Pratchett, 1988:64):
Pratchett and Simpson (2008:368) explain what happens after death: ‘It appears that
no two people have the same experience, since it will accurately reflect the beliefs and
personality of each’ (emphasis added).
Death manifests as a seven-foot-tall skeleton with bones polished like billiard balls. His
eyes are mere points of blue light and he wears a hooded robe. He normally carries a
scythe but has a sword for kings (Pratchett and Briggs, 2012:183). He ‘TALKS IN A HEAVY
VOICE’ (Pratchett and Kidby, 1999:1) that is represented in SMALL CAPS without quotation
marks:
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OH, BUGGER.
It wasn’t exactly a voice. The words were there all right, but they
arrived in Mort’s head without bothering to pass through his ears
(Pratchett, 1988:20).
He [Fri’it] turned and looked at the thing that had briefly impeded
his progress.
“Oh,” he said.
GOOD MORNING.
“Oh.”
To his horror, Fri’it saw the tall black figure stride away through the
gray wall.
“Wait!”
YES?
INDEED.
Death shrugged.
Death appears in 39 of the 41 Discworld novels, the exceptions being The Wee Free Men
(Pratchett, 2004) and Snuff (Pratchett, 2012). Death is the only recurring character in
Small Gods, although the History Monks and Lu-Tze also feature in Thief of Time
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(Pratchett, 2002) and Night Watch (Pratchett, 2003) and reference is made to Omnian
priests in, for instance, Carpe Jugulum (Pratchett, 1999) and Night Watch (Pratchett,
2003).
The name ‘Death’ is the common noun ‘death’, which is dood in Afrikaans (Eksteen,
1997). There is no other connotative meaning in the name that needs to be translated.
The proper noun ‘Death’ is, therefore, Dood in Afrikaans.
The Dutch translation is ‘de Dood’ (with a definite article) (Pratchett, 1995b) and is also
a literal translation. In the Dutch translation, Death speaks in lower case and not in small
capitals:
Een schedel omfloerst door een zwarte kap werd uit de muur
gestoken.
[Death] ja?
[Death] inderdaad.
Simony
Sergeant Simony draws the lot to go to Ephebe and bring back the writer of the book
De Chelonian Mobile upon which the resistance movement is based. Simony has a deep-
rooted hatred for the Omnian Church:
“That’s right. My country,” said Simony. “I was just a kid then. But
I won’t forget. Nor will others. There’s lots of people with a reason
to hate the Church” (Pratchett, 2014:231).
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He is also the leader of the group that accompanies Vorbis to Ephebe and stays very
close to Vorbis, ostensibly to protect him against any external danger:
“I saw you standing close to Vorbis,” said Urn. “I thought you were
protecting him.”
“Oh, I was, I was,” said Simony. “I don’t want anyone to kill him
before I do” (Pratchett, 2014:231).
Simony is mentioned 147 times. The noun ‘simony’ refers to the ‘buying or selling of
pardons, benefices, and other ecclesiastical privileges’ (Soanes and Stevenson, 2016).
This was a sin against the Roman Catholic Church. Simony’s resistance against the
Church is also considered a sin, one for which he could pay with his life if found out by
the Quisition.
The Afrikaans for ‘simony’ is ‘simonie’ (Eksteen, 1997). ‘Sergeant Simony’ can be
translated literally as Sersant Simonie: Sersant Simonie het gewag tot hy in sy eie
kwartiere was voor hy sy eie flenterpapiertjie oopgevou het. The denotative and
connotative meanings were translated.
The Dutch literal translation is ‘Simonie’ (Pratchett, 1995b): ‘Sergeant Simonie wachtte
tot hij weer in zijn eigen barak was voor hij zijn eigen papiertje openvouwde’.
Urn
Urn is the philosopher Aristocrates’s nephew and is mentioned more than 190 times.
Urn is more interested in mechanics than in philosophy. When the Library is burned
down, he rather wants to save the scrolls on various topics:
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“Then if all mankind will come and help us carry them, that’s fine,”
said Urn. “But if it’s just the two of us, I prefer to carry something
useful.”
An ‘urn’ is a large vase that often has feet or a pedestal (Lewis, 2015). The common
noun ‘urn’ can be translated to ‘vaas, kruik, urn; lykbus; pot, kan; ketel’ (Eksteen, 1997).
The character’s name could be translated literally as Kruik. It is not very clear what the
relevance regarding Urn’s name is, except that an urn is traditionally Greek, and his
name places him firmly in the setting. The denotative meaning was translated.
The procedure called neutralisation may have been used to translate Urn to Teunus in
Dutch.
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‘Teunus’ (Urn), ‘Bactmar’ (Fri’it), ‘Isnander’ (Argavisti) and ‘Borsalvius’ (Borvorius) were
neutralised.
Imperiator Borvorius
The title Imperiator comes from the Latin word imperator meaning ‘commander,
leader, or emperor’ and was ‘originally an appellation of honour by which Roman
soldiers saluted their general after an important victory’ (Lewis, 2015). The Verklarende
Afrikaanse Woordeboek (Labuschagne and Eksteen, 2000) states that imperator is a
‘titel van ‘n oorwinnende veldheer by die Romeine, opperbevelhebber, keiser’. The title
can be translated literally to Opperbevelhebber. However, the word in the source text
is ‘Imperiator’ and not ‘Imperator’. Translating it to Opperbevelhebber, with no
additional changes, is a form of neutralisation.
The Dutch translator retained the spelling for Imperiator, using the procedure called
transference.
4.7 Substitution
Substitution refers to the procedure according to which a proper noun from the source
text is substituted with a near synonym or a conventional name, as described by
Hermans (1988:13), Newmark (1988:84), Vermes (2001:112), Nord (2003:194),
Fernandes (2006:50,52) and Van Coillie (2006:127). Van Coillie states that the name
may be different, but the function remains the same.
Ossory
Prophet Ossory claims that the Great God Om spoke to him in the desert from a pillar
of flame and dictated all 193 chapters of the Book of Ossory to him. He is mentioned
30 times, for example:
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“You spoke to him in the desert,” said Brutha. “You must
remember. He was eight feet tall? With a very long beard? And a
huge staff? And the glow of the holy horns shining out of his
head?” He hesitated. But he’d seen the statues and the holy icons.
They couldn’t be wrong.
“Never met anyone like that,” said the small god Om.
“He said that you spoke unto him from out of a pillar of flame,”
said Brutha.
“And you dictated to him the Book of Ossory,” said Brutha. “Which
contains the Directions, the Gateways, the Abjurations, and the
Precepts. One hundred and ninety-three chapters.”
“I don’t think I did all that,” said Om doubtfully. “I’m sure I would
have remembered one hundred and ninety-three chapters”
(Pratchett, 2014:44).
The description that Brutha gives of Ossory corresponds with descriptions of the biblical
Moses. Exodus 3 verses 1 and 2 (The Bible: New International Version, 2000) describes
how Moses took Jethro’s flock to the ‘far side of the desert and [he] came to Horeb, the
mountain of God. There the angel of the Lord appeared to him in flames of fire from
within a bush’. Verse 4 tells of how God spoke to Moses from the flames and sent him
to Egypt to lead Israel to the promised land. Exodus 19 (The Bible: New International
Version, 2000) shows Moses’ receiving the Ten Commandments from God. Exodus 34
verse 29 describes how Moses’s face was radiant after he spent time in the presence of
God. The study note in the New International Version (The Bible: New International
Version, 2000) pertaining to this verse states that ‘was radiant’ is closely related to the
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Hebrew word for horns and that a mistranslation in the Latin Vulgate translation of the
Bible stated that Moses had horns when he descended the mountain. A statue of Moses
by Michelangelo (1513 to 1515) clearly shows the horns on Moses’s head as well as a
beard that reaches to his waist (Wegener, 1991:168). Even though no mention is made
in the Bible of Moses’s beard, it can be accepted that he had one, as there are several
references to beards in the Old Testament (for instance, Leviticus 13 verse 29 (The Bible:
E-Sword (Electronic Bible, English Standard version), 2001): ‘When a man or woman has
a disease on the head or beard ...’); Moses’s brother Aaron had a beard as well,
according to Psalm 133 verse 2 (The Bible: E-Sword (Electronic Bible, English Standard
version), 2001).
Like Ossory, Moses had a staff: ‘So Moses took his wife and sons, put them on a donkey
and started back to Egypt. And he took the staff of God in his hand’ (Exodus 4 verse 20,
The Bible: E-Sword (Electronic Bible, English Standard version), 2001). Ossory also has a
donkey: ‘The Most Holy St. Bobby was made a bishop because he was in the desert with
the Prophet Ossory, and he was a donkey’ (Pratchett, 2014:264-265; Pratchett's
emphasis) and ‘For all I [Brutha] know, it was always like this – probably it was Ossory’s
ass that carried him in the wilderness, who found the water, who kicked a lion to death’
(Pratchett, 2014:269).
Ossory wanders the desert with staff in hand, hears a voice that speaks from pillars of
flames, has the glow of holy horns and returns to the Citadel with 193 chapters of
Directions, Precepts, Gateways and Abjurations. As Brutha angrily exclaims: ‘Hundreds
of thousands of people live their lives by the Abjurations and the Precepts!’ (Pratchett,
2014:45).
The word ossuary refers to ‘any receptacle for the burial of human bones’ (Lewis, 2015).
Os and its plural ossa mean ‘bone’ (Soanes and Stevenson, 2016). It comes from the
Latin ossuārium (‘charnel house’), from ossuārius (‘of or for bones’) – from the
compound of Latin os (‘bone’) + adjectival suffix ārius (‘of, related to’) (Wiktionary,
2016). The Online Etymology Dictionary (2016b) has the following entry for ‘ossuary’:
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ossuary (n.) ‘urn for the bones of the dead,’ 1650s, from Late Latin ossuarium ‘charnel
house,’ from neuter of Latin ossuarius ‘of bones,’ from Latin os (plural ossua) ‘bone’
(see osseous) on model of mortuarium.
Because of Ossory’s persuasive teachings, people lived inflexible lives; they have
become ossified – they ceased developing, became inflexible, or ‘[het] in been verander,
verbeen; ongevoelig word, verhard’ (Eksteen, 1997). Newmark (1988:149) suggests
creating a target-language neologism. ‘Knekel’ or ‘been’ should form the root of the
translated proper noun. The word been together with the suffix -(e)drik (as in Hendrik
or Diederik) can create the proper noun Beenderik. This will be familiar to an Afrikaans
reader. The complete name is Profeet Beenderik as ‘profeet’ is the literal translation for
‘prophet’ (Eksteen, 1997). Beenderik is a substitution (a near synonym) for Ossory. It
carries the connotative meaning of verhard and the denotative meaning of been.
The proper noun in Kleingoderij (Pratchett, 1995b) is also ‘Profeet Beenderik’: ‘“Ik weet
geeneens meer iets van ene Beenderik,” mopperde de schildpad’.
Two of them were sitting down with him now. They were General
Iam Fri’it, who whatever the official records might suggest was the
man who ran most of the Divine Legion, and Bishop Drunah…
(Pratchett, 2014:22).
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General Iam Fri’it’s name can be pronounced as ‘I Am Free It’. His first name may echo
statements made by Jesus such as ‘I am the bread of life’ (John 6 verses 35 and 48 (The
Bible: E-Sword (Electronic Bible, English Standard version), 2001)). General Fri’it’s first
name may follow the same tradition as followers of the Islamic faith who call boys
Mohammed after the Islamic prophet, as there is the Superior Iam and 30 lesser Iams
in the Citadel (Pratchett, 2014:10). This may be a title or position as is evident in the
Superior Iam and it could be a first name, as is the case with General Iam Fri’it.
General Iam Fri’it is a soldier in the Divine Legion but he is really a freedom fighter for
the underground resistance group The Turtle Moves in Omnia and, therefore, has the
aim to ‘free it’.
‘General’ is ‘Generaal’ (Eksteen, 1997) in Afrikaans and is a literal translation. ‘Iam’ can
be translated literally as Ekis. The Afrikaans word ‘vryheid’ could be morphologically
changed to vry’yt, which phonologically sounds like vry’heid. It retains the interesting
spelling of the name in the source text as well as the connotative meaning. Vry’yt in
Afrikaans is a near synonym of the source-text proper noun and is a substitution:
Twee van hulle het juis nou by hom gesit. Hulle was Generaal Ekis
Vry’yt, die man wat, ten spyte van wat al die amptelike verslae mag
suggereer, vernaamlik in bevel was van die Goddelike Legioen, en
Biskop Droena, sekretaris vir die Kongres van Ekisse.
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4.8 Transference
This procedure is used when the translator reproduces the source-text proper noun
unchanged in the target text, and was described by Hervey and Higgins (1992:29),
Hermans (1988:13), Newmark (1988:81-82), Vermes (2001:112), Nord (2003:194), Pym
(2004:92), Fernandes (2006:50-51) and Van Coillie (2006:125).
Imperiator Borvorius is mentioned 12 times and General Argavisti 15 times. They are
historical adversaries but are forced together in the fight against Omnia after Ephebe is
almost destroyed by Omnia:
No one was quite sure who was leading the fleet. Most of the
countries along the coast hated one another, not in any personal
sense, but simply on a kind of historical basis. On the other hand,
how much leadership was necessary? Everyone knew where
Omnia was. None of the countries in the fleet hated the others
worse than they did Omnia. Now it was necessary for it … not to
exist.
General Argavisti and Imperiator Borvorius negotiate with Brutha after the death of
Vorbis. Both names seem to have been created by Pratchett. The word ‘argal’ means
‘wild sheep of semidesert regions of central Asia’ (Lewis, 2015), but this does not seem
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to have any correlation with the name as Argavisti is from Ephebe (which refers to
ancient Greece, and not Asia).
Both names should be left unchanged as Argavisti and Borvorius. The title General is
translated literally to ‘Generaal’ (Eksteen, 1997).
General Argavisti and Imperiator Borvorius are translated as Generaal Argavisti and
Opperbevelhebber Borvorius. Only the denotative meaning is translated (it denotes a
particular person) as there is not a clear connotative meaning.
The Dutch translation for Argavisti is ‘Isnander’ and for Borvorius is ‘Borsalvius’
(Pratchett, 1995b). These names seem to have been neutralised.
Xeno
Xeno is one of the philosophers in Ephebe and is mentioned 24 times in Small Gods.
The one called Xeno stepped forward, adjusting the hang of his
toga.
Xeno spun around. “I’ve just about had it up to here with you,
Ibid!” he roared. He turned back to Brutha. “We are, therefore we
am,” he said confidently (Pratchett, 2014:133-134).
“There’s the Xenoists,” said Urn promptly. “They say the world is
basically complex and random. And there’s the Ibidians. They say
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the world is basically simple and follows certain fundamental
rules.”
“And there’s me,” said Didactylos, pulling a scroll out of its rack
(Pratchett, 2014:161).
Xeno is the Discworld equivalent of Zeno of Elea, the pre-Socratic Greek philosopher
(The L-Space Web, 2012b). Both Xeno and Zeno philosophised about paradoxes. The
name ‘Xeno’ should be transferred in the Afrikaans target text. The name for the
followers of Xeno called ‘Xenoists’ is translated literally to Xenoïste in Afrikaans.
De ene die Xeno heette stapte naar voren terwijl hij zijn toga op
orde bracht.
“Dat klopt,” zei hij. “Wij zijn wijsgeren. Wij denk, dus wij ben.”
Xeno is transferred from the target text and Xenoïsten is a literal translation.
Lu-Tze
Lu-Tze is a senior History Monk and is sent to Omnia by the 493rd Abbot to ‘carefully
observe’ (Pratchett, 2014:4; Pratchett's emphasis):
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“I shall take my mountains,” said Lu-Tze. “The climate will be good
for them.”
And he also took his broom and his sleeping mat. The history
monks don’t go in for possessions. They find most things wear out
in a century or two.
As a History Monk and a sweeper, Lu-Tze is one of the caretakers of history, which
means that he has to make sure that history happens as it should (The L-Space Web,
2015a). He is an apparently harmless little old man that no one notices, always
sweeping and because ‘he has entry into all kinds of places (dust gets everywhere)’
(Pratchett and Briggs, 2012:183), he can overhear many things that he would otherwise
not have heard.
His exact role in Small Gods is only revealed at the end of the novel in a conversation
between Lu-Tze and the abbot:
“It’s the history we’ve got these days,” said Lu-Tze. “Very shoddy
stuff, lord. I have to patch it up all the time –”
“Yes, yes –”
“Things were always better than they are now. It’s in the nature of
things.”
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“Er…you know the books say that Brutha died and there was a
century of terrible warfare?”
“Just so long as it all turns out all right in the end,” said the abbot
(Pratchett, 2014:334).
Lu-Tze is mentioned 38 times in Small Gods. It is suggested that his character may be
based on the ancient Chinese philosopher Lao-Tzu, also spelled Laozi, considered to be
the founder of Taoism. Loazi is an honorific title meaning ‘old or venerable’. The name
is Romanised as Loa-tze or Loa-tsu (The L-Space Web, 2015a; Wikipedia, 2016e).
The name could be naturalised and the morphology changed to that of the target
language as suggested by Newmark (1988:82), or Lu-Tze could be transliterated as Loe-
Tzie as proposed by Hermans (1988:13), Newmark (1988:81), Hervey and Higgins
(1992:29), Vermes (2001:112), Nord (2003:194), Fernandes (2006:51) and Van Coillie
(2006:125-130). Kotzé (2016) states that there is not a system to transliterate Chinese
to Afrikaans and suggests that Lu-Tze could be pronounced as Loetse.
However, Hervey and Higgins (1992:29) also suggest that, in the case of exoticism, the
name remains unchanged. It is suggested that Lu-Tze is not translated to retain the
exotic element of his character:
“Die plek is Omnië,” het die ab gesê, “op die kus van Klatsj.”
“Ek onthou,” het Lu-Tze gesê. “Daar was mos ʼn kêreltjie met die
naam Beenderik?”
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The Dutch transliteration is ‘Lou-Tzi’ (Pratchett, 1995b): ‘De 493ste Abt vouwde zijn
rimpelige handen en wendde zich tot Lou-Tzi, een van zijn verst gevorderde monniken’.
Omnia is a theocracy based on the monotheism in the Great God Om. The existence of
Om is a fine example of what Pratchett believed about belief: on the Discworld
something can only exist if someone believes that it exists: ‘Koomi’s theory was that
gods come into being and grow and flourish because they are believed in. Belief itself is
the food of the gods’ (Pratchett, 2014:102-103; Pratchett's emphasis). Pratchett and
Briggs (2012:130-131) describe gods and belief on the Discworld as follows:
The Discworld has gods in the same way that other worlds have
bacteria. There are billions of them, tiny bundles containing
nothing more than a pinch of pure ego and some hunger.
Most of them never get worshipped. They are the small gods – the
spirits of lonely trees, places where two ant-trails cross – and most
of them stay that way. A handful, though, go on to greater things.
Anything may trigger this. A shepherd, seeking a lost lamb, for
example, may find it amongst the briars and take a minute or two
to build a small cairn of stones in general thanks to whatever spirit
may be around.
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When Om is introduced to the reader, he is a small garden-variety tortoise covered in
dust with only one eye and a badly chipped shell (Pratchett, 2014:17). Because he has
only one true believer left, he is not a ‘vast mountain-bearing tortoise such as [the
manifestation that] the Hindu god Vishnu once chose’ (Pratchett and Simpson,
2008:25). The entire Omnian Citadel is built for the worship of Om, but there is no one
left who believes in him. ‘Om is omnipotent, omnipresent, and many other omnis, but
only within the boundaries of Omnia’ (Pratchett and Briggs, 2012:211). Only Brutha, an
illiterate novice, really believes:
The name of the god Om refers to the most sacred mantra and mystic syllable (ॐ) in
Dharmic religions (mostly in India and Nepal). It is sometimes referred to as praṇava in
Sanskrit, literally ‘that which is sounded out loudly’ (Lochtefeld, 2002:482). The online
dictionary Merriam-Webster (2016) lists Om as ‘a mantra consisting of the sound \ˈōm\
and used in contemplation of ultimate reality’. In Sanskrit it is sometimes regarded as
the three sounds a-u-m, which symbolises the three major Hindu gods (Soanes and
Stevenson, 2016).
The prefix ‘omni-’ refers to ‘all, everywhere’ and occurs in words such as omnipotent
(to have ‘unlimited power’) and omnipresent (to be everywhere all the time) (Lewis,
2015); both words are associated with the monotheistic Judaeo-Christian religions. The
word Catholic means ‘universal’, from the Greek katholikos, from kata ‘in respect of’
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and -holos ‘whole’ (Soanes and Stevenson, 2016). It also means ‘of interest to all’
(Online Etymology Dictionary, 2016a).
The name of Om could be translated to Al but this is too close to Allah, the name of God
amongst Muslims, and the name of the god should be without any association with an
existing religious grouping. Many parallels with existing religious groups are suggested
in Small Gods, but Pratchett never points to them directly; the translation should not
do so either.
The prefix ‘omni-’ is used in Afrikaans, for example: ‘omnivoor’, and ‘omnipotent’
(Eksteen, 1997). It is suggested to transfer Om to Afrikaans to retain the meaning. The
denotative meaning (all) as well as the connotative meaning (omnipotence) is
transferred.
4.9 Transliteration
Fergmen
Sergeant Fergmen is a member of the Omnian Divine Legion. The Divine Legion is the
military support for the Omnian theocracy. However, Fergmen acts on the side of Urn
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(Didactylos’s nephew) and the revolutionaries. He is introduced when he explains that
the main doors of the Great Temple are made of reinforced Klatchian steel:
He is mentioned 17 times. His name seems to be a Pratchett creation. I could not find
any other reference to ‘ferg-’. ‘Men’ can be translated with the following (Eksteen,
1997):
men mans; mense, werkers; manne (soldate); so many | ~, so many minds, soveel
hoofde, soveel sinne; | ~ only, slegs mans
Drunah
Bishop Drunah, like General Iam Fri’it, is ostensibly a friend of Vorbis’s and seems to be
in the service of the Omnian theocracy. Both are also members of the secret movement
The Turtle Moves, who believe that the world is a disc carried on the backs of four
elephants standing on the back of a turtle, and not a ‘perfectly smooth ball moving in a
perfect circle round the sun, which is another perfectly smooth ball; […] a vital dogma
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in the Omnian Church’ (Pratchett and Simpson, 2008:24). The Bishop’s power is more
covert than the General’s:
“Uh,” he said.
And that was the problem. It was the problem of all really secret
societies. They were secret. How many members did the Turtle
Movement have? No one knew, exactly (Pratchett, 2014:38-39;
Pratchett's emphasis).
The Dutch literal translation is also ‘Droena’ (Pratchett, 1995b): ‘Bisschop Droena,
secretaris van de Synode van Icbens’.
Omnia is mentioned 50 times, Omnian occurs 33 times and Omnianism four times. The
name ‘Om’ is transferred (as described in section 4.8.4 The Great God Om) and
therefore the derivatives should have the same root word: Omnia is transliterated to
Omnië and the inhabitants of Omnia are Omniërs and their religion is Omnisme.
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The Dutch translations follow the same procedures and are also ‘Omnië’, ‘Omniërs’ and
‘Omnisme’ (Pratchett, 1995b).
Didactylos
Urn (see section 4.5.10 Urn) and his uncle, the Ephebian philosopher Didactylos, are
practical philosophers who ‘Can Do Your Thinking For You’ (Pratchett, 2014:147). When
Om looks at the minds of Didactylos and Urn, he sees the following:
The one called Urn was presumably the nephew, and had a fairly
normal sort of mind, even if it did seem to have too many circles
and angles in it. But Didactylos’s mind bubbled and flashed like a
potful of electric eels on full boil. Om had never seen anything like
it. Brutha’s thoughts took eons to slide into place, it was like
watching mountains colliding; Didactylos’s thoughts chased after
one another with a whooshing noise. No wonder he was bald. Hair
would have burned off from the inside.
“That’s right.”
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“It’s all right,” said Didactylos. “I don’t put any oil in it.”
The root word for Didactylos’s name is the adjective ‘didactic’, which means ‘intended
to teach’ and is from the Greek didaktikos for ‘teach’ (Soanes and Stevenson, 2016).
A philosopher, living next to the Library, one would expect that he has the opportunity
to teach, but he mostly dispenses with proverbs, axioms and ‘pers’nal philosophy’
(Pratchett, 2014:147).
Two fingers held up in a V-sign (palm towards the face of the gesturer) is a rude gesture
in Britain, meaning the same as the middle finger in many other cultures. This is,
however, exactly what he does: he gives the other philosophers and their ways of
thinking ‘the finger’. It is also suggested that he resembles the Greek philosopher
Diogenes of Sinope who was one of the founders of Cynic philosophy. Diogenes gave
society the ‘middle finger’ by eating in the marketplace (this was against Athenian
custom), living in a barrel and rejecting normal decent behaviour – amongst other
things (the least offensive of his habits), he urinated on people (Wikipedia, 2016a).
Didactylos does not go quite that far. He does not, however, bath, as shown above
(Pratchett, 2014:146).
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Just like Didactylos, Diogenes leads a very simple life, lives in a barrel and carries a
lantern during the day ‘claiming to be looking for an honest man’. Several painters
portrayed Diogenes sitting in his barrel with his lantern, for instance, Jean-Léon Gérôme
(circa 1860) and John William Waterhouse (6 April 1849 to 10 February 1917)
(Wikipedia, 2016a). Didactylos’s ‘philosophy was a mixture of three famous schools –
the Cynics, the Stoics, and the Epicureans’, just like Diogenes who taught his ‘philosophy
of Cynicism to Crates, who taught it to Zeno of Citium, who fashioned it into the school
of Stoicism, one of the most enduring schools of Greek philosophy’ (Wikipedia, 2016a).
The Dutch translation is ‘Didactylos’ (Pratchett, 1995b). The name is transferred from
the source text.
Ankh-Morpork
The oldest and largest city of the Discworld (Pratchett and Briggs, 2012:18) is mentioned
13 times in Small Gods. Twenty-three of the Discworld books are set in Ankh-Morpork
and the city is referred to in several others (The L-Space Web, 2016a).
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The Ankh-Morpork is divided by the river Ankh and is ‘really two cities’ (Pratchett and
Briggs, 2012:18). The city Ankh is Turnwise11 of the river and is mostly residential with
parks, and large and imposing homes. It is the upper-class side of town. The city guilds,
Unseen University and the Patrician’s Palace are in Morpork, which is Widdershins12 of
the river. This is also the industrial part of the city and includes the docks, the markets
and The Shades – the oldest part of the city where the poorest people live. Its
inhabitants are ‘largely nocturnal and never inquire about one another’s business,
because curiosity crept up on the cat in a dark alley and gave it a quick burst of skull
percussion with a length of lead pipe’ (Pratchett, 2014:249).
The first part of the name Ankh-Morpork refers to the Egyptian hieroglyph of a cross
shaped like a T with a loop at the top ( ), the ankh, representing the word ‘life’,
symbolising ‘regeneration or enduring life’ (Lewis, 2015; Soanes and Stevenson, 2016)
and eternity (Carpiceci, 1994:17). On the city’s coat of arms (Pratchett and Briggs,
2012:18), an owl holds the key of life – the Ankh – in its claws. It has been suggested
that Pratchett was not aware that the morepork referred to an owl found in New
Zealand, but that he added it later and it was then also included in the coat of arms
(Wikipedia, 2016f).
11) One of the four basic directions on the Discworld. By going Turnwise you follow the rotation of the
Disc. The opposite direction is known as Widdershins. The other two directions being Rimwards and
Hubwards (http://wiki.lspace.org/mediawiki/Turnwise).
12) There are four cardinal directions on the Discworld: Hubwards, Rimwards, Turnwise and
Widdershins. Seasoned travellers have learnt to navigate solely by the sensations that they feel. If it
gets warmer, you are headed Rimwards. If it gets colder, you are headed Hubwards. If you get dizzy,
you are headed Widdershins (http://wiki.lspace.org/mediawiki/Discworld_(world)).
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a concoction of eighteenth-century London, nineteenth-century Seattle and twentieth-
century New York. Pratchett concludes that it is the ‘archetypal City that Never Sleeps.
Admittedly, this is because of the fleas’ (Pratchett and Kidby, 2005:9).
‘Ankh’ has to be retained in the translation as it is part of the city’s coat of arms. It could
be transliterated to Ank. The name could, therefore, be transliterated to Ank-Morpork
in Afrikaans. A reader will recognise this name in any of the other Discworld books, even
if they are not translated to Afrikaans.
Ankh-Meurbork is very humorous as the verb ‘meuren’ is an informal word for ‘stink,
poep’ (Martin, 2011). The city is famous for its smell: ‘[The water], along with the
slaughterhouses, and the cabbage fields and the spice houses and the breweries, is a
major component of Ankh-Morpork’s most famous civic attribute: its … Smell’
(Pratchett and Briggs, 2012:19). In this instance the procedure of addition was used as
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described by Vermes (2001:113), Fernandes (2006:53) and Van Coillie (2006:128)
because the translator adds information about the city that is not present in the source
text.
Klatch
The name ‘Klatch’ and its derivatives occur 11 times. Klatch is a geographical place on
the Discworld; it is the name of both the country and the continent where it is situated:
It has to be said that the words “Klatch” and “Klatchian” are used
by the people of the Sto Plains as practically interchangeable with
“foreign”, in the same way that the fierce D’reg nomads in the
Klatchian desert use the word “foreigner” and “traveller”
interchangeably with the word “target” (Pratchett and Briggs,
2003:234).
In Small Gods:
“The place is Omnia,” said the abbot, “on the Klatchian coast”
(Pratchett, 2014:3).
The Citadel occupied the whole of the heart of the city of Kom, in
the lands between the deserts of Klatch and the plains and jungles
of Howondaland (Pratchett, 2014:9).
Klatch reminds of the countries of Northern Africa and the Middle East. Offler, the
crocodile-headed god, is worshipped in Klatch and other places where there are large
rivers and a hot climate. He is the Discworld equivalent of the Egyptian god Sobek who
lives in the Nile river (Carpiceci, 1994:15; Pratchett and Simpson, 2008:23). The
Klatchians are described as ‘a bunch of thieves with towels on their heads’ (Pratchett,
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1998:26; emphasis added). This refers to the headdress worn by Arabic nations and this
makes Klatch the Discworld equivalent of the Middle East. This is confirmed in
Interesting Times (Pratchett, 1995a:271): ‘Down in Klatch they believe if you lead a good
life you’re rewarded by being sent to a paradise with lots of young women’, which refers
to the well-known claim that suicide bombers can expect to find many virgins in heaven
when they die.
The origin of the noun Klatch (also Klatsch) is German (from the 1950s) and means
‘gossip’ (Lewis, 2015). The word is used in North America to describe a social gathering,
especially where coffee is served (Soanes and Stevenson, 2016). In Afrikaans, the word
‘kaffeeklatsch’ was added to the dictionary New Words and previously overlooked ones
(Du Plessis, 1999) as a synonym to ‘coffeeklatch’ and is translated to Afrikaans as
‘koffiegeselsie’.
Arabic coffee is anecdotally very strong. Klatch becomes the symbol for, amongst
others, the coffee-drinking Arab-like people of the Discworld, as well as the
geographical location where these people live. Klatch is not only mentioned in Small
Gods but also in several of the other Discworld novels and should not be translated. It
is sensible to transliterate the name to Klatsch. The ‘-tsch’ sound can be found in the
Afrikaans loan-words ‘kitsch’ (‘waardelose kunsvoorwerpe’ (Eksteen, 1997)), ‘putsch’
(‘blitsopstand’ (ibid.)) and ‘bortsch’ (‘beetsop’ (ibid.)). Though these words are not very
common (except perhaps for kitsch), an Afrikaans reader ought to recognise the sound.
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The -tch-sound is found in an existing internationalised proper noun Saskatchewan,
though not in the last syllable.
That being said, transliterating Klatsh to Klatsj with the -tsj spelling may be more
familiar in Afrikaans (as in ‘Baloetsjistan’, ‘Karatsji’, ‘Mantsjoerye’ and ‘Tsjetsjnië’ (Die
Taalkommisie van die SA Akademie vir Wetenskap en Kuns, 2009:523-545)). The -tsj
end sound can also be found in the Afrikaans words ‘tsarewitsj’ (‘Russiese kroonprins’
(Labuschagne and Eksteen, 2000)) and ‘ziltsj’ (‘nul, niks’ (Eksteen, 1997)). The adjective
‘Klatchian’ can be translated to Klatsjiese (+ - iese), based on the Afrikaans for ‘Indiese’,
‘Persiese’ and ‘Russiese’ (Eksteen, 1997). The denotative (coffee and gossip) and
connotative (people who drink coffee and Arab-like people) meanings are retained.
“Die plek is Omnia,” het die ab gesê, “op die kus van Klatsj.”
Die Sitadel het die hele hart van die stad Kom beslaan, in die gebied
tussen die woestyne van Klatsj en die grasvlaktes en oerwoude van
Hoedonderland.
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Om een puike opstand van sierlijke Klatschieke korenhalmen
reikten de bonenranken hun rode en witte bloesems naar de zon;
tussen de bonenrijen lagen meloenen zoetjes te stoven op de
stoffige grond.
Tsort
‘Tsort’ is located on the continent of Klatch, neighbour to Djelibeybi (also called Djel)
and Ephebe (Pratchett and Briggs, 2003:279), and is the Discworld equivalent of ancient
Troy and the ancient Persian Empire (The L-Space Web, 2015b). As with the historical
Greece and Persia, Tsort and Ephebe are enemies. Tsort is mentioned 14 times in Small
Gods, for example:
“Well –”
The name Tsort seems to be another Pratchett creation. I could find the word ‘tsoris’,
which is Yiddish for ‘trouble and suffering’ (Lewis, 2015), but I doubt that this is the root
word for the Discworld Tsort.
When translating the name to Afrikaans it should be transliterated to Tsjort. The tsj-
sound is familiar in Afrikaans at the start of words, with examples such as ‘Tsjeggies’
(Eksteen, 1997) and ‘Tsjernobil’ (Du Plessis, 1999): ‘Die Djel en dan Tsjort,’ het Ghoen
gesê. As the name does not seem to have any other denotative meaning than
identifying the place, it has been transliterated as such.
The same procedure has been used in the Dutch translation and is ‘Tsoort’: ‘“De Dwejl,
en daarna Tsoort,” zei Vorbis’ (Pratchett, 1995b).
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Ephebe
Ephebe is a small but influential city-state situated between Omnia and Djelibeybi on
the coast of the Circle Sea (Pratchett and Briggs, 2012:106). The description of Ephebe
is typical of an idyllic coastal town on a Greek island:
He’d [Fri’it had] been to Ephebe before, and had rather liked the
white marble city on its rock overlooking the blue Circle Sea
(Pratchett, 2014:79).
Most of the city seemed to be built on outcrops or was cut into the
actual rock itself, so that one man’s patio was another man’s roof.
The roads were really a series of shallow steps, accessible to a man
or a donkey but sudden death to a cart. Ephebe was a pedestrian
place (Pratchett, 2014:120).
The noun ‘ephebe’ refers to a young man in ancient Greece of 18 to 20 years old,
undergoing military training (Lewis, 2015). The origin of the word is via Latin from Greek
ephēbos from the word epi- for ‘near to’ and -hēbē for ‘early manhood’ (Soanes and
Stevenson, 2016). This is very ironic as Ephebe is not known for its soldiers or young
men but
“What, a lot of old men running around the streets with no clothes
on?” (Pratchett, 2014:123; emphasis added).
There are only a handful of soldiers in Ephebe and they have no chance against the
Omnian army (Pratchett, 2014:176).
The biblical book Ephesians is translated to ‘Efesiërs’ (Van Der Watt and Joubert,
1997:621). Based on this, Ephebe can be transliterated to Efebe (from ‘Efese’) and the
inhabitants are Efebiërs.
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The Dutch translation is ‘Thebus’ and ‘Thebiërs’ (Pratchett, 1995b). This is most
probably based on the translation of the name ‘Thebes’. Historically Thebes was an
ancient Egyptian city on the Nile river between the twenty-second century BC and the
eighteenth century BC. It was also an ancient Greek city which was destroyed by
Alexander the Great in 336 BC (Lewis, 2015). This is a substitution as described by
Hermans (1988:13), Newmark (1988:84), Vermes (2001:112), Nord (2003:194),
Fernandes (2006:50,52) and Van Coillie (2006:127); the name was internationalised.
4.10 Transposition
Vorbis
The translation of the name Vorbis is described in detail in section 4.2.3 Vorbis, but is
mentioned here as the proper noun is replaced with a common noun when Vorbis is
translated to Ghoen in Afrikaans.
4.11 Summary
In Section 2.7.3 Procedures to translate proper nouns and neologisms, the procedures
for translating proper nouns and neologisms, as described by Hermans (1988:13),
Newmark (1988:81-93, 103 and 140-150), Hervey and Higgins (1992:29-31), Vermes
(2001:112-113), (2003:93-94), Nord (2003:182-196), Pym (2004:92) and Fernandes
(2006:44-57), are summarised. The procedures that were used to translate the proper
nouns and neologisms into Afrikaans are listed in Table 3, overleaf.
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Table 3: Comparison of translation procedures for proper nouns in Afrikaans
The proper noun in the St Sevrian Thaddeus Ungulant St. Stigaftus Thaddéüs Beeslaar
source text has a cultural Angus Brahmaan
meaning and it is adapted
Nhumrod Lhamroede
to a proper noun in the
target text with a similar
cultural value.
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Procedure Applied to proper nouns Results in the target
in the source text language Afrikaans
Literal translation Cenobiarch, the Superior Iam Aartsmonnik, die Owerste Ekis
Cusp Spits
Death Dood
Simony Simonie
Urn Kruik
Discworld Skyfwêreld
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Procedure Applied to proper nouns Results in the target
in the source text language Afrikaans
Ephebe Efebe
Klatch Klatsj
Tsort Tsjort
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Procedure Applied to proper nouns Results in the target
in the source text language Afrikaans
Table 4 summarises the procedures that may have been used to translate the proper
nouns and neologisms to Dutch:
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Procedure Applied to proper nouns Results in the target
in the source text language Dutch
The proper noun in the St Sevrian Thaddeus Ungulant Sint Severjan Tedoor Bovinus
source text has a cultural Nhumrod Minimroed
meaning and it is adapted
to a proper noun in the
target text with a similar
cultural value.
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Procedure Applied to proper nouns Results in the target
in the source text language Dutch
Discworld Schijfwereld
Cusp Spits
Death Dood
Simony Simonie
Borvorius Borsalvius
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Procedure Applied to proper nouns Results in the target
in the source text language Dutch
Ankh-Morpork Ankh-Meurbork
Tsort Tsoort
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Procedure Applied to proper nouns Results in the target
in the source text language Dutch
Deletion and descriptive equivalent have also been identified as procedures that could
be used to translate proper nouns and neologisms; however, they were not used, either
by this researcher or Venugopalan Ittekot in the Dutch translation. These were not
considered valid procedures in this study for translating the proper nouns and
neologisms in Small Gods, partly because only names occurring more than ten times
were studied and high frequency names cannot be deleted or replaced with a
description because these characters, places or institutions play an important role in
the plot. It is doubted that either of these procedures should ever be used to translate
proper nouns or neologistic proper nouns, as these are used to identify a character; this
character plays a role in the plot, however small it is.
A summary of each procedure and the proper nouns and neologisms to which they were
applied to attain an Afrikaans translation as well as a comparison with the Dutch names
and procedures follow.
Addition
The first name of St. Stigaftus Thaddéüs Beeslaar, as well as Broer Moerdok and Ghoen
were translated adding information to the original word in the target text. Fernandes
(2006:53) suggests that adding information to a proper noun may solve any ambiguities
that may occur when translating the proper noun. In the proper nouns as listed above,
humour as well as local flavour were added to the proper nouns in Afrikaans.
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As Van Coillie (2006:128) describes, added information may highlight another
characteristic that is apparent in the source text. In the case of the first name of
St. Stigaftus Thaddéüs Beeslaar, the name Stigaftus makes it clear that Sevrian is no
longer part of a larger group, which is not completely clear when looking at the name
Sevrian. Broer Moerdok contains more information on the state and destiny of the man
than Brother Murdock’s name reveals. Murdock may refer to ‘murder’ but Moerdok
reveals that the character is ‘moer toe’. Vorbis’s name may be neutral in terms of
denotative and connotative meaning but his target-text name Ghoen represents his
mind, which is like a steel ball.
Venugopalan Ittekot used this procedure when the target-text proper noun ‘Ankh-
Meurbork’ was created from the source text ‘Ankh-Morpork’. The smelly nature of the
city was added to the neutral second part of the original proper noun.
Cultural adaptation
Boeta, St. Stigaftus Thaddéüs Beeslaar, Brahmaan, and Broer Lhamroede were
translated using the procedure called cultural adaptation. The cultural meanings of the
source-text proper nouns were translated to their cultural equivalent in the target
language. In the case of Lhamroede, a new target neologism was created which had the
same cultural references. The denotative meaning ‘impotent’ and the implied meaning
‘a man plagued by sexual temptations’ were retained.
The Dutch translations Broeda, Sint Severjan Tedoor Bovinus and Broeder Minimroed
are also cultural adaptations. Broeda and Boeta are equal to the source text Brutha
(with the pronunciation the same as ‘brother’). Broer Boeta and Vader Boeta as well as
‘Broeder Broeda’ and ‘Pater Broeda’ retain the humorous effect as in the following
passage by Vorbis:
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“And, of course, one day we shall have to call you Brother Brutha,”
he said. “Or even Father Brutha? Rather confusing, I think. Best to
be avoided. I think we shall have to see to it that you become
Subdeacon Brutha just as soon as possible; what do you think of
that?” (Pratchett, 2014:61).
St. Stigaftus Thaddéüs Beeslaar and ‘Sint Severjan Tedoor Bovinus’ both retain the
denotative reference to cattle. Broer Lhamroede and ‘Broeder Minimroed’ both refer
to Brother Nhumrod’s impotence.
Internationalisation
St. Stigaftus Thaddéüs Beeslaar and Aristokrates have been translated using
internationalisation – the procedure according to which source-text proper nouns of
internationally known names or historical characters are translated. The denotative
meanings have been retained.
The Dutch translator substituted ‘Thebe’ for ‘Ephebe’ and then internationalised the
word to ‘Thebus’.
Literal translation
The following proper nouns (including titles in some instances, such as Generaal Ekis
Vry'yt) were translated literally from the source text to the target language (Afrikaans):
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Tiran (Tyrant)
Diaken Spits (Deacon Cusp)
Dood (Death)
Simonie (Simony)
Kruik (Urn)
Die Skyfwêreld (The Discworld)
Generaal Ekis Vry'yt (General Iam Fri’it)
Except for Urn, the Dutch translator translated the same proper nouns literally:
Neutralisation
The procedure neutralisation was only used once when translating to Afrikaans and not
for a proper noun but for a title, and therefore a common noun. The title of the
Imperiator Borvorius in the source text refers to the designation used by Roman soldiers
to salute their commander after an important victory. By translating the title to
Opperbevelhebber, this extra cultural information is lost and the translated title is
neutralised. The denotative meaning is translated but the connotative meaning is lost.
The Dutch names ‘Gisbret’ (Murduck), ‘Herman’ (Angus), ‘Tedoor’ (St Sevrian Thaddeus
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Ungulant), ‘Teunus’ (Urn), ‘Bactmar’ (Fri’it), ‘Isnander’ (Argavisti) and ‘Borsalvius’
(Borvorius) were neutralised.
Substitution
Translating the surname of General Iam Fri’it to Vry’yt is an example of the procedure
of substitution as the target-language proper noun Vry’yt (pronounced as ‘Vryheid’)
substitutes the source-text proper noun (pronounced as ‘Free It’), and is a near
synonym. Both refer to the denotative meaning ‘freedom’ or ‘to be free’ and the
connotative meaning implying an aspiration for freedom.
The Dutch translation for ‘Ephebe’ is substituted with ‘Thebus’, which is based on
Thebe, and is close in meaning as both refer to a word in the ancient Greek civilisation.
In the Dutch name ‘Ha’k-M’n-Eigen-Hand-Af Izn-iql’ the Dutch translator substituted
the last part of the name, which may be from the biblical name Ezekiel.
Transference
The transference procedure is used when the translator reproduces the proper noun
from the source text in the target language without making any changes. It has been
suggested that this procedure be used for the following proper nouns:
Venugopalan Ittekot used the same procedure for the following proper nouns:
Vorbis
Aristocrates
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Om
Didactylos
Ankh-Meurbork (Ank-Morpork)
Xeno
Imperiator Borsalvius (Imperiator Borvorius)
Only the proper nouns ‘Om’ and ‘Xeno’ are the same in the source text, the Dutch target
text and the suggested Afrikaans target text.
Transliteration
St. Stigaftus Thaddéüs Beeslaar and Aristokrates were translated using the procedure
internationalisation but both proper nouns were also transliterated to Afrikaans
pronunciation and spelling.
Droena (Drunah)
Omnië and Omnisme (Omnia and Omnianism)
Didaktoelos (Didactylos)
Sersant Vergmann (Sergeant Fergmen)
Ank-Morpork (Ankh-Morpork)
Efebe (Ephebe)
Klatsj (Klatch)
Tsjort (Tsort)
Droena
Omnië and Omnisme
Lou-Tzi
Sergeant Vergmans
Klatsch
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Tsoort
Ha’k-M’n-Eigen-Hand-Af Izn-iql
Drunah, Omnia, Fergmen, Klatch and Tsort have been transliterated in both the Dutch
target text and the suggested Afrikaans translation.
Transposition
Transposition is used when a translator replaces the proper noun in the source text with
a common noun in the target text. Translating Vorbis to Ghoen is a transposition. This
procedure was not used in the Dutch translation.
Descriptive equivalent
Deletion
A translator may remove the proper noun and replace it with a description. This
procedure has not been suggested for the Afrikaans translations and was not used by
the Dutch translator. The proper nouns chosen for this study occurred more than ten
times in the source text and are, therefore, not the names of minor characters. This
procedure might be used if the entire text is translated, but this is doubtful. The names
of the characters in Small Gods often describe personality traits, the characters’ destiny
or are used to amuse the reader, give information or elicit emotion. Such a name cannot
be deleted, or replaced with a description.
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study. The translation procedures deletion and descriptive equivalent were not used.
These were not considered suitable for translating the proper nouns and neologisms in
Small Gods, because only names occurring more than ten times were studied.
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5 CONCLUSION
In this study, the researcher aimed to ensure that target-text readers of Small Gods
have the same experience as source-text readers and aimed to translate the proper
nouns and neologisms with dynamic equivalence that would lead to an equivalent
effect. However, the researcher is of the opinion that there is a continuum with formal
equivalence on the one end, dynamic equivalence on the other end, and a blend of the
two between the end points. In the case of Small Gods, the unfamiliar locale and the
foreign setting have to remain close to the source text, but the proper nouns and
neologisms may move closer to the target text to ensure that the reader clearly
understands the role or personality of the character. As suggested by Nida (1964b:164),
priority must be given to the meaning.
Small Gods is the thirteenth novel in the Discworld series. The turtle, Great A’Tuin, bears
on his back four elephants on whose shoulders the Discworld rests. This alien setting is
built on Hindu mythology and though there are some correlations with our world, it is
a fictional setting. It would, therefore, be dishonest to localise and domesticate the
translation of Small Gods. It cannot be situated in a South African setting and still be
true to the narrative. Part of the appeal of the Discworld books, and specifically Small
Gods, is this foreign and strange setting, where people are killed because they believe
that the world is a disc carried on the backs of four elephants who stand on the back of
a giant turtle. This appeal is true for source-text readers for many of whom the Hindu
origin is also strange and should still be true for target-text readers. It would violate the
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integrity of the Discworld stories to localise the books. The foreign setting allows the
author to create almost absurd circumstances and characters with rather extreme
views and behaviour. Although most of the elements of the story (the killing of non-
believers, religious fanaticism) are relevant, even more so in current times, readers can
look at these from a safe distance, and perhaps gain insight into the things they believe.
Small Gods has to be placed in a ‘foreign’ setting because so much depends upon the
perceived foreignness of the characters and geographical places. The milieu should
remain in faraway countries where people have strange and different habits, where
visiting an enemy land holds the thrill and excitement of visiting a foreign place. It has
to be situated in places that we do not necessarily recognise – otherwise the truth is
too close to home and we cannot be cognisant of the satire and commentary on our
own beliefs and habits.
In order to achieve the aim of the study, the following objectives were attained:
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The identification of all the proper nouns and neologisms in Small Gods
and the description of how they contribute to the meaning in the
novel.
The identification and description of the most appropriate procedures
to translate the proper nouns and neologisms in Small Gods into
Afrikaans.
5.2 Conclusions
Translation and discussions of translation go back to the first century (BCE) and the
writings of Cicero and Horace still influence general thought on the subject in the
twentieth century. Translation studies have only developed as an academic field during
the past 60 to 70 years and have mostly focused on the ‘complex of problems clustered
round the phenomenon of translating and translations’ (Munday, 2008:5-7).
This study aimed to identify the translation strategy and the procedures that can be
used to translate proper nouns and neologisms in an equivalent way, thus ensuring that
the meaning potential is retained when translating Terry Pratchett’s fantasy novel Small
Gods from English to Afrikaans. It was found that the translator could domesticate the
text to a certain extent when translating the proper nouns and neologisms, which have
a specific meaning in the source text, to ensure that the meaning is retained in the
target text. In all other aspects the text should remain close to the writer and the source
text, and the target text was foreignised.
The translation procedures that were identified are addition, cultural adaptation,
internationalisation, literal translation, neutralisation, substitution, transference,
transliteration and transposition. The procedures were used to attain equivalence at
word level and in such a way that the meaning-potential was retained. Except for
transposition, these procedures were also used by the Dutch translator.
When translating literary texts, a translator has to be aware of the possible procedures
for translating proper nouns and neologisms. It was found that there can never be a
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single, all-encompassing procedure, as the proper nouns in a text have explicit
descriptive functions and specific meaning implications in the text and are not limited
to merely identifying an individual. This is especially true in fantasy fiction where proper
nouns are used extensively for characterisation.
The procedure used most often in this study was literal translation – 11 times in
Afrikaans and ten times in Dutch. Transliteration was used eight times in Afrikaans and
seven times in Dutch. Transference was used five times in Afrikaans and seven times in
Dutch. Cultural adaptation was used four times in Afrikaans and three times in Dutch.
Addition was used three times in Afrikaans and twice in Dutch. Internationalisation was
used twice in Afrikaans and once in Dutch. Substitution was used twice in Afrikaans and
three times in Dutch. Neutralisation and transposition were both used once in
Afrikaans. The Dutch translator used neutralisation seven times and did not use
transposition.
The translation procedure used depends on the role of a given proper noun and/or
neologism in the source text and whether it is possible and plausible to translate that
role to the target text. A great and prolific writer such as Terry Pratchett created
hundreds of names and a translator of his work has to pay special attention to the
proper nouns in his novels. If a translator selects a single translation procedure, for
instance, transference, the delightful humour as is contained in a name such as
‘Nhumrod’ would be lost. If a translator uses transliteration of the name to Nimrod, it
would attach a meaning known to an Afrikaans reader of the biblical character who was
a great hunter described in Genesis 10 verse 9 (Die Bybel: E-Sword (Elektroniese Bybel,
Afrikaans Ou Vertaling), 1953). This is not a true characteristic of Brother Nhumrod and
neither of these translation procedures would retain the meaning potential of his name.
The aim of the study was to identify a translation strategy and translation procedures
that can be used to translate proper nouns and neologisms in an equivalent way, thus
ensuring that the meaning potential is retained when translating Terry Pratchett’s
fantasy novel Small Gods from English to Afrikaans. The most appropriate translation
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strategy and procedures were identified, discussed and practically applied to retain the
meaning potential.
This study was a case study focusing solely on the translation of the proper names and
neologisms in the fantasy novel Small Gods to Afrikaans. As such it provides a thick
description of the translation problems in this particular instance, and possible
solutions. This study could be used as a springboard for further research on the
applicability of the findings on all the proper nouns and neologisms in all the Discworld
novels, or on other novels in the fantasy genre. Such studies would inevitably have a
larger scope and may yield results that are generalisable.
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APPENDICES
Appendix A
Table 5 is a comprehensive list of all the proper nouns and neologisms in Small Gods. It
includes the song titles and philosophical ideas named in the book.
Kreeblephor
Irexes 1
Quoom
Mr. Piloxi 1
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Grillos 1 Skant 1
Erebos 1
Lo, the Infidels 1
Lost City of Ee 1
Nine Fundamental 1
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Didactylos' 1 Istanzia 2
Meditations
Grune 2
Xeno's Reflections 1
Book of Creation 2
Ibid's Discourses 1
Omnianism 2
and Civics
Archpriests 2
Hierarch's 1
Theologies The SeptArchs 2
Blind Io 2
Aurora Corealis 1
Goddess of Plenty 2
Most Holy St. 1
Bobby, Ossory's
ass
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Bishop Treem 3
Sister Sestina of 2
Quirm Tuvelpit 3
Mountains
Patina 3
Djelibeybi 2
P'Tang P'Tang 4
Rim Ocean 2
Cori Celesti 4
Unseen University 2
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De Chelonian 4 Hub 9
Mobile (The Turtle
The Septateuch 9
Moves)
Abraxas's On 9
Divine Legion 5
Religion
Private Dervi 5
Klatch (and its 11
Ichlos
derivatives)
Place of 5
Ankh-Morpork 13
Lamentation
Deacon Cusp 12
Fasta Benj 6
Angus 12
Koomi of Smale 6
Imperiator 12
Ur-Gilash 6
Borvorius
Prophet Abbys 7
Brother Murduck 13
Brother Sasho 8
Aristocrates 13
The Sea Queen 8
Discworld 15
Legibus 8
Tsort 14
Ibid 8
General Argavisti 15
Legibus's 8
Sergeant Fergmen 17
Geometries
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Tyrant of Ephebe 35
Lu-Tze 38
The Omnian 43
Quisition
Citadel 61
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Appendix B
Table 6 lists the number of occurrences (in Column A) of the English proper nouns and neologisms (in Column B) together
with their Afrikaans translations (in Column C) and the procedure (in Column D) suggested for the Afrikaans translation. The
table also lists the Dutch proper nouns and neologisms (in Column E) and the procedures (in Column F) that the translator
may have used. The table has been sorted alphabetically according to the source-text names in Column B.
A B C D E F
95 Brother Nhumrod Broer Lhamroede cultural adaptation Broeder Minimroed cultural adaptation
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50 General Iam Fri'it Generaal Iam Vry'yt literal translation Generaal Icben literal translation
Bactmar
50 General Iam Fri'it Generaal Vry'yt substitution Generaal Icben neutralisation
Bactmar
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