Chapter 2 Mulugeta
Chapter 2 Mulugeta
Chapter 2 Mulugeta
By :-Mulugeta T.
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Chapter Two
Pre-conditions for thesis work
Contents :
Scientific research proposal
Literature Reviews
Thesis writing
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2.1 Scientific Research proposal
The best research is well planned and the key step
in the planning process is the preparation of a
research proposal.
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Cont.…
It is a really useful document that challenges you
to think very carefully about what is going to be
done, how it will be done and why.
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Cont.…
It will be required in order to inform your
supervisor/sponsor/examiners of your intentions
so that he/she can judge whether :
The subject and suggested format conforms to the
requirements.
It is a feasible project in respect to scope and
practicality.
You have identified some questions or issues that
are worth investigating.
Your suggested methods for information collection
and analysis are appropriate.
The expected outcomes relate to the aims of the
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Cont.…
A research proposal should be the result of good
idea and critical thinking and should be based:
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Contents of a research proposal
The format of a research proposal varies in some what but the
fairly standardized format includes the following
1.The Subject title (research problem)
2.The Abstract
3.Introduction
3.1. The background
3.2. The aims or objectives
3.3. The research problem/statement
3.4. Scope of the study
4.Literature review
5.Materials and Methods
6.Expected outcomes
7.Benefits and Beneficiaries
8.Research work plan
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The subject title
The subject title summarizes in a few words the entire
project.
The subject title for a proposal should :
be Short and explanatory
accurately reflect the contents and the scope of the
suggested study
And when we are writing a title for a proposal we
should have to mind the following
1. Keep it simple, brief and attractive
2. Use appropriate descriptive words
3. Avoid abbreviations and jargon 8
Abstract
- Most research proposals should provide a
short summary or abstract of about 200 words.
- The abstract should touch on every major
component of the proposal except the budget,
if there is one.
- Some readers read only the abstract and others
rely on it for a quick overview of the proposal.
- Some sponsoring agencies use the abstract to
weed out unsuitable proposals and to
disseminate information. Consequently, the
writing of the abstract should be done with care
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Introduction
In this part you will convince the reader that you
have identified a research problem, worthy of
investigating.
The introduction part should contain
• The background/rationale
• The research problem/statement
• The aims or objectives
Overall Objective
Specific objectives
• Scope of the study
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The background/Rationale
This section should contain a rationale for your
research which answers the following questions:
• Why are you undertaking the project?
• Why is the research needed?
• provide the relevant work field and identify a gap in
knowledge or activities that must be filled to move the
field forward.
• Show why the previous work needs to be continued.
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Problem/statement
It is a concise description of the issues that need
to be addressed by the researcher.
A description of “what is the specific problem in
that research area that you will address”
Defining your destination before beginning a
journey.
It determines,
• what you will do,
• how you will do it, and
• what you may achieve
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The aims/objectives
Objectives provide a list of goals that will be
achieved through the proposed research
The aim (Overall Objective) is really a statement
at the strategic level so, usefully, can be
considered to be what the researcher would like
to do if resource and other constraints did not
exist.
The specific objectives are statements within the
strategic statement of aim; they are statements
at the tactical/operational level.
Specific objectives of the topic should be listed
numerically in three to four bullets.
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Scope of the study
Elaborates your study in terms of
Depth/detail
Scale
Time
Space/location
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Literature Review
Provides a summary of previous related research on the
research problem and their strength and weakness and
justification of your research.
What is known/what have been done by others / and
Why your research is still necessary
• To help you understand a research topic
• To establish the importance of a topic
• To help develop your own ideas
• To make sure you are not simply replicating research that
others have already successfully completed
• To demonstrate knowledge and show how your current work is
situated within, builds on, or departs from earlier publications
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Materials and Methods
The materials and methods provide a clear and
complete description for all experimental,
analytical and statistical procedures.
Organize the section logically, perhaps
chronologically, and use specific, informative
language.
This section should include enough information so
that another researcher can repeat the
procedures and expect to get the same results.
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Expected outcomes
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Research work schedule
Generally three different schedules are expected
to be incorporated in the proposal, namely;
Activity scheduling;
Resources/tools mobilization scheduling:
Budgeting:
Synergy among the above three schedules
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Reference
• Writing a reference in a your proposal is a means of giving credits
to the materials you have been used while you are writing .
• All factual material that is not original with you must be
accompanied by reference to its source.
• Follow the proper referencing guidelines as directed by the
research approval authorities. APA is the most common in
engineering sciences.
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Ethics in Proposal Writing
Writing and style makes a research proposal
impressive and convincing.
Some important tips to help for better writing are
mentioned below;
Always structure the work in advance
Know what you want to say before trying to write it
Every sentence must contain one idea only
There must be a continuity in sentences. A well
written text is a “chain of ideas”.
While writing keep your reader’s need in mind.
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Style of proposal writing
• Proposal must be professional looking.
• must be interesting and informative.
• Writing style must be simple with small sentences and simple
vocabulary
• Use clear headings and sub-headings
• While writing proposal be concise and precise.
• Use simple language.
• Construct clear arguments.
• There should not be any spelling and grammatical mistakes in the
proposal.
• Reference your work fully using an acceptable format.
• Do not use difficult words to impress your readers.
• Do not use overly simplistic language
• Do not make unnecessary repetitions in the text. 21
Submitting the Proposal
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Assignment 2
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2. Writing a literature review
• Before we can create new knowledge, we must first know
the current state of knowledge about our research
subject.
• A literature review is a survey of everything that has been
written about a particular topic, theory, or research
question
• In the literature review, the task is to learn as much as you
can from the efforts and work of others – which is
published in the “scientific literature”.
• It may provide the background for larger work, or it may
stand on its own.
• Much more than a simple list of sources, an effective
literature review analyzes and synthesizes information
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Cont.….
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Paraphrase, Summary, and Quotation
• Paraphrase: Para means by the side of. A
paraphrase restates all the original material in
different words and is approximately the same
length as the original.
• Summary: Gives an overview of the general ideas
and is shorter than the original. It avoids specific
examples and is more concise than the original.
• Quotation: Contains the exact words of your
source and includes quotation marks.
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Main components Writing a Literature
Review
1. Introduction (Background information)
Introduce topic
Describe Scope and organization
Review past and Present literature
Clarify purpose
2. Theory (Body)
All research has a precedent
Integrate key points and make appropriate
inferences
Be aware of relationship to your topic.
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Cont.….
3. Conclusion: The conclusion should provide a
summary of your findings from the literature review
• Explain what your analysis of the material leads
you to conclude about the overall state of the
literature, what it provides and where it is lacking.
• You can also provide suggestions for future
research or explain how your future research will
fill the gaps in the existing body of work on that
topic.
Reference :must contain an accurate citation for
every source.
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Source of literature review
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Cont.…
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Good and poor literature review
A ‘good’ literature review…..
• is a synthesis of available research
• is a critical evaluation
• has appropriate breadth and depth
• has clarity and conciseness
• uses rigorous and consistent methods
A ‘poor’ literature review is…..
• an annotated bibliography
• confined to description
• narrow and shallow
• confusing and longwinded
• constructed in an arbitrary way
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Assignment 3
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3. Thesis writing
Thesis: is the point that an essay is trying to
prove.
Thesis Statements always take a stand and justify
further discussion.
Why do you write a thesis
I need/want my Master degree (egoistic)
To make your/their findings public/available to peers
I own the data/concepts/ideas (egoistic)
Someone else may make good use of them
(altruistic)
I have to show that I am productive (control from
outside)
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Attributes of a good thesis:
It is specific and focused
It clearly asserts your own conclusion based on
evidence
It provides the reader with a map to guide
him/her through your work.
It anticipates and disproves the counter-
arguments
It avoids vague(unclear) language (like "it seems").
It avoids the first person. ("I believe," "In my
opinion")
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Thesis structure
• Cover or title page
• Abstract
• Table of content
• List of figures
• List of tables
• Introduction
• Review of the literature method
• Materials and methods
• Result
• Discussion
• Conclusion
Acknowledgement
References
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Thesis structure cont’d
• Title Page: Cover page must contain a clear title, name
of the institution or organization, name of the
researcher and month-year of report preparation. It
may vary as per pre format set by the related
institution or organization.
• The cover page has to be attractive and must invite
reader to go through the report.
• This may be done by placing good photographs or by
placing some meaningful figures.
• The font size and font style must be selected in such a
way that the title and other details on the cover page
are clearly readable and proportionate to each other.
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Title Page Cont’d
For designing an attractive cover page following points
may be useful
• Identify a good photograph, map or a meaningful figure
which directly highlights or relates to the research
problem.
• If cover page is designed on A4 size (21 x 29.7 cm) paper,
the title may be in font size17 to 19 and good font styles
may be, Arial Bold, Comic Sans MS Bold or any other per
the researchers choice.
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Sample cover page
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Thesis structure cont’d
Abstract: A good abstract explains in one line why
the paper is important.
A good abstract is concise, readable, and
quantitative.
Length should be ~ 1-2 paragraphs, approx. 400
words.
Abstracts generally do not have citations
Information in title should not be repeated
Be explicit
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Abstract cont’d
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Table of contents
• This should be presented in clear, organized, logical
and systematic manner
• All the chapters, sections and sub-sections should
be clearly mentioned
• It should also contain a separate list of table, list of
figures and a list of annexures/appendix
• The abstract, forward, acknowledgement or other
such information that precedes the list of content
are also mentioned in the list of content
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Table of Contents
Methods
subheads ...?
Results
subheads ...?
Discussion
subheads ...?
Conclusion
Recommendations
Acknowledgments
References
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Table of content cont’d
List of Figures
List page numbers of all figures.
The list should include a short title for each figure
but not the whole caption.
List of Tables
List page numbers of all tables
The list should include a short title for each table
but not the whole caption
Introduction
you can't write a good introduction until you
know what the body of the paper says
introductory section(s) after you have completed
the rest of the paper
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Key contents of the introduction
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Review of the Literature
This should not merely string together what
other researchers have found.
Rather, you should discuss and analyze the body
of knowledge with the ultimate goal of
determining what is known and is not known
about the topic.
This determination leads to your research
questions and/or hypotheses. In some cases, of
course, you may determine that replicating
previous research is needed.
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Methodology
• Describes and justifies the data gathering method
used. It explains also outlines how you analyzed
your data.
• Begin by describing the method you chose and
why this method was the most appropriate.
• Next, detail every step of the data gathering and
analysis process.
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Material and method
Common sub topics under Materials and Methods
Description of the study area. E.g.
• Climate
• Topography
• Population etc.
Methodology
• Data collection techniques and procedures
• Research design or design of experiments
• Sampling
• Measurement instruments
• Data analysis (statistical approach)
List of Materials
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Results
•Just list of what is observed :-The results are actual statements
of observations, including statistics, tables and graphs.
•Write the most important results first
•Mention negative results as well as positive. Do not interpret
results - save that for the discussion.
•Present sufficient details so that others can draw their own
inferences and construct their own explanations.
•Break up your results into logical segments by using
subheadings
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Result cont’d
• Avoid discussing by avoiding
–Explanations of what a data means
–Explanations of why a difference or
similarity occurs
–It is important to write magnitudes
(significance of differences)
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Discussion
Discuss the most important findings first
What results mean or what is their broader
implication
What have others who did similar studies
reported
Why is there a difference between the results
of different studies
What does the difference mean to science,
humanity etc.
What else should be done
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Conclusions
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Acknowledgments
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References
• This is presented at the end of the research
document, after the concluding chapter and
before the annexures
• Ensure that you include all the references cited in
your research document in this section
• The APA style, the Chicago style and Harvard style
are examples of standard formats for referencing
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Presentation of Graphical Data and
Photographs
The graphical data in a project report may be in the
form of maps, figures and graphs.
The Graphical data not only facilitates the reader with
easy understanding but it also makes any report
attractive.
The following points may help to enhance the quality
of graphical data;
Plan in advance what maps, figures and graphs are to be
presented in the report.
There must be a similarity in all drawings in the report in terms
of font size, font style, color scheme and frame of the drawing.
In all maps and sections show legend covering all features
shown in the map
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Cont’d
Photographs are good means of presenting facts
observed in field. Photographs are the evidences
to support your writing.
Make sure that the photographs to be presented
in the report are of good quality
Write clear description at the bottom of the
photograph
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Referencing style
Style Name
• APA style: American psychological association
Application: psychology, education, anthropology and other
social and behavioral science
• Chicago: university of Chicago
Application: humanities, social, biological and physical
science
• Harvard: Harvard university
application: natural science, social science and educational
science
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APA style
Book:
Author. Title. City: Publisher, date.
• Corti, Lillian. The Myth of Medea and the Murder of
Children. Westport, CT: Greenwood Press, 1998.
Article in a Magazine:
Author. “Title of Article.” Title of Periodical Date: page(s).
• Gerard, Jeremy. “Review of Redwood Curtain.” Variety
April 5, 1993: p. 43.
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APA style cont’d
Article in a Newspaper:
Author (if given). “Title of Article.” Title of Newspaper
Complete date, section number or title: page(s).
• Kerr, Walter. “The Lives they Lived.” The New York Times 29
December 1996, late ed.: sec. 1: 53.
Article or Story in a Collection of Anthology:
Author. “Title.” Book Title. Editor. City: Publisher, date. Pages.
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Two or More Authors:
Give the last name first for the first author only.
• Hall, David, Laura Henigman, and Lillian Corti. Worlds of
Wonder, Days of Judgement. Cambridge: Harvard
University Press, 1990.
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Thank you
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